Toot gaya dil toot gaya

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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey guys my name is...........well u's can call me 😉krikes

anywayz i've b😕een reading a lot of ff 4rm here and it's time i started one my self an da way KAA is goin @ da mo it's time to take things into our own hands it's gonna start wid gauri findin da truth bout ip SHIT and shiv an goin away............... an i WARN u dat my ff is gonna go in depth when it cums 2 romanti mo's and if u don't want dat iam jst a few typed words away

da characters will be da same but i'll intro sum new 1's an let u know as i go on wid da story..................

so here goes................................

Gauri is pacin her room an thinkin dat ther's got 2 be a reason why dat room is locked and why when shiv came out was dere a pic of ipSHIT and shiv on da wall she is tensed😕

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next day morning

gauri makes breakfats 4 da family an goes to call shiv🤢 but he's gone to work she's bout to turn when she see's dat he has forgotten his mobile

she tells da family dat she is also goin to work

IN THE OFFICE

gauri see's dat shiv iz not in his cabin

she goes in and anupam cums in minutes later followed by her secretary

G: kaise hai anupam ji?😃

A: theek ho main shiv kaha hai??😃

G: pata nahin subha se gayab hai😕

she then start dictatin to her sec when the sec is called by mahen gauri is pissed off coz the thin dat she was dictatin was a very importan thing so anupam tells her to record it on the mobile and giv it to her gauri accidently takes out shiv's and is goin to recoed when she see's a recorin by the title "love" she is fascinated an tell anu an he tells her to play it but she refuses so he snatches da fone from her and plays it himself .....................................................IT IS THE RECORDING OF SHIV TELLING IPSHITA DAT HE LUVS HER😡

after listenin to the recording anupam is shell shocked an gauri is weepin she remembers da dance seen wid shiv and ipshita entering and all da cute times she has ahd wid shiv and breaks down utterly devastated while anu is shocked and doen't blink 😭

episoed ends

sorry

have to go but i hope u liked it

nex time i'll rite longer ones ok?

PS: shiv is gonna pay in my ff 😡

cheers

krikes

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Posted: 19 years ago
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OH MY GHANDI!!! it's like reallllllllllly good u should soooooooo continue!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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waheeyyyyy!!! cant wait continue wen u can
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Posted: 19 years ago
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plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont........ 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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plz do continue!it's great! 😉 😊 😃

X.o.X.o.---Jasmine---x.O.x.O
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Posted: 19 years ago
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sorry dudes
😭 i am on school holiday an my freind came ova from Oz and i was sorta busy but by 2morrow i'll hav 3 parts and a 4th one az a bonus
hows dat?
sorry once more 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
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itz awesum!! u've gotta continue!!!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Part Two
RECAP:
Shiv is missing ……. Gauri takes his mobile thinking that he might be at work already and goes to work herself. She tries to dictate to her secretary when her secretary is called away by Mahen. Anupam who is in her cabin at the time tells her to record it on her mobile. She takes out Shiv's and tries to record when she and Anupam hear the recording of Shiv telling Ip-Shit that he loves her. Both are heartbroken.


Anupam is shell shocked while Gauri remembers all the cute times she spent with Shiv, she remembered the time they danced, when she had worn a black sari she had been sure that Shiv had been attracted to her. But then, unbidden to her mind came the image of Ipshita intervening every time she and Shiv came into close contact with each other. This thought brought a sharp stab of pain in her heart. She remembered the time she had told Ipshita about Shiv not wearing his jeans how she had laughed and taunted him
Flashback
I: Hi Shiv
S: (coolly) Hi
I: (more coolly) Nice pants!
Flashback Ends
G: (to herself) maine kaise nahin dehka ke who dono ………. unh done mere saath aisa kyun kiya? ahkir kya gunna hai mera jo mera pati ous ladki se pyar karta hai jise main ne apna dost samjha? she starts crying her heart out

Anupam is still shocked but the sound of Gauri crying startles him out of his trance. He runs to Gauri
A: Gauri please. Roh tow muth…. dekho tumhe rona nahin cahhiye kyunki ye sab jhut hai na? sab jhoot hai na ……. Shiv ki koi chal ho gi hume tangh karne ki (he says all this as if he were mad)
G: (Crying )nahin yeh such hai kyunki Shiv ko jab maine ………hic….us kumre mai dekha tha tow un ke saath koi tha ub…….hic ….hic…. pata chala ke woh Ipshita thi kyun ki woh sari jo woh insaaan pehna hua tha woh sari Ipshita ko baadi ma ne mere saath dilai thi
A: un don one hume itna bara dhoka diya ……….mai tow samajta tha ke Ipshita …………purr
G: Shiv ne itni bar kaha mujse ke mai chali jao ………….. kaise nahin sumji mai ke who mujhe is liye behj rahe thehian ta ke who ……….
She then starts crying and Anupam consoles her
A: Gauri please
G( stammering) nahin who dono……mere saath kyun………..nahin…..yeh , who, pyarr, ek ….kyun. lekin KYUN?
A: mai guruji ko fone karta houh
Guruji: hello?
A: Guruji ? Shiv ne Gauir se shaadi kis liye ki?
Guruji: us ki izat or apni property bacahne ke liye
A: please mujhe such bataey kyunki jhoot bolne such nahin chuph he ga
Guruji: dekho beta mai
A: please!
Gauri: (snatches the phone and says) is leye ta ke 8 mahino ke baad mai mar jao aur who Ipshita se shaddi kar le ? hai na?
Stills on guruji and Anupam
Episode Ends (on Gauri's face)

