GAURI,JAGAT WITH ANSH

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PART-2

it starts with anandi conversation with maahi

ANANDI: Mahi i told u to take care while driving that in long journey but u never listens our words jst think abot every one and y do they suggest u.

DOCTOR:Mam he is perfectly fit there is nothing to worry😊

MAAHI: Doctor please tell these words little louder so she may not tensed for this small thngs also

ANANDI: Maahi it seems to be small thngs for u but not for us aab aap mere saath ghar chaliye{she tells him seriously }

all the others will be in thier conversations no one will pay attention to anandi,shiv and maahi even gauri and jagat will be busy at listening at at thier senor doctor.

ANANDI: Maahi ghar chele.

MAAHI: Bhiyya mujhe bacha lijiyene babhi ki gussa say plzzz .

SHIV: Aaj tho tu gaya maahi mujhe pata nahi hey,yeah babhi devar ki beech ki baath hey mujhe nahi bolna hey.

MAAHI:plzzz bhiyya me aapko hamesha help karunga jab aapko mera cahiye bina kisi sharat ki i promise bhiyya.

SHIV: Tik hey me bhi aap logo ke saath ghar chaltha hu

MAAHI: Thanx a lot bhiyya aap tho bhagwaan heyπŸ˜ƒ

ANANDI: Ghar chale.

SHIV:Anandi ek kaam karthe hey mujhe kuch zaroori filles lena hey me bhi aap logo ke saath ghar aatha hu

ANANDI: Tik hey shiv chaliye.

MAAHI: Tho bhiyya ek kaam karenge aap aur babhi dono car me aayiye me bike par aajunga.

ANANDI: Aap ko lagtha hey maahi ki me aapko bike pe aane dungi bil kul nahi.

MAAHI:Babhi mujhe kuch nahi hua na aap kyo phikar kar rahe hey.

ANANDI: Maahi zid maath kariye me aapki baath sunne waali nahi hu.

MAAHI: Babhi tho meri bike ghar kisi aagyegi.

ANANDI: Shiv ek kaam karenge aap maahi ke bike ko lekar ghar aayiye me aur maahi ghadi se ghar chele jayenge.

SHIV: Tik hey ye idea bil kul tik hey.

shiv calls bs and tells him that he will be returning with in 1 hour and he informs to tell all the doctors to take rest for today as they have thier duties from tomorrow informing this shiv leavs frm thier with bike.Girls who r standing there thinks hw hot he is and that when he is driving bike.such type of hot personality working in village how sad na😭

Anandi along with maahi nad shiv they reaches ch anandi brings hot water and cleans up wounds wch slightly on his hands

MAAHI: Babhi sry i'll take care of me next time maan ligiye na IAM SORRY BABHi

ANANDI: [she keeps quite and does not reply anything]

MAAHI:[gestures shiv to talk to anandi]

SHIV :Interfears and tells Anandi chod di ji ye na ab maahi biltik hey na kyo itni phikar kar rahey hey ise maaf kar do na...

ANANDI: Shiv aap beech me maath boliye vise bhi ye hamari babhi aur ki beech ki baath hey aur pehele maahi ko nahi aapko datna hey jaab bhi bhiyya bike cahiye bas kuch sochenge nahi bas bike karid dethe hey. Agar ye baath ghar me batha hoga tho kitne pareshan honge aapko andaza hey

SHIV: Anandi ye kya baath hui is baar meri galthi nahi tha wo aap hi jo pichle baar maahi ne aapko manga tha aur aapne zid pakda aur mujse uske liye bike karid diya tha aur wo meri mana karne ke baadh bhi.Isme kiske galthi hey

ANANDI: Arey shiv me tho unhe sirf is baar uske liye bike karidh ne ke liye kaha tha par hamesha kaun karega ye kaam aap ya me.

SHIV: Anandi ...[he is gng to talk smthng and interrupts by maahi's phone]

MAAHI'S FRIEND: Arey maahi where r u?we all r waiting for u here.

MAAHi:ya... i'll be within 1 hr there.

MAAHI:bhiyya,babhi y u both r fighting coz of me babhi iam fine na... plz belive me iam sure this time i wont rise my bike speed more than needed plzz forgive me plzzz.Aap dono ki gussa katham ho gaya tho me chaltha hu.

ANANDI:Chalenge matlab aap tho abhi aaye the na. Rest tho kariye.

