virman NEW ff LINMFA * teaser pg 142 * 15 jan 2014 - Page 83

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Thaaank u for the pm!:)
Jarur Kabir k*mina hoga..🤣
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Thanx 4 pm n awesome update naina update soon next one:)
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mujhe bhi pm nahi kiya kyun😭
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i never noticed i got 92 likes on the previous update... thank u soo much guys 😃 😃 it really means a lot...!!!!
CHAPTER 17
few days passed by, virat made sure that nobody came to know about his break up with maya n his love for manvi n then the heartbreak that followed. now the vadera's also knew that manvi was getting engaged to the love of her life n they had invited the chaudhary family along with kabir to virat's n maya's so called engagement. today the chaudharys were coming to delhi n again seeing manvi n kabir together was hurting virat n making him hell uncomfortable n he still couldnt ignore the fact that his heart was aching from the thought of seeing manvi n kabir together n the jealously that was taking over him. viren knew what his kido was going through n in turn jeevika could feel the pain n agony of both virat n viren. but she was helpless, wish she could do something... wish she could make manvi leave kabir n fall for virat... but love cannot be forced... we cannot force one person to love someone...
virat was pacing left n right in hs room when his mobile beeped. he took the mobile n saw that it was a message from manvi. it read " reaching soon... say in 10 minutes... cannot wait to see you partner ".
virat : me too partner... i also want to see you... but today it would be different.. you would have kabir beside you... you wouldnt be my partner , you would be kabir's mani instead... oh god how much i hate to admit that i cant see manvi love anyother guy... it hurts like hell... gimme strength to hold back my tears n to see the love of my life with somebody else other than me... why god...?? why have u played this game with me...?? why cant i be happy in life...?? why cant i get what i want the most...?? why...??
virat's chain of thoughts was broken by the ring of the doorbell. he composed himself n made way to the hall...
manvi : diii...
jeevika : mannu...
jeeman hugged each other n then manvi met all the others. virat was standing in a corner looking at his angel when he felt someone's hand on his shoulder...
kabir : hello my friend...
virat : oh... hi kabir... welcome..
kabir : thank u... how are you...??
virat : i m fine... how are you...??
kabir : i am just too happy with my life... you know na when manvi is there with me, i -
virat : i know
swamini : so virat wouldnt u introduce us to your friend...??
virat ; sure buaji...
virat introduced kabir to all the family members n he almost had enough. virat turned to leave for his room when manvi said " partner... mujhse nahi miloge...??? "
virat turned around n smiled in order to control his emotions.
virat : hey partner... kaisi ho...??
manvi : meri chodo.. tum theek ho...??
virat : hmm... mujhe kya hoga...??
manvi : aur maya...??
virat : she is also good... excuse me
manvi : ise kya hua...??
viren : nothing manvi... may be he is tired...
manvi : but jiju...
kabir : cmon mani...
vanshika : waise aap sab bhi ab fresh ho jaie... fir lunch pe milte hai...
beeji : ji vanshika ji...
jeevika : chal mannu main tujhe tere room tak chod doon...
manvi : di m not new to this place... main chali jaungi...
jeevika : koi nai... chal na mannu... (taking manvi along with her)
manvi : kabir tum fresh ho jao... okkk
kabir : yeah...
viren : so hello...
kabir : hi viren bhaiya...
viren : i heard u left suddenly n came back suddenly... i mean do u really love manvi so much...
kabir : actually i didnt mean to do this intentionally bhaiya... i was forced... i had to prove beeji my worth... they wasnt sure about me so...
viren : ohh... okk see u at lunch... feel at home kabir...
kabir ; yeah sure...

