Arjuhi OS#15: Jiss Pe Hum Mar Mitay(Completed)

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Arjuhi_kk

@Arjuhi_kk

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

Finally MR majnu realized his love for his bestfrnd cum girlfrnd...thnx to the kissing scene which brought the possessive arjun into d picture;) Danish is cool8-) also thx to arjun's mom fr putting some sense into her idiot son...Loved the happy ending! Plz do write more:)

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Archana

@mysticlover

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

It was perfect...
That's all I could say n that I was waiting for you to complete it...

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Pranjal K.

@-pranjal-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#63

Beautiful 👏 👏 👏

Really Beautiful is only word comes to mind after reading such amazing Story. LOve how it evolve emotions & feelings 👏 feeling of longing, Pain of loosing special someone & Insecurity of loosing arohi made Arjun helpless 😊 he couldnt think anything beyond her & barged in her shooting 😃 Wow he kissed her & the best part was comment by danish regarding Fake Kiss & real one. Loved Arjun's expressions 😃 beautifully written Aani really. 😃 loved how innocently he described everything & his convo with his Mom. he was apologetically about his behavior & Arohi forgive him 😃 i loved how cutely he asked for forgiveness & wow Arjun sudhar gaya 😃 loved the whole thing & the way you anded it is So Perfect i just loved it. Kudos !!! 👏 👏 👏 Arjun proposed her & happy happy life now 😊

it was a real treat from you but this time Aani took too long to finish it,

Now waiting for your next OS ... remember you have decided to write on Zodha akbar song ...will be waiting for it.

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Pranjal.