Faith- A foursome ss chapter 27 pg 39

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millee18

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Posted: 12 years ago

#141

sorry fr commenting late...
read all part in one go...
they r simply amazing!!!!
fantastic...
superb!!!!!
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

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Aww thank you all for commenting.

Chapter 17

Next Day it was the sangeet, The rasam started

jeevika wore

Manvi wore

Viren wore

Virat wore

They rasam started with dadaji giving a lecture again saying that how much thankful he was to god to give him manvi and jeevika as DILs. Then the duhlas Dhulans ek dosree ka moon methan krtaa hain.

Then the actual function starts.

The first performance was of virika on:

[Falak tak chal saath mere
Falak tak chal saath chal]2

Yeh badal ki chadar
Yeh taaron ki aanchal
Mein chup jaye hum
Pal do pal hoo

[Falak tak chal saath mere
Falak tak chal saath chal]4

Dekho kahan aagaye sanam saath chalte
Jahan din ki baahon mein raaton ki saate hai dhalte
Chal woh chubare dhoonndhe
Jinmein Chahat ki boondein
Sach karde sapno ko sabhi

hoo aankhon ko meeche meeche
Mein tere peeche peeche
Chal duon jo kehde tu abhi
Bahron ki chat ho
Duaao ke khat ho
Padhte rahe yeh gazal

[Falak tak chal saath mere
Falak tak chal saath chal]2

Dekha nahi mein pehle kabhi yeh nazara
Badla hua sa lage mujhko alam yeh sara
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Suraj ko hui hararat
Raaton ko kare sharart
Baitha hai khildi pe teri
haan is baat pe chand bhi bigada
Karta karta woh peeghlaa
Bhar aaya woh aankhon mein meri
To suraj bhujha doon
Tujhe mein saja doon
Savera ho tujhse hi kal
Hoo hoo

[Falak tak chal saath mere
Falak tak chal saath chal]4

Yeh badal ki chadar
Yeh taaron ki aanchal
www.lyricsmasti.com
Mein chup jaye hum
Pal do pal hoo

[Falak tak chal saath mere
Falak tak chal saath chal]2

Next was virman's

Paaya maine, paaya tumhe, rab ne milaya tumhe, honthon pe sajaya tumhe, nag mein sagaya tumhe
Paaya maine, paaya tumhe, sab se chupaya tumhe, sapna banaya tumhe, neendhon mein bulaya tumhe

Tum jo aaye zindagi mein baat ban gayi
Ishq mazhab, ishq meri zaat ban gayi

Paaya maine, paaya tumhe, rab ne milaya tumhe, honthon pe sajaya tumhe, nag mein sagaya tumhe
Paaya maine, paaya tumhe, sab se chupaya tumhe, sapna banaya tumhe, neendhon mein bulaya tumhe

Ho tum jo aaye zindagi mein baat ban gayi
Sapne teri chahaton ke, sapne teri chahaton ke
Dekhti hoon ab kayee
Din hai sona aur chaandi raat ban gayi
Hoo tum jo aaye zindagi mein baat ban gayi

Paaya maine, paaya tumhe, rab ne milaya tumhe, honthon pe sajaya tumhe, nag mein sagaya tumhe
Paaya maine, paaya tumhe, sab se chupaya tumhe, sapna banaya tumhe, neendhon mein bulaya tumhe

Chahaton ka mazaa, faasalon mein nahin
Aa chupa loon tumhe hauslon mein kahin
Sab se upar likha, hai tere naam ko
Khwaishon se jude silsilon mein kahin

Khwaishein milne ki tumse, khwaishein milne ki tumse
Roz hoti hai nayi
Mere dil ki jeet meri maat ban gayi
Hoo tum jo aaye zindagi mein baat ban gayi

Paaya maine, paaya tumhe, rab ne milaya tumhe, honthon pe sajaya tumhe, nag mein sagaya tumhe
Paaya maine, paaya tumhe, sab se chupaya tumhe, sapna banaya tumhe, neendhon mein bulaya tumhe

Zindagi bewafa hai yeh maana magar
Chod kar raah mein jaoge tum agar
Cheen launga main aasman se tumhe
Soona hoga na yeh, do dilon ka nagar

Raunke hain dil ke dar pe, raunke hain dil ke dar pe
Dhadkane hain surmayi
Meri kismat bhi tumhari, saath ban gayi
Hoo tum jo aaye zindagi mein baat ban gayi
Ishq mazhab, ishq meri zaat ban gayi
Sapne teri chahaton ke, sapne teri chahaton ke
Dekhti hoon ab kayee
Din hai sona aur chaandi raat ban gayi
Hoo tum jo aaye zindagi mein baat ban gayi
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Paaya maine, paaya tumhe, rab ne milaya tumhe, honthon pe sajaya tumhe, nag mein sagaya tumhe
Paaya maine, paaya tumhe, sab se chupaya tumhe, sapna banaya tumhe, neendhon mein bulaya tumhe
Paaya maine, paaya tumhe, rab ne milaya tumhe, honthon pe sajaya tumhe, nag mein sagaya tumhe
Paaya maine, paaya tumhe, sab se chupaya tumhe, sapna banaya tumhe, neendhon mein bulaya tumhe

