Virika SS: Let Me Love You - The Happy Ending p.21 - Page 16

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Posted: 12 years ago
Ressy!

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Sho Sho Sho shweet!!!
This update is damn adorable!!!!
I was scrolling up and down reading it again and again like a crazy monkey!
Viren is such a sweetheart!!!!

This is the best thing ever that can happen to any girl!
Seriously!!! he's just too sweet!!!

The update was...like.. you understand? 😆 I'm totally speechless!!! 😳

Just update soon!!!!! 😳😳

OMG i can't help it! i'm blushing!!! 😳
Edited by KtYammie13 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
hayye these surprises
lucky jeevs cont.soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
this so so gud reading sumthing like this is
more than a fsirytale
loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
Edited on page 18
Please continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Me speechless...no words to say!!!!!!!!
You are just prfect!
Ur stories...just marvellous...❤️
N dis story f urs...totally a difrnt cncept! Amazinggg...dis is d best f urs !!!! Truely amazinggg !!!!!!!
Justtt awesome...
Wowww !!!!!!!
Cant wait to read more...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Last update for this short story! Hope you guys enjoyed this fairytale proposal 😃 I know it may seem a little cheesy, but come on I'm sure there is some guy out there who would do this for their gal 😳 And if there is I can only imagine someone like Viren doing this for his ladylove 😆 Anyways hope you guys like this last part and thank you all for the wonderful feedback. Please make sure to drop in a comment and hit like ❤️

Chapter 3

Jeevika took to her phone to find out where the hell everyone left her. How could they right now? But there already was a message on her phone. Of course it was none other than Viren's.

"Remember its not only your special day, or mine' but everyones
Take a chill pill and get ready fast
My heart is beating faster as the time is coming'
Love you "

Jeevika knew nothing was going to go according to her plan so she just went with the flow. It was much harder than one would think. It was hard to believe so much love and so much happiness around all of them. She wanted to run now and kiss Viren. Gosh why was he this perfect. It took Jeevika another hour before she was fully ready and then she went inside the bathroom to put on her new dress. She came out and everyone was stunned at her beauty. Everything about her was perfect. Her makeup, minimal yet bringing out the most of her large grey eyes. Her hair with soft curls on the side was shiny and silky'any girls dream. Her dress just did wonders adding more to her beauty. Jeevika was gathering her stuff ready to go back to the limo before one of the ladies handed her one more white and gold envelope.

"So at this point of time I know you want to kill me
First I surprise you with everyone and now they all vanished
Trust me I know what I'm doing 😛
Now the big moment isn't too far away
Brace yourself' ehh who am I kidding?
Both of us have butterflies in our stomach right now, but its okay
We can have them together can we not?
Sooo finally your next trip will be to MEEE ❤️
Try to avoid crying because it will make me more nervous
You can do that for me right?
I think so.. Love you and see you in a bit"

"I cannot cry. I cannot cry. I cannot cry" is what she was saying to herself. Jeevika blushed but her cheeks hurt from smiling so much today. Something every girl dreams of. She took the last envelope with her and went back to the limo waiting for her outside. No one was there. She was feeling a little scared. Where the hell was everyone' I mean who was to give her a pep talk on everything being alright? Jeevika just closed her eyes waiting for the limo to eventually stop so she could finally meet Viren. Finally they would be able to celebrate their third anniversary and finally they would be able to formalize their relationship. The moment came when the limo stopped and so did Jeevika's heart. The door was opened and Jeevika got out to a wonderland. Right near the Napa River Delta and the sun about to set. She stood amazed at this breathtaking view in front of her eyes. It couldn't look prettier, the day couldn't get better, and her partner couldn't be more PERFECT! Jeevika just walked in the hopes that Viren would pop out of nowhere soon' real soon!