SHIV:ya...mahi anandi is right stay for sme time u came jst nw na.

MAHI:No bhiyya i had a small work near by i came till here i thght to meet u bth once bt all this gadbad hapnd.I need to go nw all my frnds r waiting there.sry agli baar jab aaunga i'll be here min for i week.But now i need to leave.

ANANDI:par maahi hw will u go again by bike

MAAHI: Babhi dnt take any tension iam ok and i dnt raise my speed of my bike promise babhi.

ANANDI:par maahi...

SHIV:Anandi leave it he will go safely i knw abt him leave it he is fine nw na...

ANANDI:Shiv aap beech me mat bholiye ye abhi hi tik hua na again he is gng by bike

MAAHI:No babhi iam fine i can go but i promise i'll go by min speed i promise u .sry. BYE bhiyya babhi. take care

ANANDI:tik hey samhalke jayiye bye

SHIV:bye maahi.as u reach call us.

MAAHI:Sure bye bye

ANANDI:Shiv chaliye i'll arrange lunch for u

SHIV:No need iam not hungry[he is angry on anandi]

ANANDI:kya hua y u r nt hungry.ur health is fine na.

SHIV:Iam fine but iam jst tensed coz of u.u'll be being tensed for every one bt u wont thnk of ur self if u'll be tensed alwaz wat happns for ur health.

ANANDI:nthng hpns for ur there na. leave all this come for lunch.

SHIV:NO i dnt want.

ANANDI:ok if u wont eat even i wont eat then i am sure mujhe bimar aajayegi tab mistake aapki hoga mera nahi sochiye.

SHIV:Anandi tum bhi na.u can convince me by telling ur name.tis nt fare.

anandi servs food for shiv.

SHIV: Anandi aap tik hey na?

ANANDI:Mujhe kya hua iam perfectly alright

SHIV:no...tat jagdish came to jaitser with his wife u r alright na.I mean past will hurting u na

ANANDI:No...shiv i dnt care who came and who will go shiv they two members also as remaining doctors for me hw i treat every one in those doctors and they r also smae for me.mujhe un dono ki phikar nahi hey aur nahi mujhe apni past yaad aagayi.agar me purani nandi ho tho mujhe zaruur yaad aathi thi takleef hothi thi.But,now iam yours only urs i dnt wanna remember those bad dreams coz dreaming sweet dreams with u.so i dnt wanna thnk abt them.I'll be normal to them hw i'll be with another doctors who came with them.If iam tensed for only 1 thng if my family sees them hw they react.jst thnkng of that iam flng tensed.

SHIV:Dnt wry anandi iam with u na...dnt wry no one reacts towards them and they for thier work so they will be in thier work.

ANANDI:😊Shiv aap aaj zaldi ghar aayenge

SHIV:aaj kyo isa kya khas hey aaj koi khaas night hone waali hey tho i'll nt go to the office nly work is also nt there iam free today.waiting till night it is nt possible for me[saying those he comes near anandi. anandi keeps her finger on his lips].

ANANDI:Shiv aap bhi na besharam kise baathe karthe hey kuch sooch the hey.mai baas isliye puuch rahi hu taki ham dono mandir jayenge aaj friday hey na...

SHIV: tik hey jise aapki order sarpanch ji 😊.Coleector shab tho hamesha sarpnch ji ke baath maanthe hey par sarpanch ji tho ek baar bhi uski baath nahi sunthi hey😭

ANANDI:😊hw sad na bad sarpanch hey na. kya karenge adjust karna padega na...

SHIV:😊 tik hey bye shaam jaldi aajaunga bye.

ANANDI: bye shiv

SHIV:sirf bye aap bhul gaye bye kiss nahi hey

ANANDI:wo sirf mrng wen ur gng to office

SHIV:no bye kiss and welcome shld be given wen ever u or me will gng out and cmng back ok.

ANANDI:😳

[shiv gives her gentle kiss on her lips and says he can work more nw coz he go glucose.anandi beats him on his hand.shiv will be starting to office and says to be ready he will b coming soon and they will leave for temple]

in guest house gauri will thnkng of anandi.jagat comes there

JAGAT:Kya hua gauri isa kya sooch rahi ho

GAURI:Tumhe batha nahi hey ki me kya sooch rahi hu

JAGAT:Gauri tum itni gusse me kyo ho kya hua sab tik hey na

GAURI: No jagat kuch tik nahi hey aaj tumhe anandi ko dekha na hw she changed herself .i thnk she and ur family members r in plan to take u away for me so they changed anandi for u as u like.

