SS: Mrs Asad ahmed khan last part 10(16/6/13)

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cyndu

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Posted: 12 years ago

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That was awesome..!
waiting for the next update 😃

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bindas , waiting for the second part

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meera.rajeev

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good job yaar👏👏👏 thanks for the pm😃. waiting to find out what's asad's plan😃

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Tadibaaaz

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👏Awesome please update fast

U write really awesome👏

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Teja....

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wow what a ff its really nice

plz pm me when u update

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Part 8

in asad's room

asad: zoya... agar tanveer ne tumhe sahi salaamat dekhliya toh usko lagega ki tumhe usske baare main pata chal gaya isiliye tum meri baat dhyaan se suno... and do what i say...

he explains her the whole plan

zoya: theek hai mr khan... i think this should work

asad: ammi, najma aur tanveer aate hi honge... you just lie down here... okay..

zoya: okay mr khan (she lies down on the bed and asad is seated on his couch) waise mr khan... aapne mere sawaal ka jawab nahi diya...(with a smirk)

asad: kaunsa sawaal...

zoya: yehi ki aapne jis tarah se mujhe bachaya... uska matlab?? (looks at him with a curious look on her face)

asad: wo...(he stammers and changes the topic moving closer towars the bed and sits next to her) pehle aap batayiye aap waha kyun gayi thi... aapko laga ki maine aapko waha surprise dene bulaya aur aap waha chali gayi... huh...(smirking)

zoya: sawaal maine pehle kiya...

asad: lekin jawaab mujhe pehle chahiya...

zoya's eyes fall on asad's hand which was injured due to fire... she helds his hand and sees the burn mark and gets worried

zoya: aapko toh chot lagi hai... (tears form in her eyes and she get up and looks for firstaid box and starts applying cream on his wound) mr khan aapne aapke jaan ka parwa kiye bagair meri jaan bachayi...mujhe toh ek bhi chot nahi laga hai,, aur aapko... (crying)

asad: zoya... main aapko kuch nahi hone dekh sakta hoon... agar aapko kuch ho jata toh...

zoya: toh kya mr khan... ab toh kehdijiye...

by then the door bell rings... both get irritated... and asad presses his forehead for the bell to interrupt them

asad: app sojayiye... i think ammi hai... ill check out... tumhe yaad hai na.. ki kya karna hai..

zoya: dont worry mr khan... mujhe yaad hai...

zoya lies down and asad opens the door

dilshad: asad... sab theek hai na...

tanveer: (to herself) ye jammy itne shaanth kyun lag rahe hai... inhe toh tension main honachahiye.. zoya ke baare main sochke... (evil smile) jammy... kya hua

asad boils looking at tanveer... and stares at her

najma: bhaijaan... zoya kaha hai.. i mean bhabhi...

asad: app log pehle andar chaliye... main sab batata hoon...

all of them enter asad's room... dilshad and najma run towards zoya and tanveer stands there with a shock and asad observes this

asad: kya hua tanveer...

tanveer: ah... ku..kuch nahi ja..jammii (stammers) (talks to herself) ye zoya yaha kaise pahunch gayi... wo gunde ne bataya ki kaam hogaya... ya allah agar issne sab kuch batadiya toh...

dilshad: asad... kya hua zoya ko...

asad: ammi... wo zoya farmhouse gayi thi aur aag me phas gayi... luckily i got there... wo driver ne bataya aur maine inko bachaya... lekin abhi tak inko hosh nahi aaya hai...

tanveer: (to herself) agar zoya ko hosh agaya toh ye sab kuch batadegi...

asad: ammi aap log apne kamre main chaliye... jao najma... ammi ko lekar jao

dilshad: nahi asad... jab tak bahu ko hosh aayegi main yaha se nahi hatungi...

asad somehow convinces dilshad and asks her to go rest along with najma...and both leave...asad stares at tanveer...

tanveer:jammy main zoya ka khayal rakhungi...

