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Posted: 12 years ago
me me me


i want it...
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All the parts were amazing..
So maan wanted geet to be in safe hands before giving the ring..
And b/c of his intution, she got her life back and got to noe true colors of her so called lover..
Maan noes geet very well.. when she is upset, happy and hungry.. 😆
I loved the part where he get her food in past...
i m eagerly waiting for her life in KM with maan..
Thats going to be challenging for her as she is surely going to fall for him.. 😉
waiting for the next part already...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Remya_Pillai

All the parts were amazing..
So maan wanted geet to be in safe hands before giving the ring..
And b/c of his intution, she got her life back and got to noe true colors of her so called lover..
Maan noes geet very well.. when she is upset, happy and hungry.. 😆
I loved the part where he get her food in past...
i m eagerly waiting for her life in KM with maan..
Thats going to be challenging for her as she is surely going to fall for him.. 😉
waiting for the next part already...



finally u commented here...
thanks a lot dear...
me glad that u loved the past scene where she was hungry...
yup, this coming part is her new life in KM...

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give me 10 mins...
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give me 10 mins...
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koi hai yaha????
i want a pic...
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give me 5 mins...
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Aashiqui- A Musical Journey of Love


part-10



She went near the window and looked outside , the view of the garden just breathtaking, the greenery and the chirping sound of the birds, , and the fountain giving the awesome view of her eyes'.. while maan woke up early and went to his daily routine, , his tai-chi session where a sweet & serene smile was playing on his lips'..

He remembered last night events, how he was so desperate to hear good night from her mouth but at last he got good night from her and his sleep became so peaceful'' again a sweet appeared on his face remembering when she was enjoying near the fountain'..

He finished his exercise and headed towards his room for freshen up , , a feeling of calmness, serenity entered in dadi's heart when she saw her grand son all smiling by himself otherwise he didn't smile at her silliest joke''. She mentally smacked herself knowing the reason behind this reason of-course his fianc and her would be grand daughter in law Geet''

Dadi went to annie's room for waking her up otherwise she will be late for her college'.. on the other hand geet freshen up and went downside in the garden, taking the fresh breath in between all the beautiful flowers and trees, ,

When she reached in the garden, a some kind of new zeal filled in her mind and body after seeing the birds , their chirping voice and fresh dew drops on the leaves, in this early morning'. Well it's 6 am and monsoon came, so little chillness in the weather, , cool breeze is blowing giving goosebumps in her skin,,,,,

She removed the towel from her hairs and sat down on the swing which is placed in the mid of the garden near the pond and with lots of enthusiasm''she was watching the ducks, how cute she found them,'''



Maan freshen up and came out in his pants and a vest, where his coffee was already placed on the table'. He took the cup and went near the window for inhaling the fresh air but the scene mesmerized him, , he sipped his coffee which soothed his cool mind and gave little warmness to his body but his heart was beating so fast watching her, , she was wiping her hairs with towel standing in the garden near the flowers, she was unaware that a pair of intense eyes are watching her with immense love''.




After some time she went the pond and took the packet which is placed near by, that is the food packet for the ducks'.. she gave the food to the ducks''. Maan didn't knew that he is trying to sip coffee from the empty cup, he didn't realize when his coffee got over''. He smacked his head at his foolishness, , really he became like love sick puppy in her love'.. gosh what he'll do?

Around 8 am he came downstairs for the breakfast where everyone is present beside of geet'' "Good Morning dadi and annie" wished maan to both'' "good morning maan" wished dadi back to him and same with the annie''


"bhai, today you have to come to my college'. You know na your signature on the transfer letter is very important"''.. said annie to maan'.. "okie aanie, I'll be there" replied maan'' saying so he took the head seat on the dining table'..

"ummm''dadi where is geet?" asked maan looking here and there for geet''."pata nahi bte, humne geet ko dekha nahi hai abhi tak" replied dadi to maan where annie also spoke'. "haan bhai, maine bhi nahi dekha.." '' just then they heard a voice'. "I am here!" all turned towards the source of voice and found geet is standing there with a tray in her hand''.

All smiled with their heart , she came their with a great smile and placed that tray on the table , she wanted to do something for maan, she wanted to thank him and doesn't know how? Then she thought to make something for him as well for his family too'..at last she is going to be a bahu of this house'.. she knows that she doesn't love maan but he is her friend , ummm more than a friend and now it's her duty to make him happy, at least she can do this much for him as a thanks'.



She opened the lid of the bowl and here they smelled the sweetest smell ever of kheer'' the kheer was looking so mouth watering with lots of dry fruits''. "wow kheer'.." annie squirmed in happiness as she loved the kheer most'.. "thank u bhabhi' you know what I loved it so'so much as well bhai also" she winked slightly that is noticeable to geet only'..

Geet blushed at once hearing from annie that maan loves kheer but sudden nervousness penetrate in her heart, wishing that maan will like this kheer otherwise ''.otherwise chhaddo'..she said in her mind'''..

