|Kiran's Premeer 'K'orner...|25th Update on pg-107 UPDATED - Page 25

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: additi11

Lovely update Kiran i loved all. .

Especially the Harshiti r wala and also heer meher

They are cute. . 🤗

thanx for pm

thanks sana..glad u liked my work 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: AASUS

Hey Kiran 🤗


pg 33
Oooh umm wow donno what to say I love lot of these.
HA Deewali sig is super cute my fav. and like the way pics merged.
Awesome caption too.
2ns fav is Heer Meher. Cute pics and cute caption.
This sig looks too dark, otherwise nicely done.
I'm saving and using these two Kiran pretty pls.
Didn't get time to ask u 1st so don't mind me.

Gifts -
Meher 's is cute, Poroma's is so lovely, Fatima's is nice, sweet colour.

Ty and keep going.


thanks athi..glad u liked it..and ya u can use these siggies...all are free to use accept for the gifts...😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: premeermania

i simply loved the heer-meher one. that's awesomeee!!!! 👏 👏

thank you for pm 😃

thanks muna for stopping by..😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: premeermania

i simply loved the heer-meher one. that's awesomeee!!!! 👏 👏

thank you for pm 😃

thanks muna..for stopping by and appreciating my work 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

OS-Jeena tere sang

Heer was pacing in her room angrily'yes..Angrily'.she was dam angry with her HUSBAND.

Heer (angrily muttering to herself):- Had hoti hai kisi bhi chez ki'.maine to suna tha ki shadi ke 5-6 saalo ke baad sare pati badal jate hain'.lekin meri kismet to dekho'humari shadi ko abhi sirf 1 hi saal hua'or mere pati dev ka yeh haal hai'how dare he forget our 1st wedding anniversary'.mae usse kabhi baat nahi karoungi'kabhi..

Heer went near her closet, took out her violet silk nighty and went to washroom.

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Prem was silently looking at his angry wife'he was standing outside his room peeking inside.

Prem (to himself):- Hey bhagwan andar ka temperature to 100 degree Celsius hai'ab kya karun jaoun ke na jaoun'.jane to pardega hi'.

While Prem was busy in talking to himself'.Preet came there, and stood behind his PB with the smirk on his face'

Preet (whispered into Prem's ear):- Kya hua PB andar nahi ja rahe?

Prem startled and turned around to look at his lil bro'

Prem:- Preet ke bache dara diya tune muje'

Preet:- kya PB itne mein hi dar gaye'.to socho ap andar kaise jaoge 'sherni ke den mein'

Prem:- wahi to soch raha hun'

Preet smiled at his nervous PB'Prem looked at Preet

Prem:- Preet yahan meri jaan nikal rahi hai or tu has raha hai'

Preet:- To or kya karun'.

Prem:- arre kya karun matlab'meri madad kar'.muje bata main kaise manao teri bhabhi ko'.itni buri tarah se phas gaya hun main is situation mein'ab muje samjh mein arha hai'meri shadi se pehle bauji aisa kyun kehte the ki beta'abhi tujhe jitna hasna hai hassle'.baad mein shadi ke hasne ka moka nahi milega tuje'

Preet started laughing

Preet:- PB apko bauji ki baa tab samjh mein aai hai'muje to bohot pehle hi samjh mein agai thi'isiliye to main abhi shadi nahi kar raha'

Prem:- Karega beta karega tu bhi shadi'jab tuje pyar hoga na, tab puchunga main tujhse

Preet:- kya muje or pyar'.shub shub bolo PB

Prem:- Preet'tu muje yeh bata ki tu meri madad karega ya nahi'yeh sab kuch teri waje se hua hai.

Preet (shocked):- meri waje se???

Prem:- han teri waje se'tu muje yaad nahi dila sakta tha ki aj meri wedding anniversary hai'

Preet:- arre wah biwi apki, anniversary apki, or yaad main rakhun'.yeh to wohi baad ho gai na PB'ki shopping ap karo or bill main bharun'huh

Prem:- agar tu meri help nahi kar sakta na to mera dimand bhi mat kha'ja jaake so ja'or muje sochne de ki main ab kya karun..

Preet (teasingly):- thik hai PB main jar aha hun sone..Best of Luck!!!

Preet left from there. Prem after few seconds got some courage and decided to go inside

Prem:-Hey bhagwan please raksha karna'.

He opened the door and went inside.

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Heer came out of the washroom wearing her nighty. She took the overcoat of the nighty and wore it. After switching of the lights she laid down on the bed. Just then she heard the sound of the opening door. She knew it would be her husband Prem Juneja. She closed her eyes pretend to be sleeping.

Prem slowly entered the room'the lights were switched off'He got the hint about heer's mood

Prem (thinks):- Heer ne to aj mera ane tak ka wait nahi kiya'lights band karke so bhi gai'.Prem beta aj to tu gaya.

Prem took is t-shirt and track pant went to washroom to change'.when he came out of the washroom'he slowly got into the bed laid down on his side. He looked at Heer's side. Her back was facing him. He knew she wasn't sleeping but pretending to be sleeping because she was angry with him.

Prem smiled and went closer to her and hugged her from back'.putting his cheeks on her's, holding her by her waist tightly so that she can't escape

Prem:- Heer!!! Heer!!!

