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Taarey Os: The punishment…

Taani: No Not again , Rey please don't interfere and by the way we are playing here from the past 1 week, how come this place wasn't interesting for you then???

Rey: Well you should thank us for letting you play here for an entire week, without interrupting your game.

Tanni: urrrggghhh Rey go back to the garden and play there don't spoil our game here….

Neha: Right telling Taani is

Vicky: Rey its ok chal we'll go somewhere else, bye Neha.* dreamy expression*

Rey : Ok fine , but Ms. Diaan you wont be spared next time…

Taani: Get lost Rey!!!!

(In the garden)

Rey: Kya yaar Vicky usko kyu choda tunne???
Aaj uss phulandevi ko toh dekh leta…

Vicky: Janne de yaar, waise bhi beautiful ladkiyon se jhagda nahi karte…

Rey(and other boys): Whattt????????

Rey: Vicky are you ok???

Vicky: Im serious dude, she is beautiful!!!!!

Rey: sun agar tu Taani ko lekar kuch soch raaha hai toh band kar ok!!!

All: (teasing manner) Kyu????

Rey: Kyunki nuksaan tujhe hi hoga!!!

Vicky: Arre I was talking about Neha .

Nil: Guys , ab ye sab chodo, chal lets play football….

All: yeah…

(Ok guys, one important thing, the garden in the society, has the swing, slide see-saw and a merry go round , all this is on one side then a small passage to enter and on the other side only grass, the boys are playing on the grass)

After sometime the girls finish with their game .

Rinni : Gals chalo hum park main jaakar swing khelte hai..

Taani : No yaar waha pe boys bhi hoge

Simmi : so what wo unka game khelenge, hum apna.

Neha: Haa Taaani plz chalo naa..

All girls: Plz chalo na plz….* making Puppy faces*

Taani: Ok fine chalo….

(Taani and Rinni were on the swing while simmi and Neha were on the see-saw and the others were on the merry go round.)

Rey saw Taani, for a moment , she was beautiful, the way she laughed and her faces when she she said something stupid, unknown to him a smile crept on his face.

The boys noticed this, they knew something was cooking between Taani and Rey but weren't sure of it, now they were sure.

Vicky:( Loud enough for Rey to hear) Guys Rey ko Taani se badla lena tha na , chalo..

And he kicked the football hard, it hit Taani on her head.

Rey: Vicky tu pagal hai kya, aise kisiko bhi nahi maarte..

Vicky: Arre who Lady Hitler ko maara re maine janede na waise bhi tujhe badla lena tha right???

Rey didn't hear the complete sentence and ran towards Taani.

Rey: Taani tum thik to ho na???

Taani : ha Rey I am fine…don't worry.

Rey : Are you sure???

(He rubbed Taani's head with his hands)

REy: Im really sorry Taani.

Taani : its ok Rey , mujhe jyada chot nahi lagi hai..

Rey : Vicky , dude tu pagal hai kya , jor se lagta toh???

Chal ise sorry bol…

Vicky: Sorry Taani…

Taani: Its ok , mai toh aapki friend hu Right, aur friends mai aise hote rehta hai, don't feel guilty.

Vicky: ok , but sorry.

Taani: Awww , mere Vicks ki goli, idhar aa (and she widens her arms inviting him for a hug.)

They hug

Neha: Arre Taani, even Rey ko hug do, he was soo tensed for you …

Taani: bilkul nahi..

Rey: kyun???

Taani : bcoz I hate you.

Rey: Oye , mai toh bas formality ke liye pucch raha tha ok, teri care ware nai karta mai…

Taani: Pucchne ko kissne kaha tha, waise bhi tumhari jarurat nahi thi , mere pas bahut log hai meri care karne ke liye..

Rey: Haan toh jao unke pass…

Taani: No need I am strong enough to look after myself…

Rey: Strong enough, hehehe, phek mat aa ab tu, bol du kya????

Taani:* getting a bit tensed* kyaa???

Vicky;Guys stop it yaar , tum logo ki arguments kabhi khatam nahi honewaali hai, so plz …

(Taani was about to say something when..)

Neha: Right Vicks ki goli….. sorry I mean Vicky is…

Rey: You are right argument karne se acha hai kuch khel lete hai…

Taani: of course, tum toh argument mai haar hi jaoge so im fine …

Rey:Oye…

All: Guys STOP !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Rey: Tell her…

Taani: Tell him….

Nil: agar tum log wapas argue karoge nah toh hum sab log tumhare saath bat nahi karenge…

All: Haan , nil is Right…

Taarey:* giving each other whatever looks and * Okay…

Amar: So chalo hum tab log tide and teet khelte hai…

All: What????

