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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update ...PLZ don't end this amazing story so soon...

.plz end with arnav & khushi solving their issues, family getting to know abt them, convincing family members for wedding ... Resistance...support ..., them getting married with all the rasams and ceremonies with each n every family member being a part of it.

This story is written awesomely which I think needs a very classy ending 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
farah this amazing FF deserves atleast 4 epilogues
in other words abhi finish mat karo ! continue this after their marriage also atleast 3 or 4 parts
please
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Posted: 12 years ago

To all of those who have been with me constantly throughout SAY,

You will never know how the words from you guys used to make me smile every alternate day. Thank you so much for making me feel so good.

& I know how I wanted to see a worthwhile after marriage-phase for ArShi. So I understand your request. But please understand, at this point of time in life, there is no way I can extend SAY. & the only reason, I have been able to continue SAY post the 50th part, is because I had planned it so elaborately at the very beginning in my mind, & that fuel kinda kept the whole engine running. So even if I do write something like SAY, this is definitely not the time for that. I need to have the same kind of planning again, otherwise there is no way I'd be able to cope up with the kind of pressure I am facing from my real life right now. Being away from ArShi was never gonna be an easy decision for me, & the love from you guys has made it all the more difficult.

Thank you for all the love & support you have unconditionally & quite abundantly showered.

PS: I have ended SAY in 2 parts.. so all of you who wanted a surprise update from me, this is it.. & all of you who wanted at least one more update before you could say goodbye to SAY, this one's for you too.


Part 77


Arnav didn't know how long he was sitting hovering over the pool of blood when he looked up as he felt a warm touch over his cold cheek & he saw the concerned face of his sister. As soon as Anjali got a better look at his face, she became more distressed as fresh tears flew out of her eyes. Anjali cupped his face in her hands urgently & forced him to look into her eyes when he would have looked down instead to stare wordlessly at Khushi's blood again. Then she said in an uncharacteristically strong voice, "Did you listen to what I said? She was breathing! Rohan had already taken her to the hospital! She's going to be OK! We'll let nothing happen to her! Get up, Chhote! Khushi will be fine, but to know that for sure, you have to go to her, right? Get up now!" & that alien scolding tone from Anjali cut through to him as Arnav turned his head to look around & he saw besides Anjali, only Aman was standing by the door. Arnav nodded confusedly, & tried to get up on his feet when both Aman & Anjali rushed to clutch his arms to support him.

As Arnav came to his feet, he looked up again & this time he noticed the mixture of shock & extreme astonishment with which both Anjali & Aman were looking at him. & despite all of his thoughts being on Khushi, Arnav asked both of them in general, weakly, "What? Why are you both looking at me like that?" Anjali rapidly shook her head, & coming in front of him, she started wiping his face off with the end of her Saari as she said gently, "Nothing, Chhote. Woh, haven't seen this in the last 12years na, so.." & as Arnav continued to look at her, confused, & not getting what she meant, Anjali wiped his face for the last time as she whispered wondrously, "You're crying, Chhote!"

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Arnav sat on one corner of the waiting area of the hospital, with Anjali taking turns in being by Rohan's side for some minutes & then by his side. From there, they could see the cabin Khushi had been taken in after her condition had stabilized. It was far, but it was still in sight, & Arnav knew they weren't even supposed to be in this area & he also knew, Aman had something to do with all of them now having been allowed to wait in here. Garima had the same blood group as Khushi, so she had given the first couple of bags of blood they had needed immediately. Payal also had the same blood group, but as she was away on her honeymoon, more blood had had to be arranged from the blood bank. Aman, again, had seen to it that all of it had gone without any hitch. The doctors had declared Khushi 'out of danger' after she had responded positively to the massive blood transfusion. & after all the painful waiting of almost 3 & a half hours from when she had been first brought into the hospital, the Doctor-in-charge had come out to inform the police that, Khushi was awake.

It was no surprise that all of the Gupta's had nearly started a race to the door of Khushi's room, but the ACP had stopped them. It was imperative for bringing Karan & Shyam to justice that, the police took Khushi's statement before anyone else saw her. So, the ACP, the inspector, & the Doctor-in-charge had gone inside Khushi's room leaving behind an extremely impatient & agitated group of family members.

