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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: love2_soma

oh ho ho...toh maan babu abhi se hi geet k khayalo mein kho gaye...maan abhi se geet k sapne mein kho gaye...wah maan babu...

aur geet abb kahan jaogi...khurana mansion mein...geet ki destiny...

awesome n wonderful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...




hehe very right dear..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: impoojaverma

awesome update

maan toh first look me hi geet pe fida hai

but y everyone in KM is so protective towards maan???




you will know it later dear.. why is naina like this
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

awesome, beautiful part

loved it
loved haye haye maan is full fida on geet
loved the family bonding
waiting for more
continue soon



thank u rakhii

hope u love it
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Ru_21

Awesome ..superb update...Loved it alot⭐️

Loved da start...beautifuly written👏

woww Maan s so excite .Geet gonna stay in KM😳

eagerly waiting for next...continue soon

thanks for pm 😊




thanks sweety... yes.. maan is excited to be with geet
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely part
Naina ...so concerned about maan...waiting to know about maan's past
Maan thinking of geet...fully fida on her
geet going to delhi[R]Waiting for the next part
Edited by -padma- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Yipppeee party time 🥳 di me so happy aaj aap yeh FF update kar rahe ho loving this new story of urs di aur waiting for the mysteries to unfold bas di jaldi se update kardo aur wait nahi ho raha hai plzzz 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago




PART 2


Papa don't you feel tat it will be a problem for Khuranna's and you know how much I like my privacy Geet tried to make herself clear but Mohinder was adamant tat he would not change his decision You either say yes or you will not be going to Delhi, so you its upto you Ms. Geet Handa. Mohinder said walking away from them while Geet just looked at Rano but Rano shrugged her shoulders walking behind her husband.


Gosh babaji.. don't you think tat you are too much. Did not I ask you tat I don't want anyone means anyone to interfere in my life at Delhi and here I have to live with a family whom I don't even know. She complained to her babaji with her chirpy words and than smiled to herself knowing wat she can do Wow Geet.. it will be a fun.. lets get ready and here I come Khuranna's.. but yeah you will regret every second asking me to stay with you all.. after all Geet Handa ko control karna is not tat easy.. here I come Delhi.

Delhi


Her mind was making all sorts of plans while the car drew towards the Khuranna Mansion. Rano was still sucking in her own world of misery trying to make herself strong to stay away from Geet Babaji' dyan rakhna.. just keep my baby safe tats all wat I want.. I know tat she would not understand me but please mehar karna. She looked at Geet and pulled her kissing her forehead tat irritated Geet to the core. This was the nth time tat Rano was behaving like tat and not able to control Geet spoke getting irritated enough Maa.. m not a small baby tat you keep on kissing and praying to Babaji for my safety.. Geet Handa is seventeen and big enough to take care aur waise bhi m going to stay with those Khuranna's na so why do you need to worry so much. Her words though simple brought tears in Rano's eyes tat pained Geet. She closed her eyes and side hugged Rano while Mohinder looked at them turning from the front seat M sorry Maa but please don't be so worried. You know na your baby is not baby anymore.. so why take tension' and I promise I will be a good girl and take care of myself even more now.

Rano smiled hearing her while she wiped her tears when they heard Mohinder say with happiness in his voice Here we are' Raj m back to you. Mohinder was so excited tat he did not even wait for Rano and Geet and just got down from the car inhaling the happiness tat he got by stepping in the Khuranna place. He had warned Raj not to send anyone to pick them and right now he was eager to just run inside and hug his friend tight. It was not tat they did not meet but it was like they never had tat time to visit each other's place and would just meet for few minutes at business parties if ever possible. Rano and Geet looked at Mohinder while they followed him .

The entire Khuranna family was just waiting for the Handa's while Raj was pacing right left cursing Mohinder for no limits See Maa.. I just hate this Mohinder.. wat does he think haa.. he says it will be more exciting to meet in the mansion rather than at airport.. I swear I will kill tat idiot . Everyone just looked at him with wide eyes seeing the business tycoon behaving as a kid when suddenly they heard the voice tat Raj had been waiting for You still behave the same Raj.