in manvi's room
jeevika : mannu kya hai ye sab...??
manvi : what...??
jeevika : you know what i mean...
manvi : di cmon... tell me what do u mean...??
jeevika : whats up with you n kabir again being together... ?? u know he left you...
manvi : he didnt left me intentionally di... i think now i should tell you everything that happened that day in beeji's room...
jeevika : what happened...??? tell me mannu...
manvi : beeji called me n kabir n asked us what is going on between us n said taht whatever happens in the room should remain between us only... we told her that she is right n we love each other. then beeji asked what can kabir do for me... he said he can do anything for me... beeji asked him what is he without his dad's surname... beeji asked him how will he survive without his dad's money n name... kabir said he will prove himself n beeji told him to stand on his feet n earn an huge amount of money to prove that he is able of taking care of me n giving me anything i desire... kabir agreed n he left... left because he wanted me for the rest of his life... he left me for our sake... for our love... my kabir left me just to become something in life... so that he can return to me... so taht he can marry me... di kabir waise nahi jaisa aap... mera kabir mujhse bahut pyaar karta hai... bahut pyaar di... jitna jiju aapse, utna hi pyaar mera kabir mujhse karta hai... please accept him di... please accept me n kabir... i want to get engaged to him with your concent... i want your blessings with me... i want you to give my hand to kabir n that too whole heartedly... will u accept him di...?? are u happy...??
jeevika hugged manvi because now she knew the depth of love manvi n kabir had for each other n she was happy because her mannu was happy...
jeevika : i am happy mannu... till the time u are happy, i am also happy... i am sorry i didnt know the truth still i kept on cirsing kabir... he loves u n u love him... thats the most important thing for me...
manvi : thank u di... love u...
jeevika : love you too...
scene shifts
viren : i told you it wont be easy...
virat : i also knew it but its raelly hurting...
viren : virat... take a chance bhai... tell manvi about your feelings...
virat : i cant bhai... i cant...
viren : take a risk virat...she might reciprocate those feelings...
virat : she wont... she wont be able to... u saw it... didnt you...?? manvi n kabir are so involved in each other... their eyes never leave each other for a minute... they are in love bhai... n i am nothing but an unwanted angle in their love story...
viren : but it seems as if kabir in between u two... u two were so perfect together... just like a match made in heaven...
virat : please bhai... let it be... n please dont make it difficult for me...
viren : i am trying to makke it easy brother... i want you to be with the girl you love... i dont want you to be with maya... i know you almost hate her...
virat : do i have a choice bhai...??? no i dont... i have to be with maya so that i dont express my feelings towards manvi by any chance... i want a distraction so that-
viren : so that manvi gets married to kabir n have kids...
virat : bhai... leave me alone... please just gimme some time... please...
viren left virat's room with tears in his eyes n prayer in his heart... he was praying to god to give virat his love...
later that evening...
swamini : beeji hum soch rahe the why not manvi n kabir get engaged on the same day as viray n maya... infact i have called pandit ji n he might be here any moment...
beeji : swamini ji... ye.. humara matlab hai...
dadaji : humein khushi hogi behen ji agar aap humari baat maanle toh...
beeji : jaise aap theek samjhe bhai sahab...
swamini : toh fir its decided manvi n kabir and virat n maya will get engaged this weekend...
manvi : really...??
jeevika : mannu...
manvi : di ek minute... matlab main aur virat same day... omg isnt it great partner...
virat : hmm...
kabir : wow that means only 4 days left...
manvi : i am so excited... partner wat say...??
virat : it would be great partner... i should go n tell maya... right...
manvi : hmm... maya mil gayi toh manvi ki toh koi value hi nahi hai... jao jao...
virat left the hll while manvi expected him to argue with her or even reply but nothing happened of that sort... now manvi was sure that something is wrong with her best buddy, her partner, her virat...
manvi was thinking about virat when she felt a pair of arms wrapped around her waist n she smiled the next moment...
manvi : kabir what are u doing here...???
kabir : i was missing u mani n what would i do whole day sitting in my room...
manvi : why dont you go n spend some time with virat...?? he seems upset over something...
kabir : arrey mani may be he had an argument iwth his girlfriend or something... u know may be woh is liye thoda upset ho...
manvi : may be... waise when are uncle n aunty coming...??
kabir : day after tomorrow... they are really happy mani... i could feel that happiness in mum n dad's voice...
manvi : i am happy on listening this kabir... main toh bhool hi gayi... pandit ji aane wale honge... lets go na...
kabir : yeah... come lets go...
pandit ji came n it was decided that on 26th of next month manvi n kabir will get married n on 28th virat n maya will tie the knot.
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Edited by naina927 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
resu 🤣

unresu 🤣

haww haww haww kabir ki manvi ke sath and virat ki maya ke sath engagement😳 why didn't you tell me before mujhe dance karna tha 🤣
chalo chaddo koi gal nahi jab unki engagement tutegi tab karlungi dance 🤣
acha now coming to the update it was very very superb. and very beautiful written. i enjoyed the every bit of it😊
haww virat ka dukh dekha nahi jata ab toh😳 he is doing all this so that manvi and kabir live happily with each other and for that he is ready to marry with maya. aww that's called true love..and he is ignoring manvi so that he could stop his tears. and manvi also find something strange in his behaviour. i hope she realize soon that her happiness lies in virat not kabir shabir😳😳
thank so muc for the update
and for pm not thanks b'coz pm toh tune mujhe ya kissi ko bhi nahi kiya😳
cont sooon
Edited by virmanfan013 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
shivali my baby... 🤗
i thought baby maiya se gussa hai...
love u ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
will surely try to dear 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: naina927


<font color="#330099" size="3">shivali my baby... 🤗</font>
<font color="#330099" size="3">i thought baby maiya se gussa hai...</font>
<font color="#330099" size="3">love u ❤️</font>

gusha haww 😲 kishne bola batao meko uski tange tod dungi 🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: virmanfan013

gusha haww 😲 kishne bola batao meko uski tange tod dungi 🤣

I thought so... 😳 bcos u werent toking to me na... thats why...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: naina927


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<font size="3">I thought so... 😳bcos u werent toking to me na... thats why... </font>

no i wasn't angry with u bt u were also nt talking to me 🤢

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