Now, when they came out more than 20 minutes later, without a seconds delay, Shashi Gupta demanded to see his daughter immediately. The Doctor nodded understandingly, & said they could go in to see her, but as she had just woken up from an almost comatose unconsciousness, it would be best if they didn't crowd her & so he would permit only immediate family to see her. & Arnav instantly knew, that didn't mean him, as he was not Khushi's 'immediate family'.

Arnav was looking longingly at Khushi's Amma, Babuji, Buaji & Rohan entering her cabin, wishing he could go in with them too, when the ACP came towards him, looking to discuss something with him. As Arnav looked at the ACP, he didn't notice how before disappearing inside the cabin, Rohan stopped just outside the door, & looked back over at where Arnav stood, the expression in his eyes thoughtful.

The ACP informed Arnav that in her statement Khushi had asserted that her injury had been more of an accident than attack, but both Shyam & Karan had verbally threatened her & revealed intentions of harming her fatally & they had also told her they had been planning this for days. So, although they couldn't be charged with 1st degree attempted murder, they could very plausibly be charged with kidnapping, 2nd degree attempted murder as they had revealed the intention, assault, illegal use of banned drugs, false use of prescription drugs & criminal conspiracy. At this information, Arnav looked confusedly at the ACP & asked impatiently, "So what does that mean? Just because they didn't stab Khushi directly, they go scot free??!" But before he could lose his temper anymore, the ACP corrected him calmly, "No, Mr Raizada! You're getting me wrong. Forget about the other offences. They kidnapped Ms Gupta & they didn't make a ransom call in more than 5 hours & they had also told her that they intended to kill her off. Both of them had. They have threatened to cause death & by their conduct had given rise to a reasonable apprehension that Ms Gupta may be put to death or hurt. So, under Section 364 A of the IPC, kidnapping with intent to murder, they are looking at life to death.. unless of course they decide to plead guilty, in which case, each of them might get up to 14 years or more, each."

Arnav nodded as he felt relieved after so long. He didn't care about either one of those basterds, but if they got any of the sentences the ACP was implying, then that would mean, they'd be out of Khushi's hair forever. As Arnav looked up to thank the ACP for all of his works, his eyes moved past the ACP & he saw Lavanya Kashyap & her mother rushing towards the waiting area, looking very anxious. Suddenly, instead of thanking the ACP, Arnav asked urgently, "& did she say what she was doing out there, alone, when they grabbed her?" The ACP furrowed his brows at that & said concernedly, "That's a bit puzzling, Mr Raizada. Because, when we had asked her, Ms Gupta's friend had said Ms Gupta had needed to go somewhere, so she had left her alone. But when we asked Ms Gupta, she couldn't remember where she had needed to go. When we told her what her friend had said, she just vaguely said, she had needed to be alone." Arnav nodded grimly & thanked the ACP & his unit for all their help.

Then he looked over at Lavanya. She was expressing deep concern over Khushi's condition to Anjali. & Arnav couldn't resist, but let out a very indecent slang word, which startled a very somber looking Aman standing right by his side into looking towards him scandalously. Arnav didn't look back at Aman or anyone else, as he forcefully walked straight upto Lavanya & in front of the shocked eyes of her mother & his Di, he grabbed hold of her elbow & dragged her aside to the corridor beside. As soon as they were out of sight of prying eyes, Arnav almost threw Lavanya away from him on the wall, & said, not bothering to lower his voice, "I have never despised a woman more in my life than I despise you now! I can't believe you'd stoop so low as to-"

But he stopped as he saw the fake non-comprehensive look in Lavanya's eyes. Arnav felt his anger rising further & he fisted his hands to stop himself from doing something he'd regret later, as he almost shouted, "Don't act! Not in front of me! Did you honestly think I won't recognize your voice?! & Red- Khushi might not say why she was stranded alone so far away from home, but the fact that you decided to wait for 5-f**kin'-hours before you decided to divulge what you had seen, tells me all I need to know! So listen to me now, & listen good! You will stay the hell away from my Khushi.. Now & forever! I don't want to see you near her. I don't want to catch you trying to contact her in any way! & if I catch your filthy presence in my Khushi's life, even for once, I am warning you, when I'll go after you.. I'll go after your whole existence.. you.. your family, your whole world! Because, Khushi is my world, & when you went after her, you made it very personal for me!.. Now get your mother & get the hell out of here" & then before Lavanya could say anything else, Arnav turned his face away in disgust & walked back in fast strides back to where Anjali & Lavanya's Mom were standing, their faces telling him that they had heard every bit of his really loud threats.