Raj just turned and stood rooted at the place seeing Mohinder standing right at his door step. He walked with tears in his eyes but stopped confusing everyone but Mohinder knew wat he meant and before Raj could say a world Mohinder said Maa.. get the aarti done fast Maa.. or else he will not hug me. Savitri Devi smiled signaling Naina to do the aarti while everyone just stood looking at the scene but one soul was anxious to see the angel tat he had just seen once in his lifetime but now he would see her every day. He titled his head left right but he could not see her anywhere. As soon as the aarti was done Raj ran and hugged Mohinder tight feeling him to heart while Rano just looked at them. She had just been once here tat is just after her wedding with Mohinder but she knew the depth of their love.

I missed you Mohi Raj said getting nostalgic while Mohinder just wiped his tears walking with him towards inside. Mohinder and Rano bent to take the blessings from Savitri Devi while she hugged them with all love You forgot me Mohinder beta. Mohinder smiled knowing the usual words tat he always heard from her I can never forget the one who gave me a reason to smile Maa. But yeah making a life for my family made me to part away from you all but my heart always pained to be where I belonged Maa.. just close to you and Raj. Mohinder said hugging her while Raj admired the love his own Mother had for his friend who once was orphan left with no one from his own family in Delhi.

Chal joothe.. I know you are now the Mohinder Handa but am angry tat you kept my Bahu and my granddaughter away from me.. unki kya galathi thi haan. I still remember I just seen Geet once when she was born uske baad tho kabhi nahi dekha.. Savitri complained to Mohinder while Rano smiled coming closer and smiling at her Maaji.. right now we all are here na.. so jee bhar ke pyar karna apni poti se. Rano turned to look for Geet but seeing her nowhere she looked at Mohinder who had forgotten about his Geet. Where is Geet ji? Rano asked Mohinder when suddenly they heard a loud scream coming out from outside. Rano instantly got worried and she ran to see her daughter who was screaming. Everyone panicked while Annie shouted knowing something Bhai' Brownie' oh my god.. She is so dead now. Maan looked at Annie and ran a bit faster knowing tat Brownie would not leave his angel for invading his time.

Their eyes shocked while a smile adoring their faces seeing Geet standing and screaming at the poor doggy.. oops Maan's Brownie. She looked so scared while Brownie was all set to attack her for disturbing him shooo.. move.. yeh doggy..get out of.. my way.. dekho.. i.. i.. will.. eat you'see my teeth'shoo. Maan muffled his laughter while other laughed loud hearing her saying tat she will eat the poor Brownie. Geet looked at the direction and the moment she saw them laughing her anger rose double and she screamed at her parents Papa.. Ma.. I wont stay here.. yaha tho pagal kutthe bhi rehte hain and you know I cant stand their sight. I will just kill this ugly dog.

Brownie looked at Geet and barked more at her while she hit the stick she had in her hand making Maan a bit furious seeing his Brownie whipping. He walked towards them and picked Brownie in his arms and softly caressed and kissed his body shoo.. sweetheart see m here. Maan is here.. Brownie looked at his face and smiled knowing tat his savior was here near him. He looked at Maan and than at Geet and barked looking at her as if complaining to Maan about her while Geet cursed him with words seeing him barking at her Your ugly dog.. how dare you spoil my dress.. .. I swear if I had a gun I would kill you right now.

Ms. Handa.. I hope you know how to speak to others.. and I don't take a word against my Brownie Maan said in a soft way while Geet puffed in anger hearing him Mr.. whoever you are.. don't you see tat this ugly dog had dirtied my dress and sandals and I wish this is a place for humans not for stray animals.

Geet.. just calm down Mohinder pulled Geet away saying sorry to Maan M sorry maan.. but she does not like any dogs near her. She is like this since a kid.. so m extremely sorry Maan Maan could not see Mohinder saying sorry and he smiled saying to him Its ok Uncle.. it was her first experience may be.. but please just tell her not to call my Brownie a dog.. his name is Brownie. Mohinder smiled while he patted Maan's shoulder. All walked inside while Naina asked Annie to take Geet to get a change of dress for her.

