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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ritzy09


awesome updates dear...

soory for late response...my daughter is still unwell...
Glad that maan told her what was in his heart and Geet was upfront as well...Meera is confused or has she judged what is going on...
anyways, loved both parts immensely



hoping ur daughter get well soon
Meera know about wat is going in between maaneet
thanks a lot for commenting
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Posted: 12 years ago
HI FRIENDS
I KNOW SOME OF YOU WERE NOT HAPPY THAT I AM QUITTING BUT I HAVE A GOOD NEWS THAT I WILL NOT QUIT WRITING N WILL UPDATE THE 14TH PART TOMORROW FOR SURE N SORRY THAT I THINK OF QUITTING AS I WAS UPSET FOR PERSONAL REASON N I THINK THAT YOU ALL WILL FORGIVE ME.

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Posted: 12 years ago

Part 14

Geet wears the salwaar suit which Maan has gifted her..

Maan meets her and asks her : Geet , u liked the other one ?

Geet : I loved it, but it was not possible for me to wear it oday coz maa was at home and I hv never tried these types of dresses, so may be she would get shocked to see me..

Maan : plz wear it and show me, whenev we are alone..

Geet smiled and nodded her head.

Maan makes her seat at his bike and this time he himself takes her hand and makes her catch him at his waist' her both the hands were at his waist and she was very close to him..

Suddenly with the speed of the bike she moved more upon him.. this time she was on him.. her breast was touching his back..

Maan could feel it.. Maan could Feel her soft breast which was moving on his back with the arriving speedbreakers.. Maan suddenly thought of his dream and then the sight of hers milky white curves.. then he remembered the day of their hug..

Her lips touched his head several times.. it was jus as kissing his head softly..

Maan was deeply wanting to taste her glossy lips but it was far away,, he was not sure whether, Geet wants the same or she just likes him as her best frnd and close frnd'

He knew that Geet likes him but what is her limit or till which extent, that was not known..

They reached to a big hotel.. Geet was shocked o see it, coz she has never been to such place..

Geet : why are we here ? its too costly and '

Maan kept his finger on her lips and made her quiet..

Maan : you are with me dear.. just walk with me, dnt worry for anything..

Maan opened up his hand and stood infront of her.. Geet holded his hand and both entered the hotel..

They took a seat near the fountain..

That place was dark enough that others cant see you but was lit with lamps in such a way that the couple can see each other and feel it.

Maan pulled a chair for her and made her comfortable..

Then he took a seat infront of her..

Musicians came to ask if they want some music but Maan denied them as he dint want any body between them.. he wanted to spend time with her.. only her..

Maan : Geet, what will you have ?

Geet : anything but not hard drink..

Maan : as you please, maam.. then they both smiled..

Maan ordered the drinks'

Maan was looking deep into her eyes.. he was speechless coz this was the moment he was wishing for..

Maan hold her hand..

Maan : I like you Geet, you are really speciall.

Should I ask you something?

Geet : hmm

Maan : you trust me naa ? you believe me ?

Geet : yes.. but why are you asking this ?

Maan : that day Prem spke so many things about me..

Geet, yes I m flirty.. I have flirted with many girls but I hve always maintain a distance between them.

I assure you Geet, you are the first true person of my life. My liking for you is the truth of life..

Geet : yes I believe you, therefore I m here with you.. otherwise I would never agree to this..

That day I was not comfortable with Prem but I had to go..

Maan : I understand Geet, but I dint liked it that he was trying to be so close to you..

You can think that I m possessive person..

Yess, I m very possessive for my closed ones, also for Meera.. so that means ki I m also very possessive for you too Geet.. I dnt kow, you will like it or not but this is me..

Geet kept her other hand on his hand.. tighten her grip

Geet : I like you Maan, the way you are.. more than my liking, I respect you..

For the first time, Maan felt shy.. he was smiling..

Then he stood up and went near her.. will you do honours to dance with me lady ??

Geet was surprised to see that.. Maan was sounding exactly like a hero.. those polite words with a deep melodious voice .. Geet melted in his manners and style..