As she walked towards this beautiful view she could already feel his presence nearby. Soon they would have that symbol, the engagement ring, that united the two forever. She stood at the cliff taking in all the scenery and taking a deep breath, closing her eyes for a few seconds too. And within those few seconds he embraced her charmingly from the back spreading his hands on her stomach and his head near her shoulder. Little did Jeevika know there was a photographer present capturing every move of theirs and embracing a beautiful love journey of the two.

Jeevika's heart was pacing so fast the instant she got her first gift. Each envelope later and each surprise later her heartbeat was getting faster and faster and she couldn't do anything to stop it. No one could. Actually only one person was able to, Viren. The second she felt his embrace it was just bliss for her, for him, for THEM. It felt so perfect and so right to be in each others arms. Jeevika lovingly placed her hand on his face with her eyes still closed and not a single word uttered from the both of them yet. He kissed her neck and then moved. He finally made the first big step. Down on one knee and a beautiful engagement ring in hand he began talking. Those words he was about to say was going to change their life forever. And thus began his proposal'

"A Companion, a Friend, and a Partner. You are everything to me
No moment feels complete without you
Whether I'm sleeping, driving, working I always look to my side and imagine you there
Just catching that one glimpse of you or even imagining it
That enchanting face, be it in sorrow or happiness
Just does wonders in the world for me
I cannot imagine my life without you anymore
I hope you feel that I am the one for you just the way I do
So if you promise to be mine forever
and Let me Love You
Accept this from me as a symbol of our beautiful journey to begin!"

Jeevika's hands were shaking as she covered it on her eyes trying not to cry, but she couldn't. She removed it and then nodded yes only to see the most happiest Viren she had ever encountered. She handed her hand to him and he gently, yet nervously placed that engagement ring on her. He finally got up embracing her and holding her face first wiping her tears of joy and immediately after he pressed his lips onto hers. That kiss was just not a kiss anymore. It was their "engagement kiss." They both didn't even care to stop for a breath. What was breath when Viren had Jeevika and Jeevika had Viren. But once they decided to break away from each other she just hugged him as tightly as she could.

jeevika - "I love you sooo much Viren. You don't know how I'm feeling today. I just don't know what to say to you"
viren - "Just say that you will be by my side forever"
jeevika - "I promise I will never leave your side. There is no where I want to be, but next to you"

They broke their intimate hug and just looked into each others' eyes. They just couldn't get enough of each other.

jeevika - "But Viren whats the big surprise you're talking about. I already figured out that you were going to propose and you said there's something even bigger"
viren - "Well are you ready for it?"
jeevika - "Now that you're next to me, I am ready for anything and everything" she said holding his hand

He lovingly kissed her hand and they both walked away from the cliff. This time Viren took her to his car parked right near. He opened the door for her like a gentleman and shut it carefully. Again butterflies started coming in her stomach, but not as much as earlier today. Viren sat in the driver's seat and started the car taking his fianc somewhere unknown. The day was still beautiful.. how could it not be? Viren just proposed to his dream girl and Jeevika just agreed to marry her Prince Charming. Jeevika wanted to think and try to figure out what this big surprise was, but she couldn't stop remembering that kiss. Just the thought of that "engagement kiss" brought that huge smile on her face. She just couldn't stop smiling' It was impossible. He parked the car at what seemed to be the hotel they were staying at. He helped his lady out and behind the hotel near the garden area. As they got closer and closer they could hear noises of familiar people. It was their family standing all together. Not only that, but more new people who Jeevika hadn't encountered today. Their other close friends and relatives too. Jeevika was taken aback for a second. All of them were so dressed up as if it was some huge occasion. Yeah it was a big moment for her and Viren' but why were they all dressed up? They all walked forward to congratulate the couple. It took a good fifteen minutes before all the hugs, wishes, blessings, and kisses were over. Before Jeevika could say anything AGAIN' Viren did something unusual' He got back down on one knee, which looked like he was going to propose again' Was it just to show the family.. or what? Was he going to enact that moment for them now? How Cheesy!!! Viren was going insane today is what Jeevika felt.

viren - "When I proposed to you, I forgot to mention one important detail' When I said I wanted to embrace on this beautiful journey together forever I forget to mention I wanted to do it right away. Will you marry me RIGHT NOW with our entire family and friends nearby Jeevika?"

