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karan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#451

Originally posted by: SacredLove
Aww reyaan and shanaya are so cute
poor rey sab ki daat sun raha hai
Use bhi second chance milana chahiye
hope they patch up soon
awesome part good work karan do cont soon

Milega,...zaroor milega 😊

Thank u so much for ur lovely comments all the tym 😊 i will continue very soon 😃

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karan

@Karan_TaaRey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#452

Originally posted by: raddhi
it was emotional yaar
u made me cry i am happy tht
taarey hav child awsm thanks for PM

😊 Thank u so very much for ur comment ..~ They r always special for me 😊

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karan

@Karan_TaaRey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#453

Originally posted by: vinithataarey
FIRST OF ALL I AM REALLY SORRY FOR THE LATE COMMENT
IT WAS AMAZNG😊
REALLY AWSMMM👏
FIRST PART MEIN TAAYAM SCENE WAS SOO CUTE😛
N THEN GANG SCENE WAS SWEET😛
BUT RH SCENE WAS OUT OF THE WORLD YAAR😃
IT WAS EMOTIONAL AT THE SAME TYM ROMANTIC😳
POOR SHARON KYA HAAL HOGA USKI😆
PLZ PLZ UPDATE SOON N PM ME
THANKS A LOT FOR THE PM DEAR

I will update very soon 😃 Thank u so much for ur special comments everytym 😊

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karan

@Karan_TaaRey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#454

Originally posted by: soumiluvztaarey
Sry for the late comment bro
N the update it was amazing
Sharey part was lil emotional
Atlast pata chl gya ki shanya taarey ki child h
N luved rey n reyaan part n taani n shanaya part
Precap is damn interesting
I think its flashback
Update soon n PM me

wait for updates 😆 ...

will surely pm u !!

Thank u so much soumi for all ur special comments every time 😊

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karan

@Karan_TaaRey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#455

Originally posted by: disismeenu4u
finallyyy i am here in the thread of one of my favorite FF's⭐️⭐️ ... i am sooo happy⭐️ i am gonna read it all what i missed⭐️ .. me gonna give detailed comments for each and every chapter 😛⭐️...

so let me start from where i stopped last and that is chapter 4😉

so true the name is incredible love!!!😊

i so loved this chapter .. karan , my bro .. pats my little boy,👏👏 you did a wonderful job !!👏 this chapter is written so very beautifully!!😊 i loved every part of the chapter from start to end...😊

start our cute Reyan baby n his mom's cutu cutu convo ..awww they both make an adorable combo..😊😊.
and then came Mrs Singh n taani part .. she is such a good lady 😊.. love her for what all help she had given to our princess..
and the flash back was the stealer part of this update offcourse.👏.
it was so very beautifully penned karan👏, the words were of perfect intensity to mark the seriousness of the situation described...
urrggg those jerk men !!😡😡!! how dare they disturb a girl like that!!!😡😡!! but thank God there are good people like Mrs singh to help!!!

coming to swaroon+gang part... swayam is more concerned for rey than taani??.. me didnt expect that from swayam!! i look from a sister's point of view so i find it annoying that swayam considers his friend more than his sister but vicky .. vicky act as a good brother than a friend .. may be coz i am a pampered sister , i love vicky more than swayam😉..

😆 Indu Di...How Can Anyone be soo sweeett ?? 🤗 Thank u Thank u Thank for Taking out ur tym for this ^_^ nd commenting in detaill..UMM ACTUALLY , me also want to highlight vicky nd taani's relationship in this FF as in the show,its not good,..also its realted to the past ...so coz of that i have highlighted their relation so nicely in this FF 😊,...

Originally posted by: disismeenu4u
chapter 5
little shanaya is pampered daughter😉 cutie pie 😉 haha she wants to go for shopping at this age😆😆.. hehe rey's money will evaporate when she grow's up😆😆

n hey rey-rey meet i mean ki reyan- reyansh meet was superb!!⭐️rey is still confused kya??😕 i mean that reyan is someone else's son?? coz reyan told he doesnt have father so did rey understand that its his son only??!!

n taani misunderstood?? oh God!! but rey said na shanaya isnt his daughter but then taani didnt stop to hear !! she is damn angry

now comes sharon-taani part aww that was so cute !! sharon is a nice friend n bhabhi too😊 and taayam meet was emotional.. bro meeting sis after so many years...

end mein sharon's plan⭐️ taarey alone in RH😉⭐️⭐️.. running to read next chapter..this chapter was super duper amazing karan 👏

Thank u so much 😆 yes ,..i want a deep relation between taani nd sharon in this FF 😊 i want every realtion to be good which is bad in the show nd shanaya..wo to meri jaan h 😃 i love her so much i want her to be the queen <3 aage aage dekho hota h kya 😆 😉 ..

