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DocSNair

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Posted: 12 years ago

Hey guys,
this another kriyaansh n swaron FF..i know i have just started my first kriyaansh n swaron story.but couldnt resist posting this too..
plzz read n tell me hws it n whether i should continue or not

Edited by Sneha.V.Arsha - 12 years ago

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DocSNair

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Posted: 12 years ago

INDEX

Character Sketch = Pg 1
Chapter 1 = Pg 1
Chapter 2 =Pg 6

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DocSNair

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Character Sketch
KRIYA GHAI(21 yrs)

Cutest girl ever n very beautiful too.she is a girl with golden heart.cares for everyone even for her enemies.very childish in nature.her mom n dad died in an accident 3 years back.now her di is her everything.best frnd of swayam.can do anything for swayam.studying in st.louis clg,final year.belives in love after marriage.

REYAANSH SINGHANIA(25 yrs)

a very famous business man of the country.he is managing his family business.won the best young Indian business man of the yr award recently.a role model to youngsters.he is a matured guy but not a serious man.he njoys music,dance n likes to crack jokes.in short a perfect gentle man.he is very handsome also.girls drool over his hotness

SWAYAM SINGHANIYA(22 yrs)

A very sweet boy.Very down to earth n caring personality.like to njoy life to the fullest.he is handsome n cute.best frnd of kriya n can do anything for her.he want to make kriya his baapi😉,bs he thinks kriya is the best girl in the world n rey is the best man in the world.doesnt like sharon much even though she is her gang bs he thinks she is very arrogant n has a lot of attitude.studies in st.louis with kriya

SHARON RAI PRAKASH.(22 YRS)

Hot chick of the clg.likes to do shopping,make up n partying.studying in st.louis with swayam n kriya.used to like swayam in the begnning but when she found that she is not getting the care n attention that swayam gives to all their gang members she started disliking him.

KRITI GHAI(27yrs)

kriyas elder sister.a very caring n protective di.she looks after kriya like a mother do.reys PA.she is like an elder sister to rey.

RAGHINI SINGHANIYA

rey n swayams mom.very proud of her son rey.a strict mother who want everything under her control.loves her children n husband a lot.

RAM SINGHANIA

A famous buisiness man.now he handed all the responsibility of family business to rey as now he want to enjoy his reamaining life with his children n wife.a nice father.

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DocSNair

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Posted: 12 years ago

FIRST LOVE OF MR.PERFECT

Rey n kriti are returning after a meeting.rey dropped kriti near her home n was abt to leave
kriti:rey,come inside naa,lets have a coffee..
rey:next tym kritz..have an imp work at home.
kriti:u always gives excuses,today it wont work.come ...
rey has no other option lept.so he accompanied her.when they reached near the varandha of the house he saw a girl on her knees and a dog infront of her(to match the hight of the dog) n she is scolding the dog in a very cute manner.

(girls dress)
girl:browny,kitne baar tumse kaha he ki dnt harm my kitty..but u never listens to me...aaj mein tumhe nai chodoongi...
the dog ran for its dear life.seeing the scenario a smile came to his lips unknowingly.the girl was abt to ran behind the dog but kriti stopped her.
kriti:kriyaa..wat r u dng,atlest show a little bit of maturity..hey bagvan ,kya karoon me iss ladki ka...
kriya:di aap aa gaye!!
n she ran towards her di n hugged her so tighly that it was even difficult for kriti to breath properly.
kriti:kriya chodo muje..mar daloge kya?
kriya:sorry sorry di.
and she freed her di.kriya is unaware of reys presence.
kriya:di,hws the meeting?contract mil gaya?
kriti: yup sweety,we got it.
kriya:its obvious na..after all u have such a smart boss..THE GREAT REYAANSH SINGHANIYA(in a filmy way)
anjali tried to stop her but the crazy girl is gng on with her bak bak..
kriya:suna hehe is so handsome n hot bi..i wish i was in ur place(in a dreamy mood).
with that kriti turned kriya towards rey n she saw him.
kriya: di,ye kon he?😆
kriti:THE GREAT REYAANSH SINGHANIYA..(imitating kriya)😆
kriyas facial expressions at that tym dekhne layak tha😆.she was shocked beyond limits n felt so embarrassed.she ran from their covering her face with her palms to upstairs to her room.
rey was also shocked hearing her words but seeing her expressions he couldnt control his laugh.kriti also joined him.
kriti:rey dnt mind her ,,she is such a pagli.jo muhme aati he vahi bol deti he..
rey: its k yr..vaisr kya kar rahi he tumhari ye pagli?😉
kriti:she is studying in st.louis,final year.
rey:swayam is also studying there that too final year.
kriti;kriya always says that u r her role model.she want to become a successful business woman.she always wanted to meet u n talk to you once.
rey:no problem...call her..i can talk to her.
anjali called kriya.

At that tym in kriyas room.

kriya was cotinously cursing her n her universji for what happened just few minutes back.she was so embarrassed.kriya is not that type of a girl who drools over a hot guy,she said those words just for fun.she dint even see him before today.
kriya:kyon universji..aap to muje rokh sakthe the na from telling all those cheep words.vo ab mere baare mein kya sochega...chii😳...universji ye sab aapki galti he😡😆
that is when kriti called her.
kriti:kriya..rey want to talk to u..come down
kriya want to go n talk to rey.she always wanted this.but she cant face him..atleast not now.so she replied.
kriya:di,mein so gayi..🤣
at downstairs kriti n rey hearrd her reply.
kriti:(looking at rey) 'so gayi'😲
both rey n kriti burst out into laughter.
kriti:she is such a kid rey...
rey:aur kaafi interesting bi he...😊..vaise ye kitty kon he?
kriti:kriya ki pet kat
rey:cat??😲
kriti:u know wat rey..kriya ke samne muje office works bahut simple he..most difficult work is to manage her🤣
rey n kriti laughed at it.then they had coffee ,chitchatted for some more tym n left to his home.only after making sure that rey has left kriya came downwards.🤣
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darshita

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Posted: 12 years ago

that was just sweet and loved it...
continue soon and pm me...

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--Nishi--

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Posted: 12 years ago

Loved the update😃

eagerly waiting for the next one😊

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malificient

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Posted: 12 years ago

kriya s awesome!!! hahaaha still laughing...

awesome

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moumita

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Posted: 12 years ago

sweet and lovely...

great work dear...

loved kriya's this avatar... awsome...

thnks for the pm

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kriapatel

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Posted: 12 years ago

Hahha
so funny
kria ne fun ke liye sqb kaha
n rey wahi par tha poor girl was so embaress
n that dog wala seen was sooo cute
such a cute n funny update