Arjun OS: Woh lamhe woh baatein..Pg7

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Anjali

@AnjuRish

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Posted: 12 years ago

#81

such a beautiful portrayal of friendship sharing of pain

chaiwala love :)

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vidya.anand

@vidya.anand

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Posted: 12 years ago

#82

I wrote this long back...I feel so happy when ppl dig it out and read now...and also take effort to comment on it

thanks a ton guys...really makes me happier!

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Safina

@miss_choxz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#83

One more chapter to banta hai, you can do it vidya

Ek aur likh lo... Arjun aur Ayesha ke naam, Sam aur arjun ke naam

Please xx

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vidya.anand

@vidya.anand

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Posted: 12 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: miss_precious
One more chapter to banta hai, you can do it vidya

Ek aur likh lo... Arjun aur Ayesha ke naam, Sam aur arjun ke naam

Please xx

ab likhungi toh Sameer-Aisha-Arjun triangle bann jaayega...😉

but will try to write! 🤣

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sashashyam

@sashashyam

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Posted: 12 years ago

#85

My dear Vidya,

I too was curious to see what the alerts were for, and I read the OS all over again, and loved it just as much as the first time.

I can understand why your readers might want another chapter. I did too, after Part 1, but for a different reason, and I was pleased when you wrote the perfect closing part.

Now, for the same reason that I wanted you to write a second part, I would suggest that you leave it as it is. The emotional arc has been closed, gently and effectively. Don't touch it any more. It would be like gilding the lily.

Shyamala Aunty