JAGAT:nahi gauri tum bekhar me sooch rahi ho isa kuch nahi hey. I lOVE U i'll be alwaz with u tum anandi ke baare kyo sooch rahi ho aur naahi anandi or mera family members isa soch rahe hey.

GAURI: then anandi kyo badal gayi bahut alag dik rahi hey

JAGAT:he will be thnkng that anandi was really beutiful today and he never saw anandi lyk thta wen she was with him

GAURI:jagat jagat kya hua kya sooch rahi ho aur kiske baare me sooch rahe ho

JAGAT:comes back frm dreams isa kuch nahi hey tum hamesha mujhe kyo galat samjthi ho me baas tumhari baath ke baare soch raha hu

while they will be discussing among them selevs they heard some voice and stops thier discussion they look back thier frnds will be comming near them.they will be talking to jagat

gauri and jagat frnds will represting as flg way

Male doctor-MD,Female Doctor-FD

MD-1:Jagat tum aaj us sarpanch ko dekha hw beutiful she was me tho us par fida ho gaya hu.agar shadi karunga thi ise ladki se shaadi karna hey.if she is nt married i'll try her

MD-2:ya...ur right yaar she so cute in saare that to that colour suits her nice.agar uski shaadi ho gayi hothi tho uska pathi tho bahuth lucky hey yaar puri duniya me

Jagat and gauri will listening to thier coversation and they will be getting angry on her.{jagat is angry coz they r talking abt anandi lyk tis}.{gauri is angry coz they were praising anandi as she was princess}

MD-2:tum kise puch rahe ho jagat say uss ladki key baare me kyo puch rahe hey ho uski shaadi ho gayi hey aab usko ise rights nahi hey.dusri ladki ko dekthe tho gauri tho uska murder karegi.

meanwhile some girls come there and says that to day we all r free na y cant we see the places here. we can go to temple na wats say guys every one agrees gauri is nt intrested bt every one forces her she agrees to come.

eveng 5:00pm

SHIV:[in theoffice he calls anandi] anandi sry mujhe aaj aap ke saath mandir nahi aapaunga sry mujhe bahaut urgent kaaam aagayi aur dinner par bhi aap meri intezaar matyh kijiye mujhe me bahar ka raha hu koi deligates aa rahe hey late hoga sry

ANANDI:koi baath nahi hey shiv wise maa,taiji,bhi mandir aa rahe hey me unlogo ke saath chalungi.

SHIV:tik hey anandi bye

ANANDI:bye shiv.

anandi goes to badi haveli

DADISA:Anandi tum akele aayi ho shiv kaha hey wo nahi aaa rahe mandir.

ANANDI:nahi dadisa unki phone abhi aayi hey kehrahethe ki unko koi zaruuri kaam hey aur raath khane par bhi nahi aa sakthe hey.

DADISA:Tho raath tum khana yaha ka kar jha ghar tum akeli nahi kaugi

ANANDI:nahi dadisa uski zaruuri nahi me ghar jakar kaungi.

SUMITRA:laado mandir me aarthi hone tak der ho jayegi ghar jaakar tum aakeli ke kahna tum nahi babaugi.tum kahogi bukh nahi aur so jaayegi

ANANDI:nahi maa me kaungi.

DADISA:Chori har baath par zid kar rahe ho tum yahi khana ka rahi ho bas

bhairon comes there and they talk for some time and bhairon tell that gauri and jagdish came here with that doctors .every one gets angry anandi consles every one and tells not to react with them coz they r with thier frnds,evevry one says ok but sumitra is very angry on them.

every one reaches temple there mean while gauri jagat comes there with thier frnds there.

anandi and others all praying for god.meanwhile one of the frnds of jagat tells there she is...

every one looks at himarey tum sab mujhe kyo dekh rahe ho me tho us sarpanch ke baare me baath kar raha hu.she also came to temple.gauri and jagat to see all thier family members there.she is tensed and looks at jagat he calms down with his eyes.but she thinks yaha kya tamasha hone wala hey mujhe mandir me bhi shaanth nahi hogi is anandi aur uski pariwaar ki wajh.ye sab milkar meri jagat ko mujh se cheen lenge and she prays please god help that mere frnds ke saamne ye sab koi tamasha nahi karenge.