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As soon as Khushi parent's reached her bedside, it was a total out of control situation. Everyone was too overwhelmed to see Khushi, lying like a tiny thing in that otherwise small hospital bed that had seemed to just swallow her up. Garima started crying so uncontrollably that in the end Khushi extended her hand towards Rohan, asking him to help her sit up. & despite everyone's instant protesting cries, she kept insisting & in the end, Rohan had to oblige to her obstinacy as he went towards her & gently holding her up in his arms, he helped her sit up as Buaji hastily propped up the pillows behind her. Then Khushi pulled her mother's hand in her lap & caressing it weakly, she kept reassuring Garima over & over that she was fine. & Garima did get a grip over herself, but as soon as it started to look like everyone had regained control of their emotions, it all started again & this time the initiator was Khushi herself.

Shashi Gupta had taken a backseat at the face of his wife's obviously disturbed state & his daughter's trauma. But the moment his wife calmed down suddenly & his daughter too seemed to regain a bit of her usual life as she tried to comfort her mother, he just had to go & touch his daughter a little.. He had to know for himself that his youngest, his darling was alright & was actually sitting in front of him. So, went & kept his right hand over his daughter's head as if he was blessing her. Khushi immediately looked up at him, & then without any warning, she just burst out in tears, almost throwing herself in her father's arms. & this time all of them let her get it all out. No pair of eyes in the room was dry, but no one made an excessive sound. They just let the room fill up with Khushi's sobs & as Shashi held her close to his heart, Garima, Madhumati & Rohan all just comforted her by patting her head, or caressing her shoulder or rubbing her back.

It was more than 15minutes later that Khushi sobered up as she was just tired from all the crying. & as Garima wiped her face & Shashi made her drink some water, Rohan abruptly said, surprising everyone else, "Babuji, let's go outside for a bit? Let Bachchi rest & plus, Anju's Dadiji, Naniji & Mama-Mami has come too. I think they'd want to speak to you. & Buaji, can you please call Payal back? She was crying hysterically the last time I spoke to her.. when Bachchi was still unconscious!" All of them, including Khushi, looked astonishingly at Rohan. They couldn't understand how all those things were more important than them being in here with Khushi, but as Garima was just about to refuse Rohan's suggestions, Shashi suddenly spoke up, his eyes steady on his son, "If Rohan says so, I think we should step outside for a bit."

As soon as they were out, Khushi looked questioningly at her brother, & Rohan carefully reached out & brushed some hair away from over her left eyebrow as he said gently, "Do you wanna hear something interesting?" As Khushi didn't say anything, but just furrowed her brows, he continued, "I think, today, I'd have killed Karan out of my rage. Do you know who stopped me?!" Khushi searched his face for a second, & finding no clue there, she started unsurely, "Bhabhi-?" But before she could finish, Rohan shook his head & exclaimed, "Arnav! He controlled himself, stopped himself from beating Shyam all the way to hell & then he stopped me! All he thought about was you!" Then he bent down & pressed a long kiss over Khushi's bent head & said strongly, "Bachchi, when it comes to you, I think even I could kill those basterds.. So I don't really blame Arnav. I think, none of us would ever be able to just stand aside & let anyone get away after hurting you! But Arnav did stop that darkness from taking him over completely. & he did take care of us.. Babuji.. while you were- Point is, if you are willing to do the same, then I am willing to give him another chance. So what say? He was looking at me quite like a sappy little puppy on my way in here! Should we throw him a bone?"

Khushi immediately gave out a short laugh, a thing she had thought she wouldn't be able to do in days to come, but so hilarious was the use of the words 'sappy little puppy' when it came to the Arnav she knew. Then she sobered up & looking up straight at her brother's eyes, she said simply, "I'd like to see him now.. not because he stopped himself from doing something I was afraid of.. But because, when I was bleeding out & I thought I was dying..? All I could think of was how pointless all the excuses I made to be away from him were & how if I was actually dying, I only wanted to see him.. be with him.. just once.. & then, once more, & then once more again.. just be with him." Rohan looked down wondrously at the girl sitting in front of him, looking almost dead because of how pale she was, & he quickly bent down to give her a gentle hug & then he rapidly went out of the cabin. As soon as he was out of the cabin, Rohan saw Arnav listening attentively to Shashi as he was describing Khushi's state to Naniji. Rohan ignored the surprising glances he earned as he went straight upto Arnav & said crisply, "Just go inside & ask Bachchi herself how she's doing, instead of eavesdropping on elders' conversation!"