Geet accepted his req and went with him on dance floor..

It was more dark tthen the sitting area.. slow music was on.. few couples were dancing, few were a bit inimate into each other.. few were enjoying cooly..

At first Geet felt odd coz she has never been to such a place.. but as soon as Maan caught her from her back, she was totally in him.. she forgot the environment and everything,,

She could jus feel him and nothing else..

Maan took her close and caught her one hand and his another hand , he rounded it on her waist to hold her close and tight..

Geet was too close to him for him to resist.. but however he was controlling himself from kissing her.. many times he looked at her enchanting and inviting lips.. today they were more glossy and juicy too.. she had applied lipstick with gloss and Maan wanted to rub her lipstick with his toungue and taste her juicy lips.. whenever he was feeling like loosing his control over her, he used to look into her eyes.. he loved her eyes equally.. the were the most beutyfull organ she had.. the innocence in her eyes, the truth and now care and liking for him.. he loved it all.. he always felt Geet as a princess for him..

They were dancing close and close.. then Maan kept her both her hands on his shoulder and his both hands were crossed on her waist holding her..

Maan came close o her and placed a kiss full of lov and care on her forehead.. Geet liked it so much and gos do emotional that small tear ran out of her eye..

Maan was surprised to see tear roling from her eyes..

Maan : Geet maine kuch galat kiya ?

Geet nodded and said no..

Maan : then why this pearl is coming out of ur eye?

Geet smiled when he said pearl to her tear..

Geet: kuch nahi, sahi time ayega to jarur bataungi..

Maan rubbed that tear wit his finger and tasted her tear..

Maan : not so good in taste but precious..

Then he touched her lips with the same finger.. he touched it lightly..

The moment he touched her lips, Geet closed her eyes.. she was feling his touch and Maan noticed it.. he had a smile on his face when he got to see her feelings for him..

Then he put again his same finger in his mouth after touching her lips..

Geet opened her eyes as his touch was departed..

Maan winked his an eye and said : tooo tasty.. but ur smile is also precious'

Maan : your tears and smile both are precious for me.. I would love to gather your smile and share it with others but not tears.. let them be between us, I will take care of them..

" Geet, your Eyes are not meant for tears

Never get upset

But always cheer

Because you are the one

Who can make someone smile for years."

Geet smiled with his poetic behavior..

For the first time, Geet with full mischievous nature spoke

Geet : who someone I can keep happy ? she teased him with her this question..

Maan gave her weird expression. Ad said..

Maan : the one who is dancing with you is better for you than any other " someone "

She smiled and hugged him.. she was now resting on his chest, his one hand was on her back covering her and another was on her waist holding her and both were moving according to the rhythem of song..

They both had a wonderfull dinner and date together.. now somewhere both were conformed in their hearts that , they both feel for each other and likings are true from both sides..

Maan drops Geet home, it was a bit late but forher maa ( rano) it was a combine group dinner, so she had no objection..

Maa : Maan beta, tum sah maine me mere bte ka role nibha rahe ho..

Geet ko safely drop kar dete ho, uski itni care karte ho.. thankyou beta..

Maan : no aunty, thanks mat bolo.. mere liye Geet and Meera dono ekjaise hai.. dono khaas hai.. I ll be there with Geet, dnt worry..

With this Maan hugged her mom sideways and made her sure of what he said..

Geet was again with tears..

Maan nodded and said her no for her tears..

Then she smiled..

Then 2-3 days Maan was busy with his mom and Geet was also busy in her home.. she wanted to give sometime to her family..

They were in touch with message but have not met..

Maan couldn't resist it, 4th day he went her home at nite to meet her in alone.. they sat on swing together.. that was the most safe place in her house.. it was covered with trees and no one could see it..

Maan hold her hands..

Maan : Geet I missed you a lot these 3 days..

Geet smiled and said me too..

Maan : plz call me by my name.. I like to hear..

Geet : no..

Maan : plzz Geet.. he came closer to her and made her look at his face..

Geet : aap boht jiddi ho'..