Anandi and all others prays and they will sitting they will be seeinf gauri and jagat but they will nt react they will be normal and jst dnt care of them and she says dadisa aap log bait jaayiye mujhe 11 pradakshin karne hey.every one agrees and sees she very happy with her new life and prays that let her life be alwaz happy lyk tis and says kisi ki buri nazar nahi lagna cahiye in dono par.

she finishes her pradkshins she came near her family members and about sit she heard a voice gud eveng mam

MD-1:gud eveng mam pehchane mujhe aap

ANANDI:she looks confused and says oh namasthe aaj aap tho doctor hey jo hamare jaitser me aaye the

MD-1:Thnx mam aap ne mujhe pehechane hey

ANANDI:Nahi ise koi baath nahi hey.wise aap yaha''''.

MD-1:Actually mam I came with my frnds.hum sab ko bas mandir jana man kiya tha bas ise aa gaye.wait sec mam I'll introduce u to my frnds

ANANDI:agli baar jab milenge tab introduce kar sakthe mujhe ab jana hoga.

MD-1:ni mam ba das min lagegi.

MD-1 come with all his frnds

MD-1:[introducing every one to anandi]jagat and gauri r tensed tat he introducing every one to anandi.

Turn comes to gauri

MD-1:Mam this is gauri aur ye unka pathi jagat hey.

Every one in the family looks seriously at them.Anandi sees at them and tells them namsthey as she greeted every one.even those two told namasthey to anandi.Anandi intoroduces every one her family every one greets them bt that MD-1 touch the legs of dadisa for her aashirwaad.Meanwile pujari calls anandi sarpanch bitiya prashad lijiye she excuses and leaves frm there.Gauri follows her.Anandi takes prashad frm the priest and she keeps sindoor in her maang this was noticed by gauri and she comes near anadi and tells her that jagat is now her husband she cannot take him back as she was keeping sindoor also and dressig up lyk tis for jagat she tells her and she goes back frm their before anandi could speak anythng.

ANANDI:she laughs at herself and thinks that she never change coz she does nt have trust in her or jagat.

She come back where her family was MD-1 was gng speak somethng sumitra interferes and tells her that laado hame chalna hey dher ho gayi hey.she tells bye to every one and about to leave one of the girl call anandi mam one sec

FD-1:Mam sry i need to ask u one thng {every one in her frnds sees wat she was gng to ask and also singh's family is seeing her wat she is about to ask}

ANANDI:Bholiye kya puchna hey mujhe and please aap sab mujhe mam math bulayiye mera naam anandi hey aap sab mujhe anandi bhula sakthe hey.

FD-1:So'.anandi can u tell me where is collectore sir's house please

ANANDI:she is confused for her question y she was asking lyk tat

All her frnds were laughing for her question'''and dadisa heard the question and interrupted her before anandi could ask any question to her'

DADISA:Chori tumhe collector ghar kyo?

FD-1:She was afraid by seeing her and tells that she some doubts and nt nly she her frnds have doubts

DADISA:Isa kuch hey tho collector office ja uska ghar jane k kya zaroorath hey

Anandi stopped dadisa and tells not talk lyk tat

ANANDI: aap unka office jayiye wo office me honge kal jakar unse miliye aaj unko bahuth kaam hey jis say aap sab se mil nahi paayenge

FS-1:She agrees and tell thanx for her information

Anandi leaves from there with her family.Jagat was sad that none of his family member talked to him,gauri notices and tells that this all is becoz of anandi.even he agrees and come into the words of gauri.even they all leave from there.All frnds of FD-1 were laughing at her

FD-2:Tumhe zaroori hey kya anandi ji say collector sir ki ghar ke bhare me poochna?

FD-3:ya'she is right y did u ak her and u got in return scoldings of her dadisa

FD-1:Anandi ka dadida ko kyo me us collector ke ghar baare me puche tho nad gave me free advise to meet him at office even I knw but I wanna see him and do friend ship with him''''''''''.

Every one laughs at her they reach their guest house,but still gauri was thinking about anandi and says herself that she has given a nice class to anandi wch makes her to be control still they leaves from here.

BS comes to guest house and ask them wether they were comfortable here as sir was asking abot them every one says they were glad tobe here.FD-1 thinks to ask BS about collector sir house he will be known.

