ARSHI FF- THE PURSUIT-Chpt-60/5,p.118,23rd Feb.

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shoobie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#121

Loved it!👏
Loved the interaction between Deepu and Arnav👏
Thanks for the update

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Sidda

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Posted: 12 years ago

#122

Anu, lovely updates. I'm enjoying how the story is shaping up. My favorite three characters are together and I am overjoyed. Love how Maan and Arnav gang up against Khushi and now she has taken a stance against them. So, it is La who has evidence against ASR which can ruin his professional and personal lives. Maan is one intelligent man, I hope he can save Arnav from this mess because Khushi will be the one to suffer the most.

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dsbj

@dsbj

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Posted: 12 years ago

#123

finally finished reading two amazing chapters .. Wow!
Wt can i say ..
So its deepu ! Thank God! I ws little surprised too when deepu said he ws leaving.anyways glad that he stayd back..
luved the conversations.. all of them mostly between arnav and deepu's ..
so its lavanya.. she is back to take revenge . lets see how far she goes..
luved Arnav and Khushi's nok jhok..
Deepu was right arnav's day will go today in convincing his wife ..
luved these lines
"Any.. er... lil Raizadas that you might have left behind?"
lol ..deepu hving so much fun .. At the same time his brain is working ..glad that he is there for them..
And this 1 also 'If she gets to listen to this... I shall be dead for the next ten births in convincing and getting convinced about this..' hahaha poor arnav ..
Cnt wait to c wt happn next ..
xoxo

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archmink

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Posted: 12 years ago

#124

Well if they have figure out as much than why ain't they contacting that Shinghvi guy n talk

Thy are both overlooking Lavnya

I think khushi is just over doing a lil being stubborn

N I loved the convo between Maan and Arnav ... All that about his x's ... N living a lil Raizada behind ... Lol it was hilarious

Very well ... Loved it ... But I just can't wait to see Arnav's hand on Lavnya's throat

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jisa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#125

loved the update...
w8ng for next..!!!

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tan2345

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Posted: 12 years ago

#126

i wonder wats lavanya upto nw

great update

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Dr. Anupama Ramakrishna

@anukat

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Posted: 12 years ago

#127

THE PURSUIT-43

(THE MIRAGE-II)

Hi Everyone!

This note is for all my Pursuit readers! Please bear with this update as many might feel its being dragged! But believe me certain things are very important to understand the reality!

The genre of my story is different with more accent on the fine points in life... emotions... sight, sound and settings too... so its imperative you get to have a taste of the underplay and interplay of emotions especially between the lead charecters and also between the ally and enemy camp! Come next update the story that I have pain-stakingly built for 43 chapters unfolds and I hope you will be patient with me!

This is a work that reflects my understanding of life! it may be flawed but neverthless its the window to what I have experienced or observed about human interactions...

The reviews are very few and as always I can only say one thing! Its really nice if I could get some feed back! Else I thank all of you for your support and a special thanks for my regular readers!

Feel free to express your views below as comments...

CHAPTER-43

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Shru9ti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#128

Loved it Anu

U left at cliff hanger Plzz update next part asap😳

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dsbj

@dsbj

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#129

another cliff hanger?
Lol !..arnav wants deepu to marry raj's daughter :p
nice timing khushi..
Nw wt will deepu gonna say..

and i wonder wht would have lavanya said khushi on phone ..luved the update .. waiting for next chapter eagerly
xoxo

Edited by dsbj - 12 years ago