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Posted: 12 years ago


ai tui janis na ami short-tempered, hot-tempered, long-tempered???
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: surprising



ai tui janis na ami short-tempered, hot-tempered, long-tempered???



Sorry Go, Ei Ekhon Janlam.๐Ÿ˜‰
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: smiley4567

Very good poem, 'a frozen heart.'

Another beautiful piece from you.
You are indeed an excellent writer.
Thanks for the PM ๐Ÿ˜Š
& sorry for the late reply.

On a personal note, Are you a literature student?



it's ok dear friend๐Ÿ˜Š

hmm...not yet, bt gonna be๐Ÿ˜‰
actually looking fr admission on B.A English honours ๐Ÿ˜ณ

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Radhikerani



Sorry Go, Ei Ekhon Janlam.๐Ÿ˜‰



hmm...toke niye ki kora jai bolto??
amai Aru di o voi pay,
r tui pa66is na????
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow u have an amazing capability ,i just loved it๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 12 years ago

Last Letter To Eternal Mother


Possession possession everywhere...
Not a petal to be free,
The smiles, the tears of life
Engulf me in their chained duty.
I...I...can't stop for death-
Death kindly offers me some more moments
To colour with apologize, hatred & pain.
But...I can't utilize them as I want
more affection, love & care...
I was so lustful...isn't it??
Wanted to lead life with a dream of love & affection...
But I've forgotten-I'm THE EMPEROR OF UNDIVIDED INDIA.
How can I be so emotional & possessive??
I don't know the Theory Of Relativity,
Tough war-policy & directed wedding bond..
I only realize that I'm a simple person
Who can hear the sound of silence,
Longs for true love,
Want to be a good son,hubby & father.
I tried...but failed...failed every time.
I only have loads of sigh...& sigh...
But now,I see an indescribable light
Light of GOD-Light of Rainbow-Light of Destiny...
I'm not unconscious- I can understand:
I'm going to another world.
No, it's not the door of death...
It's the key of new life.

...Bharat Maata,Plzzz don't forget me...
I, your son,Chandragupt Mourya
Will surely return in your lap after 2000 years.
I'd like to see you as more beautiful than now.
I know my desire will be fulfilled.

Good bye Maa...no, Best Bye...
You're the only one who always loves me.

With Love & Regards,
Your confused son
Chandragupt Mourya

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Posted: 12 years ago
it was beautiful.. ๐Ÿ˜ณ
thank you for the pm ๐Ÿ˜Š
do update more
and do pm me ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
i love reading these poems
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Posted: 12 years ago
wonderful poem...you portrayed love , affection and desire so perfectly!๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: surprising



hmm...toke niye ki kora jai bolto??
amai Aru di o voi pay,
r tui pa66is na????



Actually, You Don't Appear To Me Like Bhayankar Pari Na, That's Why !!๐Ÿ˜ƒ

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