ARSHI FF- THE PURSUIT-Chpt-60/5,p.118,23rd Feb. - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
nice update ...loved how khushi is with deeptiman all care free n relax ...lyk der tossils ...
finally i guess he will be out with all things he has buries in his heart ...its very important to let it go !!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
A fab update...arnav ; khushi nd maan...lovd it completely
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
Beautiful update! can you update Vishali too, Please!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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THE PURSUIT-39
THE MIRAGE-II


SSNAIR
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"Dogi?" He pleaded with her!

"Maan!" Khushi hesitated!

He caught her hands and touched them to his forehead bending his head and said," Mujhey taqleef hothi hain! Please!Aur Maa ayengi tho woh zaroor tumsey puchwaayengi!Pakka! Please Khushi?"

( It hurts me please don't! And Mom will for sure make you talk to me! For sure on this subject! )

Khushi found it weird but she said," Maan Shaadi... karney sey..."

( Maan getting married...)

"Khushi promise me! You will not talk to me about it come what may!" Deepthimaan said loudly!

"Theek hain per ek sharth pey" she said!

( Ok but on one condition!)


"Kya?" Deepthimaan asked!

"Aap mujhey bathaayengey kyun nahi! "

( You will share the reason with me)Khushi said firmly!


"Nahi!" ( No) Deepthimaan said with equal conviction!

"Kyun?"( Why?) Khushi was adamant as ever


"Bus Khushi chalo andar chalein?"( Enough Khushi! Shall we go in?) Deepthimaan said to her ending the conversation abruptly.

"Maan aap jab taq nahi bolengey hum yahaan sey nahi hilengey!" Khushi said settling further up on the rock!

( Till you won't tell me, I shall no budge from here)


Deepthimaan got furious! His face went red with rage and he said," I don't think it necesary to share with you the reason for my refusal to get married!"

That hurt and Khushi just smarted as his words hit her with full force!

Deepthimaan saw the hurt in her eyes and just smashed his fist into the rocky ledge to his right!

...and his fist was covered with blood! Khushi yelped and caught his hand just in time but sank to the ground as her feet gave way!

Deepthimaan caught her and yelled at her," ek jagah naheen baith sakthi? Kyun aapkey dard kam nahi hain ki doosronka qhuredney chali ho?"


Khushi had never seen him so angry with her! Anger he had in him but never for her! He seldom spoke to her in a loud voice in the first place... her voice constricted and she croaked a stears rolled down her cheek," Akhir kya hain ki aap kisee sey apney aapko judney nahi dey rahe ho?"

( what is it that is not allowing you to connect with any one?)


"My theek hun!" ( I am alright!)Deepthimaan thawed a little noticing her tears!

"Nahi aap Theek nahi hain! Aap ko hua kya hain?

( No you are not! Whats wrong with you?)

"Kaun hain woh ladki jo aapko itna dard dekey aapka dil is tarah sey tod di, ki woh jud ney ka naam hi nahi letha hain??

( Who is that girl who has given you so much of pain and broke your heart so badly that it won't mend?)


"Khushi ek shabd aur nahi!"( Not one word!) Deepthimaan yelled at her!

"Nahi! Hum jaanna chahthey hain aakhir hua kya ki aap aisey ho gaye? Kya kiya usney?"

( No I want to know what has happened that you became like this? What did she do?)

"Bus Khushi! Chalo!" he huddled her towards the banglow!

"Nahi kya kiya usney?"( No what did she do?) Khushi was adamant and now she was like a small child... unreasonable in her demand to know what hit her friend so bad!

For a man like Maan, to be so depressed and in absolutely hopeless was impossible! What did the girl do to him to make him so... so... desolate? Khushi thought!


Deepthimaan nerves snapped and he just yelled," Shut up"

Khushi stared at him shocked! He never said such things!

Deepthimaan smoted his fist on his forehead and turned to punch it yet again in frustration but this time Khushi anticipating his move,kept her palm in between taking the blow and yelped!

Deepthimaan was taken aback and caught her hand asking anxiously," Khushi lagee tho nahi? I am sorry! I am sorry!"( Did you get hurt?)


"Bathaayiye!" ( Tell em?) Khushi asked

"Dikhaavo tho sahi" ( Just show me) he wanted to check her hand!

"Nahi Jab taq nahi bathaayengey nahi dikhaayengey hum!"

( No till you tell em I won't!)

Khushi decided that she will wrest it out of him!Then and there!


"Khushi you are.." Deepthimaan could not finish...

"Jo bhi hain per hum yeh jaan na chahthey hain aakhir kya bath hain!" Khushi spoke again

( Whoever it is... I want to know whats the issue)


"Kya ho gaya ki aap shaadi key naam sey hi chidthey hain!Kitni...khudgarz hogi woh ladki..."

( What has happened that you don't want to get married! How selfish of her)
"Rana!Chup!" Deepthimaan's tone hardened!


"Nahi! Jawaab chahiye!"Khushi yelled back!

( No! I need an answer)


"Kya hogaya Maan?"( what happened?) she yelled keeping her hand behind her back as he bent to check it!

"Kya hogaya? Aapko humaari kasam hain! Bathaayiye! "Khushi demanded.

( what happened! Tell me!)

"Nahi Khushi please!" he pleaded with her! Khushi in a quick moment bent and flicked the gun he kept besides him on the rock and pointed to herself and said "Boliye nahi tho aapko patha hain hum Jethwa hain hum apney aapko...!"


"NAHI!Mujhey gun doh Khushi!"( No! Give me the gun Khushi!) Deepthimaan said his eyes redding!

"Kya hua Maan?Aakhri baar pooch rahein hain!" She released the latch and yelled at him.

( what happened! The last time I am asking )

"Meri shaadi ho chuki hain! Bus! woh hua hain!"

( I got married thats all has happened!)


Deepthimaan yelled back and as she stared at him in shock he coolly collected his gun and tucking it in his waist band said,"Ab hath dikhaao Rana!"( Show me your hand now)



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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
Omg_To whom Deeptiman gt married??😲
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
omg im on 1st page like after a long time... Amazing update luved it maan's pain is clearly visible...nw 1 thng is eatng me whom wil he introduce as his wife?? Update it soon
Edited by laadgrnr_jalebi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
Wow, another superb update. I'm glad that Arnav trusts Khushi enough to allow her to confront a man that loves her. He completely trusts his wife and her love and dedication for him that he has no ounce of jealousy or suspicion. I'm happy that Khushi was adamant to know about the girl that turned her friend's world upside down. She even took a blow and threatened to harm herself if Maan didn't confess. But Maan lied instead of telling the truth. He fears to lose the bond that he shares with Khushi but their bond is too precious to be lost just because he loves her. Khushi would want Maan to move on and live a happy life.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
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i am talking only about mirage ok.



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it was awesome
love the conversion and twist
Edited by salooni - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
Simply awesome. Missed couple of updates. But, finally caught up o it. So much happened between Arnav and Khushi. Khushi confession. Arnav almost lost his control. Then Mann and khushi's relation. Arnav knew Mann is hurting bad inside. He wants to help him overcome it. But I understand Mann is scared he will loose khushi's friendship too if the truth is out . Arnav is no more jealous of Mann and khushi's bond after khushi's confession. But, why did Mann say he is married even if he is not. Is it just to keep Khushi from asking more or is there more to it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
Wow, wow, wow. Deepu is married? OMG!
Please continue soon!

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