Precap: Gauri walks up to Shiv and raises he hand to slap him
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awesome update...
cannot wait for the next part... 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Part Three:

Recap:

Anupam calls guruji and tells him to tell the full truth to him. Guruji refuses and Gauri snatches the phone from Anupam and says : is leye ta ke 8 mahino ke baad mai mar jao aur who Ipshita se shaddi kar le ? hai na?

G: hai na guruji, mai such keh rahi ho na. kya ho gaya dosro ko tow bohut sari rahe dikathe hai na aap,,,, ajj apne app ko rahe nahin dekha suk rahe hai kya? (Yelling)
boliye…. kya ye such hai hai nay eh such
Guruji: nahin beta who mai
G: (sreaming fit to burst her neck muscles) khul ke kahiye jo kehna chate hai. yeh sub aap ki wajah se hua. yeh such hai ya nahin?
Guruji: ha yeh such hai. nikhila chati thi ke who Ipshita ki shaadi shiv se karwae to woh shiv Ipshita aur us ki ma mere pass aye
Flashback
In guruji's house
(Gu stands for guruji)
Gu: ayiye aiye nikhila ji kaise hai app sub?
N: humsub theek hai aur ajj hum app se shiv aur Ipshita ki shaadi ke liye un ki kundli parwana chahte hai
Gu: ha kyun nahi zaroor
he does somethings you know like the pages and bith and all……I really don't know…..well
Gu: kya pur
N: kya hua?
S: ha kya hua?
Gu: looks at shiv as thought not quite seeing him ) tumhari kundli mai likha hai ke tumhari biwi shaadi ke 8 mahino baad mur jaegi
N: kya?
S: what?
N: yeh nahin ho sakta. to guruji…… phir se check kare
Gu: mai theek keh raha hoh
N: tow phir humhe shiv ki shaadi kisi aur se karni parhe…lekin…ha ….. mere pass ek paln hai ……hum shiv ki shaadi devika ki natin gauri se kardege is tarha humhe land bhi mil jaega aur Ipshita ki life bhi bun jae gi ……who kehte hain na ken a " ek teer se dough nishane" (smirks evily)
S: purr me in sub cheezo ko nahin manta aur mai us ladki se tow bil kul bhi shaadi nahin karunga
I: shiv please dekho is tar ha hum dono ek saath reh sa keg e
S: pur Ipshita, pyaar in sub cheezo se bur kar hota hai hai
I: please shiv please
S: gets up and leaves
all the rest also leave
Flash Back Ends

Gauri drops the phone, leaves the office in a trance and then turns at the door to Anupam and tells him to drop her home.
In the car Gauri remembers all the cute scene with Shiv with "mere pyaar ki umar ho itni" in the background wipes her tears determinedly and gets out of the car

In the Kapoor House ( its evening and everyone is back home including shiv all havin diiner)
gauri (walks up to the table and tell every one that today she has to say something very important to the family
G: mai yeh gahr choor ke ja rahi hu
everyone stands up
Dadi: kya …. purr kyun beta?
M: yeh tum bilkul theek karogi
S: kya hua gauri?
gauri turns to him angrily tears in her eyes she shouts
G : maine ne tow sunna tha ke aap business karne mai aur ladkiyo ko phasane mai aur gharibo ka dil torne mai mahir hain lekin yeh kabih nahin socha that ke app dohke ne mai bhi mahir hai
I: gauri yeh tum kya keh rahi ho?
G: yeh tum mujse pooch rahi ho?
S: gauri! yeh sub kya hai please tell me
G: chup! bus mujhe kuch nahin sunna hain (crying)
S: Gauri….(raises his hand to wipe her tears…..guari pushes his hand away
S: gauri meh ne tow kuch nahin kiya tow phir……………
SMACK (g slaps s)
G: APNI GHANDI ZUBANN SE MERA PAVITAR NAAM MUT LENA TUM!!!!!!!!!!!!!
everyone is shocked

Episode Ends

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