Originally posted by: disismeenu4u
chapter 6
they are twins??⭐️⭐️.. karan, i think i asked this in my comment somewhere in first or second chapter .. i had a doubt from beginning.. mm sooo happyyy⭐️⭐️..

now let me come to the update from beginning😊

i loved the first scene taani-swayam-reyan-sharon part... it was so cute yet emotional and beautiful😊

n awww my doll shanaya cried!!! no doll no , you will get ur mumma soon be happy and ha ur bro to then both of you can play 😊 awww how cute it would be⭐️ ... i loved shanaya-rey scene..it was so emotional and was so beautifully written karan bro , i loved it 😊

and then came reunion part !!😳 aww what to say!! perfect!! it was so perfect!!..the intial anger of taani , doubt of both of them then both got so passionate !! aww i loved that scene ...

n precap.. yey!! rey knows the truth.. me running to read next chapter⭐️

Yes..she cried nd how won't she 😭 nd i know u had a doubt on'em but i kept it as a secret nd revealed at this chapter.. 😃 nd ya it will be so cute when reyaan nd shanaya will be toghether ⭐️ Thank u Thank u Thank u ! 😃 😃

Originally posted by: disismeenu4u
chapter 7

this was such a beautiful chapter awww shanaya-taani combo is so adorable.. aww so our doll had food from her mom's hand ..😊 me was so happy reading that scene⭐️

but reyan is calling rey as uncle ohh noo!! i want him to call rey paapa but i know it will take time and i am ready to wait as long as it is for this cute n beautiful ff⭐️

ohh that flash back!!! swayam's dad is so so so mean!!!😲😡 😡 😡 how can he do that😡 cheap man!!😡😡 he separated his own grandaughter from her mom😡😡 for money😡 urggg
but seem's like rey's dad was a good man!!😊 and see God's play😊 he handed shanaya in right hand's😊

how happy rey was when he came to know the truth!! n guess in that case how happy taani would be when she comes to know tat she has a daughter😊..

now waiting to see the reason for taarey separation!!!

it was a treat to read 4 chapter's in a stretch karan i enjoyed reading it ... keep writing n keep smiling my bro...

Ya i was so happy writing that 😊 nd yes he will call rey papa soon 😊 yes rey's dad was a good man 😊 nd i was very happy when i thought that god's play before starting this FF...⭐️ yes taani will be at cloud 9 knowing this ⭐️ ...ya wait for the next chapter i will update it very soon 😊 ..nd it was also a treat for me to read...all for comments in a stretch 😃 😊 thank u thank u thank u so so very much 🤗

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karan

@Karan_TaaRey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#456

I m here as i promised...update after a week...so ab k 2 chapters me...all will be flashback..but i will try to finish in this chapter only...Please Like nd comment honestly.. 😆 Here u go with update .. 😊 ...

Chapter 8 : Seperation 💔

(Taani nd Shanaya finished their dinner...nd Taani was asking questions..to shanaya..nd so on...rey came from water room..he saw Taani ns shanaya sitting toghether...he went near them...)
R : Princess,...apne khana kha liya...
(as soon as he came there..Taani left the table...rey gave a foul smile to shanaya but shanaya was smart enough...as she knows something was wrong...but she also gave a fake smile ...)

(V.P Sir announced that today evening...they have arranged a function...at a XOXO venue...Nd all specially requested rey...to join them..as he wil sing there...it will be great fun in between tents,camp fires..etc etc..after the announcement..all had their...Talks..nd all left for theri homes...as they had to come at evening also...)

Little Shanaya was at cloud 9 today..she was very happy as she met her mother today...but she was sad as she had incomplete knowledge..of her parents..she want to find out...nd she decided...closing her fists tight..that one day she will surely find out...the reason for which she is alone...

while little reyaan is very tired today..he came from re-union nd just after some talks...he felt sleepy..so he just lied on bed...nd got a fresh sleep with him..Taani,swayam nd sharon were also tired..nd they also fall asleep..after sometime...

