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Susmita

@surprising

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Posted: 12 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: PhenoixTears
Very interesting concept, its quite a refreshing change from my regular stories. Awesome! Thanks for the PM, looking forward to read more!

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Prerna

@daydreamer...

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Posted: 12 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: surprising

plzz don't be too royal😎 to me that u loose ur criticizing mentality😒

btw thanks a lot🤗

& my friends call me SAHITIYIK (means authoress)😳

don't worry..i'll criticize it when i don't like something...as of now i haven't found any such thing...😊

and your friends are right...👍🏼

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Susmita

@surprising

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#123

Prerna:

my real life friends r jealous to u readers cum buddies, u know why??😉
coz u can read my stories😳 they nt😭

they too put such meaningless charge on me as m nt heedful 2 them...u readers snatch my all attention😛

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fatousha

@angel_prachi

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#124

wowww superbbb thnkoo so muchhh fr the pmmm😊

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proteeti

@sambhavami

Stunner

+ 12

Posted: 12 years ago

#125

Lovely Concept And Explanation !!!

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wondergirl1990

@wondergirl1990

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#126

interesting very interesting extremely surprising ...thanks for pm/...Arsh

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Shinja

@Rainbow_petals

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#127

first time i read something like this..

good interesting

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Susmita

@surprising

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#128

Please go through the next post before reading this update.

Part-2

In Neptune

Peace is wondering hopelessly.now-a-days he's avoided by all...even Father Neptune!! He too!!! Anger becomes king of their all members-LAUGHTER,WEEP,ANGER,APATHY,LOVE,CARE,HATRED,PEACE
,SMILE,DESIRE,AMBITION,DREAM ,GREED ,THIRST,PAIN & a lot of semi-members.

Suddenly he feels a compassionate touch-------Smile!

Smile- Cancer...yellow.
( Have patience friend)
Peace- Aries...Aquarius
(I know u belong to those who make people around them feel comfortable in their company.I too want to believe in the power of truth.)
Smile-Taurus...
( you are so passionate & romantic at heart)
Peace-Leo??
(I think at present you are leading the whole universe??)
Smile-black...
(no,it's not me at all...it's my evil entity that now-a-days defeats my good one.)
Peace- Green
(what?? what do u mean??)
Smile-Pink...Pink...Thirst
(I'm quite embarrassed...actually I'm...I'm...in love with Thirst)
Peace-😲😲😲
Smile-grey...Taurus...black Virgo
(I know I should be practical...but mind is so stubborn you know...& it never happens that we shall not take risk in love.)
Peace-pink
( good luck.)
Smile-pink...Green
( thanks...by the way could I ask u something??)
Peace- white.
( sure)
Smile-Reddened pink..Ambition??
( what about your passionate love towards Ambition??...your relation!!?)
Peace-Gemini...red
(you are too talkative...forget it...use your power & control tampered conversation of Budh-Universe.

Palace of Universe

Universe-Cancer??
( do u understand ur duty??)
Budh-white...Pisces
( sure,but there's a condition...if u care of my emotion)
Universe-Green??
( what's it??)
Budh-purple...brown...green??
( if u consider me to get separate from you-this universe...a little before which sound we have listened indicates my own shelter is ready now...what's your decision??)

Edited by surprising - 12 years ago

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Susmita

@surprising

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#129

Readers:

in this update,the words are coloured with the same colour whose meaning they indicate.plzzz read it with a little patience.I think you all will be able to understand this one without much trouble.Happy reading.😊

-Rumpu