WAR of HEARTS - Page 16

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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome story yar
luv it 👍🏼
Do cont soon plxxx


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: alishba33

awesome story yar
luv it 👍🏼
Do cont soon plxxx



thank you soo much
sure i will
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Posted: 12 years ago
read all chappy in one go...awesome chapters...pls add me in ur pm list...
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Originally posted by: prernakhandelwa

read all chappy in one go...awesome chapters...pls add me in ur pm list...


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Edited by annabh - 12 years ago
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chapter 12

The pink dusk was replaced by a dark moonless night , as the clouds howled and thunders screamed in anger, huge trunks of tree shook with fear and the lighting made even old trees scared , they roads were already flooded by the crying sky and the traffic made it worse , but peace prevailed over manyata house , it was like a celebration for them , it had been hours they had been all gathered eating , chatting and enjoying but there was a person who evolved with anger with each passing seconds the nearness of manyata and abhi set uday/pratabh off guards his blood boiled with anger but he was noticed by none not even manyata as she was in her own little world she had never been happier finally she found her friend back as to add to uday /pratabh's frustration all he could was clunt his hands into fist , his eyes were redden with anger as he found it hard to control his anger , his eyes popped out seeing the scenario in front of him , abhi was just inches away from manyata and his hands locked in hers as he took a log of her hair and placed it behind her ears to which she replied with a smile , uday /pratabh could no longer tolerate his anger needed to be calmed or he would end up messing up so he stood up , his face as hard as steel and in a cold voice he said

VIJAY:guys it soo boring lets play something

UDAY/PRATABH:you are right lest play something what about truth and dare

UNANTI:I think that a cool idea so shall we start

ABHI:sure

Uday/pratabh passed a signature smirk as he knew this was the only way to distract abhi and manyata , he also smiled to himself thinking about all the naughty dare he would give manyata , his such facial was visible to manyata she was alerted as she stopped and said

MANYATA:oh no please I am too tried let not play please

PRATABH/UDAY:come on be a sport let play I am sure it won't hurt you much

His eyes reflected an evil plan , manyata nodded in a yes as she felt a lump struck on her throat finally the game was started off , the bottle was turned and the nature choose unnati to lead the first , as everybody cheered and hooted and now as abhi asked

ABHI:so unzzie truth and dare

UNNATI:hmm can't take truth there are lot of secrets I wanna hide form vijay

She completed with a smile which was accompanied by a laugh by all except for vijay he looked scared like a wet cat as abhi continued

ABHI:ok so it is a dare na now you have to tell a secret of your sisy

MANYATA:hey that her dare not mine

ABHI:oh come on sweety how many secrets do you hold that you are so scared

He pulled himself closer to her as manyata recalled her night with uday/pratabh and a blush came to her face , but her closeness with abhi made uday boil with anger but he plastered a smile to suppress his anger as unnati completed her dare

UNNATI:ok her secret is when jiji was small na she used to be like going to ma 's room take crimson powder apply on her fore head and on being asked she was like I am married

Everybody laughed at this except for uday / pratabh he praised his life to be loyal to him as manveer shared a warm eye lock the game continued they got more truth and more dares out , it was on full swing and now the chance came to abh as vijay who was eagerly waiting to take revenge on abhi for making him act like a gay in his last dare so he gave one of hie evil grin and said

VIJAY:so my dearest abhi you dare is you have to kiss a girl and mind me not my girl

Everybody hooted as manyata eyes were wide open , she very well knew what vijay meant as she looked at abhi , she could find no escape as abhi forwarded his face towards her and before she could react or push him off he laid a peck on her lips there was more louder hooting as abhi winked at her while she was dumbstruck , she looked at uday/pratbah with the corner of her eyes he was indeed in fire but thankfully vjay unknowingly calmed his anger as in the next turn he gave uday/pratabh a dare

VIJAY:ok pratabh now you have to strip your shirt and do dirty dance with manyata

ABHI:hey bro that far to vulgur

UDAY/PRATABH:so was your dare and come on it just a dance

both shared a cold glare as unnati and vijay hooted manyata heart pounded and she blushed furiously , and with the corner of her eyes she saw him taking off his shirt as his and he asked her to the floor the music was played as the light were dimed manveer danced along , it was slow seducive moves which made manyata weak on her knees and uday enjoyed every bit of it , he touched every possible place making her wet and sweat as finally she passed a soft mour which was noticed by none except for uday as he smirked at her and his dare was over both took there place and manyata was so shy she could not even look up and him and avoid his glare as the bottles were turned the game seem never ending and uday/pratabh was already turned on and he needed her very badly so finally loosing all his patience he got up and said

UDAY/PRATABH:sorry guess I am too tried so I am leaving first you all should carry on

Just then he was stopped by unnati as she got up pulling vijay along and said

UNNATI:I guess pratabh is right guys we all shall leave now its too late

He was very happy now finally he would get some time alone with manyata as Uday/Pratabh told himself

