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Comment for chapter 7 edited on page 35..😊

Arnav and tennis.. I can just imagine how he would look in vest and tracks with sweat dripping from all over his body.. Leave it, just imagine how he looked while playing Basketball in IPK.. Never seen such a drool worthy guy in my life... *sigh*

I'm not at all worried about Lavanya... We all know she would change for good when Khushi comes in their life.😊

That snake, Shyam was Shrewd from the start. He very well knew how to make others fall in love with him. He had caught on to Arnav's weakness, indeed. And if that wasn't enough he would ditch Anjali for Arnav's one and only love. He would try to destroy the lives of two women who were the most important person in Arnav's life.

and once again a perfect Ending to an awesome story. Khushi in Arnav's arm.😉 Yes, we very well know what happens after that, so that's an apt ending for me. I have told you this once, and will tell you so once again, that if there is a story I would look for Arnav's Past, This is it for me. Amazingly written and a unique one at that...

Thoroughly enjoyed this journey and absolutely loved it..❤️❤️

I know you have your exams coming, so study hard and come back soon with a bang on story. If you don't after your exam finishes, I'll keep on pestering you...😉😆

once again Thank you for such a wonderful story.😊

Come back soon..😊

XOXO...🤗

hey plzz dont end your story ... it would be good if you show the rest of the know story in new light it will be good to know his losses and gains with his view...think about it...if you are planning to continue count me in as your big time stalker

a wonderfully fitting conclusion to an amazing story... rather than dragging it on needlessly, this was the right juncture at which to conclude... loved the further glimpses into arnav's transformation into asr, but more than that was fascinated by lavanya's transformation into the selfish 'airhead' with her own agenda... the change in arnav's feelings for her from interest and respect to indifference was also nicely brought out... akash's unstinting support and business acumen, kailash's support and practical advice plus aman's help were all instrumental in taking ar to new heights! the replay of the sheesh mahal fashion show also brought back some bittersweet memories... very well rounded off!

Beautiful...the end was justified...ASR at his best...

I really wish u continue it wid u r own take on Arshi...
Wud love to read the continuation on it..:)

oh wooow beautiful ending

Wonderful one

Nice udate yr...
Sorry m late dis tym...
Nd i also believe tht lavanya is gud at heart..infact we have seen tht in ipk too...she left ASR..for his gud..and accept his decision without any objection...
Loved ur update...

...woww..it was wnderful update...
You connected the story very well...nw i can belive that the incidents were the same as you show them in ur story...
I jst luved this story even without khushi...
Thanxx a lott helee for giving us such a beautiful and inspiring version of arnav's life...
Love u...<3

And with that we come to an end : (
This was the beautiful journey of ASR's life loved it.
okay, about the updated...
loved the way Akash was supporting Arnav throughout, but seriously Akash need to built himself, he is actually a good guy didn't fall for any girl, sober, gentleman, softspoken etc etc... but we love devil don't we?
Oh Lavanya, loved the change in her... her confidence and determination she actually was one to make it to ASR not Arnav...ASR was very tough by the time.
And Prakash bros. i actually didn't mind them untill they started disturbing some very intense "Rabba Vee's".
And there was Snake himself in the house, i sometimes find it difficult to believe Arnav actually wasn't aware of his intentions, he trusted his precious Di with this man blindly...but that was the Magic Shayamji's sweet tongue had.
Aman...love him he is the best invisible manager anyone can get.
Finally Titaliya in the arms of Arnav or wait may be ASR!!!
That was all so beautiful i'll miss this story or may be you Helee.
Hope we meet soon with new story on new thread
come back soon H.