Jeevika halted back a second covering her mouth. Her eyes bigger than before. What in the world did he just say? How? What? When? Why? Where?
All of a sudden within twenty-four hours they would go from boyfriend-girlfriend to husband-wife' What was Viren thinking? She of course wanted to say yes, but this was the limit to overwhelming her! How much could a girl cry and how much could he push her limits. Everyone in the back was cheering Viren on and begging Jeevika to say YES to him instantly.

viren - "Please Jeevika. I don't think I can wait anymore. I don't have the patience anymore to wait till your officially mine. Please say yes"

Jeevika bent down to Viren and just kissed him in front of a gang of now almost 40 people. Ehhh who cared if their mothers were seeing. As everyone was "awwwing," Viren and Jeevika were just in their own little world. Both of them opened their eyes and got up' held hands and got ready to embark upon marriage now'

The entire clan walked to the other part of the garden where the arrangements were already made. Such confidence Viren had in Jeevika saying yes. Well who wouldn't. I mean after this proposal anyone would probably say yes.

The sun couldn't look better and the view couldn't be more perfect now. The garden was decorated, but simply. Just the way Jeevika liked there were lilies all over and Maya handed her the special bouquet for the bride-to-be that they had arranged. Within no time both Viren and Jeevika were asked to sign their marriage certificate. As soon as Jeevika finished signing her name'. that second they both became Virika and promised to love each other for the rest of their lives!

❤️ Feedback Welcome ❤️

Edited by Kays94 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
UNRES🤣

WOOOHHOOO Finally I am first on this AMAZING SHort Story!!!
Keeni Peeni join me on my Victory dance 😆 🤪
Sowwwyyy Partner...its my turn to be first now...u have been first already 😡 LOL ❤️
OKi coming to the update...It is so so so so so so so BEAUTIFULLY written
Everything is just PICTURE PERFECT. Your writing skills are just OUTSTANDING Kays
Throughout the update I had goosebumps and had the biggest smile on my face
This was written so perfectly good that I could see everything in front of my eyes
OMG why is Veren so perfect? like you always make me to fall in love with him all over again
Thanks for giving him to us in this update..was waiting for his entry since chapter 1 😆
The proposal dialogue was so touching and romantic
Your right there should be one guy in this world who can do this for his lovelady
And that is none other than Viren...He is my dream boy😳
Viren and Jeevika are so lucky to have eachother
I am sure they both looked so beautiful and charming
That kiss was so amazing after the proposal, & the small kiss when Jeevika agreed to marry him😳 haye haye me very blushyy😆
Wish this never ended...I was in Virika dreamland while reading this and still am
Read this SS so many times and I can not get enough of it
Why do you write so good Karina???????? Me wanna read moreee
Anyways, enough of my bak bak...no matter what I say my words are nothing compared to your writing..you are just the BEST writer and you know this cuz i always tell you this heheh
Thanks so much for giving us yet another SUPER DUPER Short Story
It was just beyond amazing and really enjoyed reading it, will read it again and again!!
Hope you give us another SS or FF before the show ends..I dont know what I will do without the show and your stories Keeni😭😭😭
Love ya loads and big hug to you my love...🤗 ❤️


Edited by jeevi7 - 12 years ago
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Njoy being first partner 👍🏼
Edited by Charucrazy - 12 years ago
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I actually can't believe I am online, was here and I LET MARZI RES BEFORE ME 😭
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wow karina di such a Perfect Ending!!!!!! 😃
Luvd each n every word of viren's proposal ❤️
Wow he married har instantly...he's d man each girl dreams to have ...
great work di 👏
Edited by cutevirika - 12 years ago

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