Bharat: Arre who bol raha hai ki ….

Rinni: chalo hum log hide and seek khelte hai…

All: ohhh, Rinni toh intelligent ban gayi…

Rinni:* blushing * ummm haan chalo khelte hai…

(They start the game , the denner was Simmi)

Simmi: so guys Im going to count upto 20 and all of you have to hide ok , here I go…

(Simmi leaves)

Rinni: oopsie, mai kaha chupu????

Amar: come wid me…

Rinni: umm ok…

(They hide behind a car)

Vicky: yaar mujhe samaj nahi aa raha hai ki mai fence pe cadhu ya tree par..

Neha: Oye monkey ke bhai, kahi pe bhi chad ja…aaja tujhe ek place dikhati hun.. chal..

(They hide on a tree)

Aashi: Ab mai kaha types chupu???

Bharat: apun ko bhi samaj nahi aa raha hai…

Taani overhears them..

Taani: guys tum log meri jagah par chup jao , mai kahi aur jati hun ok..

AAshi and Bharat: Thanks..

Taani: you're welcome..

Nil: hey Taani, kaha chup rahi ho???

Taani: haan , actually mujhe bhi nahi pata, wbu…

Nil: arre mera pillar , mai teko who jagah nahi bataunga lekin , nahin toh tu muje pakad sakti hai jab tera den aayega tab , so sorry..

Taani: Arre chill Mr. Rapper..mai teri secret place mai nahi aaungi , I'll find some other place ok…

Nil: Ok bye…

Simmi:(From far ) 2….

Taani: (walking in the garden)kaha jao???

Simmi: 1.. Guys I am coming…..

Someone pulls Taani into the bushes but before she could scream her mouth was covered by a rough hand

Taani: * trying to speak*ummm mmm….mmm…..

Rey: Taani, chill its me, ma abhi apna haath hataunga , but plz U don't scream ok…

(Rey removes his hand and uses both his hands to cover his ears and closes his eyes)

Taani:* whispering * kya hua???

Rey: * opens his eyes* huhh…

Taani: * gently removing his hands from his ears ** whispers into is ears* thank you.

Rey: * shocked * what???

Taani: Shhh…. Can u plz talk softly, otherwise we will be caught..

Rey: * whispering * oh sorry …

Taani: waise why did u cover your ears and close your eyes????

Rey: arre I thought you will scream and give me a huge lecture o how to behave and then we would argue and our friends wouldn't talk to us…

Taani: * laughing* awww hahaha You are soo cute Rey..

Rey: But I am serious…

Taani: * still laughing* but they weren't…

Rey: but still ….

Taani: awww Rey , you are too cute…No wonder I like you…

Rey looked at her with eyes wide open….

Taani shut her eyes and turned too the other side…

Taani: * in her mind * shit what did I say , taani, beta now you are so dead….

Rey: Really???? I wont let that happen…

Taani: * turns while opening her eyes * what??

Rey: let you be dead , coz I like you too….

Taani: really???

Rey: Yup .

Taani: but I don't believe that…

Rey: okay , look at this….

He pulls the sleeve of his shirt and shows the word ' TAANI ' written on it…

Taani: awww, you tattoed my name..

Wait a minute, its not tattoo, its mehendi….

Hahahaha…

Rey: dude tattoo pains and mehendi doesn't, ok, and umm… moreover umm… yeah..I don't want your name to be painful but pleasant to me….*smiling nervously*

Taani: hahaha what an excuse…

Rey: no it aint an excuse… Im serious!!!!

Taani: hahaha *controlling her laughter* Rey you are really sweet…..but I am not yet convinced* she had a naughty twinkle in her eyes, she loved to irritate him like this*

Rey: okay, yeah look at this and he removes his phone…

Taani: Rey , what are you doing…

Rey: * showing her the screen of his phone, it had a photo of Taani and Princess as the caption* now????* looking at her*

Taani was overwhelmed for a minute , but then her expression changed into a furious one

Taani: Rey, how dare you take my picture without my knowledge???

Do you know how irritating is it?? This is exteremely unacceptable..

I mean how could you do this?? And….

Rey: * stopping her* Taani calm down , see I'm sorry * holding his ears*

Taani: wont work…

Rey: what??
taani: tch.. holding ears wont work …..

Rey: Then what wil???

Taani: Let me think * thinks for a while and an evil smile comes on her face*

Rey: * shudders *Taani, my sweet princess, please tell me what are you thinking

* closes eyes and whispers * plz God let it be something not evil…

Vicky: * to Rey* but by the looks of it , surely something evil cooking in her mind..

