Amor Sorte Et Sacrificium-UPDT-PG-23/25-10-2013 - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: jyotimeena

Itz so great and different.just lovin it<3

awww thanks dear...till now i am sucessful at it keeping Non SPN..lets hope i can maintain it in the actual story 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
NOTE :

dear Readers ...i forgot to mention that this story has a NARRATOR😃..and that will be me...Narrator will Fill you all with the back story... in between when the actual story is taking place...as its a time bound FF...and actual story is very imp
...Narrator comments will be in Blue 😳

and now i am finished with the Prologues...*phew*...
from now on it will be the actual Chapters..😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
hi L
woah nice and interesting
It's different and I love it!!
awesome update
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: SPNnIPKKNDlover

hi L

woah nice and interesting
It's different and I love it!!
awesome update

hi mally 😊
thanks dear...that's what am aiming for 😳
awww thank you 😃
thank you
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
wow, i liked this prologue too! I can't wait to read the rest!👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
The prologues have been outstanding, L! Can't wait to read the chapters. You've set it up very nicely, I'm so interested to see how the story unfolds.
And you are a very good writer! Awesome style.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: -Mystery-

The prologues have been outstanding, L! Can't wait to read the chapters. You've set it up very nicely, I'm so interested to see how the story unfolds.

And you are a very good writer! Awesome style.

are you sure mahi??😕

that's my fear..after so much of hype..what if the actual story falls flat?? on all the expectations...

am no way like you..."not even close in his best days"...as sam would say..😳
thank you...but am i making sense??? is it too much description and too less story ?? or is it evenly balanced??
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i love you L for the non- SPN ff😳🤗 while reading it i was recalling how once we had a discussion in JP AT about he being a russian spy and all😳 i love the way you put forth your story👏👏👏👏👏⭐️ it is amazing, L and very different😃 and i was thinking of asking you the same question but i saw that jo has already asked you that..to some extent the first prologue reminded me of prison break😳 and as you have mentioned that you have not watched it, may i recommend you the series? it is truly awesome, trust me and you are going to love micheal scofield aka wentworth miller for sure😳 anyway, me going off topic coming back to your ff, please update asap..it is so refreshing to see J2M in a different perspective altogether and delightful as well😛 love you☺️
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: sayanti_ashiuv

i love you L for the non- SPN ff😳🤗 while reading it i was recalling how once we had a discussion in JP AT about he being a russian spy and all😳 i love the way you put forth your story⭐️ it is amazing, L and very different😃 and i was thinking of asking you the same question but i saw that jo has already asked you that..to some extent the first prologue reminded me of prison break😳 and as you have mentioned that you have not watched it, may i recommend you the series? it is truly awesome, trust me and you are going to love micheal scofield aka wentworth miller for sure😳 anyway, me going off topic coming back to your ff, please update asap..it is so refreshing to see J2M in a different perspective altogether and delightful as well😛 love you☺️

well THAT discussion was out of blue😲...but again...its sorta fate i guess😆
thanks hon..missed your Comment all these days
being diff is my aim
well as of now there is this 12-13 shows i got to watch recommended by my dear amigos..but have no time as such still will try to watch it
its ok as i am TM of this thread its fine if you go a little off topic...i won't mind
sure today i will😃
well that's what am aiming for hope i can sustain that feeling...
love you too hon
thanks for the preious comment

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Before i start with the actual story..i would like to share the actor in mind for the various roles
important ones would be now..the supporting cast would be shared as and when story requires..

Mr.James Blackwell
.. the charismatic Jensen Ackles
Dmitri Ivanov...that would be immensely talented Jared padalecki
Mr.Dominic Parker...the Awesome Misha Collins
Narrator...That would be ME 😛...

[Blue sentences are that of Narrator's]

[all the chapters will have 3 parts..baring few ]

CHAPTER-1

when a man is pushed to the limits...he finds a new meaning to his life..a new purpose which fills him with strength...its not a hard fast rule that once a thief should always be a thief...
But ALAS!! in realty second chances are rare...
the same thing happened with our one of the leads here...
Mr.Dominic Parker...had an envious life...a successful lawyer at the International Court of justice ..married to a renowned Beautiful Doctor... had Impressive Track record and Looks...Shrewd Mind to the point of cunning...Never-Give-up attitude..not to say Millions of bucks at various Banks...
As we all know things achieved by unfair means does not lasts long...poor Mr.Dom...i mean Mr.Parker he being all intelligent ...underestimated life in his arrogance...and hence when life got back at him...it gave him a nasty shock..
optimistically...there is always a light at the end of tunnel right?? Thank fully Dom did have the senses to SEE the right opportunity life was throwing at him..grabbed it..and earnestly started to change himself...
as an afterthought Why does people need a sound thwacking by life to come to their correct senses? i son't get it...is way above me..so i guess Dom shouldn't be angry..after all he broke the trust...rebuilding it is a gargantuan task isn't it? what say friends??...