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Edited by farah53 - 12 years ago
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& here we go. Last part. Enjoy!


Part 78


The moment Arnav entered the cabin, he felt his heartbeats starting to beat in an erratic taboo against his ribcages. The person tiredly leaning over the pillows at her back, might look like a mere shadow of Khushi, but Khushi it was, as the moment her eyes fell upon him, her lips lifted up at the corners a little, & that song that played in the air every time she smiled at him seemed to find its tune back. He stopped when he was just an arms length's away from her & she instantly charged weakly, "I hadn't realized I needed to send out an invitation for you to come & see me!" & Arnav's smirk broke out of its own volition at how typically 'Khushi' it was to blame him for not coming to see her, when it had been her who had broken off all ties with him the last time they had seen each other. But that was a day Arnav wanted to forget the soonest, so he narrowed his eyes as he softly charged back at her, "I hadn't realized you were fit to sit up & hold court for your visitors so soon!"

Khushi didn't say something for a second, taken aback by Arnav's retort, & then she again tried to lighten the mood, "Check it out," & she held her left arm slightly away from her body for Arnav to see the bandage, "I have got 17 stitches! I bet that would leave a mean scar! & now, I won't have to feel so guilty everytime I looked at that scar over your left eye!" But instead of a smile, she saw Arnav's eyes darken as he looked on at her bandaged arm & his lips looked grimmer than before. Khushi suddenly reached out & grabbing his left hand, she pulled him down to sit beside her on the bed. & when she looked in his eyes, she saw that question there, the one she knew would be her undoing, but the one she knew both of them needed to be done with, so she prompted Arnav, "Go on! Ask it!" & Arnav knew she had read his eyes accurately, so without telling her she was wrong, he just asked the question he needed to, "Tum theek ho?"

& like Khushi had suspected, it was her undoing, as she shook her head in the negative & just leaned over his chest & started crying once again, resting her cheek over his right shoulder. Slowly, she felt Arnav's hands come up over her back & then he gently gathered her closer in his arms. Khushi would've gladly cried till the next weekend if she could just stay bunched up like that inside his arms, but after a couple of minutes she heard Arnav say so close to her ear that his breath fanned her cheek, "I hate it when you cry like this!.. Ok, let me tell you something & try not to gloat too much, alright?" That piqued Khushi's interest as she straightened up a bit & looked at him questioningly while wiping her tears away. Arnav looked at her gently, & then his right hand went up & started caressing her injury over the bandages lightly as he said looking down at the bandaged spot, "When I saw you.. there.. like that.. I prayed.. to your Devi Maiyya!"

Khushi's eyes widened with surprise, but as she was about to ask him what made him do so, she looked at the dark way he was constantly looking at her bandages, & she knew what made him pray, so she just asked something else she wanted to know, "What did you ask for from Devi Maiyya?" Arnav looked up at her & then quickly looked away, as if he wanted to hide this part, but Khushi just caught his cheek & turned his face towards her. Seeing his escape route getting shut, Arnav said in a barely audible voice, "I asked that.. she took me.. instead of you." Khushi's eyes widened as she looked at him in complete shock & then she started shaking her head violently as she started in a yell, "Arnavji! Never say that-" But Arnav caught her head in his hands before she could shake it off of her shoulders completely & after dropping a light kiss over her nose, he said sincerely, "It would've happened anyway.. if something had happened to you! Main tumhare bina jee nahi paoonga, Khushi!" This time Khushi reached up & cupped his cheeks with both her hands as she leaned her forehead against his & said desperately, "& you won't have to! Why would you live without me, Arnavji? Hum toh aap hi ke hain!"

Arnav immediately pulled back as he looked at her intently, as if her words had given him an idea or something, & then taking up both her hands in his own, he kissed them both in turn & then looking up at her, he whispered conspiratorially, as if he was making a secret suggestion, "Then marry me!" & instead of looking overjoyed, Khushi looked at him as if he had lost his mind & then her expression changed as if she suddenly remembered something, & she started in a soothing voice, "Is this because you feel guilty about what you said in Lucknow & how all this happened?" Arnav looked even more surprised than her if possible as he shook his head vehemently & said, "No.. It's not about that, Red. Although I did push you away-" But before he could finish, Khushi interrupted impatiently, "But you didn't.. In fact, you were the one on my mind before I lost consciousness & I think right now I am here for you!" She had barely stopped before Arnav said doggedly, "If you're here for me, then say; yes, you will marry me!"

