Kriyaansh~Sometimes Life Makes You Stone Hearted~ Updated - Page 29

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Posted: 12 years ago
AWESOME

AMAZING

SUPERB

FAB

MINDBLOWING

SPLENDID

AWESTRUCK

MARVELOUS

ROCKING Update

FIRST KRIA'S DANCE..BEAUTIFULLY EXPLAINED

DEN

"Vishaka: "you said one thing wrong dude!"
Sharon: "what that?"
Neha: "we are her friends"
Simmi: "not we "were"" " LOVED IT

N DEN THE CAFE SCENE N ALL

" *On the other hand*
Swayam: "How dare Taani do this in front of everyone!"
Sharon: "She is insane Kriya do something"
Vicky: "Swayam I don't care if she's your sis or not she can't do this"
Neha: "Right you are babu" "

EM LOVING VICKY

FINALLY SID-KRIA SECRET REVEALED TO DEM

N THA THAPPAR..N SID SMIRKING

Awlaaah

n den in the nest UPDATE

KRIA AN FBI OFFICER

DAT JD...YUCKKK

N THE WHOLE ACTION N DRAMA N LAST SCENES...EVERYTHING WAS PERFECT

SMRITI DEAD

n whateve happened wid KRIA...WAS TERRIBLE

UPDATE SOON :)
Edited by zona_malik - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
[B][/B] i jst read all 5 parts... They all r damn gud... Bt i already guessd that she is frm cbi nt fbi...:-( bt i loved al updates anu,,... Must say u r gud writer... Nd in this ff all r my fav. Chracters excpt u knw... Loved it... Continue soon... Thanxx 4 d pms...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Read all in one go. Absolutely loved it. Its getting interesting. I have sent you buddy request. Please pm me when you update
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update...
taani ko thappad frm kriya 😃...
love d way sharon,swayam n vicky are with kriya...
waiting to c what vl b rey's nxt step...
update soon...
thnx fr d pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG ye kya thaaa 😲
tum ne toh puri ACTION movie dikha diya...
m imagining kriya in FBI dress n SHIVAM as JD 😆
JD raped kriya😡
finally revenge was taken by kriya...
i dnt want kriya to leave again 😭
plzzz kriyaansh,kriyam,krisha ko miladooo
update soon...
thnx fr d pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Madhukumari

Res :-D. . .
Ures . . . . . .
OMG ANU. . .
Aftr reading the update my jaws literaly touchd d ground. . . .
GOSH. . . . . . . . . .
M so so so shockd. . .
1st tune update diya woh bi itna bada. . .
Seriously m i dreaming or. . .
And then,
the update. . .
OMG. . . .it was . .it was .it was. . .
I dnt have words to express my feelings. . . .
It was like m a watchng a actin movie with a diffrnce dat its not action hero,its a action heroine. .hahaha. .
Bt seriously,
abi last update tak sab kitna calm-calm chal raha tha,n nw achaknak se itna sara action drama. . . .
Bt,it was realy fun 2 read. .
Kriya is a fbi agent,n usne st. Louis join kiya 4 a mison wow. . .
U knw i lovd d way u wrote the whole plot,
starting mein thoda humor of shree,chotu n kriya,
then lousians ka confusion. .
Then action movie in colg. .hahaha. .
Then kriya bitter truth,
then action movie khatam,
krisha ka chotu sa moment. .
Then kriya leaving 4 newyork. .
Gosh. . . .dis all was was was so good. . .
I realy lovd it. .
Bt,their were 2 things whch i dint likd at all. .
1.there were no KR scenes,chota sa bi nai diya. .i wantd even told u ,bt,u didnt gave any scene of them. .
2. Kriya being ra*ed . .
I realy didnt likd it. . .plz dnt take me wrong,bt,yr dnt u thng kriya is main lead at least uske sath aisa. . .plz. .dnt do it. .
Plz anu ,aisa kuch show kerde dat dey thng dat she was ra*ed,bt actualy mai aisa kuch nai hua tha. .plz yr. . .
Pata wen u reaveld dis truth,i seriously lost d interest in reading further. .dekh,i want kr ka love 2 b pure. .plz. .yehi meri requst hai plz. . . . . .plz. . .



Hehe... I am totally glad you liked it...

And aww madhu... Action movie ki Tara... Hmm thanks...

Pata hai? Hi jab update post karne walli thi tab yeh sooch rahi thi Madhu Bohot gussa hogi kyun ki KriYaansh scene nahi diya meine... Lekin mein try karongi...

Sorry yaar for the other thing... I have scraped you for that already... Sorry yaar once again...

Love you... 🤗

😊

~Anu~

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Posted: 12 years ago
Anu . . .
SHUT UP. . . . .
I totaly undrstand. . . .
So,stop chanting dis sorry mantra. .samjhi??
Well kr scenes nai daale tuje. .uske liye toh mai gussa hu,bt,i wont say a word nw. . .
Coz,m waiting 4 d nxt update. . .
Agar usme tune koi kr scene nai diye. . . . .
Tu madam BEWARE. .
Aapko MADHU naam ke VALCANO SE KOI NAI BACHA PAYEGA. . .
SAMJHI?? . . .
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Posted: 12 years ago
Okay tere Liye mein nahi bolti...