FD-1:BS ji namasthey

BS:namasthey

FD-1:I wanna small information from u can u pls

BS: Me sarkari ke kaam karne waala hu aapki kaam nahi ye koi kane ka kicj=hidi nahi hy samjha aapne

FD-1:Ha me koi apne kaam ke liye aapse baath kar rahi hu me tho bas sarkari kaam ke baare baath karne waali hu

BS:Tho tik hey kya puch ne wale the aap puchiye

FD-1:Collector sir hey na unka ghar kaha hey

BS:Wo hamara sir ka ghar yaha he is gng to tell he gts call frm shiv

SHIV:BS kaha ho tum

BS:Sir bas guest house aya sir

SHIV:Tik hey waha saara arrangements ho gaya hey na tum jaldi office aaja ek imp file ka kaam hey

BS:S sir abhi aaya.He leaves frm there without giving any information.

Anandi leaves frm badi haveli and she gets call frm shiv.

SHIV:Anandi kaha hey aap.

ANANDI:Shiv bas abhi ghar pahunchi aap ghar kab aane vale hey

SHIV:Bas 10 min

ANANDI:kana kaya aapne

SHIV:Ha anandi mera dinner ho gaya aur aapki

ANANDI:JI ho gaya hey

SHIV:tik hey tho me aaraha hu

Aanandi got freshed and she wore her nighty as daily,meanwhile shiv came to home they were talking for sometime then she told shiv about gauri and her conversation in temple shiv got angry on gauri for insulting anandi and he told tat he will give answers for her questions but she told that she talked without knwing so'.leave it and she told dadisa scold the girl who asked his house address and they laughed for sometime.Anandi told she had forgot to keep milk in the fridge she left kitchen as he went back of her and hugged her from back,she laughed and told aaj tho collector shab bahut aachi m,ood par hey kya baath hey subah say dekh rahi hu kya hua.He turned anandi towards him and gave her a sweet kiss on her softy lips.

in the morning shiv got and saw anandi was still sleeping and he was thinking to him self that today night she will be getting a surprise and tomorrow is a big for him after their marriage this was anandi's birthday which he was more excited more and the plans were gng for her birthday''''''''''.he staring at her continuously.Anandi got up she saw shiv was staring at her she was lil bit shy and they have hug and anandi went for fresh up and shiv got up and got freshed up himself both finished their break fast.shiv dropped anandi near school and he went to office but he was in the arrangemens of anandi birthday

Jagat was bsy in camp and his thought gone upon the date and thinks that tomorrow is anandi's birthday and he was thinking hw they would celebrate anandi's birthday but this he cannot even wish her'''''.

In badi haveli and in udaipu preparations will be gng on '.as shiv instructed them to do'''' every one r eager of anandi's birthday coz it was her first birthday after the marriage

Day passed away it was night 9:00o'clock they both were having dinner together and they slept '''..and shiv excited about the surprise he is gng to give her at 12:00 o' clock

THANX FOR UE REPLIES AND FOLLOWED UR REPLIES AS U ALL SUGGESTED ME EXPECTING FEEDBACK FOR TIS PART ALSO.ANY MISTAKES PLZ XCUSE ME

Edited by SGOSH - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very goodπŸ‘πŸΌ. Awaiting for next update...πŸ˜‰
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very good update...and i love the new development of story...it's makes the story for interesting and long...good to see you took care of paragraphs...update more and soon plz πŸ‘
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Posted: 12 years ago
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arre yeh kya bech may aakla chord diya... nw i wanna knw wat surprise dey gve her,,, n plz yaar jaldi mat batana gauri n jagu ko ansh kay bare may...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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GOOD ONE PLS UPDATE SOON...
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Arre yaar, we just loved this plot, wanted to see this in the show.. I'm imagining SY as my AnSh, and it feels so good to read ur story, continue soon pleaseπŸ˜›, can't wait for next update..
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hey nice plot...it wud have been so much fun to see this in the show...but alas!!! do update soon...by the way where is the first part...i dont see it in ur post!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice part dear... 😊
one more suggestion.. when u write down their thinking mode.. write down that parts in ( ...) so it will easier for us.. 😊
nd i m waiting for Shiv's surprise for Anandi's birthday..
nd hw J-G will aware about Ansh mrg...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
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Superb update

waiting for the next
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing...aiting for the surprise and gauri and jagat's reaction aftr knowing abt AnSh marriage...hope we got to see this in serial...

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