This time Khushi got a little irritated, because he was tempting her with something she had really really wanted & something she knew he could never possibly want, so she just looked at him defiantly & asked as if daring him to answer, "Why do you suddenly wanna marry me?!" Arnav looked at her pale face exhaustedly as he felt his temper slowly surfacing too & he suddenly grabbed both her shoulders tightly, but gently & pulling her really close, he bit out almost as if he was scolding her, "Because I love you, damn it!"

As Khushi looked at him all wide-eyed, shocked at his sudden aggressiveness, Arnav sighed, angry at himself for shouting at her like that when she was in that vulnerable state, & he cupped her cheeks in his hands & tilting her face upwards towards him, he spoke as if talking to a 5-year old, "& because I want to be the one who trumps all for you, Red! I wanna be the first one to know everything about you! I want to be there for you in your happiness & in situations like this! Hell, I wanted to come inside to see you with the others, but I couldn't! I am not family, Red! But you're my family, & if that means that I'll have to go through all of that circus Di & Akaash just went through, so that the whole world will know you're mine, that we are one, then I'll do it! Gladly!"

Khushi looked at him wordlessly, too overwhelmed to speak. & as Arnav stopped talking, tears started falling from her eyes & she felt choked up with emotions. But for the life of her, she couldn't think of anything to say, because she didn't know what someone was supposed to say, when the person you had loved since you were all of 13/14 offered to spend the rest of his life with you! & she looked at him through her tears when she heard Arnav speaking again, his voice shaking a little, "Red, I won't promise you happily ever after, cos I honestly don't know ever after.. & we're so volatile together.. & I am so flawed!.. But you, Red! You gave life to my heartbeats! I had become my own God & I was trying to write my own destiny, but I was so lifeless! & you ignited such a fire inside me with your infuriating antics! & yet.. you've given me such peace after a lifetime of conflicts! & I don't want a life anymore that's not bound to you! & you're my best chance at being a Rohan or an Akaash.. You're my only chance at being my best version, Red, as your Arnav! Someone who Ma would be proud of! & when I envision our life 50years from now, I see that old couple going after each other with the help walking sticks & still fighting madly.. & honestly, I can't wait to start fighting with you & beating you with my sharp logic on a daily basis.. So, will you, Red?"

Khushi looked down at her lap, & as she wiped her eyes, a smile secretly played around her lips. But when she looked up, she looked all serious as suddenly both her hands went & started groping through his pants' pockets as she said challengingly, "Oh, we'll see who kicks whose ass 50 years from now, Mr Raizada. Personally, I think you would do little, but say a lot of 'What the-?' & we both know, that won't win you any fights!" Arnav instantly squirmed a little as Khushi's hands roamed over dangerous territory & hastily grabbing her hands, he pulled them up & bunched them between their chests as he asked sinuously, "Red, what did I say about your hands roaming inside my pants' pockets being hazardous to my health?" Khushi just sent him a sly smile & complained poutingly, "Then why don't you just give me my ring back?" Arnav looked at her pouting mouth, & even the thought of their whole families outside couldn't dissuade him, as he bent forward & took her pout in a lingering kiss. But as soon as he felt Khushi's hands pulling his head in to deepen the kiss, he pulled back, & ignoring Khushi's protesting mumble, he reached inside his coat & pulled out the small velvet pouch from the inside pocket. He took Khushi's left hand in his & taking the ring out of the pouch, he wordlessly put the ring onto its rightful place.

