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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: neha5058



you can use dear... 1st poem my frnd posted on fb... so no prob and 2nd one was shayari...lolz... in my msg box...


Okay dear can u tell me name of ur frnd so that I can mention her in the credits...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: OsheenDGr8


Okay dear can u tell me name of ur frnd so that I can mention her in the credits...



her name is anjali...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Edited by shrutheAjay - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
osheen do updtt pls ,waiting
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Posted: 12 years ago

MILAN- The Final Destination
PART- 105


@Temporary99
kick ass hehe, but u really touched me with your comment😳
@spvd
Sana is one of Geet's frnd frm New York
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loved ur comment dearo👏
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OMG was late still read three times...😲 wow
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Thnx a ton for spaming🤗
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U guys burned the thread today☺️
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Geet caressed Jia's head as she went to sleep.

It was late at night n Maan was still not back from office. She felt so sad when she thought about him leaving for office like he had. She was so overwhelmed with feelings, had so much to tell, to ask, to confess but all that just didn't come out. The emotions were many n words less.
She wanted to go back to that room, her room. Her eyes watered as similar sensations swamped into her as when she was in that heaven which Maan had created. Also there was that letter. She cursed herself for leaving it there in hurry. But in the flood of things she felt it was nearly impossible for her to think rationally that time.
Geet looked down at the little angel n kissed her forehead and came downstairs.
Aap abhi tak soi nai? Nakul asked.
Nai wo mai Maan ka wait kar rai hu.
Maan sir toh aa gaye. Wo gym ki taraf gaye the kafi deer pehle.
He came n went directly to gym? Thik hai. She told n went towards the gym.
His heavy pants welcomed her as she entered the gym n peeked from behind the pillar. Like he sensed her and she had to turn back to hide from him. Why was she hiding? Because he looked extremely angry, was he angry from her? Yes, the look on his face when he had left was an agreement to her doubts.
Maan shook his head. It wasn't new for him to feel her everywhere. Moreover the condition he was in right now didn't make mind very reliable. First, that visit to Rajendra n then the cops had called. After much investigation they couldn't find the shooter n were now skeptical that he was already migrated out of the country. It was a more of a blind search now. The thing which bothered him the most were Geet's wounds. Those may be on her hand but they cut through his heart n he felt the pain ten-fold. He was extremely disappointed with himself. Guilt was eating at him from his knowledge that he could have gone after her.
Even now he couldn't keep her happy. But she didn't talk, didn't say something, anything. And, her mood swings, one moment she seemed happy n other he found cuts on her hand. He didn't know what to do? How to turn the pages of her past n get his Geet, his toy girl back.
He was playing with the Nan-chak n as his attention strayed; it hit him on the back abrasively. He crouched down holding his shoulder but didn't miss her gasp, and the sound of her hurried steps towards him.
Mujhe chup ke dekh rai thi? Maan asked with a hurt smile while there were tears of pain in his eyes.
Yeh kya pagalpanti hai Maan. Geet said her jaws clenched and tears not behind. Chot lag gai na.
Before she could sit he stood up. She tried to see the damage on his back but was afraid to touch him. She was reason of his hurt, how much he loved n she failed him. It took all her effort to not sink on floor on his legs n ask for forgiveness. Would he ever forgive her?
He walked ahead, the fear on her face killing him. Koi farq padta hai Geet? She took steps back. Tumhe dard hota hai jab mujhe chot lagti hai? Mujhe padta hai. Jab tum khud ko dard pahuchati ho toh' He pointed towards his heart. yahan dard hota hai. She was backed against one of the pillar. Par tum nai samjhogi.
Mai kyu nai samjhungi? Mujhe bhi dard hota hai, bahut dard hota hai. The words remained trapped in her throat but she couldn't utter them. Tears leaked from her hazels n she wanted him to read her eyes. Bas yahi aata hai na tumhe. He punched his fist on the concrete beside her head. Maan' He didn't hear her call to him. Bas bebas karna jaanti ho mujhe inn assuon se.
Aisa nai hai Maan. She said n her voice broke. Mai aapko dukh nai dena chahti. Par' mai hamesha wahi karti hu. I am sorry Maan. Aap mujhse dur rahiye' She cried lowering her head and trying to wipe at her tears frantically. Mere paas aayenge toh aapko dard ke siwa kuch nai milega. Mai bahut buri hu. Sobs erupted from her mouth.
He tucked his fingers below her chin n raised her head up, having no idea why she was cursing herself but still furious. How dare she ask him to stay away from her? Tum kaun hoti ho mujhe batane wali ke mujhe kya karna hai aur kya nai. She had every right on him but she could never keep him away from her. He himself tried but that was something impossible. He could do anything but to love her was in his fate, a necessity. Mai tumhare paas rahunga hamesha, samjhi tum. Maan hugged her to himself n tears poured out from both their eyes. She wrapped her arms around him. The words written on the papers in that room repeated in her mind n she cried more while Maan just held her to him.
Their bodies molded together, tears dried n breathing evened.
His face was buried in her neck n without his knowledge his lips started loving her. Geet obligingly tilted her head. He said it right, who was she to tell him what to do. And he had every right on her. He was her husband n she was his, from heart to mind, from body to soul. He owned her in every way and she wasn't going to stop him ever from claiming her. His hand kept moving on her back and now his lips were tracing wet kisses along her jaw. They wandered down her throat, licking the base then coming up. Running his tongue over her cheeks he took in all her newly shed tears, kissed her eyes n his quest ended on her lips. He took her lips in his mouth. They were so soft n full. He couldn't stop nibbling n chewing them. She tried to match him but failed so just parted her lips slightly and he opened them further letting his tongue enter her.
The intensity increased. Maan squeezed her closer to him grinding his body against her, trying to satiate his rapidly growing hunger n Geet arched herself more into him moaning repeatedly. He pulled back, turned her around n pushed her into the pillar. Her hairs were an obstruction and he groaned. Geet pulled them in front baring the nape of her neck at his mercy. He opened the string of her kurti n pushed the sleeves down. His mouth replaced his hands and he sucked n bit all around to his heart content. He went to slip the kurti down completely but she held his hands and spoke breathlessly with her swollen lips. Maan koi dekh lega.
Right! He couldn't let anyone see his Geet like this? Without wasting another second he scooped her up into his arms n started towards his room. Geet was too taken over by lust and other emotions, just like him, to worry about anyone seeing them walking like this in the corridor.







