Collab FF: IPK 2.0-Doing it Right#4, Epilogue-p27

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EXPELLIARMUS

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Posted: 12 years ago

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CheshireBilli

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Posted: 12 years ago

#142

Wheee!

God I am so juvenile, I'm gloating over first res.

Again.

Juhi, I LAUED the epilogue yaara frndz.

It was pagal but cute ya? 👍🏼

And Di got her comeuppance. GOOD. I was so tired of all the blocking.

I LOL-ed majorly at the little jabs at Anjali and her attempts to increase screen space.

And Khushi's nervousness at having everyone know? 😲

Telepathy or WHAT?!

That's it. The entire CC is telepathic.

Anjali is the boy who cried 'Wolf' now. And I can't believe that this hilarious ride has ended.

A round of applause for you and all the writers involved. It was such a fun read!

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melonie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#143

You can't do this 😆 😆 😆 😆 I have tears in my eyes from all the laughing. Anjali and Shyaam have become such buffoon characters in this story...my God.

Serves Anjali right. It was seriously creepy how for every little thing Anjali would keep chanting chotey...chotey. I am so happy Arnav and Khushi turned off their cell phones and are enjoying in their private heaven.

Finally away from the mad house, crazy house A and K were able to have their suhaag raat and how could Khushi even doubt that Arnav would have performance issues 😉

The last line...new tune for Daiyaa Ho...we would love that :D

Thanks to all the writers for writing such a sweet story 🤗 Thank you

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Vee

@reflorated

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Posted: 12 years ago

#144

And it finally ended. 25 chapters and one epilogue of madness and fun and kinky mindf**kery. I cannot believe its finally ended, cuz ... oh dear, I can't believe its ended.

Oh its ended.

*sobs*

Thank you for reading this story, dear readers. Thank you for all the love and support you have given us. Thank you, thank you so much

--Vee

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nnhk

@nnhk

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Posted: 12 years ago

#145

Thank you lovely ladies, this was an amazing story with all of you on board.

Hope you come up with many more.

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RasgullaSP

@Rasgulla_sp

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Posted: 12 years ago

#146

I had myself forgotten that Shyam is a doctor! Stupid me!

And trust Anjali to trouble her Chotay on his SR... This woman na!

Good that Khushi thought about 'performance anxiety' or else if they had stayed in Shantivan SR ka S bhi shuru nahi hota...

And finally they did IT right! 😳

I liked the touch of how he became more important than her precious gotas and she became more important than his work.

And we come a full circle at the Epilogue. Starts with Anjali in labour and ends with the little rajkumari. But ArHi are busy 😳 and Anjali can wait for a while.

Great Epilogue Juhi! 👍🏼

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robinhood008

@robinhood008

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Posted: 12 years ago

#147

That was an amazinggg update!!!

Enjoyed reading this ff,thnx to all the writers for sharing your work with us
Loved reading epilogue to bitss

Amazinggg update!!!

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Raila1014

@Raila1014

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#148

This was one crazy ride that had me in stitches from the laughs while reading the story. You ladies were brilliant! Take a bow! Thank you for writing this - I got a chance to know some new writers whose stories have been read very avidly! The boy who cried wolf got her due - no Chotay for her, she will have to make do with Dayya Ho! Our happy couple can finally let out all the pent up passions - no more cold showers for them. Hope you gals come back with another one! Cheers!

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@debby_11

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Posted: 12 years ago

#149

Crazy...absolutely crazy mad family...Enjoyed reading it...thank god arnav and khushi left the house or else in this life at least there was no chance of consummation with the presence of anjali...This was absolutely fantastic :)