As Khushi gaped at the sight of the ring, Arnav smirked & dropping a quick kiss on her parted mouth, he said smugly, "You know, your impatience failed you. You always looked at the wrong pocket at first, & then you wouldn't look any further!" Khushi gasped indignantly at this information & feeling silly at her own impatience, she accused him instead, "How was I supposed to know you carried a pouch like a Kangaroo?" Arnav smirked at her annoyance & said to pacify her, "Di made me carry the pouch for the Rakshadhaaga she got me & there was enough room for the ring, so.. Anyways, cheer up! I have another huge surprise for you! One that you're gonna absolutely love.." But Khushi's interest was piqued at the word surprise, so she clutched at Arnav's collar excitedly & asked expectantly, "What is it?" Arnav shook his head as he said curtly, "No way! Not till it's ready!" But Khushi still pleaded, "What? Is it Jalebis? Tell me!" Arnav looked at her astonishingly for a moment at that, speechless that she can actually consider Jalebis as 'surprise', then he said dismissively, "No! If I told you, it won't be a surprise, would it?"

By this time Khushi was too intrigued to back off, so she went for desperate measures. She gestured towards her bandaged arm & said weakly, "I am hurt, see? & I lost so much blood! Arnavji, bataiye na!" Arnav looked at her disbelievingly at this low trick as he exclaimed, "You're unbelievable, Khushi Kumari Gupta! Do you know that?!" Khushi had the grace to look ashamed at that, but she tried one last time, "You'll get 5KP's if you tell-" This time Arnav silenced her with a quick kiss before he declined her offer, "I'll figure out other honest ways to earn KP's, thank you! Now, shut up!" & Khushi was really astonished at how Arnav was the love of her life, but how sometimes she really disliked him, like she did then. She looked at him through narrowed eyes & said nastily, "Don't tell me to shut up! You can't boss me around like you do with everyone else!" & as Arnav looked at her formerly pale cheeks now glowing with angry colors, he felt blissful in the knowledge that his life with Khushi Kumari Gupta was going to be an eventful one. & then just to see how beautiful she looked when she was fierce, he declared challengingly, "I can boss you around anytime!.. Kaun rokega mujhe?" & he flashed one of his rare, full on smiles, when Khushi bit out angrily, "Rakshas.. Laad governor!"

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They didn't know that just then 5pairs of eyes tried to look in on them through the narrow glass window on the door. As they looked on, it seemed like Arnav & Khushi were severely arguing about something, as always. Garima said to Anjali unsurely, looking at where Rohan was still explaining things about Arnav & Khushi to his Babuji & Manohar Raizada, "I don't know if Rohan is right, Bahu.. I mean how can these two..?" Just then Manorama came flailing her arms & said excitedly, "Ee Gupta phaimily phiree iskeem chalayi hain ka? Badi pe chhoti muft!"

Devyani Raizada sent one quelling look at her daughter-in-law, before she smiled reassuringly at Garima & then whispered as if sharing a secret, although all the other Gupta & Razada ladies standing there could hear her, "Garima, remember, Khushi's 5th birthday party? Ratna was there too.. & how after Arnav had broken the bell of her brand new bicycle, Khushi had thrown big chunks of her birthday cake at him chasing him down all over Nikunja?" Garima nodded as she made a shuddering gesture & said, "Don't remind me, Samdhanji! We had to repaint the whole ground floor as the cake stains won't come off the walls!" Devyani Raizada turned towards the still fighting couple inside & said with a fond smile, "Don't you remember what Ratna said to both of us before we dragged Chhote back to Shantivan?" Garima looked at the older woman confusedly for several long seconds & then her eyes widened with wonder as she seemed to remember what Devyani Raizada was talking about. Naniji looked at the other curious faces around her & she said proudly, "My Ratna had laughingly said, by the time Arnav & Khushi grew up, they'd either end up killing each other or marrying each other! & Devi Maiyya knows, how I have been waiting for this day since then!"

& as warm smiles gradually came on the faces of Garima, Madhumati, Anjali, & Arnav's Dadi, they all looked on at the fighting couple along with Devyani Raizada, & somehow they knew, these two would probably spend the rest of their lives fighting each other tooth-&-nail like this. But whereas the world would call this fighting, this was the way these two loved & lived, & this love between the two of them was just too unique to be ever be named in one word.



I will say this, because I just love to say this, press 'like' if you do like & go ahead, & tell me one last time, was all the drama, wait & pain I put you through for SAY worth it? & this time, please do say how\what you feel, cause you have no idea, how many times in future I'd come back to read what you have said after this.


