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Those who wanted read fhmmt update
go and read...till then i am updating this one one...

last part



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(A big thanks to Dazzling Divz for this wonderful banner... thank u so much dear...😊)




Thanks a lot for the likes and comments'.

I am really disappoint with now the response I am getting now''. Now I have cleared my buddy list cause I don't want to send useless pms'.

There is English translation too of the song, if you need it then''.

@Tia- missing u yaar... our timings are not matching now a days...




Fhmmt latest update...last part



Aashiqui- A Musical Journey of Love

Part-14



Next day in morning'' Sunday

geet was sitting in the garden, and trying to play the guitar which was gifted by maan'' she sat on a swing folding her legs , and when she touched nay string of guitar, horrible sound comes out'. She tried again and again horrible sound comes out'' maan smiled watching her from far , watching her futile attempts of playing guitar''.

Her face fell again but she again brushed her finger with the string of guitar and again she didn't like the sound'' she put her guitar aside and sat there hugging her knees'' maan sighed and headed towards her'' he took the guitar in his hand and with other hand, held her hand'''''''

He kept dragging her holding her soft wrist in his hand while she was like a some kind of iron thing which is attracted by the magnet''. The pull was too strong that she didn't able to stop herself'.. just seeing herself dragging by him'''' didn't ask anything, no complaints, nothing where he is taking her''.. she doesn't know what happened with her over in a night that she is spell bounded by him''..

Maan opened a room using his leg and there a room laid with all the musical instruments, , her eyes popped open when she saw all this'.. it was like a big music studio where they can even record the song'' all the things are present there''

She stood there gaping at all the things while he was busy in removing the white clothes over the instruments''. Maan smiled when he turned around and saw her gaping''. Maan came near to her and held her hand again''. He made her sit at the big chair and he sat in front of her''.

She looked at him asking by her eyes that what now? He raised his brows asking to her what happened''? She denied , nothing by her eyes'.. and he nodded like he understood'' there was a silent talk between them'''''..

"geet, sing that song which I told you when we went in my music room" he told her'.. she went in those months remembering that about which song he is talking about? The day when they went in orphan home, she felt relieved that day'' then maan thought to take her in his music room , he didn't why felt that she would get peace in that music'.. somewhere it clicked him''. And the next day he told her to come there but she denied because she was really busy''. Her exams were coming nearer''

But after a week or so, both met in his music room'.. in delhi, he has a separate music area where he met with friends or clients''. And he has a private music room which he has in his house'.. when he wants privacy, he wants to feel his parents, that time he use his personal music room''.

None enters in his private areas and the same in Mumbai's mansion'' delhi was the first place where he learnt little bit about music from his dad, his dad had a great knowledge of music'. Then they shifted in Mumbai for a while or years, , there he learnt more about music and then maan attached more with those 2 places and those places became his private or I can say his possession''

Today geet took a step in his possession'.. that means he really love her beyond the limits'.. "but maan, mujhe kuch hi lines yaad hai'. Aur fir wo song to pura hua hi nahi tha na'' aapka important call aa gaya tha bich mein "''. Told geet to maan'. He nodded''.. "okay geet'.. I kinda forget that'' chalo koi baat nahi'.. hum aaj fir se start karte hai'" geet nodded with him'''.. "par geet, abhi no fear'.. apne dil se gana, aur agar kahi problem aaye like rhythm mein or wordings me then do let me know''"'''. Told maan to her again giving her courage and strength''''' he gave a paper to her''.. she took the paper and start reading''

"but geet, ek problem hai'.. this song is not complete''.last portion is remaining still'.. I'll try to complete it soon'. Till then hum yahi gaayenge'ok" tell maan his problem to her''.. "okay maan'.!"''''.. maan sat properly , set the recording mike between them and held the guitar in his hands''''. And there he stroke a string and a perfect sound comes out'' her face lit up at once hearing the sound and there maan strokes the strings further and a perfect music comes out and it became the background music of the song''..

He bend his face little bit towards the machine and sang''''

Tu hi ye mujh ko bataa de

Chaahoon main yaa naa

Maan opened his eyes and gestures her to sing now, repeat his wordings'' she nodded and sing but a little shaky voice'' because it's a like training for her'' she knew that if there'll be mistake then maan will correct that''.

Tu hi ye mujh ko bataa de

Chaahoon main yaa naa

Maan stopped her and she nodded'''' "fir se start karte hai'okay'.. follow the way I'll make the words'' hmmm" he spoke and she nodded again''..


Tu hi ye mujh ko bataa de

Chaahoon main yaa naa

Now he gestures her to sing by his hand'' she bend little bit , closed her eyes and sing'''''


Tu hi ye mujh ko bataa de

Chaahoon main yaa naa


And it was perfect,,,, just like he sang''.. a little winning smile crept on her face, she did it'.. now move to further lines''.. now his turn comes'' -------

Apne tu dil ka pataa de

Chaahoon main yaa naa

Now she sing following him with the same wordings,'..

Apne tu dil ka pataa de

Chaahoon main yaa naa

He clapped a little for her, she did so good'' and a big smile crept on her face'''

You only tell me,

should I love or not,

Tell me about your heart,

Should I love or not..

He stopped for a second stroking the guitar and pause for a second'' he took a breath and sang'''..