Mein comments ko baad mein reply karungi and Abhi update karungi how about that?

And ya pehele bata deti hoo pura update panda and phir comment karna... And KR scene hainlekin nahi Bhi... Just read the update and then tell okay...

🤗

:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
~Seven~

Hey guys I am back with a update... Sorry if the past part was not that good 😔 but here's the update...

Beforeyou get angry after reading the first bit read all of it please... and phir comment karna... 🤗

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The mission turned out to be successful but Kriya died
all cried bitterly... The Don had died... She had taken her revenge... She got her own back...

Rey's broken from inside out... He's been crying since he found out... Disclosing this truth had been very tough for everyone...

*Flashback*

RDX: "Rey?..."

Rey: "yeah sir kya Kriya vapas agayi?" he asked in excitement.

Karan: "no... She hasn't..." and he starts crying...

Rey: "sir aap ro kyun rahe ho? Baatcutter wapas ajaye gi" he said placing his hand on his shoulder.

Swayam: "no she can't" he stated with a lot of difficultly.

Rey: "kyun" as he rolls his eyes as he thinks Swayam is lying a joke on him...

Jenny: " Rey she is no more"

Rey: " crap joke... And the most hideous one too" he says in a angry tone

Arjun: " Rey they're saying the truth..."

Rey: "nahi... Wo mereko nahi chod ke jaye gi"

Arjun: " Rey... I know it's hard..." he puts his hand on Reys shoulder... And this makes Rey realise that she has actually left him... And after sometime...

Rey: " BAATCUTTER!!!!!!!!!!!" he shouts and he drops on his knees as he looses his balance...

Swayam: "Rey" and tries to compose to him...

But in return... Rey gets up and starts breaking everything in the room... His hands is bleeding he's about to smash the glass table when Arjun and Karan sir grabs hold of him...

Rey: "let go of me" he stuggles in their tight grip.

Karan: " Rey clam down" in a soothing tone...

Rey: " It's all because of me..." and he increases his struggle in Arjun and Karan sir's grip...

Arjun: "injection" he tells Jenny...

And Jenny injects Rey and Rey faints...

*Flashback over*



The louians, Kajen, RDX nichole, Arjun, Sam Shree, Chotu, Sid and Tammy were in the rehearsal hall... All had gathered there to pay respect to Kriya most of the people in that room were the most important people in her life and some were her life...

They had decided to open the stuff that she gaven Sharon... After all were in the dance studio... Jenny shuts the door and joined all the others...

Sharon opens the box Kriya gave her...
It contained Rey's jacket and the mask... The jacket he'd given her so she don't get cold... The mask which was their first symbol of their love as the phone was broken... Seeing the mask Rey's eyes fills with water... The pearls slowly starts escaping from his eyes which we're already red and swollen due the fact that he had been crying since he found out about her death...
Rey: "I thought that I had that mask?" he manages to say... In a schoked and a confused tone...
Sharon: "what?" she replies really not knowing anything about the mask and what he meant by what he just said...
Rey: wipes his years and turns to Taani "actually I will explain but first Taani I want to say something"
Taani: "yeah" she knew it was coming.
Rey: "Taani I want a break up. Don't get me wrong but I never felt that I was actually in love with you, I mean I never felt right and I have only loved one girl and that's baatcutter I am sorry" he says gathering the fact who he really loved but somewhere in himself the fact echoed "that only if I realised earlier..."
Taani: "it's okay" as she knows she can't do anything and she'll just have to leave it...
Arjun: "what about the mask?" as he really don't really care about the louians and especially not Taani...
Rey: "actually I thought I had that mask because when I first met her she was wearing this mask" he replies getting the flash back...
Neha: "par college ke pehele din usne koi mask nahi pehla tha" she says in her normal voice thinking about the first day she met her... How she was the first person who said she will be friends with her.
Rey: "pata hai" he replies agreeing with her comment and continues "hum dono pehe Dehradun mein milethe new years eve pe she came with her friends" and Rey tells them the story
All in shock and even more sad... To see that these two individuals are supposed to meant to be a couple... Their destiny says that they are mean to be... Sad to see how they get torn apart just when they are about to be together...