I will have an epilogue.. I have to disclose Arnav's surprise, don't I? But I guess most of you know already what it is, don't you? So wait patiently. The epilogue will take time.😳


Edited by farah53 - 11 years ago
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Right now I'm feeling like IPK ended all over again 😭

Atleast this ending was more to my liking 😃

I know SAY had to end at one point but Pari, why not after another 100 chaps 😛

If you hadn't mentioned epilogue at the last line of your note I promise I'd have called you up right now and arm twisted you to write the epilogue :D...come to think of it I'll call you up anyways to see if I can read the epilogue beforehand :p

Now coming to the update...

Ever since I was 12 Mr. Darcy has been my Prince Charming...the kind of guy I always wanted to marry...anywho even though I'm married I feel Mr. Darcy has finally met his competitor...Pari's Arnav...

My my Khushi is so lucky

He fought for her...he cried for her...he even bargained with Devi Maiya for his life instead of her's :)...

I love how you made Arnav realize the importance of marriage...(seriously how do you come up with such awesome stuff)...so that he can trump all...so that he can be her immediate family who gets her news first hand and also always get to see her first

Now who put it in his head? Aman... So a round of applause for Aman *man he is so hawt*

I loved the elders sneak peeking :p...ha ha Garima's worry is so natural... I loved the whole Arnav's mothers part...she had predicted it so long ago :D

Oh almost forgot to compliment on the rohan part...awww he understood how Arnav must be wanting to see her *I loved that part so bad*

So what can the surprise be? Hmmm what can it be? Is it Nikunju? Please tell me it is...pretty please :*

Love you so much babes❤️❤️❤️... Thanks for giving me SAY...

I am so bummed I won't get to say update soon anymore :(



Edited by SamiyaIPKKND - 12 years ago
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Holding on

When you have finally given your life to someone how can you hold on to your grief, your tears?

When you have finally given your life to someone how can you not hold out your hand so that the other person grasps it?

When you have finally given your life to someone how can you not let it show in your relieved smiles, tender kisses, dark expressions at deep wounds?

When we have already given our hearts to IPK, ArHi, and SaRun why should it be a surprise that we still hold on to the show?

When we have already given our hearts to SAY why should we not think of this story and sigh at the wonderful moments shared?


Letting go

To let go of the past and to embrace the future.

To let go of the shadows of ones parents and to accept a spouse for yourself.

To let go of every doubt and insecurity and to welcome the future.

To let go of the presence of the show on a daily basis and cherish its memories

To let go of regular updates of SAY and to revel in the fact that one more story of Arnav and Khushi attained its happily ever after beautifully.


Thank you Fari for this journey called SAY.

Thank you Sami for introducing me to both Fari and SAY.

Though i never say it but you know ILYD ❤️
Edited by Rasgulla_sp - 12 years ago
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SAY is over!! 😭

I seriously feel IPK ended all over again!!


You know, i may have read hundreds of ffz till now but, none of them made me feel so close to ipk.

Every character which was introduced two years ago on this beautiful show, u had exactly shown and maintained the nature of their characters in SAY till the end , even if the CVs had ruined it in the show!!

I so wish u were one among the CVs!! Every line , every chapter, every emotion u show all of them with so much care, never missing any point , i just wonder how i even forgot such a crucial point in the story!!

Coming to the updates,

Arnav had to cry, we knew that , but the way u presented it , the scene u wrote was so touching , i seriously wanted to go hug arnav once!!

Ever since Khushi was missing none of the officials would bother to give him details abt khushi, his khushi!! He might have been angry then. but wen the doctor asked for 'immediate family' to see khushi , it was evident how desperately he wanted to be her family!!

Rohan, i just adore him. The first thing he told khushi was about Arnav. He knew she would feel better, and i absolutely loved it when he called Arnav, sappy little puppy, i can too well imagine his face like THAT!! i went aaww at that!!


Arnav and Khushi's fights will never end!! She finally got her ring back!! Whats the surprise?? I am dying to know!!
And haawww Arnav's mom wala part was so cuuutee!!!!! Haha...they belong together .bas.
Waiting for the epilogue desperately!!
Thank u Saiyyu for introducing SAY to ur readers.Thank u Samiya for encouraging Farah to continue writing SAY!!
Thanx a ton Farah...fr giving us such a beautiful ArHi story!! ILYD!! <3