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His mouth captured hers for another blazing kiss n she wrapped her hands around his shoulders, threading her fingers into his thick hairs. He winched suddenly n she stilled. Confused, Maan rubbed his body once more over her but she didn't responded and pushed him, sitting up. She came behind him n caressed her palm softly on the sour spot behind his shoulder. She forgot all about what they were doing n placed gentle butterfly kissed where he was hurt. Unlike her, Maan was still highly aroused. He kneaded her nipple and she pushed his hand away. Maan ek minute. She said sternly and Maan' he just loved her bossing over him. It was after sooo long. He could have jumped and danced.
She left the bed n after wandering around the room came back. Her fingers worked the balm soothingly on his back which she had brought n Maan sighed.
When she was done Maan pecked her eyes, cheeks and lips. Words created trouble between them so he didn't use any. He buried his face again into the crook of her neck to start from where they had left but she pulled back. Kya hua? He asked almost angry. Wo apko chot lagi hai. Am fine. He pulled her to him again. Hum' hum' she shied but continued at his impatient growl. Hum yeh baad me bhi kar sakte hai. He was stunned that she was accepting what they were doing. They actually didn't give any thought to it n were just going along with the flow but now she was indirectly giving him a mindful permission. How could he control now? Nai, mujhe abhi karna hai.
Aapko chot lagi hai. Her eyes were shinning in dark n he saw urgent request in them. With one more groan n pout he agreed. A man would have taken rejection in bed badly but Maan wasn't like that he knew she was keeping distance for him. Her moans were wanton n eyes demanding. He cursed the moment when he had winched. Despite all the understanding it didn't mean that he wasn't going to punish her for leaving him like that.
You will sleep in that corner. He pointed towards the other corner of the bed. Obviously she couldn't expect him to sleep with her in arms after what happened. With a fallen face she shifted to the corner. Facing away from him she pulled the quilt over her almost naked body with loads of tears in her eyes.
Maan after using the bathroom came to his own side of bed ready to sleep but who was he fooling? With an exasperated shake of his head he laid closer to her n pulled her back against him. His face was nestled in her neck while leg flung over her hips. Geet smiled n her heart fluttered with all the happiness in world. She placed her hand over his that was resting on her breast, ahem, heart and closed her eyes when he spoke again.
Am leaving early in the morning for Mumbai.
Geet turned her head to face him. Par... She started but stopped. She couldn't interfere with his work. Okay.

