Surprising Poetic Corner: Silent Sun-quake - Page 52

Originally posted by: surprising

hmmm...ami introvert bote ektu ektu,bt bondhu der ka6e image bahoot kharap bujhli...
amai fb te dekhe eto shocked sab

are...SUSMITA,TUI FB TE??? biswas ho6e na😭

khali book-warm vabe😒

Originally posted by: surprising

Prateeti:

hmmm...sabai mile best best bolle to muskil re😉

Originally posted by: Radhikerani

Aami Dekhte Pachhi Na Tumi Ki Likhechho !!🤓

Originally posted by: panchaali

You are quite a thinker...

Every line touched my heart...

Carry on susmita...

Hats off to you dear...

Originally posted by: prateekdave7

Its simply awesome concept...I like that poem..
Loved the way u conveyed all the emotions and feelings of two loving persons..
Each and every line is beautifully written..
Keep it up..

Thanx for PM

Prateek

With A Frozen Heart

What awaits us before the night i.e. after the life-span?
Mind & soul try to guess...
Every entity is undefined...
Remembrance gives smiles & tears at a time.
Sound of silent heart pains a lot...
I'm too tired to lead my sinful soul--
How far the unknown transcend beyond my thought??
Unceasing emotion hiddenly suppressed in my mind...
I,gazing silently,hopelessly,painfully...
For a drop of PEACE.
A dead soul can be revived by true love that's passionate.
A paining soul,wants to get alive with a little peace...
Too hard to stir with a drop of affection??

The feeling that touches you
With an unknowingly known warmth,
The care that cheers for you,
The eyes having amazing azure
Without any grotesque possession...
Make you feel Paradise in the form of those eternal arms.