asad wantedly leaves tanveer alone with zoya to check on her intensions and zoya is acting to be asleep... asad keeps an eye on tanveer and acts like he's going out and mean while tanveer tries to kill zoya by picking a pillow and she moves towards zoya.. by then asad runs inside and screems...

asad: tanveer... kya kar rahi ho...

his anger was boiling... he felt like killing tanveer for trying to kill zoya...

tanveer: wo main pillow rakh rahi thi zoya ke sar ke neeche... acche support ke liye...

tanveer was facing asad...zoya opens her eyes and signals asad to calm down and not to throw his anger... asad realises that if he throws his anger then all his plans will fail... he calms down himself

asad: tum apne kamre main jao... main hoon yaha zoya ka khyaal rakhne...

tanveer leaves and calls the goons and shouts at them for not doing their work properly... the goons get angry on her for talking so rudely and warn her...

in asad's room

asad: ye tanveer tumhare peeche kyun padhi hai... aur aaj toh phir se tumhe maarne ki koshish ki hai... ye toh sabit hogaya ki ye farmhouse pe aaj issine ne plan kiya... we need to find out her intensions... i cant wait zoya... mujhe abhi jaake into police ke hawaale karne ka man kar raha hai... how dare she try to kill you...

zoya: mr khan please calm down... humara plan work kar raha hai... please mr khan...

asad: theek hai... aap please rest kijiye,,, until evening...

in the evening

dilshad and najma come to check on zoya... zoya was fast asleep and asad was just sitting on the bed site next to zoya... making sure she's safe he couldnt leave her alone after knowing tanveer's intensions...

dilshad: asad... zoya ko hosh aaya...

asad: ji ammi... she's fine... wo bas sorahi hai...

dilshad: allah ka shukhr hai...

tanveer comes.. just then zoya wakes up and tanveer looks tensed, asad notices

dilshad: (patting zoya's cheeks) zoya... ab kaise feel kar rahi ho... tum theek hona...

zoya: ji ammi...main theek hoon

asad signals zoya and she nodds... to execute their next plan

asad: zoya... kya hua tha... yaad karke batao tum waha kaise pahunch gayi...

tanveer gets scared that he might soon be cought

zoya: mujhe kuch yaad nahi hai... mujhe toh sirf wo aag yaad hai aur usse pehle kya hua wo nahi pata

she acts like she's week because of the fire incident and she looks at asad and winks...

asad: kuch toh yaad hoga... aap farmhouse kyun gayi... kisne bulaya waha pe

zoya: pata nahi... aaj jo kuch bhi hua... mujhe kuch bhi yaad nahi aaraha hai... aisa lag raha hai ki kal raat tak hi yaad hai aur wo aag...

she again acts and asad controls his smile looking at her actings... tanveer is relived that zoya dosent remember anything

asad: theek hai theek hai... aap bohoot week lag rahe hai... aaram kijiye,,, (tired of her actings)

and she lies down

asad: ammi... zoya ko isske baare main baat karne ki zaroorat nahi hai... warna unhe stress ho jayega...

dilshad: tum theek keh rahe ho asad... usko abhi aaram karne do...

everyone move towards the hall... and get busy in their own work

tanveer: iss zoya ko toh main khatam nahi kar paayi... lekin zaroor karungi... bohot jald...

in asad's room

zoya: meri acting kaisa tha mr khan.. hai na khamal ki acting... aapko pata hai... jab main college main thi sab mujhe kehte the ki main khamaal ki acting karti hoon... wo bhi lecturer ke saamne... jhooti kahani banake

asad: ye toh mujhe pata hai... sabse bade dramebaaz hai aap...(with an irritated look)

zoya: kuch kaha??

asad: ji nahi... suno... ab tanveer kuch bhi kar sakti hai... aur aap wada kijiye that u'll take care of urself... i mean main aapke paas humesha rahunga lekin aap akeli kuch nahi karengi ya uske paas nahi jayengi... is that all right? ab pata lagana hoga ki ye sab kyun kar rahi hai...