UDAY/PRATABH:I am proud of you chotti you understand your dada so well

But his happiness was short lived as vjay who found it so hard to keep his mouth shut blurted out

VIJAY:But abhi can stay I think he needs some extra time with m bhai

He teased as pratabh /uday suppressed his anger with a smirk and said to himself

UDAY/PRATABH:chotti has choosen a very dump partner for herself

As he continued to stare helpless but his dear manyata came to his rescue as she got up and said

MANYATA:no vijay bhai I think abhi needs to leave the storm outside is getting bad but unnzie don't leave tonight I want you to stay here

UNNATI:woa jiji you are asking me to stay how can I reject sure I will stay

ABHI:ok sweety bye meet you tomorrow

They hugged each other and bide good bye , after manyata was assured that both abhi and vijay had left she looked at unnati and said

MANYATA:please sit here I and pratabh needs to tell you something

UNNATI:what jiji?

Uday/pratabh himself was utterly confused at manyata behavior and as he sat down and now the trio faced each other as manyata started

MANYATA:unzzie I want you to know that your dada is still alive

Unnati face turned pale as she went expressionless , uday got the hint of secret manyata was going to reveal his heart panicked he needed to stop manyata before it was too late he did not want unnati to know his secret as giriraaj would leave no stone unturned to drag his daughter in this dirty game but he was too late as manyata finally announced

MANYATA:yes pratabh is uday

UNNATI:what are you telling jiji how can that be possible?

MANYATA:Yes unzzie when mom was pregnant the bomblast took place and our family drifted away your dad and uday flee to states they changed there identity and started to lead a new life but now they are back

UNNATI:what nonsence jiji how can you tell this is only udayda' do eh have any proof and if so where is dad?

MANYATA:he is uday unzzie he said me thing only I and uday knew

Unnati cold eyes turned moist but she was still not willing to accept she had been betrayed and now she was always alerted as she asked in a cold tone

UNNATI:if you are udayda then how did you recognized jiji and where is dad?

UDAY/PRATABH:I recognized her by her mark I had given and dad is here in this city and here is his picture

He handed his cell phone to unnati , he noticed her hands shivering as she took and was dumbstruck she just murmerred to them

UNNATI:This is dad that mean

She could not complete as tears over powered her she stood up and looked at manyata and said

UNNATI:jiji I need to go home I need some time

MANYATA:sure unzzie

They hugged each other and unnati left the house manyata saw her leaving and turned to uday she sat next to him and kept her hands on his shoulder and said

MANYATA:do not worry she is just a bit disturbed

Her hands were shoved off by him as he stood and looked at her , his eyes garing fireballs at her as he screamed out of frustration

UDAY:why are you even bothered about me , go to your abhi he is more important to you than me na

She found it hard to understand his anger and stood up and asked

MANYATA:uday what happened why are you so angry

He grabbed her arms and pierced her soft skin with his nails as she struggled for him to leave and he looked straight into her eyes and said

UDAY:I want you to stay away from him

At this manyata pushed him away with all her force and said

MANYATA:uday I love you and I think you should trust on me and as for abhi he is my bestest friend

He advanced his steps towards her while she backened finally the chase stopped as she hit the wall and he blocked her way with his arms and said

UDAY:so who is more important to you me or abhi

MANYATA:uday stop he is my friend and you are my love we can't compare and you cannot forbide me he has been there at times when you were not there for me , and now he just wants my friendship I cannot snatch that away from him

UDAY: I do not care you will not talk to him ever again

MANYATA:uday you cannot control my life I will do as I like ok

She tried to move but he pinned her to wall , the sudden jerk made her wound pain bitterly as she knelled down holding the wounded place and started to sob , all his anger vanished as he cupped her face and asked softly

UDAY:what happened wifey?

MANYATA:uday.. my .. wounds it hurts

UDAY:let me see

She removed her hands as he unbuttoned her shirt and caressed the place and then he placed a soft peck on that scar and took her into his arms , by now her pain was all gone as she buried her face in his chest and he said her

UDAY:let me heal you with my love dear

And he took her to the bed room locking the door behind and all anger , frustration , misunderstanding was washed away by those pleasurable mourns

done with this chappy

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i maybe ending this ss asap

due to least interest the readers are showing

earlier no of likes did not matter ,much

but now it does

so no res post

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Edited by annabh - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey Anni am happy again to comment first...

Well the update was surely a blast...

The truth and dare part was really gud and very well written and I could really imagine everything clearly...

And the confession part was really emotional...😭

Am sorry for not able to like and comment on ur previous updates...

Thanx for the pm even after I was not able to comment on ur updates

And thanx a lot for sharing such a lovely story with us just luved it to the core...

Plz... update asap...
Edited by htgcute - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome chappy.
Will be looking forward to read more soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: wonderblake

Awesome chappy.

Will be looking forward to read more soon.


thank you so much
i am glad that you liked it

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Posted: 12 years ago

thank you so much

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