#1 TaaRey: Love, Trust, Jealousy (Moved to thread 2) COMPLETED - Page 24

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Ish_taarey

Heya..How's u?? Bhul gyi na mujhe?? Can't u do a single scrap me?? 😭
Huh!!
Coming to the update...
I love ur story.. I was very confused... I mean..Niki kaun thi exactly..But The come to know that she is sis of Rey! 😳 😆
Well..She is crazy gal...😉 Love her...
Aww...Taarey were shoo cutee.. as usuall..
well.. I really wanted Taani also to be brave, dashing...!!
Promo seems interesting..
Update soon! Pm me! 😳


Sorry Ishu😭

Thanx for reading and liking it😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: iheartd3

hey ...just read all d prts...dey r amazing...i m nt able to send u buddy request , plz add me ...n do pm me wen u update plz😊


I have sent u buddy req..
vil PM wen I update😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Heyya. Sorry to keeping you all waiting. Mood thoda off tha. But now no more delay. Here's the update.



Part 11


The gang is at Rey's house. Everyone is in the hall except TaaRey who are in Rey's bedroom.

Rey: Taani I'm alright. Its just a small cut.

Taani: Mein jaanti hu aap apna khayal nahi rakhenge, so please apna haath aage karo mein dressing kar deti hoon.

Rey: Mein kar lunga.

Taani: Rey!

Rey: Atcha fine kar lo dressing.

Taani: Good!

Taani starts cleaning his wound. The wind is blowing her hair on Rey's face.

Rey slowly tuck her hair behind her ears. Their eyes meet. Both of them are lost in each others warm eyes. Eyelock is broken by Taani's hair which come on her face. Taani finishes dressing his cut. Unknowingly tears are building in her eyes.😭

Rey: Taani, tum ro kyun rahi ho?

Taani: Agar aapko kuch ho jata toh.😭

Rey: Kuch hua toh nahi na? So abh rona band karo, as tum rote hue bilkul bhi atchi nahi lagti.

Taani: Mujhe toh laga ki meine aapko kho diya. Thank you Krishna ji sab kuch theek karne ke liye.

Rey: Thanks toh Nik ko bhi bolna chahiye. Agar vo nahi hoti toh shayad iss waqt hum yahan nahi hote.

Taani: Matlab?

Rey: Matlab yeh ki iss problem se nikalne hum sab ko bahut time lagta, but thanks to her it was an easy escape.

Taani: Agar Niki ka plan full proof tha, toh aapko yeh chot kyun lagi?

Rey: Taani tum yeh kya bol rahi ho?😲

Nil: REY TAANI HUM BHI ISSI GHAR MEIN HAI. PLEASE NEECHE AANE KA KASHT [trouble] KARENGE?

*Everyone starts giggling😆😆*

Rey: Before they start assuming stuff hume neeche jana chahiye.😆

*TaaRey walk downstairs*

Vicky: Tum dono itni der upar kar kya rahe the?

Rey: (showing his hand) Bandaging.

Nil: Ooo I see.😉

Niki: Guys, cut it off.😆 Yansh how's your wound?

Rey: I'm totally fine. All thanks to you.

Nil & Vicky: Three cheers for Niki. Hip Hip!

All: Hurrey!

N&V: Hip hip!

All: Hurrey!

N&V: Hip hip!

All: Hurrey!

Niki: Easy guys. I'll get some snacks.

Sharon: Rey tum uss kidnapper ko jante the?

Rey: Mein unhe jaanta hu as Dad's friend, but aaj pata chala why dad's friendship with him was affected years back.

Sharon: Matlab?

Rey: Yaad hai Sharon bachpan mein jab hum dono dance competition ke liye gaye the and Niki kidnap hui thi?

Sharon: Haan..

Rey: Inhone hi kiya tha kidnap.

Sharon: But uss kidnaper ko Niki and Uncle (Rey's dad) ke sivay kisi ne nahi dekha tha.

Rey: Yeah and they didn't even tell us.

Taani: Toh phir aapko kaise pata chala?

Rey: Nik has a habit, vo jab bhi musibat mein hoti hai, the first word she says is 'Yansh' and yeh tab bhi bola hoga. Aur aaj vo unn sab ke saamne muje Rey bula rahi thi just because vo nahi chahati thi ki use koi bhi pehchaane.

Sharon: And Taani Niki ne ye jo plan banaya tha waisa hi kuch plan usne tab banaya tha and safely nikli thi.

Swayam: This girl is too brave it seems.

Rey: Yes she is!😳

(While everyone was busy praising Niki there was one person who was getting annoyed because of all this. Yes, that person was Taani. She was not happy with Niki. Rey who always had time for her was sometimes too busy with Niki that he forgot that he also had other people around. She knew very well that Rey met his sister after really long time so he is spending time with Niki. But Taani thought that after a few days it will be back to nornmal. But to her disappointment Niki had become Rey's first priority and Taani somewhere didn't like it.)

*Niki comes with the snacks*

Vicky: Humari brave superstar⭐️ aa gayi!

Neha: Yeh plates mujhe do, tum baith ke aaram karo.

Niki: Guys whats wrong? You all are fine na?

(Everyone start behaving as Niki's fans and they start treating her as God.😛)

Niki: (Running towards Taani) Taani please save me from them!

Taani: (Who is already annoyed cannot control her anger😡 and comes a tight slap on Niki's face) *THAP*

Rey: Taani?😲

Swaron: Taani?😲

Boys: Taani!😲

Girls: Taani!😲

Niki: 😭 (Runs and goes to her room)

Rey: Taani what was that? I'm asking you dammit what was that?😡

Taani: Sab ussi ki galti hai. Sirf jhute promises karne aate hai usse. Mujhe kaha ki vo aapko kuch hone nahi degi but still yeh dekho (Taking his wounded hand) aapko kitni chot lag gayi hai. She deserves this!

Rey: What? Tumhe pata bhi hai tum kya bol rahi ho?

Taani: Mein sahi bol rahi hu!

Rey: Taani you need rest! Excuse me guys. (Goes to Niki's room.)

Swayam: Taani, tumhe yeh suddenly kya hogaya?

Taani: Mujhe ghar jaana hai.

Rey: Nik, you fine?

Niki: I'm fine Yansh. But she has to apologize for this! 😡



Phew done.

I hope boring nahi tha.😒

DO LIKE AND COMMENT.

Edited by 2111_shweta - 7 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Omg... Taani slaped Her?? Oh man.. But, don't you think.. reason is very small. Anyway.. I would like to see Taani in dfrnt avtaar!! Hmm.. I have to wait for it..😭 😆
Overall... Update was awesome..seriously! A very nice turn.. Update soon! PM me! 😃
Edited by Ish_taarey - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Kriti (deepkriti)
You guessed it correctly👏👏
Niki ko hi padi😉



Namrata (namy_singh)
Iss baar chod diya...but for this update if you don't comment.. mein next part update hi nahi karungi😈
Edited by sashaz_sis - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG ! taani slapped niks !!! now rey will definitely b angry...i hope dis doent ruin taarey equation😕...btw nicely written update n thanx for ur pm😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
I hope Taarey's relationship doesn't get affected by the slap
please update soon and pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
What the...??
Shweta yeh kya tha seriously!! Story kaha jaa rahi hai!! I thought nikki would share a gud bond with taani!! Par yh kasie hua??
Btw it was nice written
Pata nahi ab aage kya hoga!! Plz post soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hawww taani ne niki ko thapad mara... Plss updte d nxt soon n pm me relt excited to c wt rey wil do wid taani.?? wil taani apology to nik?
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update..
loved it =)
update soon =)

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