Seeing their faces he gathers what they are thinking and says...
Rey: "anyways Sharon carry on with the stuff" wiping the tears again.
She then gets the jacket and Rey starts crying and takes the jacket and dress and hugs it and mumbles to him self: "butterfly kiss "and chuckles in between his tears " tum jasi thina waisa koi nai hokata hai" and the tears rolling down his face increases...
Rey: "carry on" composing himself.
Sharon takes out a load of letters and their is a letter for her in there
And she reads it aloud:...
Hey sweetu,
Kya boloon? Kuch samaj nahi araha. tumhe bohot miss karti thi Deradhun mein bohot hi zayada, aur dekho jab Mumbai ayi to tum se ladai kar bethi. Jo meine iss letter mein leekha hai wo sab mein tume Rey aur Swayam ko khud bataana chati thi par kya kare univerji ne pehele boola liya. Ro maat, aur muje pata hai ki Rey and Swayam sun rahe hai kyun ki tu suna rahi hai... Aur wo tera cute puppy face jo tum abh kar rahi hai isse dikhana ni need hai hai kyunki mein chati hoon ki unn logo ko pata chale kyunki wo inn ka right hai...
Well both of us know our story but I wanted to let you know Sharon that I always have loved you... Anyways...

Well I never ditched Rey. Yeah I had to leave him. Well when me and Rey were dancing mum saw us, she hates or should I say dislikes Rey and therefore she wanted me to leave him. Moreover he's a dancer and therefore there was no way we could have been together. After mum saw us and after I went home ( she says the story about how her mum made her promise to leave Rey forever and Dance and how she chose her friends...).

And really I had to say to Rey that I used him, if I didn't he would have never moved on in life, I know I am a b**** for doing that, but I knew that if I told him everything he would have never been able to forget me and therefore he would have gone through more pain and THAT pain would have lasted all his life but because of my bitter and spiteful words he would hate me and move on in his life. And that happened.
And stop crying! ( Sharon wipes her tears with her tiny palms and carries on reading )
I know you want to know about past two years...well a lot changed in these years... My life flipped just like when the face on the coin changes... It changed too much for me to handle...
After going to Dehradun me and mum kept on having argument... They werent like small ones they were bigs rows and this would always result into me slamming the door behind and leaving the house.

After sometime I found out that mum has cancer and was on the last stage. This broke me even more and I thought I would call you but then the reality struck in my mind we didn't have no way to contact but I found that mum had called dad. I was surprised to see who he was andthat I was with my sister for more than one year and I didn't even realise... ( there were tears on the paper dried ones... Which Ment that she'd been cryin when she'd written this)... well chuck that. After mum died, dad wanted me to come with you lot but I had enough of everything and I saidno and after a few weeks I had become an alcoholic... Yeah I didn't find any other ways of not feeling the guilt of lying to Rey... Arguing with mum and I was alone and drinking made it less painful... The poison seemed like the antidote of all this...
It was one night that I was druged and r***d and that had just broken me to much. I was on the verge of committing suicide when Sid and Jenny came to get me and I didn't go... I just wanted to die... But they somehow took me with them and we all just went to New York. But I just closed myself and I lived by myself. I never spoke to anyone... Sid, Jenny and jiju did everything hey could... After sometime I thought to myself that let me do something good because suiciding isn't going to help anyone thereforeI joined FBI as I was tired of life... And I just started playing on life, and seeing what it had store for me.

I promised myself that I won't come back to India and I will make JD pay the prize. And to my bad luck when I got the chance it was in St Louis
I am sorry I didn't want to come back in your life and ruin it but I wanted to say the truth so that at my soul can rest in peace.

All were crying and sobbing... Rey had been completely broken same applied for the others... His tears were in mood to stop...


Arjun: "we need to go to goa" he stated out of the blue...
All: "what?!" totally confused and thinking is he insane of something...
Arjun: "what do you mean "what"?" he replied
Sam: "are you mad raoute" as usually both can't agree that easily.
Arjun: "no I am not Rathode we need to find her" he uttered in a confident voice...
Swayam: "but she is no more"
Arjun: "well then we need to find her dead body"
Sam: "why?"
Arjun: "well I don't thinks she's dead"
Rey: "kya!?"
Arjun: "haan look we all know okay may be me and you that she actually survived all the missions"
Sid:I don't get you"
Arjun: "okay so basically she did loads of dangerous missions which most officers wouldnt even agree to do in their dream and she did them and survived"
Shree: "well yeah that's why everyone calls her a girls with luck"
Arjun: "exactly and that's one reason"
Sam: "what's the other reason"
Arjun: "we haven't found her dead body"
Rey: "iska matlab wo zinda hai"
Arjun: "ho sakta hai"
Sharon: "chaloo meri Shona ko dhundne challe"
All: "let's go"

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Precap:
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Kriya: "you're very sexy and fitt" to Rey
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Rey: "kya? Thanks"
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Rey: " I love you Baatcutter..."

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So guys how was the update...?

Hehe this wasnt KriYaansh scene but it kinda was... I hope you lot liked it... I ended with hope so I am hoping shoes and tomatoes ki rateless hogi...


Madhu and someothers too... Sorry for the pervious part... I know you wanted me to change the thing but meine yeh update already write kar liya tha before I even posted the previous update... Sorry...
Lekin good news hai... Next parts are filled with KriYaansh love scenes... Sorry once again... 🤗

Have a dancing day guys... Thanks for reading

Love ya all 🤗

😊

~Anu~
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Posted: 12 years ago
I am going to send PMs later... Sorry...

Love ya all... 🤗

😊

~Anu~

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