Rey opens his eyes Taani too turns in the direction of the source of the voice.

Taarey: Vicks ki goli!!!

Vicky: wait, not just me..

The gang: Hi!!!* all grinning*

Taarey *nervous* Hi!!

Taani: so you guys heared us??

Vicky: Yup, from the photo part..

Rey: *in his mind* thank god, mera Tattoo bach gaya…

Nilesh: * to Taani* by the way , Taani, Rey ki punishment????* evil grin*

Taani: yeah, Rey, you have to learn to climb my balcony * wide smile*

Nilesh: wow yaar, you might be the firdt girlfriend in the world to invite her boyfriend in her balcony..

Taani: wait , there is something more…

Vicky: Yeah terms and conditions..hehe

All laugh..

Rey: Taani, baby you continue..

Taani: ok, Rey you have to come between 10pm to 12pm..

All boys: kyu???

Rey:*glaring at the boys * guys my gf ,so , may I ??

* turning towards Taani* Hann KYU???

Taani: Because my parents watch TV till 10pm and then they sleep, even I sleep by 10:30 but I can stay awake..

Rey: Ok..

All girls: Taani, that's it???

Taani: No, wait Rey, you even have to get some icecream while coming ..

Rey: ok…

All boys : aur kuch hokum hai kya , Rey ki maharani…

Taani: Haan..

Bharat: iski list kabhi khatamich nahi hoti…

Taani: oye bharat chup kar…

Rey it is obvious that..

All girls: No one should notice you…

Rey: ok…

* At 11:15, Taani's balcony *

Rey: *while finishing his icecream* So , Taani, now convinced???

Taani:*kissed him on the cheek* more than convinced…..

THE END

THANK YOU..

So….* nervous*

Taarey and all characters are 15 year olds ok * teenagers*

Umm plz tell me how was it, I will be pleased to know my flaws and since this was the first time I wrote something , I think I have given it my best for a first –timer, would love to know your views .

Plz don't hesitate to criticize , I want to know my mistakes and rectify them so that the next time I write I will be able to give something better…

Do tell me…

Thank you…J

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Holla Guys, Please comment and tell me how the os is..😊
Thank you so much for reading it...😛
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re/unres

Yayyy, first to comment.

Awww, it was really adorable and cute!!
Edited by miss_neha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res!!! ❤️
vil unres in evening!!
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Originally posted by: miss_neha

re/unres

Yayyy, first to comment.

Awww, it was really adorable and cute!!


Thank you sooo much !!!!!
Love ya 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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coco dear
dis os is damn sweet n cute
really loved it
that mehendi part was super cute
awesum os...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Aww awwe awe it was so cute lovely funny and sweet and all and all..

I enjoyed it a lot, u know i am in bus now n u know i was giggling n smiling all the while reading .the aunty sitting beside me is giving glares 😆,she might have thought i am mad, continously looking at my phone and smiling😆..

I cant tell u how much
i enjoyed..

that phulandevi dialg n all i cracked and when he said to vicky na dnt think anythng about taani, i was lyk awe.. But then he said tera hi nuksan hoga😆 I broke out laughing, gosh! That hide and seek , all and all and all ..
I loved it all..

Its the 1st time u r writing, i say write more yar.. You are superb!!

Love..
Indu
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Posted: 12 years ago
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At frst i ws wondrng wt ws hpng! D chupa-chupi kel turnd ot a bg surprise! Rey tatoong Tani's nm wit mehndi & rdng hs rsn y mehndi,i ws awestruck.Wa,wt an hilarious cndtns by Tani to Rey,waise i enjyd rdng it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: lovelytaarey

coco dear

dis os is damn sweet n cute
really loved it
that mehendi part was super cute
awesum os...


Thank you sooo much !!!!😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: disismeenu4u


Aww awwe awe it was so cute lovely funny and sweet and all and all..

I enjoyed it a lot, u know i am in bus now n u know i was giggling n smiling all the while reading .the aunty sitting beside me is giving glares 😆,she might have thought i am mad, continously looking at my phone and smiling😆..

I cant tell u how much
i enjoyed..

that phulandevi dialg n all i cracked and when he said to vicky na dnt think anythng about taani, i was lyk awe.. But then he said tera hi nuksan hoga😆 I broke out laughing, gosh! That hide and seek , all and all and all ..
I loved it all..

Its the 1st time u r writing, i say write more yar.. You are superb!!

Love..
Indu


Aww poor you ,😆
First bigee comment , I am sooo happy 😃
Thank you di for such a wonderful comment...😛
Love ya,
a big tight, hug from me..🤗
Thank you soo much...😛

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