Edited by ayeshafarhabs - 12 years ago
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Edited- i am quite late in unresing but nevermind...from where to start about this wonderful and beautiful story which entertained me for so long and touched my heart...your angry young man and a bubbly gal were a treat to read...what to say about your this fairytale like 'SAY' except that i will miss it rather i am already missing it...i hope you are going to write epilogue because this story deserves an ultimate ending just like the last chapters...i was not regular in commenting but still i can tell you i loved this fiction...finally there will be no more waiting for an alternative day , no more thinking of whats gonna happen next, no more asking for update soon, no more worrying like it used to create when you didn't update on the alloted time, no more looking for farah to res to update a chapter, no more running in the race to res first, last but not the least no more 'SOMETHING ABOUT YOU'...every good thing has an end...i will wait like many others for farah to come back with 'SAY2' with more magic to start that whole circle again...
Edited by shipraj - 12 years ago
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Farah, what can I say, I can't believe this epic love story is over... I am getting the same hollow feeling I got after Barun announced he was leaving, because that was the day IPK ended for me... SAY had become a part of my life, for the past so many months now, I cannot express in words what the feeling of loss is like... The epilogue will not assuage the loss I am feeling right now... So, I am again requesting a Season II of SAY to read about ArHi's after marriage life... The show deprived us of that, at least you don't do that ramanchi... 😭 You can rest up, plan & then start writing, I won't even ask for updates every other day, you can update once a week if you're busy, that will be good enough for me...

About today's update what can I say, other than it was just simply fabulous as ever! Aww, felt so bad for the sappy faced puppy... 😭 He could not go & see his Khushi with the first batch of immediate family members... But loved the way Rohan was concerned about Arnav's feelings at not being able to go see Khushi with them...

Loved the Rohan - Khushi conversation... It was just superb.

Adored the way Arnav was hanging on to every word about Khushi from her babuji... Aww poor guy he wanted to be the person in Khushi's life who trumps every one else & becomes more than the immediate family... And he isn't taking any chances with that... He will go through any circus to ensure that the whole world knows that she is HIS...

I loved the way Khushi again tried fishing for the ring & I simply cried when he put the ring on her finger, branding her as his forever...

Loved the tongue lashing Arnav gave the bitch, hope to never see her around Khushi... (But with no SAY, that ain't likely to happen 😕)

Am still very emotional, hence cannot write much, but you get the point, you excelled again. Hope to see you writing Season II of SAY soon...

P.S. Oh forgot about the surprise, Farah, it had better be Nikunja without any doubt. 😳
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Arnav's tears always had the power to hurt my heart and soul and the ache wouldn't stop for a long time and that is how it feels right now. I guess that was bound to happen when someone who is as strong as him mentally and emotionally breaks down.

Aman's words were indeed powerful. He helped Arnav by giving him a heads up about what to expect when Khushi is finally found and what a revelation and help it was for Arnav.

Tum theek ho? She shook her head in the negative and melted into his arms...the only thing she didn't do was fly into his arms...a hug I watched...Lord knows how many times. Beautiful take on my favourite hug 😳

Devi Maiyya Why am I not surprised that Arnav wanted the Godess to take him instead of Khushi? Because that is Arnav Singh Raizada does. He hates with all his might and loves with all his heart. Of course, he has a long way to go before he understands the ways of God, that there are no exchange offers 😃

The Humour Loved the humour you used which was another IPK speciality. Sappy puppy and Kangaroos pouch ...wah wah wah and the siblings laughing ...so reminiscent and so beautiful.🤣

Because I Love You Dammit Favourite Khushi Arnav moment. Their expression of love for each other cannot be just the typical three words and that is the speciality of this couple. Gosh! How I'm going to miss SAY 😭

The Proposal The most beautiful proposal and Arnav Singh Raizada used words...the words that you talked about Farah. He has finally realized the power of words and am I drooling...absolutely

Khushi's quiet strength what is Arnav without Khushi? Nothing but a heartless business man who breathed yet did not live. She prompts to ask the question"Tum theek ho?", gives him the courage while she is the one who is in pain and excites him and gives him peace. Khushi completes Arnav, makes him whole.🤗

My say I guess I can conclude with my usual words for the last time - another beautiful update Farah ...waiting for the next part eagerly coz you promised us an epilogue.🤗

Ah Farah!!!! I'm going to incredibly miss the Laad Governor and Red. This is one of the saddest days after IPK ended ...saddest days related to IPk because SAY is ending. And we'll not get an opportunity to enjoy our favourite show through your writing. Goign to miss SAY, you and IPK all over again 😭

Edited by AquaSandhya - 12 years ago

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