After that virman virika done a cute performance on

I'll be alright, I'll be alright
I'll be alright

Tu hai toh tedi medi rahe
Ulti pulti baatein
Sedhi lagthi hai
Tu hai toh joote moote vaade
Dushman ke irrade
Sache lagthe hai
Jo dil mein taare vaare de jagah
Woh tu hi hai, tu hi hai
Jo rothe rothe de hassa
Tu hi hai wahin

Jaane kyun (jaane kyun) dil jantha hai
Tu hai toh, I'll be alright
(I'll be alright, I'll be alright)
Jaane kyun (jaane kyun) dil jantha hai
(yeh, yeh ,yeh)
Tu hai toh, I'll be alright
(I'll be alright, I'll be alright)

Saari duniya ek taraf hai
Ek taraf hai hum
Har khushi toh, dur bhage
Mil rahe hai gum
But when u smile for me
World seems all right
Yeh meri zindagi
Pal mein hi khil jaaye
Jaane kyun

(Yeh yeh yeh
I'll be alright, I'll be alright
I'll be alright
Yeh yeh yeh
I'll be alright, I'll be alright) —- 2

(Jo dil mein taare vaare de jagah
Woh tu hi hai, tu hi hai
Tu hi hai) (low background voice)

ooohhh
Chote chote kuch palon ka
Dostana yeah
Jaane kyun ab lag raha hai
Jaana maana yeah
Coz when smile for me
World seems alright
Yeah sare pal yahin
Yun hi tham se jaaye
Jaane kyun (jaane kyun)

Jaane kyun (jaane kyun) dil jantha hai
(yeh, yeh ,yeh)
Tu hai toh, I'll be alright
(I'll be alright, I'll be alright)

The sangeet was over everything went very well and smoothly

At night

Jeevika's room

Viren: Dehka jeevika I told you they both will sort everything out.

Jeevika: Viren even I knew that.

Viren: Is it.

Jeevika: Yes.

Viren: Jeevika so I'll go to my room.

Jeevika: yeah go by the way it's getting late, do din baad shadi hain, if you don't sleep well you will get dark circles.

Viren was about to leave.

Jeevika: ek minute ruko toh

Viren: kya.

She puts his lips near hers and slowly started kissing the kiss got deeper and more passionate, they both pulled away after a while. They forheads touched each other.

Virika: I love you

Manvi's room, Virat enters manvi is sitting near the dressing table about to remove her jewellery, when she sees virat in the mirror, Virat places one hand on her shoulder to pick her up and the other on her wasit he lifts her up from the chair she was sitting on.

Manvi: Virat what are you doing here shouldn't you be asleep.

Doesn't reply her takes a step forward same way manvi takes a step backward, everytime virat was moving forward manvi was moving back wards, this continued until manvi reached the closest wall and had no where to go.

Manvi: Viirrat

Virat takes his hand and starts messaging her bare waste, he slowly moved his hands to her shoulders and removes her dupatta and starts kissing the nape of her neck, Manvi hugs virat and whispers in his hear.

Manvi: I love you.

Removes the hair on her forehead and slowly goes to her lips and started kissing passionately.

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millee18

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Posted: 12 years ago

#143

yippeee!!!!!
im the first 1...
coming to update ..
its totally amazing...
i totally luved it...
the last part is simply wonderful...
nd the kiss
it made me blush...
cont soon...

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sapphhire

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Posted: 12 years ago

#144

Chapter 18

Next day After breakfast in Virat's room

Manvi: Di it's been such a long time we have been out together.

Virat: Haan di, she is right, we only go to the studio and you both only go to the court or office yeh shaadi ke rasmon mein uljha rahtee haan.

Viren: they are right, it's been ages we have done something together.

Jeevika:- guys we are getting married tomorrow, no way they are going to let us out. First of all we are not supposed to meet each other.

Virat looks at manvi.

Virat: manvi why are you giving those looks.

manvi smirks at viren, jeevika and virat.

manvi: one thing can be done.

explains everyone her plan.

jeevika: nahi nahi you want to get us all killed.

manvi: di nothing is gonna happen and even gharwalon ko pata chal gaya, they won't shout at us much.

Virat: Haan di manvi is right.

Viren: Come on jeevika be a sport.

Viren and virman: manjao please manjao, say yes say yes.

jeevika: okay okay

viren and virman: yeah.

Jeevika: but how we will sneak out of the house.

Manvi: don't worry that will be easy, by the way everyone is busy, nobody will even know.

jeevika: and how will we go to the mall. if we take the car they will come to know.

virat: di we will take a taxi.

viren: chalo lets get ready before anybody comes to know we need to come back.