zoya: ye toh wo khud kahegi... we have to make her admit herself mr khan... uspar nazar rakhna hoga...

asad: pata nahi isse pehle kitna jhoot kaha hai usne... aur kitni koshish kiya tumhe maarne... (bangs the wall with anger)

zoya: please relax mr khan... waise mr khan aapko yaad hai mr durendar bata... i mean mr watever ne kya kaha tha airport pe... ki koi ladi unhe baar baar call karke humare fake engagement ke baare main khabar deti rahi..what if it was tanveer... hume pata lagana hoga...

asad: haan... lekin ye sab humne ignore kiya tha uss waqt... agar hume jaanna hai... i need to meet mr durendar batawdekar... main abhi unko call karke poochunga ki kis number se call aaya tha...

asad calls mr whatever...

mr whatever: hello... kahiye...

asad: ji main asad ahmed khan... wo...(mr whatever intrrupts)

mr whatever: yes... yaad hai mujhe... wo ms zoya ka mangetar... kaise hai aap... aur shaadi kab hai???

asad: wo humari nikah hogayi...

mr whatever:waah kya baat hai... ek din main sagai aur uske baad 10 din main shaadi... kya pyaar hai... true love... congrats... congrats... dekhiye main dil aur jasbaat ka dharm aadmi hoon... samaj sakti hoon isiliye maine us din zoya ka visa extend karwaya...

asad: wo aapne uss din bataya ki koi ladki aapko baar baar call karke humari fake engagement ki khabar deti rahi... kya aap uska number de sakte hai...

mr whatever: haan dekhiye mr khan... maine toh usi din ms zoya se kaha tha... aapke pyar ko samhal ke rahkna,,,, wo kya hai na sacche pyar ko bohot jaldi nazar lagta hai...

asad gets irritated and presses his forehead

asad:number,,,,

mr whatever: haan deta hoon... deta hoon...

he checks his phone and gives asad the number... asad immediatly calls his pa prasad and gives this number to find out on whose name it is registers and after a while... prasad calls up and gives the details... it was regidtered in the name of tanveer... asad and zoya both get shocked

zoya: wo aise kyun karegi mr khan,... kya wo chati ki main yaha se jau...i mean.. kyun???

asad: yehi toh mujhe samaj main nahi aa raha hai... aur yaad hai jab maine aapko tickets book kiya tha ye sochke ki aapko jaldi new york jaana hai aapki aapi aur jeeju ke anniversari se pehle... wo tanveer ne mujhe kaha tha...

zoya: yehi main sochu mr khan... maine toh tanveer se kaha ki mujhe yaha rukhna hai...

asad: ussi ne mere haath se aapka tickets lekar aapke saamne dikhaya tha...

zoya: haan aur humare beech misunderstandings hua tha... allah miya agar maine aapka video nahi dekha hota toh main chali jaati...phir sab khatam!!

asad and zoya stare at each other at her comment

asad: kya khatam zoya...

zoya: wo... wo... mere iss ghar se rishta mr khan...haan wohi sab khatam ho jata...

asad: seriously zoya??? aur kuch nahi...

zoya:mr khan aap mujhe sawaal karne se accha ki aap khud mujhe sab sach bataye...(she smartly makes her way to find out asad's feelings)

asad: wo... actually...

zoya: let it be mr khan... ur impossible... (she gets angry and gets up from there and goes out )

asad: zoya suno... (he stops her) listen sab ko lagta hai ki aapki tabyat theek nahi hai... stay here...

zoya: haan asal main aapka tabyat... no brains theek nahi hai..

asad: kuch kaha...

zoya: kuch nahi... mr emotionally challenged man!!!

zoya sits on the bed fidjiting with her i pad and asad sits on the couch thinking of what step to take next!!!

end of part 8... sorry for the delay... next part will be updated tomorrow... comments please 😊

part 9
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3588789&TPN=33&#84221425

Edited by zoyaaakhan - 12 years ago