The whole house was full of silence now...'mmm' sweet reyaan moaned in his sleep...after a lil time...he got up nd saw his mom sleeping near him...he went in kitchen to drink some water..nd found that swaron's room is locked nd everyone is sleeping..there is no one in the house except him..

R (to himself ) : umm,..ab me kya kru ? :( i will get bored...Idea...i will play video games..hm..good...

(He took his steps towards room...nd open the cupboard with a sudden power...'Taap' The Heavy Dairy fell straight on his head..he cried with pain...nd then took the diary in his tiny palms...he opened the book...nd the Heading "My Journey" made him confused..😕 Then...he opened the 1st page..of the Diary...nd closing the cupboard...he went in Hall..Taking the diary...nd started reading...)
( Note : This Diary is Taani's so whatever written in it is the direct speech given by her..)

6th June 2008,

'Go Get a life Taani 😡' His Bitter Dialougues...echoed in my ears..nd made me cry again nd again..how can he do this to me.. 😭 i still can't believe..he did this to me...to whom he was use to consider his angel of love...Kya sach me unka pyaar sacha tha ? 😭 agar haa ? to kyu ? kyu krishnaji ? kyu aaj muje ye din dekhna pada 😭...

(He was crying reading all this...the wind coming from the window was powerful enough to blow the pages of the diary..the paged were blowing..nd suddenly one page with Heading.. "My Journey from heaven to hell </3" attracted him to stop the pages from blowing..so he took the diary..nd at in a corner with folded knees..he started reading...)

'My Journey from Heaven to Hell'

4th May,2008

-> Krishnaji,..aaj meri life ka sabse kharab din h..aaj rey ka itna bhayankar accident hua..jisne muje bahut dara diya 😭 me aapse haath jodti hu krishnaji please..rey ko theek kr dijiye,..wo bhi jald se jald...😭...(Rey's accident took place...nd he got injured...he was in a very critical situation..he was in a risk of life or death..doctors surrended and answered that it is very tough to save his life...)

6th May,2008.

Thank u Krishnaji...Thank u Thanku Thank u so much...k operation successful h..or ab rey danger se bahar h...Aaj Hospital me unhe Thik dekh kr..meri saans me saans aayi..krishnaji..Please ab ap rey ko jaldi se jaldi thik kr dijiye...

7th May,2008.

Aaj ka din bahut busy raha...me roz roz hospital,college or ghar pe up down krke thak jaati hu...kyuki hospital ghar se bahut bahut bahut door h...or agar muje hospital jaana ho..to college bunk krna padta h..isiliye ab maine decision liya h k me sirf week main 1 baar hospital jaungi...

8th May,2008.

Ye kya h Krishnaji ?? sab musibatein..saath me kyu aa rahi h muj per..humari daadi ( grandma ) ka bhi accident ho gya..or rey bhi thik nhi h ...😭 ye kya ho rha h meri life me ? aaj to bhai bhi jodhpur chale gye...ab me yaha bilkul akeli hu...😭 or upar se ab ACS (swayam) or AGS (rey ) 2no nhi h to me akele ye sab kaise sambhalungi..help me krishnaji please help me...😭

12th May,2008.

Thank u Krishnaji...Thank u so much k ab vicky mere AGS..h...wo muje bahut help krte h..wo muje bhai or rey ki kaami mehsoos nhi hone dete...please ap vicky bhai ko hi mere sath rehne dijiye...

(Her Friendship with vicky got closer nd closer by each day..they both were bester friends now...as being a best friend of rey,vicky always took care of Taani,..like a sister...he was always there...to take care of her..vicky was so kind...to taani,..he consider her like his sister...all the bad things were changed to good now..but u know na...all good things come to an end one day..💔 so the next day was the worst day of their life...)

6th June,2008 !!!!!!!!!!