Maan was gonna say his next plzzz to her but he heard his name out..

Geet said.. after a long pause Maaan..

Geet : aap boht jiddi ho'. Maaan..

Maan smiled and said yes.. aur ek baar plz..

Geet : Maan, Maaan..

He kissed her on her forehead..

And then he hugged her sideways tightly and embraced her and wen away..

Then after few days, whole of the group was planning to go for a picnic..

Yash : Meera iss plan se hum Maan Geet ko aur close laa sakte hai, hana jaan ?

Meera blushed and said : yes my hero.. ur correct..

Yash : I m always right.. in this way we both can have a pre marriage honeymoon..

Meera hit hi on his chest on his this comment..

Yash hugged her and they decided to meet other in college today eve at 6..

Meera informed Geet and pinky and Yash informed Maan and aadi..

All of them in college..

Now Pinky and Aadi were openly flirting like Yash and Meera.. on other hand, Maan was constantly looking at Geet and Geet was avoiding his glance, coz she knew each time Maan looks at her, she falls for him more n more..

Pinky : mai to ever ready hu trip ke liye.. but acha khane ko raega na ?

Meera: haan baba, hum mere farmhouse pe hi raheneg to cooks hai vaha, tumhe jo chahiye banva lena..

Pinky : fir to koi problem nai hai..

Aadi : whereare we going for the trip, any place decided? And for how many days ?

Yash : for 2-3 days.. no place is decided, we all together can decide now..

Meera : is it ok for u Geet ?

Geet was not present mentally there..

Meera shook her and asked her question again..

Geet : I dnt kn Meera, I hv to ask maa..

Pinky ; arre yaar Geet chal na, bada Maaja ayega..

Meera : haan, hum aunty se baat kar leng..

Geet : lets see guys or else u carry on plan without me..

Then all decided to finalize the Plan, after Geet talks to her mom..

Geet in her college corridor wher no one comes..Maan was knowing that place..

Maan came and stood behind her Back..

Geet : aap yaha kyu aye ho ?

Maan : when u feel me , so u must be knowing our bond..

Geet : hmmm

Maan : chalo naa geet..

Geet : aap log jao na,,

Maan : do u think , I ill go without you ?

Geet : pehle bhi to aap log jaate the sath me, ab bhi jao..

Maan came close to her and pulled her close to him holding her shoulder..

Maan : now I m changed, now situations are changed.. I ll manage all.. u will come ''

Precap: Picnic Time n more masti

Previous Part :13
Next Part: 15

Hi Friends

Sorry again for thinking of quitting this SS n will never do it again

thanks for comments n like for previous part

Hope you all will like it

Please hit the like button n comment


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Edited by angelic_cute - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Yippeee!!!!!!
I'm 1st to comment
:) :)




It ws such a cute,adorable m so romantic date...
Haaye!!! Lovd it.
Simple yet so dreamy.

Lovd ur way of explaining hw maaneet r getting comfrtable wid each othr physically.


But y both r still scared to accept?
Its obviouswem dey r meeting chupke-chupke at nyt at geet's place so their bond is much more then jus frnz.

Still their 1st kiss didnt happen...
Dream me itni hot,spcl n passionate thi,toh actual me toh uss se bhi zyada honi chahiye.


Conti soon plz
Edited by sekhonpuneet - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanx for continuing the story.

The update was great,surfaing Maaneet's feelings for each other.Love Maan's approach and Geet's response towards him.
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Posted: 12 years ago
nyc part dii
soft romantic part
both are feeling for each other
but still not aware of love
n maan wanted to taste her hehe
hope unki 1st kiss jaldi hi aaegi
waiting for trip
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing Update !!

Date was superb ..
Now all planning for picnic. Rocking update !!

Cnt sn !!
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Posted: 12 years ago
nyc one di😆 😆
superb😆
romantic date hayeee 😉
waiting fr them to accept ech other completely😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely update

so cute romantic date

loved it

it was just out of the world
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update
Maaneet moments are cute
Wow picnic
Continue soon dear

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