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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing teaser di 😃
to ab priya bhi yahi chahti hai ki geet hi uski DIL bane 😃 par humari geet woh to manegi nahi
ab dekhte hai ki aap kaise geet ko mnate ho di
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: tabby999



lovely rashmi
zaara yeh baat de maneet kab se start hoga ,,,😊


tabby
kya chakkar hai.kabhi padhti hai kabhi nahin.Are you reading it regularly or just randomly come on my ff?
Aur rahi maneet ki baat to yaar maine to unko kabhi door kiya hi nahin they are always together.haan ye baay zarror hai ki they are not romancing here😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: peric

lovely teaser ...waiting for the update

i really hope sam gets a hifi offer of modelling or film before the marriage n she leaves maan n her house for her dream to come true ... leaving that geet has no choice than get married to maan


It may be happened
I don't have any idea
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ritvi_mg

amazing teaser di 😃

to ab priya bhi yahi chahti hai ki geet hi uski DIL bane 😃 par humari geet woh to manegi nahi
ab dekhte hai ki aap kaise geet ko mnate ho di
update soon


Thanks Ritvi for the comment
one and only problem is geet and her identity let's see how it is solved
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Posted: 12 years ago
'Dulhan wahi Jo Piya Mann Bhaaye'
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part-50

next morning Geet came in to the kitchen and wished priya good morning. geet was fine now as she didn't want to remember that incident which shook her to the core.

Priya-Good morning geet.she saw geet and called near her.she held her cheek lovingly and kissed her forehead-thanks Geet kal tumne maan ka khayal rakha uske liye.

Geet-Aunty.What happened.Why are you thanking me? he is my friend
and dost ke liye kuchh karne par thanks kahne ki zaroorat nahin hoti

Priya-haan main to bhool hi gayi ki tum dost ho.ab chalo aur meri help karo.

Geet nodded and helped her to set the table.

maan came-good morning maa, good morning papa.

Ram-Shravan kaisa hai?

Maan- he is fine now and will be discharged tomorrow.

Sameera came and wished all-good morning and she saw Maan

Sam-Maan kal yum kahaan chale gaye the.I was waiting for you.I fasted for you and you didn't even care for me.

Maan-Sorry for not being there Sameera but it was an emergency and
you were giving more importance to your call rather than completing
puja.And by the way you too were not there when i returned all hungry.

Sam-Haan wo I..I..slept while waiting for you and dadi asked me to have food and I couldn't refuge her.agar unka kahna nahin maanti to wo bura maan jaati

Geet closed her eyes on being caught by maan.he raised his eyebrow if asking- you lied me about Sam at night.

Geet-sorry.mujhe laga ki tumhen bura lagega.

Priya's whole concerntration was on Maan and Geet now.She was sad to for her helplessness.She always thought of Geet like her own daughter.

Geet-uncle when will we return to Delhi.

Ram-Tomorrow morning.Today Rahmaan has invited all of us for dinner . so we will go there today.

Savitriji came and all started their break fast.Ran told her too about the dinner and she said -okey

Geet-Uncle agar main nahin jaaoo to chalega.actually she remembered
again what happened there with her at party, though it was not related to Rahmaan and Salma yet she wanted to avoid to go there.

Ram-they have invited specially you geet not us. Hum to milte hi rahte hain.they will feel bad if you will not be going there

Geet-theek hai uncle.I will come.

...

priya came to Maan's room-Maan busy to nahin ho?

Maan-nahin maa .come in

Priya set on the bed.she wanted to talk but could not understand how to start.

Maan-kya baat hai maa. kya soch rahi ho?

Priya-Maan do you really love Sameera?

Maan-why are you asking it.When I m ready to marry her,what is the
use of this question?

Priya-I didn't asked weither you want to marry her or not,I asked if you loved Sameera or not.

Maan-Why all of sudden you are asking me

Priya-Because Yesterday night I felt neither you nor Sameera care for each other.You went without breaking her fast and She had food with out waiting for you.I know she was hungry and couldn't wait for long but jahaan dil me ek doosre ke liye pyar hota hai wahaan care or concern bhi hota hai.aur ye choti choti baaten matter karti hain Maan.Agar tum Sameera se pyar nahin karte to main pammi se baat kar sakti hoon.abhi tum dono ke beech koi official rishta nahin hai.

Maan-You are too late for all these talks.mujhe sirf Sameera se hi shadi karni hai.kisi aur se nahin.

Priya-mujhe lagta hai ki Geet tumhare liye best rahegi.I have seen
that you both care for each other so well

Though Priya was scared while talking all this as Ram asked her not to talk maan on this matter but after knowing about maan and Geet, her heart was not at peace. being mother she had that right on her son to talk to him.Still she wanted to talk to her son in other way.

Maan saw her shocked-maa ye aap kya kah rahi hain.aapko kya lagta hai ki aap kuchh bhi kahengi aur wo ho jaayega.Aisa kabhi nahin ho sakta . Geet is my friend and will always remain friend. Hamaare beech kisi aur rishte ke liye jagah nahin hai.

Priya-But maan dosti rishte me badal jaaye to kya buraayi hai?