Itna bata doon tujh ko

Chaahat pe apni mujh ko

Yoon to nahi ikhtiyaar

Phir bhi yeh sochaa dil ne

Ab jo lagaa hoon milne

Poochhoon tujhe ek baar

I'll tell you so much,

On my love,

I don't have so much control,

Still the heart thought once,

Now that I've begun to meet,



I should ask you once' he lost in those moments when he had written this song'.'. it was the time when he started his meeting with her, , he used to be in dilemma that should I meet her? What she thinks about me? Should I ask to her, if she has any problem my meeting with hers? He wanted to feel those feelings for her, his heart started beating for her, when his met eyes met with hers, suddenly he heard his heart beats so loudly, there is not much control he had on himself that time'' slowly-2 when their meetings increased, his buried emotions awakened , just for her, only for her''..

He broke his trance when she started singing with him, their voice mingled in each other like they are the one'.. like two bodies and one soul, just like their voice became one'''

Tu hi ye mujh ko bataa de

Chaahoon main yaa naa

Apne tu dil ka pataa de

Chaahoon main yaa naa

Both looked at each other after completing half part of the song'.. she felt relieved hearing her own voice, filled with confidence and immense trust for him where he also relived that she'll get a chance in this world surely'' just Rahul hear her voice and then the head composer of the movie'''.

Aisee kabhee pehle hui naa thi khwaahishein

O.. kisee se bhi milne ki

Naa ki thi koshishein

Uljhan meri suljhaa de

Chaahoon main yaa naa

Aankhon aankhon mein jataa dey

Chaahoon main yaa naa

There were never such wishes before,

Never had I tried to meet

someone like that..

Disentangle my problems,

Should I love or not..

say to me within eyes,

Should I love or not'..

While singing, he again lost in that time where those up tenth times he met with hers'.. he never like that'' he never ran behind any girl even he never looked at any girl'.. girls used to run behind him, throw themselves to him, but he never felt this type of craving for meeting someone, for had a one glimpse of someone, he never wished for someone in his life'.. he was happy with his life'.. his family, his work and his love music''


but then she entered in his life and everything has been changed''. That time he was so engrossed in her, like used to imagine her in his dreams, and with open eyes also'.. he wanted to ask her, come and tell me, should I love you or not but never ask, whenever he tried to ask about this to her, his mouth went dry and gulped his words along with saliva''

sometimes when they met, their eyes met, he wanted to see those emotions in her eyes but never found'' he wanted to tell her that, if you don't want to spell those words then you can use your eyes, but pls tell me should I love you or not but love never waits for approval'.. it's just happen, and it happened with him''. His heart didn't wait for her approval, didn't seek her permission'' just flows away in emotions'''.



He stopped singing and his heart jumped when he saw appreciation for him in her eyes'''.. he closed his eyes and captured her glowing face in his eyes''. Now the songs ends'. Actually he was able to write this song till here only'' the last portion didn't strike his mind''. He prepared himself to stand up but stopped when he heard her voice echoed in the room'''''

He looked at her face'' she is singing further, of dam, these lines were not there, and here she is singing by herself'.. her eyes were closed and those lines came out from her heart itself'..

Mere chhote chhote khwaab hain

Khwaabon mein geet hain

Geeton mein zindagi hai

Chaahat hai, preet hai

Abhi main na dekhoon khwaab wo

Jin mein na tu mile

Le kholey honth maine

Ab tak the jo sile

I have some small dreams,

In those dreams there are songs,

In songs, there is life,

love, and longing..

Now I don't dream those dreams,

in which you aren't there..

See, I open these lips (to agree)

that I had kept closed till now..

he was blown away with the intensity of the words'.. she sang so beautifully'.. he was thanking his stars that he thought to record the song , he didn't let her know that he is recording this song'..actually he thought to send this song only to his friend if this song comes out nice but here he never knew that he'll get this big advantage''. His song can be complete'''.. he sighed and made himself engrossed in her wording'''

Mujh ko na jitna mujh pe

Utna is dil ko tujh pe

Hone laga aetbaar

Tanhaa lamhon mein apne

Bunti hoon tere sapne

Tujh se hua mujh ko pyaar..

My heart believes you so much

as I don't believe even myself..

In my lone moments,

I dream about you,

I have fallen in love with you'..

He doesn't know whether it is the wordings only or the voice of her heart'' does she really believe me? Yes she has believe in me'. I knew that'' his heart danced a little''.

Poochungi tujh ko kabhi naa

Chaahoon main yaa naa..

Tere khwaabon mein ab jeena

Chaahoon main kyun naa..

I'll never ask you

Should I love or not''.

Now I have to live in your dreams

Should I love or not'..


There he was telling her that should I love you or not and here she is saying that she won't ever ask should I love or not'''. But when the songs ends, her face glowed like a new bride or like she achieved something bigger in her life'' only she knows, only her heart knows what she achieved just now''..


both were looking in each other but their trance broke with the loud sound of clap and the sound becoming more and more louder than before'' they looked at the direction of gate and found a person standing there'''.



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Edited by neha5058 - 12 years ago
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haaye
me blushing blushing but can't blush fully as my bro is near me and watching tv...

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yup i was but now i can blush fully, lights off and my bro is sleeping now and i am sitting with my lappy...😳
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Originally posted by: neha5058

Those who wanted read fhmmt update
go and read...till then i am updating this one one...

last part




Awesome Update :)
What's the Surprise U didnt tell ??
Loved their Tom n Jerry nok jhok :D
Waiting for Mast wala Epilogue ;)


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Posted: 12 years ago
Fabulous part and the song depicts their feelings

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