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Posted: 18 years ago
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HI!!!!!!!!!! FRENDS trying 2 write new ff .ths is my 2nd attempt at ffs.i hope u will support me.

Plz bear me & if u feel tht I m nt doing good thn plz help me 2 write good.according 2 ur wishes. & plz bear my hinglish.

It's the story something different.

Intro:-

Jai walia: A cool dude. studying in 12th standard. Living in delhi.

Bani: a simple & good looking girl studying in 12th standard too wid jai. In delhi onli.

Pia: a hiphop kind of girl. Studying in 12th onli wid jai & bani.

Bani was a simple girl never look 2wards boys. never talk 2 them.(till 11th she ws like tht) Bt after sometime a change cum in her life. She starts making frends (i.e male frends)

(actually jai,bani & pia were in same coaching centre).jai has a nature of making frends I.E VERY FRANK & GOOD NATURE & pia ws his girl frend.bt slowly slowly he entered in the life of bani.bani ws the one who realized tht she has started liking jai. Bt she try 2 ignore the thought.bt ws unable 2 do so…………………………

Ths ws a short intro 2 the story.waiting 4 ur replies.plz do repli. I M WAITING................

Edited by swati_bhatia - 18 years ago

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Posted: 18 years ago
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oh thats cool! plz do cont soon! i'l love to read it! 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow 👏 👏 👏 ...sound interesting..yaar plz plz start soon 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: TINK

wow 👏 👏 👏 ...sound interesting..yaar plz plz start soon 😃

yeah! plz cont soon!😃

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Like the intro
plz cont. soon
👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 1
It starts when bani ws nt used to talk wid jai bt she ws attracted 2wards him. Pia ws her casual frend. Whn jai & pia used 2 talk bani used 2 leave the room bt jai just stare bani bt never say anything.after some time pia & bani became good frends. Pia wants some project on which bani ws working so she make bani her frend. bt after spending some time wid her pia realizes tht bani cn be her gud frend.(pia has a frend named as Tanya. Who ws her closed frend & too a casual frend of bani).both pia & Tanya liked bani so they made her their close frend. As bani become close frend of jai too & they starts talking too.nw jai & bani were gud frends. He ws used 2 share his feelings about pia wid bani & she ws just 2 listen him as well as pia's feelings abt jai. Bt she realizes tht pia ws just using jai.bcoz jai ws used to help her in her studies. & bani feels tht pia is……………………………….


I will udate next part 2mmarw. I hv an xam 2mmarow.after returning 4m skool I will update next part. Plz do repli. I m waiting 4 ur replies.plz encourage me 4 writing more.without ur encouragement I would nt be able 2 write nxt part.
Edited by swati_bhatia - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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1st part was nice cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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its nice cont soon would like to read more and when u update pls pm me it would be nicethanx
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Posted: 18 years ago
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sry frends i wont b able to countinue ths.

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