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Rads

@Effervescent_R

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Posted: 13 years ago

hola buddies😃
m back with yet another OS
n whats more interesting is the fact. .. that it just crossed my mind randomly. ..
n the flow just went on. . .
I m not gonna specify the couple. . .
coz welll. ..
I guess these things happen in any relation. ..
there are highs as well as lows in life. . . .
n the OS below. . . .
is just to convey a message. . .
that no matter what we should never lose hope n Faith. . .
feel free to imagine any couple u like
love
Rads😃

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@Effervescent_R

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Posted: 13 years ago

Never Let You Go. . . .

The dreadful day had finally come. . .
She was moving. .. .away from him . ...
she'd already said her last goodbye. ..
n turned her head away from him. .. .
fighting back the tears that threatened to flow anytime soon
no she couldn't afford to weaken now. . ..
it was time to move on. . .
n yet she couldn't help but give a last glance at him. . . .
He stood in that very place frozen . . ..
his eyes distant. . ..
the pain now etched on his face was because of her. ..
she realized she shouldn't have. . ...
looked back. . . .
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Time had frozen for him. . .
right at this very moment. . ..
all he really wanted was to somehow get her back. ...
If only. ... ..
Just once turn back please. ..
he silently prayed. . .
n the 1st thing he saw when he opened his eyes . .
was her. .. .
she had turned back. .. .
he could see it in her eyes. ..
that inner turmoil. . . .
that indecision. ..
it wasn't easy for her too. . . .
n yet after a few minutes of contemplation
he could see that resolve. . .
yes the decision was made. .. .
n that day he knew. . . .
he'd lost her. ..
because that 's what he'd always admired about her. . .
her determination. . .
she was a self made woman. ...
someone who would stand on her grounds till the very end. . ..
Oh he so wished . . . .
that these parallel roads bisect again one day. . .
but then. . . he had faith. ..
in God. ...
in her. . .
in himself. . .
n most importantly THEM!!!
Come Back when You Can. .. . . .
this one line was the only thing swirling in his mind. . . .
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She'd spent sleepless nights ever since that day. . .
interestingly enough. . . .
it was her own decision. . . .
to abandon the street. . .
that once blossomed with roses. . .
what the 2 of them hadn't realized back then was the fact. .
that a rose along with its beauty. ..
also has thorns .. .
n now in that bed of roses she 'd only started seeing thorns. . . .
n yet. . .
as she sat by the window. . ..
all she could remember was that pain in his eyes. . .
that fear of losing her forever. . .
the man who was strong enough to deal with anything. .. .
that fearless. . .
determined n an ever optimist , suddenly seemed so fragile ... .
so broken. . ..
so. .. .. . .. ..
n what was worst?
it was because of her. . ...
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She had tried her level best. .. .
to let him go. . . ..
to move on in life. . .
but most nights she ended up thinking of ways
to atleast know his whereabouts . .. .
she thought of calling up his friends
or better . .. .calling him. . ..
but no. . ..that would do no good . ..
she wasn't a coward. . .
if she had to get back to him. . . .
it would be face to face. . ..
like their "breakup"
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As she stood in front of his house. . .
memories swam in her head . .
good ones . ..
bad ones
n the worst . . ..
she suddenly realized what was that one thing that was eating her up all these days. . .
it was the fact . . .
that everything around her had reminded her of him. . .
of them ... .
but somehow their last encounter wasn't letting her muster courage . . .
it was silly . . .
here she was standing at his door step. . .
n yet was not able to knock his door. ..
she was about to leave when the door suddenly opened. . .
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She could read a lot of expressions at once on his face. . .
the initial shock. . .
then realization suddenly striking him. . ..
the understanding. . ..
& finally a warm slow yet steady smile. ..
n at that moment all she could think was .. ..
to hug him tightly. .. .
bury her face in his chest ..
where it rightly belonged. . ..
they've never really had a need to express their feelings in words .. .
n today was no exception. . .
as they finally broke away. . .
the only words that came out of his mouth were. .
"Now that you're back. ..
I'll never Let You Go. . "

Edited by -Serendipity- - 13 years ago

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Hina

@samratrocks

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Posted: 13 years ago

Woah! an open ended piece.. vr free to choose any couple -dats a unique idea Rads!!

Beautifullyy writtn... enjoyd readngg...

Very apt title! 10/10 frm my syd!

Gr8 job

Thnks fr da pm...

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@Effervescent_R

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: samratrocks
Woah! an open ended piece.. vr free to choose any couple -dats a unique idea Rads!! naaa. ..Inspiration Nidha!!!
Beautifullyy writtn... enjoyd readngg...m glad u did😃
Very apt title! 10/10 frm my syd!
aww .. .I m humbled
Gr8 job
Thnks fr da pm...
can I ask u a ques?
which couple did u imagine?

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

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Posted: 13 years ago

Res 😛

Unres

Radzz 👏 👏

This was simply mindblowing 👏

Beautifully written 👍🏼

I loovvee ur writing style 😳

Feelings wer beautifully portrayed 👏

Totally loovveedd ittt 😊

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WitchGrave

@..WitchGrave..

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Posted: 13 years ago

Nice one radz simply awesome
Playing with words is soo simple for u ohh
Loved it<33333
Title and the end simply fab
And as always imagined kisha not bcoz I lov them but they suited as kd will always do that now u r back will never let u go ..
Awesime

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AJS

@Ajscinesonadar

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

Woow diz was beautiful 😊 d last line d perfect line to end d OS."Never let you go" fab jzt fab. 👍🏼

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@Effervescent_R

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: AbhiyaMaaneet
Awesome OS 👏

I m glad to know that😃

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@Effervescent_R

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: NaughtyRa
Nice one radz simply awesome
Shubh🤗
Playing with words is soo simple for u ohh
Loved it<33333
Title and the end simply fab
awww, , ,gal , ,u are flattery☺️
And as always imagined kisha not bcoz I lov them but they suited as kd will always do that now u r back will never let u go ..
while writing this OS I had many couples in my mind n ofcourse KiSha were very much in the list
Awesime