IPKKND:Closing The Loops * Thread 2 Pg 144 * - Page 30

Originally posted by: EmpressSarayu

Ah yes, I can actually make you you've not editted as much as you'd like. Esp the lines when they wake up.

But finally! Thank god! It was so ridiculous, all that drunk talking with Shyam right after they had one amazing Rabba Ve session!
And the 'un drunk' bit made me laugh so much!

Its a brilliant start! I can't wait to read more! :)

Originally posted by: sumond

Though I love nimbu ka acchar to death I did not like it in the serial at ALL, so million thanks for not mentioning it in your writing or the whole thing would have turned SOUR. Lovely update from start to finish it was a pleasure to read it. Thanks for pm

Originally posted by: sruthick

Finally...She confessd...
Ow Arnav s gonna react 2 this..???
Cntinue soon

Originally posted by: preethi28

I thank Luna for requesting ( or blackmailed or asked you sweetly or...I don't care really😆 ).

The holi sequence was one of the most frustrating tracks in the show. I had my 12th board exams(physics a nightmare actually😭) on monday and the entire week all I could think of was the promos and the promise they held.

Two things, no nimbu ka achar because I honestly do believe that's a load of BS, nothing can get you un-drunk in seconds

BS. Exactly! And Khushi forgets all that but Arnav remembers.Ya right sherlock! and even better he does nothing about it and just brushes it off! What crap!

Coming back to Heartbeats, I am really grateful that the Harvard Honours,resolute Arnav confronted Khushi and Khushi did NOT forget their conversation.

It was beautiful the way you listed all their encounters and I loved that they slept hand in hand that night. It is fitting after their monumental confession on holi.😊

Amazing job Ridz!

Looking forward to read the concluding part now!😃

Originally posted by: avcmyd

My heartbeat skipped a beat. Resuscitate fast with next part please.

Ridz that was so wonderful loop, till then IPk was digestible but nimbu ka achar came the IPk started flushing to drain. I have Heard nimbu ka achar is good for digestion. But only IPk made nimbu ka achar as indigestion ignition and made to rename a nimbu yuck achar. Lu Li Lo Lu thanks for asking Ridz to close this loop.

Originally posted by: MISTIE

amazing.

Loop 2

Okay that has to be the sweetest proposal ever! One thing that has always irked me about the show is that Arnav never tuck up for Khushi- so thank you for addressing that. And Khushi's optimism- never fails to amaze me! Absolutely loved how you wrote the much-needed conversation and finally the proposal at the pool side – ending things where they began!

Loop 3

Ridz the letters were beautiful… Her loneliness, fear, confusion and desperation were penned so beautifully. I love that you had her writing letters to his mother and I absolutely loved the progression and I absolutely loved how you ended it- by having Arnav write a letter to her. Reminded me of a book I read "Where the Rainbow Ends" by Cecila Ahern.

You did a better job of it than the CVs ever did. I loved that you had her go away and made him woo her back! You should quit programming and start writing shows :p

Loop 4

This loop had me both laughing and getting pissed off at Arnav. Seriously/ he expects her to know how he feels about her despite constantly stating and restating just how much he hates her? Loved the confession though.. I hate you coz I love you?! Bahahaha!

And trust me you managed to outdo the CVs perfectly. I hated the way they handled the whole thing!

Loop 5

Hai what I wouldn't give for the CVs to implement your plot instead of their insane- neembu chaato sab bhool jao plot.

His persistence, her reluctant admission! Man that was one awesome update!

As for the second part, I am so glad that he actually sat her down and told her the reason point blank- no beating around the bush and finally repenting for his mistakes. I loved that you had Khushi handle it with such grace, ignoring him instead of blowing up on him.

Oh and the bit with the divorce papers- I swear I could feel his pain! You write it so beautifully- his torment and her giving him a second chance- Sigh!