Kabhi Aisa kuchh hoga aisi umeed nhi thi...Aaj itna bayankar hadsa..jisne meri duniya barbaad kr di...Rey K pyaar ki nishaani mere pet me h..or iss daur me hum 2no ka ye break-up hona zaroori tha krishnaji..kyuki me nhi chahti k mere aane wale bache ko ye pta chale ki uska baap aisa insaan tha.. 💔

(It was the day when rey was supposed to discharged from hospital...he came with a bouquet...of red roses...in his hand nd was waiting for taani to come..he was waiting outside Taani's House...Taani nd Vicky Came on Bike...vicky applied brakes...nd They Both Got a surprise...yes...they both saw rey...nd were so happy..but rey...he stepped backward..with a iron rod stamped in his heart...he was getting report from few days that Taani nd Vicky r really close these days...he never liked that..he always felt jealous...his some friends even told him Taani replaced vicky ...vicky is slowly Taking Rey's Place..That comments made him go wild...in the hospital.but he seen them now ...seeing both of them smiling...was killing him..he tightened his fist hard...

"Rey.." she came running saying this..for hugging him...

"Don't" He said...with full potential anger...
"what ?" she aksed with a doubt ..
"Don't be over smart okay ?" ..he said..
"what do u mean ? "..she asked in a serious tone,...

(he stepped backwards...with broken tears...she understood that rey is misunderstanding them..)
"rey..jaisa ap samaj rahe h waisa kuchh nhi h "...she said to sop him..
"shut up...i never expected this from u ..😡"//he repiled...

"rey,u r getting it wrong dude.."..said vicky in a scared tone..
"Get The Hell Lost u both..Bloody hell..i never expected this from u...Taani..ab me samja k tum mujse hospital milne sirf week me 1 baar kyu aati thi...kyuki baki k din to tum iss...vicky k sath busy hoti thi..na " he said this..nd threw the bouquet on the floor..nd left the place...)
(Rey Never Talked with taani again..aftr some days taani also got hatered for rey..as he din't listened at her once..soon there college...ended after some days...nd Rey Nd Taani Never Met Again...in these 5 years..Rey realized his mistake..when neha told him the truth...but he din't got chance...to apologize...)

8th March,2009.

Krishnaji..thank u apne muje ye rey ki nishaani (reyaan ) di h ..or ab maine ek decision liya h k me ab yaha or nhi reh sakti...ab muje reyaan ki zimedaari..bhi h...isiliye me ab in sab se kahin door chali jaungi..me saari zindagi bhai k sahare nhi jee sakti..isiliye mere is decision pe me amal kr saku uski muje shakti dena...(she left mumbai on that day...)

*Diary Closed*

Reyaan was full of tears now...he saw many photoes of rey in that diary nd understoos everything..he came to know that his Rockstar is his dad..he was crying..a lot..but soon he saw sharon waking up from sleep.so he ran to room..nd kept that diary at its place nd washed his face...

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Precap : DIL KO TUMSE PYAR HUA...PEHLE BAAR HUA...TUMSE PYAAR HUA... <3 <3 <3 😛

i know it was the worst update ever..but i m very scared for my results...nd m not in a mood to write..but as my schools will get started in some days i will get busy so u will get late updates... so isiliye..please like nd comment...mujhe pata h ap logo k ye update bilkul passand nhi aaya..😭 but please adjust this time...next update will be rocking !! Promise 😊 Please Like nd Comment ! 😊

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Indu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#457

res

OMGGG OMGGG bro.. did u seee!!!!!! finallyyy i got first post!!!! yeyyy yeyyy jingalalala jingalalala🥳. 🥳 🥳 🥳

. now me gonna read it ...

unres!!!

beautiful chapter bro.. let me start from beginning

rey called princess.. mm whom???😉.. can be used for taani also😉 hehe .. i know he called shanaya, but i was imagining like him calling shanaya , but looking at taani hehe .. me dreamt like that

i loved the whole diary segment.. it was written beautifully .. awwweee my cute little reyan was reading the diary all alone at night .. and champ got sad in the end

flashback was painful.. it was all the result of a bad unnecessary misunderstanding!!! feel bad for taani.. n i dont feel bad for rey.. he should not have misunderstood her like that .. he should have searched the truth !!..

now waiting for the moment where shanaya n reyan comes to know that they are siblings !! both cutu's will be overjoyed!! ..

bro, whats there to fear of results?? u r gonna score high marks .. give a biggg smile now⭐️⭐️

Edited by disismeenu4u - 12 years ago