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Priya

@Crazy_soul

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Posted: 12 years ago

#571

He's very dominating.i hope he'll understand this one day and do the needful before its too late.

nice update.

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vaju

@vaju

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Posted: 12 years ago

#572

waiting

update soon

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arshian_89

@arshian_89

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Posted: 12 years ago

#573

Read all the parts in one go...loved the story...pls update it soon 😊

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Srilatha

@Srilathalolla

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Posted: 12 years ago

#574

Awesome FF dear I am really in love with the ASR please PM me when you update it .

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Kinu22

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Aasmaali

@Aasmaali

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Posted: 12 years ago

#576

When will you update????
Waiting for it...

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verisimilitude

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Posted: 12 years ago

#577

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trivedishraddha

@ShraddRajyaguru

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#578

res.

edit. comment for 2 chapters togethr.

Grrr. wats this dumb FAKE ASR doing!? hate him. 😡
and KKG, you should be pinned and 🤬 for tryin to burn MY ASR. 😈 😛

ah! I knew it.. Asshok 😉 n Paayal ka SCENE. 😛
*Correction* Kya Filmy Scene hai?!?!?!!!!!

Can I be your Payal Payal? AssHok lost his MaRbleS! ROFL. 🤣

Gosh. the next convo was real fun where ASshok thought Papal to be Arnav's sister. 😉
OMG! BABY talk.. this Payal guy is ful my types! ROFL. ;p

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Hawww . how mean Khushi.. Can't she do anything ELSe but only cry to melt ASR. 😕

oh Damm.. Adi-Fake ASR is that baby. 😳

sweet kiss.. :)

and again asshok.. Gosh,such a loves boy!

wats avi-anju talking? 🤔

last part was emotional.. although ASR talkin bout baby made me blush! LOL.

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Comment on Above chapter coming soon. :p

wowwwowww.. lovely proposal by ashok. (no more asshok. LOL)

N ya i read the rest.. sorry k KKG could not talk bout his maa to ASR.. 🤢

And Ashok -Payal scenes were too sweet. 😃

End kiss... Shit! ☺️

Done.. 😛

Edited by kuts - 12 years ago

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Nisha

@Nichuss

Elite

+ 33

Posted: 12 years ago

#579

haayee haayee...ASHOK mera dhil jeet liyaa...

i mean payalko bhi...

wow wht a style of proposal it made payal to accept

it...

Ashok : I don't think you are beautiful, I am not saying I love you.. but Im scared that all this would happen soon..

Payal : Saathiya ?

Ashok : Yes.. Will you be my "saathiya"?

Payal's lips curved into a smile but she controlled herself not to give up..

Payal : How dare you ?

Ashok : Wait Let me finish it..

He took the flowers in his hands and kneeled down at her looking at her eyes intently with utmost passion.

Ashok : I don't wish to be a poet. I have heard poet lies. I don't wish to be an admirer as an admirer has to close his eyes atleast once in a while to imbibe the images.I have had many relationships before but I never had been feeling so close to any girl. You can question my sincerity and Im ready to submit my whole life to you. Nothing else in this world is important than your happiness. I always listen to my heart. And my heart says its you.. Darling. Will you marry me ?

this part impressed me a lot..

he s ...sooo cutie...😳

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coming to arnie past...

it made my eyes teary...

lot of kids r like this..who r craving for thr parents love

even thr parents alive... so wen nt there...its evident

how painful it will be...

even though akhi didnt unintentionally for that time...

but it was so hurting for a boy in that any age...

now i understood y arnie is so angry and rude

with every one...

due to his parents mistake he is suffering...

it was so sad to read that part...😔

what did tat happend in airport...

me fainted...

loved my ashok a lot

👍🏼

Edited by Nichuss - 12 years ago

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Mahima

@MahimaMV

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#580

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Awesome Chap❤️❤️

Ashok... He is an awesome,crazy,funny n wonderful person..

(the dialogue delivary is just out of the world..Hats off to you for writing it in such a flow n so beautifuly)

Happy that Payal gave a chance to this relationship

Arnav's childhood days were really worse... i mean at the age of 9 he had to face n suffer a lot.. Poor him, nw i can understand y he's so possessive when it comes to Khushi...

The Arshi moments were heart touching n were beautiful

Precap: It seems that its gng to create a problem bw Arshi😕

Edited by MahimaMV - 12 years ago