No response from Heer

Prem:- Heer main janta hun tum so nahi rahi ho'please baat karo na mujhse'Heer!!!

Heer opened her eyes but didn't turn and looked at him'seeing her eyes opened he speak again

Prem:- Heer I am sorry!!! Please muje maaf kardo'.Heer!!! Please look at me once'

Heer (angrily):- Prem muje bohot neend arahi hai'muje sona hai'chordo muje!!!

Prem:- Nope!! Jab tak tum muje maaf nahi karogi, main tumhe sone nahi dunga'

Heer angrily pushed prem with all her strength got up from the bed and stood near the window..

Prem too got up from the bed goes behind heer.

Prem (holding his ears):- I am sorrryyy

Heer didn't look at him. Prem made her look at him by pulling her holding her arm. He cupped her face.

Prem:- Heer please..i am sorry jaan'.office ke kaam mein mae itna zyada busy ho gaya tha ki mere dhyan se hi nikal gaya ki aj humari wedding anniversary hai'please heer atleast gussa to karo mujh pe'danto muje'but please aise chup rehke, muje ingnore karo'Heer, itni choti si baat ke liy'.

Heer:- Choti si baat!!! Prem yeh tumhare liye choti si baat hai..

Now Heer started crying'

Heer (with tears in her eyes):- Prem ek saal ho gaya hai humari shadi ko'pichle ek saal mein tum khud sochke batao'.humare honeymoon ke baad humne kitni baar ek sath time spend kiya hai han??? Jab se humari shadi hui hai'.maine tumhe sirf office ke kaamo mein ulajhte hue dekha hai'subha tum jaldi office chale jate ho'or raat ko 2-2.30 baje ghar ate ho'lekin pichle ek saal mein maine kabhi bhi tumse koi shikayat ya koi complaint nahi ki'batao muje'ki kabhi koi shikayat????

Prem looked at Heer with guilt in his eyes

Heer:- nahi na'kyun ki main janti thi'ghar ka barda beta hone ke naate..tumhare upar is ghar ki'humare pariwar ki bohot sari zimedariyan hai'bauji se ab is umar mein kaam nahi hota'isliye humare business ka saara kaam tumhe dekhna pardta hai'main smajhti hun yeh sab prem'lekin aj ke din'.humari shadi ki pehli saalgirha ke din maine tumse, apne pati uska thorda sa time manga tha. Koi chand sitare tordne ke liye nahi kaha tha'or tum wo bhi nahi kar paye prem'tumhare zindagi mein poore saal ke 365 din mein se aj din tha prem'jispe sirf or sirf mera haq tha or wo ek din bhi tum muje nahi de paye'.to batao or kya umeed karun main tumse'

Prem:- Heer mein'

Heer:- nahi prem aj muje kuch nahi sunna hai'tumn'..

But Heer was silenced by Prem's kiss'He tightly held her waist. Heer was surprised by his sudden kiss'she was about to lost in the moment but soon she realized that she was suppose to be angry with him. She tried to push him away to break their kiss but Prem caught her hand without breaking their kiss'.he scope her in his arm heading towards their bed'.her laid down on the bed along with her without breaking their kiss'continuously tears are flowing from heer's eye'.as prem interlock her hand with his'.when they needed air they broke their kiss'.prem looked at heer and saw the tears on her cheeks'he kissed her on her cheeks and suck her tears..After kissing on her cheeks, he kissed her on her eyes and then at last on her forehead'.

Heer looked at Prem with tears on her eyes'Prem cupped her face

Prem:- I am sorry heer'please muje maaf kardo'aj ke baad kabhi aisa nahi hoga'I promise'ab se main roz office se 6 baje tak wapis ajaounga'or weekends pe hum dono bahar jayenge'.i promise jaan'

Heer looked down sadly. Prem made her look towards him'.

Prem:- sorry!!!!!!!!

Heer looked at Prem and hugged him tightly. Prem smiled and hugged her back.

Prem:- to tumne muje maaf kar diya na'

Heer:- hmmm

After few minute heer broke their hug. She looked at him and said'

Heer:- main tumhare liye khana garam karke lati hun..

Heer was about to get up but Prem stopped her

Prem:- nahi muje khana nahi khana

Heer:- lekin Prem, maine tumhare office call kiya tha or tumhari PS ne bataya ki tumne dinner nahi kiya'main khana lekar ati hun

Prem:- Heeerrr'main kaha na muje khana nahi chaiye'muje abhi meri Heer chahiye

Heer smiled. Prem closer and whispered in her ear

Prem:- Happy wedding anniversary my wifeee

Heer:- Happy wedding anniversary my hubbyyy

Both started giggling and went to the world of their Love'.

[I know it was pathetic🤢'but still waiting for your feedbacks😳]

Edited by kiran_28 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome os..hehe preet-prem were adorable as always...and love the way prem pacified heer. Great little story. Loved it :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow great os plz update soon
it's awesome
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
So cute os dear
It was really nice
This is somewhat different that prem actually forgot bcoz in everything they atlast say surprise
This is also in one way really cute
Prem pacifying Heer is really sweet
Prem-Preet part was also cute
Over all I liked this os very much dear
You are the sweetheart giving us cute premeer updates since now a days we rarely get premeer updates and I miss premeer very much
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Posted: 12 years ago
It was really nice !!!!!!
Loved it...

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