Maan-Maa please don't say further.aur haan kabhi ye baat dobara mat
sochna.insaan ka har sapna pura nahin hota,aur aapka ye sapna unhin
sapno me se ek hai.one thing I want to repeat for the first and last time that I will marry only and only Sameera no one else.so pls don't talk again about this topic.(st) aap ek choti si jo umeed bachi thi usko bhi tod chuki hain.Geet ab to kabhi nahin maanegi.ab in baaton ka koi matlab nahin rah jaata

and maan went leaving her there.Priya was having tears in her eyes, seeing her son.She was some where feeling guilty for all this.

...

At night they were on dinner invitation from Rahmaan.Geet was
little bit hagetating while entering that house as flashes of that party
night started to appear in front of her eyes.but Maan assured her with his eyes and she nodded.

they were chatting and Ram asked-Are you planning to change the
interior of your house.You were saying that day.Maan startled with
that and said after composing himself-Nahin papa Geet asked him not
to do any change as it will ruin the antique touch of the house.and saw Geet and then Rahmaan.

Rahmaan too supported him

Salma-Aap ghar ko ronovate karaane ki baat kar rahe the par mujhe
to aapne kuchh nahin bataaya.

Ram saw Rahmaan-Bhabhi se poochhe bina hi Geet se baat kar li? tu
unke baare me kabhi nahin sochta, hamesha apni manmaani karta hai

rahmaan-Arrey yaar aisa kuchh bhi nahin.tu to Salma ko bhadkane laga. Marwaayega kya?

Geet-Rahmaan uncle sirf hum dono ki rai lena chahte the aunty se baat karne se pahle. But we refused, so he closed this topic.That's all.And I think you are planning to make them fight on this to get some entertainment.

Ram-kya Geet tumne to maza hi kharaab kar diya abhi tumhen dikhata
ki kaise Ye apnj biwi se darta hai.

Priya-Ram bas kijiye. and all laughed at this.

All had dinner and were ready to leave.Salma gave some gifts to geet.

Geet-Ye sab kisliye aunty.iski kya zaroorat hai.

Salma-Geet ye tumhaare liye thode hi hai ye to maan ki hone wali dulhan ke liye hai.Tum pahli baar humaare ghar aayi ho to khali haath to nahin jaane doongi.Uss din Party me to main bahut busy thi isliye nahin de paayi.Tabhi to aaj tumhen yahaan bulaya tha.

Geet smiled at her fate.but she took all the gifts and bent down to take her blessings but Salma stopped her-aaj main tumhen akele nahin,Maan ke saath hi apni duayen doongi.maan yahaan aao beta.maan came ahead and Salma said-khuda ne tum dono ki jodi uper se hi bana kar bheji hai.saath me bahut hi pyare lagte ho .khuda tum dono ko buri nazar se bachhye rakhe and she kissed their foreheads.maan and geet looked at each other and geet tried a fake smile.they bent down to take her blessings and she blessed them. then they took Rahmaan's blessings

Rahmaan -Ram ab jaldi se inki shaadi kar de.maan ko dulha bane dekhne ki badi tamanna hai.

Geet was was standing there quitely.Sam was feeling envy today for geet as it was all for her what ever geet was getting .But somewhere she thanked god to spare her from doing all these buttery things which geet was doing.

priya today was feeling helpless to do any thing but she could see
today the pain in geet and maan's eyes.

they all bid bye to Rahmaan and family. at home Ram said all to pack their stuff as they would be leaving early in the morning.Ram and Priya after packing Savitriji's clothes came to their room to pack their luggage.

maan came there as he was searching for his favorite shirt.it was missing.
Priya gave it to him as she forgot to keep it in his room after ironning it.

They heard a knock and saw geet at the door.

Priya -Geet come in.do you need anything?Then she saw the gifts in her hand which salma gave her.why have you brought them here?

Geet-I am here to return them to you.

Priya-But ye to Salma ne tumhen diye the na?

Maan and Ram were watching them.

Ram-Geet priya is right These all are for you.so keep them

geet-nahin uncle these are not for me but for the girl who is going to be bride of maan.and I m not that girl.Pleas give these to Sameera.saying this she kept all the gifts on bed and turned to leave.Priya's eyed were wet to see Geet.she wanted to say that it was their wish to see her as their D-I-L.but couldn't say a word.

After Geet left Maan too took his shirt and went from there.


early morning all got ready to leave as that road was known for traffic jams with the increase in the sunlight.reaching Delhi they dropped geet and sameera at their home and drove off.

Precap-some small leaps.

For pm add me at - pmatrash

half centuary done.and I know that is is little bit short.you can take this update as a filler update next one will be with some small leaps of time and then countdown will start

pls leave your comments-rashmi

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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing update
loved the maan-priya convo but it result nothing ..I felt bad for maaneet both .
Gift scene was so touchy n sam ohh less i speak about is better .
please bring maaneet together offically now i cannt bear their pain

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Posted: 12 years ago
nice part
but what is the leap very excited for the next update
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Posted: 12 years ago


very emotional update...

as a mother Priya can't see Maan sacrificing his love...

but nothing is in her hands...

sirf Geet ke haath mein hai and she is not ready...

and the incident happened in party has put oil in fire...

now Geet will never try to think to be Maan's bride because of status diffenence...

eagerly waiting for next part...

har update ke saath my fear is increasing...

thanx for pm...


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Posted: 12 years ago
Just loved it both r in pain waiting 4 next
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Posted: 12 years ago
Love it Priya talk with maan but no use he is still feel same and he is right he dont want to loose geet as a friend ...Rehmaan jee talk so much poor geet have to bear this all...gift return scene too much touchy love it ...glad some leap coming

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