"geet bte, kheer dekhne mein to bahut acchi lag rahi hai" said dadi looking at maan who's eyes were continuously at the kheer bowl'.. geet is about to pour the kheer in the small bowls but dadi stopped her''.

"ek minute geet bte'' you make something for the first time in your would be house'''..actually ghar ki bahu jab pehli baat kuch banati hai toh bhagwaan ko bhog lagate hai sabse pehle aur aapne toh bahu banne se pehle hi bana diya'. Toh bhog lagana toh sabse pehle banta hai'" hearing that geet beamed with happiness'.. dadi took some kheer in the bowl and went towards the temple''

After some time geet served kheer to everyone, , dadi is the first one who tasted the kheer, , she stood up at once and looked at her'' she held geet's hand in hers, , everyone was shocked seeing this but then annie stood up and clapped when dadi placed a gold bangle in her hand'' that means she loved it'. Where geet was stunned and looking at her with her wide open eyes''

"dadi maa' par mai yeh kaise?" geet tried to interrupt dadi but she was stopped,,,,,,

"geet, , you are just like annie for me'.. aap iss ghar ki bahu se pehle beti hai, aap hamare mohinder ki beti hai aur yeh to shagun hai'. Jab bahu pehli baar meetha banati hai tab diya jata hai yeh shagun , waise hi aapne pehli baar kuch meetha banaya hai toh yeh shagun to banta hai '. Hai na maan?" asked dadi looking at maan but poor maan, he was caught now''..


actually dadi was busy in giving the bangle and maan babu was enjoying his kheer licking his lips, closing his eyes and same with annie'' hearing dadi's voice both looked at dadi horrified but dadi chuckled looking at him''''.. dadi hugged geet dearly and same with geet'..



Signaled them to continue their kheer session and she told to geet that sit beside maan'' she happily sat there'' there is no need to hear nay compliment from maan because anyone can understand by his expression and the way he was having kheer even he licked spoon too'' everyone get to see the child in maan''

"bhai, what you'll give to bhabhi?" asked annie after finishing her kheer''. "for what?" asked maan''.




Dadi gave mean look to maan while annie gave surprised look'.. "bhai, , obviously for this delicious kheer" replied annie knocking some sense inside his brain but she forgot that to whom she telling for giving the gift'. He already knew what he'll give to her'''

"for kheer'' umm'.. annie, first you tell me, what you'll give?" asked maan placing his arms on the table by the elbow and joined his both hands placing his chin over the looking in the direction of annie while geet was looking at her plate all the while'' she never knew that maan can be like , ummm like a little child and playful in rain, and yeah stern when it comes to work''..

"me'.. mai'..mai'.. kya dungi mai'..????" annie tapping her finger on her chin continuously and thinking looking up and murmuring all the options and rejecting them''' "obviously bhai'.. girls favorite''..shopping''" annie screamed with lots of zeal telling them about the shopping'''' "and like this me and geet bhabhi will come more close'.. " dadi and maan smiled and then shook their head like iska-kuch-nahi-ho-sakta''. "ab bataiye bhai'. What is your gift?" asked annie again'..

"no annie'' I don't want anything'." Told geet'..actually she is thinking that maan already done so many things for her and now another gift'.. that won't be nice'' "arey , kaise nahi'.. lena to padega'.. bhai pls tell fast'" annie was becoming impatient''

"before the gift, I have a condition" stated maan'' "now what bhai?" asked annie'. "maan, ye kya bacho jaise behave kar rahe hai.." told dadi to maan''


"dadi, ab ye childish ho adult ya gentleman wali wish, I don't know'' before that geet will feed me kheer by her hands'." Hearing that geet eyes jerked open like she got electricity current where maan was behaving like he innocent''..

"aahh'.. there is no big deal'. Hai na bhabhi'" saying so annie put the bowl in geet's hand and signaled to feed to her bhai so that she can get her gift afterwards''. Dadi smiled hearing his wish'.. geet felt very shy but she thought that at least she can fulfill his wish''.


Clutching the bowl tightly in her hand, she took the spoon full of kheer and move it towards maan's mouth where he opened his mouth and geet fed him'..




both were looking at each other so lovingly''.. maan got up from his seat and went on his knees'' one knee was touching the ground while another one was folded''..

"first, I'll kiss those hands who made this delicious, mouth watering, yummiest kheer" saying so he took her both hands in his and kissed her both hands respectively, ,




geet blushed hard , maan too while annie clapped loudly seeing so romantic scene and that too from her bhai'' there is no bound of happiness in the mansion while dadi praying silently that her kids always be happy like this''..

Edited by neha5058 - 12 years ago
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Yiepy me first. Thanks to deepa. Comment doongi after reading the update.
Hmm. Net ne ditch kia tha. So late comment. Neha you may wonder right that i din't give u comment till now. Who is me. Hai na. Koi bath nahi. Mai to phone se net operate karti hu na isi liye i can't give comments but only press like. Now i got the oppurtunity to comment first. So utilising the chance.
Update is superb. NOw wondering what gift will maan give to geet. Nice update yar. Eagerly waiting to know the gift.
Edited by maangeetforever - 12 years ago

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