Office of the Chief Superintendent

Connecticut Valley Hospital for the Insane

Middletown, Connecticut

5th July, 2013

10 : 30 a.m

"I need this patient's file Mr.Hapsberg ...and I believe I have been denied thrice already..." said Mr.Dominic Parker (for all purpose whom we shall address him as DOM...just the way he DOES NOT likes to be called)...

Mr.Hapsberg was lean and aging with thick round glasses balding from front...with wisps of grey hairs near his temples...but his physical bearing wasn't least Intimidating...although anyone seeing him would feel... Instant Respect..."your Belief is well placed ...Dom ! I did see an application of that sort...and indeed rejected it thrice...yet you are Here.." he said.. leaning back on his seat and and with his hands together finger tips touching..

"Its parker"corrected Dom automatically... pressed further... "I wanna know why? When I have stated my reasons and intended purposes..."his calm behavior was sort of misplaced in the present situation...only he knew In what condition he was..right now...

"so shall it be...Mr.Parker...you being man of law and all ..should be aware of the protocol..."stated Mr.Hapsberg in a straight Business-like tone..disapproving the man in front of him..by the minute.."and besides...there is this patient-Doctor privilege... which you are trying to breach...and this patient happens to be MY patient.. Unless you have come through proper channel following protocols..and can CONVINCE me about your..this...this supposed intention(sarcastically).i am afraid i will be of no help...Have a nice day "

The stress he did with sudden inflection of his tone with the words "my"and "Convince" pretty much ended this topic for Dom.

(.but the relentless man he is...he wasn't gonna be bogged down by this..he had seen much worse "co-operation" in his 15 years of law career...nevertheless he was a bit worried..on the inside..which his ego wouldn't allow him to admit.... it would take just moments to use "connections" to get the job done..owing to his status in the society...but he din't wanted that..as he was trying to change,...)

he came out of the office his high end latest Mobile rang..not in any mood to talk to any one at the moment he din't pick the call..instead he went to the Nurse's station as a small plan formed in his cunning mind..he rapped his knuckle twice at the warden's door...but there was no one inside ..he looked for the warden left and right in the corridor and waited for a bit...it was more than a hour ..as each passing hour was precious to him...he decided to leave a note to the warden..she was a kind lady...and was the one who informed him of the Doc overseeing this patient..Although she instantly regretted divulging this info...on seeing the look on his face..

He wrote a note and requested a meeting later in the day...As he drove back to his home (much more like a palace it was..)...his phone rang again...he ignored it.. gave the key to the valet to park his car and went up to his bedroom..got changed..and was about to catch some much needed sleep when his phone rang again..this time Dom bothered to check who was it...and he was..taken aback..for a while didn't knew what to do...nevertheless picked it up against his wish

(its hard to face the people who truly loved you and cared for you..after the trust is broken)

"am doing what I should...at least I Think am doing the right thing...yet you think am not humoring you" Dom said resigned...

"I know THIS time you aren't lying DP...its hard to trust you.,.am hoping against my past experience that you will change..am not sure for how long this will last..but I do know..this is last of the chances..to you..to me..to us.." replied an accented detached voice..with no emotions..as if no feelings existed any more...it was Dr. Anita Parker..Dom's estranged wife...AND his Orthopedic Oncologist (That would be Bone cancer specialist)

"And you think I don't feel the same way??.."he ran his free hand through his hair and exhaled heavily... "things Change..CHANGE... for god's sake Anita! So did ...-" Before he could finish Anita said "lets not have this Discussion again...i called you 'cos you are late for an appointment...look... I dunno what you think.." "i hardly know you these days"she added as an afterthought "but For me each and every patient of mine is important..so as your doc I expect seriousness .. if I had my way I wouldn't have bothered you about this..but being professional i have t.---"

Dom replied in a decided tone "Don't Worry Doc!"he stressed the word Doc hurting ... "I know to KEEP promises...but for now Thank you for your CONCERN.." again he stressed the word concern more than needed... "I appreciate it"he ended the call curtly and threw the mobile in half-rage Half-Guilt...with such force that it broken into smithereens and parts flew everywhere...




Edited by lakshmi_3004 - 12 years ago

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