'an innocent girl and a gangster '-a TR STORY

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey di s this is my first try to write something. hope u people like it. i m aparajita , aap log shayad jaante hai😛

at present (after 10 years)

he is the worst person of the world . The police of the world has his name on their lips. yes guess who . THE GANGSTER there is no illegal game that he has not played. A MURDERER, DRUG DEALER, RAPIST .
in our way he is a bad person the other name of fear "THE DON OF THE UNDERWORLD". he is a literate gangster. he has no one whom he can call his own.

yes di s he is rey (di s cool down he is not a rapist the people under him his right hand left hand are the rapists)


she is an innocent girl. leads her life in a simple way intelligent. knows to handle men. a changed person. has a bro and sister-in-law . lives for them .has seen many up s and downs in life. a body without soul. she does'nt have the person in her life whom she loved the most.

swayam is the bro of tani . a business tycoon. he loves the both ladies in his life. can do anything for both of them. does'nt know tani's past.

sharon is the bhabhi of tani . loves her husband very much. very close to her nanad.knows her past. and had hid it from swayam.


tarey has a past together(will be revealed later)
under which circumstances rey undertook this type of life?
how tarey will meet after ten years?

will tani accept rey?
will rey change?
will rey accept tani's decision whether positive or negative.


will the secret of shaani lead to a misunderstanding b|w swaron?

will it be a fierce misunderstanding or trust in their relation will undertake their mu?


hey di s i dont know whether you like it or not. i m a bit nervous but i will overcome it if u people like this . so i have posted the first chap . plz mention ur point of views. and a big thanks to debu di . u know her . i took her help.
so thank you.😃

plz hit like i want a response plz




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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing concept
Do continue n update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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once who was the heart throb of the girls now he is the cause of fear in their hearts.
once with whom the girls wanted to got to a date now they dont even want to see a glimpse of him.
once who was a very lovely and friendly person ,by his nature a sad person enjoyed a moment of happiness now he is the worst person of the world by his name now a happy person becomes sad.
once who thought 100 times before hurting a person or never thought of hurting a person, now he is the person who is the cause of fear, who hurts people both physically and emotionally not thinking for once.
once who only thought of love, care, happiness, friendship now he thinks what? maybe loneliness

other side
aahhh!!!!, cried a hollow voice . at this moment he was stabbed because he was trying to free himself from a fierce grip.

isko leke jaao!!! , rey said in a stern voice.

other side
he took a few steps from the back and was going to put the trigger in position BUT dhishkaaao!!! in a few seconds he was on the floor.

rey gave a smirk.


other side
bhaaai mujhe chhod do, chhood dijiye, said a regular smuggler

tumlogo ko maine kitne baar bola hai ki aurto ko haath mat lagana par tum log , abruptly came a noise of a fierce bullet soon the blood coloured the floor red


on the other hand
a girl walking on the footpath lost in her world trips over a short pair of legs and this made her come out of her own world .
straightened herself

bends down and saw a sweet pair of eyes which were checking her out,
asks her

soni why you here i was coming na , said that lady

soni- tani di main to bas aisehi nikli thi , said in a soft and sad voice

(tani was on the way to an orphanage where she was the monthly donour of the orphanage)

tani- kya hua pari kuch kaho na? , said with a cute pout

soni- mujhe na ma aur papa ki bahut yaad aa rahi hai, said with a husky voice full of tears

tani's eyes were brimmed with tears she abruptly hugs her and says with a smile

"pari dont be sad, main hoon na . aap janti hai maine apni parents ko aap ki hi tarha bohot tender age mein kho diya tha , but i m stron na , mere paas aap sab ho, mere bhai aur bhabhi hai aapke paas saare dost hai, main hoon.so be strong kya bola maine", said with a fully emotional; voice breaking the hug

soni- "to be strong. ok di i 'll be strong aap haina mere saath", said with a big smile.😃

tani- good thats like my pari!
ab chale

they marched towards the orphanage


ok di s i have completed it. plz bolna aap logo ko kya laga? hmm ok bye😛😛

oh soniya ko introduce hi nahi kiya
soniya- pyaar se soni bulayi jaati hai. tani usse pari bulati hai.very sweet girl. age 6 years.

precap - dont know😛

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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice concept ... update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ok love the concept will read and comment on the chapter later
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res

UNRES..
hmmm so this is something i am luking forward 2 read..
being honest i dnt mind even if u make a rey a rapist..
after all it is fiction..
dear please..
when u write dialogues pls use this "--" in the start and end..

wondering what must have happened..😲
Edited by mehek_luvD3nTBP - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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;love the concept and update you are amazing writer i must say plz update soon thanks for the pm and do it again😃😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome concept
and chapter 1 was nice
update soon and pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res

UNRES..
hmmm so this is something i am luking forward 2 read..
being honest i dnt mind even if u make a rey a rapist..
after all it is fiction..
dear please..
when u write dialogues pls use this "--" in the start and end..

wondering what must have happened..😲

ok di thanks for ur suggestion
and for that i m sorry
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res!!!/unres

omg!!!!amaziing concept Appy!! 👏 👏 👏
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muaahh!! ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ fr d concept!!
it sounds vry dangerous...bcuz reyz a gangster na?? 😕 😕
nd first chap was awesome dear!!
lookin frwrd wid excitement to read othr chaps..

plzz continue n update soon!!❤️
Edited by PrOjeCtA - 12 years ago

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