So they all get ready and meet in the garden and they get a taxi and reach the mall.

Jeevika: where should we go first.

viren: lets go that shop.

manvi: what about that one.

virat: di app bhai ke saath uss dukan pe chali jao. manin manvi ke saath dusre dukan mein jataa hun.

viren: okay

jeevika: cool

manvi: nahi.

virat: kuyn

manvi: di ajj we all four wanted to spend sometime together.

viren: okay we will all go to that shop then. (pointing at the one manvi wanted to go).

manvi: nahi bhai we will go to the other one. (pointing to the one which manvi wanted to go).

viren: nahi angel I was thinking that looks boring.

manvi: nahi bhai I don't want to go to the other one.

viren manvi: then where do we go.

virat and jeevika: there

pointing at another shop some distance away.

it was kind of like a gift shop with teddy bears, candels and other sweet things.

Viren got for jeevika

jeevika got for viren

virat got for manvi

manvi got for virat

viren: okay where to know.

manvi: lets see where to go.

it's an 2 hours they are shopping. they bought more gifts and clothes for one another.

jeevika looks at her watch: oh my god it going to be two it half an hour we need to go home before lunch starts.

they reach five minutes before lunch time but to their bad luck everyone one was sitting in the living room waiting for them.

four: opps.

swamini: where had you'll gone.

viren: baadi maa wo maal.

swamini: whose idea was it .

manvi: mera.

swamini goes near manvi: toh humein kuyn nahi kahan lauging we also would come along.

all of them smile.

for now this much only. I know it's small if I am not feeling lazy and have time I'll try to update later today or tomorrow.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#145

yippy first to cmnt. .for the first time m first to cmnt. .lovely update... loved foursome bonding. .liked swamini bua too. .thanks for pm

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Neetu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#146

Superb
Loved it
Continue soon
N tanx for the pm

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pink1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#147

superb both part was nice
the boding foursome is really nice
update next part soon

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kulsum_virman

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Posted: 12 years ago

#148

awesome update ...
they are just so simple cute and adorable 😊
love the awesome foursomes bondings its soo nuch fun to read their parts 😊
update next part soon and do pm me

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millee18

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Posted: 12 years ago

#149

the update is simply awsome blossom...
luved it..
cont soon!!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

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Chapter 19

At last the day arrived which they had been waiting from so many years, They were getting married all of them were so happy, they were on cloud nine today, no words could explain their happiness.

Jeevika dress

manvi's dress

viren's sherwani

virat's sherwani

Soon the shaadi rasam got over everyone was extremely happy, the foursome gave each other a tight hug unable to believe that they were actually married.

They all reached vadhera house where the other rasams were performed.

Manvi and Jeevika won in the ring ceremony.

Then vanshika escorts jeevika to Viren's room and Kadambri takes manvi to Virat's room.

Viren's room

Jeevika was sitting on the bed with a veil over a head, viren slowly goes near her and lifts up the veil, goes near her ear and whispers her name, slowly moves towards her forhead and kisses it. his lips go more down travelling towards here cheeks and then her lips where they share a long passionate kiss, he starts removing all jewllery and then slowly removes all other barriers between them.

Virat's room

Manvi also sat on the bed with a veil over a head, virat came and removed it. manvi was blushing, she slowly lifts her head and they both share an eyelock.

Virat: Manvi I love you, you look beautiful tonight.

Manvi: Only tonight. (manvi asked pouting)

Virat didn't reply to her answer he slowly started carressing her face with one hand and messaging her bare waist with the other. He places his lips on hers and brushes it gently, tough the kiss starts of gentle in to time it turns to rough, passionate yet meaningful kiss. They both pull away virat starts removing manvi's jewellery while kissing her, after virat removes all her jewellery they both look at each other getting lost in one another, virat's hand travelled towards manvi back, he slowly removes her dori.

The night fades away as both couples become one.

The next day a beautiful morning.

Viren room,

Viren was on the bed he moved his hand to hug jeevika but felt nobody there, he opened his eyes and looked around the room where he saw jeevika combing her wet hair viren goes behind her but the water from her hair falls on viren.

viren: yaar jeevika you wet my shirt

jeevika: sorry.

viren: I love you.

jeevika: me too.

Virman room,

Virat's eyes open and sees his beautiful wife near him who was wrapped in a sheet. manvi opens her eyes when she sees virat staring at her she starts blushing.

Virat: why are you blushing now sweetheart.

by now bechari manvi was crimson red.

Virat hugs her

Virat: I love you.

Manvi: mee too

The morning went away with everyone praising the dishes made by manvi and jeevika and pulling the couples leg.

They all go to viren's room after breakfast.

Manvi: di I am not able to believe at last humari shaadi hogi, bachpan se jiss ke intezzar hua who akhir kar hogya.

Jeevika: haan manu.

viren: I feel so happy.

virat: It feels like this is all a dream.

All of them go into flash back of their life till now.