Hmmm... Maan closed his eyes; somewhere disappointed that she didn't even try to stop him. Even when the tour was quite important, if she had said just once he would have canceled it.
It disturbing to no limits, after what they shared he still wasn't sure how she actually felt n where they stood. He didn't want to ruin everything either n push her away, so just kept mum. At least she was willingly in his arms.















I know I know what u are thinking' Why I stopped there believe me I don't like teasing u guys. Okay, a little bit😛 but it was needed like I always say. Coming updates are full of twists n drama. I have typed the next one will update once 30 pages are filled😃😃




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Edited by OsheenDGr8 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
that was an awesome blossom one...
and i completely loved it to bits...
and finally... there goes our maaneet... haayeee... after so long they are happy... i mean though maan is not aware of the past and much is yet to be revealed, i completely loved it...
I loved geet's monologues... the room seriously just rekindled all her emotions... and she just is so guilty for not trusting him... i completely loved that part... and especially her waiting for him and wanting to go HER room... that was a small thing, but such a great improvement in her and their relation...
and ofcourse the gym thing reminds me of kehna hai kya always...
but that was beautifully written... i mean his anger on getting to no conclusions with both Geet;s past and the attempted murder... and on the other side the behavior of geet - happy and also hurting... u had expressed his helpless state so well...
he loves her,, but scared of her getting hurt... and now she has realized that the love was always for her and regretting for not trusting him ... so both are kind of disturbed in their own ways.. and yet completely in love...
and the pain and love gets expressed so much in their passion... the passion is so overwhelming their senses that they hardly care about other things when they are immersed in the other... and there again the care and love over took the desire to be together too...
Geet felt bad for him being hurt and maan is so much in love that he didnt take the denial in a wrong way... truly he was happy about her caring and bossing around..
And somehow unknowingly she kind of confessed that she is no where regretting their togetherness to maan's relief..
And the absolutely cutest part of the update was his cute anger and asking her to sleep on the extreme corner and then ignoring it and pulling her in his embrace... that was so cute...
waiting for the mumbai trip...
but seriously phir se u stopped at wrong point... 😕 but chalega.. will wait for the next


Edited by shrutheAjay - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Res!!!


EDITED..

Awesome Update Osheen 👏
Loved The Love of Maan singh Khurana 😃
Ahem ahem Part was Superb ☺️

Good thing is that He didnt MU Geet this Time 😳
He is going to Mumbai 😲
want More Maaneet Scenes
M blank what to comment more I dont know 😆
anyways Continue Soon 😊

Coming Attractionzz 😉

Edited by Sheen-Coolkiwi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
ossum dear
loved it
so finally geet wann to lv with mk again
grt dear
w8 fr twists
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Posted: 12 years ago
This part is supperbly expressed...hattz off yaar!

Maan...uff!He's hopelessly in luv with geet.I just aww-ed when he wanted to un-pause their *wink*. But Geet said baad mein bhi kar sakte hain..uff!maan ko toh maar hi daala.🤣maan showing puppy anger..hayyeee...soo HOT!!!😆

ha ha...maan ko toh pagal banake chod diya geet ne...Now how's he supposed to come out of his gaga land and not miss her and control himself??!Stupid Geet!maan ko kahinka nei choda tune🤣

putting a 5 star seal-mark on this update!

Btw thanx for reminding me to edit my reserved post here...by sending the pm😆aise hi karte rehna...cause i'm kinda famous for my ghajini memory😆


loads of love,
Zahran AKA Mushi.
Edited by Temporary99 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved the update.
Stopped at crucial point!!!!!
Continue soon.

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