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Posted: 12 years ago
So now maan started feeling something is gone.

he is going to regret badly...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Geet is leaving bcz she knows that maan is busy.But Maan is craving 4 her now
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Posted: 12 years ago
i hate u maan
i hateee u
grrr
kitni galti karta h tum
geet sahi kar raHI H EK DAM SAHI
waiting for next
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update
loved it too much
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
P-9,10,11

part-9 was beautiful with d dance tho it was meant to be sad yet loved it.

But p-9 & 10 was really painful to see the silent breaking of Geet's heart with Maan's ignorance.Like-Dil ke tutne ki koi awaaz nahi hoti...


When she said she wont disturb Maan again,it jst tears the heart in parts.


Loved all the parts.
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 11
nice part...
poor Geet...
Maan doesnt deserve her at all...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved the both part dear
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago

Part 12

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Geet : ab tak unhe message mil gya honga

Ek reply tak nhi kiya

Is ek mahine mein..maine unhe ek pal ke liye disturb nhi kiya

Mein hi janti humaine khudko kitni muskil se roka hai

Unke itne pass thi

Fir bhi..unke pass nhi ja sakti thi

She lost in own thoughts.

Armaan : yaar mein tujhe kbse awaaz laga rha hu

Chl ab

Apne liye bhi kuch lele

Geet : mera mann nhi hai

Armaan : sbke liye kuch na kuch liya

Yha tak us saddu boy friend ke liye bhi

Geet : armaan

Armaan : thik hai saddu nhi khta

Mujhe dra mt

Pr tujhe kuch toh apne liye lena padenga

Geet : nhi

Armaan : meri taraf se apna birthday present smjh le yaar

Ab ek lafz nhi

Chl bs

Geet : hmm

**********

Rimzim : dad gift

mohan : done

Rimzim : mom cake ready hai

megha : yes

Rimzim : toh fir hum yha kya kr rhe hai

Chalo andher

Surprise dete hai unhe

**************

All said together "surprise".. But shocked due to her not seen anywhere in room.

Rimzim : kaha gyi

mohan:- washroom mein hongi

megha : yha nhi hai wo

Rimzim : dad

megha : yhi hongi geetitni raat ko kaha jayengi bala who.

mohan (think) : kahi maine Maan ko yha bulake galati toh nhi kardi

Khi wo maan ki wajh se

megha : tum kya soch rhe ho mohan

Geet ko dekhowha kha gyi

***************

She sits on swing (jhulla) in garden and feels the cold wind& lost in memorable, happiness & painful moments

***********

Geet : wow Dad new phone

Thanks dad

Love you dad

She hugged dad tightly

Dad : you are happy

Geet : ofcourse dad

You are best

#

Dad I missed you so much.one tear fall down..

#

Geet : mera gift do

Maan : kaunsa gift

Aur waise kis khushi mein du gift

Geet : bulakad

Hamesha mera birthday bhool jaate ho

Maan : am sorry geet

Geet : mein nhi manane wali

Maan : acha btao kya chaiye tumhe

#

Kbhi yaad rakhne ki jaroorat hi nhi smjhi apne maan

*********

Maan : geet mujhe yaad hai

Is baar mein tumhe gift jaroor dunga

#

megha: pura ghar dekh liya

Ye geet kha chli gyi

Rimzim : dund liya aap dono ne

Nhi milli na

mohan : hm

Rimzim : par ek jagh to rh hi gyi

mohan : kaunsi

Rimzim : garden dad

megha : oh ha

***********

mohan : tu yha baithi hai

Geet :

mohan : madam mein aapse bat kr rha hu

Geet :mohan tum yha

mohan : ye swal toh mera tha

Geet : bs kuch der khule asman ke niche baithne ka mann kr rha tha

mohan : hume bhi bula leti

Geet : tum sb so gye the na

mohan : ab ander chl

Nhi toh tufain mail bahar aa jayengi.

**********

Rimzim kissed on her cheek and wished her "happy Birthday"

Geet : thankyou

Rimzim : ab cake katto na

Mera khane ka bhut mann kr rha hai

She cut the cake & firstly feed rimzim then megha &mohan

**************

megha : kal no officeonly dhamaal

mohan : ofcourse hum apne kuch close friends ko bhi bula lete hai

Aur mja aayenga

Kyun geet

Geet : jaisa tum dono ko thik lage

megha : birthday tera hai

Hmara nhi

To teri wish sbse upar aati hai

Geet : mera kuch mann nhi hai

Rimzim : you are so much boring

Mein decide krti hu

Phle shopping

Then water park

Then movie

Thik hai na

Geet : hmm

*************

i hope no confusion happened due to past & present scenes...past show with blue color...

Edited by priya_21 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
maan kabhi apne pyar ko taken fr granted nehi lete...sabse badi bhool kiya tumne...i pity u maan n also hate u...

superb n beautiful updates...

loved dem very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely updates n fr d pm also...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 12 years ago

maan had rudely ignore her in past & break her heart

its not going to be easy for him to get her back

awesome updates

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