Geet beta.. how did you reach near Brownie Dadima asked as Geet settled herself on the sofa. She looked at her parents when Rano said She is your Dadima beta.. remember Papa had said all. Geet nodded smiling and started her story telling them how she reached near Brownie Dadima you know when I was coming inside I saw a rabbit running.. and than I saw this dog.. Brownie Vicky cleared Geet giving her an accusing look while Annie smiled hearing him. wat ever it is.. than I saw this Brownie. Running behind the rabbit.. you know the rabbit was so scared and this so called dog.. Brownie was all ready to eat him. so I ran and hit this dog and took the rabbit in my hand but the rabbit jumped off and ran away and than this your dog chased me all over the garden.

The whole Khuranna family burst into a laughter hearing her story while the Handa's just kept staring at them. None knew why they were laughing when Vicky said so Ms. Geet thought tat Brownie was going to eat Rabby'. Poor Brownie.. Geet you made him a enemy yaar.. Geet looked at Vicky who was smiling but she was all confused when suddenly she heard Brownie barking coming near her. she looked at him and stared at him giving angry looks while Maan just smiled and asked Brownie to come near him.

Geet rabby is our pet rabbit and Brownie was not going to eat him but they both were playing as its their play time and Brownie hates anyone who disturbs their play and you did the same mistake by pulling rabby away.. you know best friends like.. which means Brownie and rabby are best friends'. And now Brownie will keep troubling you all the time Annie finished her words while Geet just looked at her with strange looks saying Are you saying tat a rabbit and a dog are friend. Please stop kidding me on such useless stories Geet chided Annie with her words while Annie smiled knowing tat she would not understand Its ok Geet.. you will need time to know them and us.. aur waise bhi now you will be staying with us na so you will get use to such strange things here.

Annie was quite good in making Geet comfortable with her and soon they became friends while Rano smiled seeing her daughter mingling with Annie. Rano sighed seeing Geet having a friendly chat with Annie when she heard Naina say getting the dinner table ready for dinner Don't worry Rano.. she will stay here as a princess.. She will not have any problems with us. Rano smiled but being a mother she was still scared Nahi Naina.. not like tat. She has never stayed away from us and m just scared for it.. I mean she bit rude at times. Rano said wat she felt when Naina placed her hand on her assuring her tat it will be fine Sab bache aise hi hote hain Rano. So dont worry she will enjoy her stay here.

They all settle for dinner when suddenly Annie remembered something and said Geet did not you meet Bhai.. when he was in Mumbai 2 months back. Geet looked at Annie in confusion and than at Maan. Did I meet him anyways she questioned herself still looking at Maan who was just staring at her instead of having his dinner. Answer na Geet.. did not you meet him I mean.. he did tell us tat he met you al in Mumbai last time when Bhai had been for a business meet there.

Annie I did not meet her Maan said looking at Annie but she was not the one to keep quite come on Bhai.. I very well know tat you never tell lies.. and I still remember you said tat you met all.. hain na Dadima Annie questioned Dadima who answered Annie nodding her head. Annie I did say I met everyone but I did not meet Geet personally.. I just saw her from far. So it means she and me never met Maan cleared them while Mohinder nodded saying Haan Annie beta.. actually it was a business meet and party na' and we all were busy and Maan just could not make himself to meet Geet tat time so its first time tat Geet is seeing you all in her life.

How should I tell you Annie tat it was something beyond me.. I mean I heard Mohinder uncle calling her by her name in the party when I was standing behind him.. I could just see her face and tat one look.. I don't know wats it.. and than I just followed her everywhere staying far away.. I wanted to meet her.. make Mohinder uncle to introduce us but no.. I could not.. I just wanted to keep staring at her.. her smile was something tat made me smile seeing her.. Geet Handa.. My Mishty.. Maan thought to himself remembering how he had seen her and how he came to know tat she was Geet Handa. He smiled to himself while others continued to have their dinner. He looked at Geet for one last time and concentrated on his Dinner before his mom would make a scene seeing him lost.

Precap: Maan ' Brownie ' Geet' uff ab kya hoga

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NEXT: PART 3



Edited by sdlife19 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome
especially geet with the brownie was awesome
maan was fida over geet on first sight itself
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hilarious.! Geet was gonna eat up brownie 🤣🤣
Maaneet already had an argument..fab..
Rocking update Di.! Aww Maan ki toh already batti Gul ho gayi 🤣

Precap sounds Interesting and funny too cause I can as well imagine Maaneet and brownie wala scene 😆

Eagerly waiting di 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
Just loved it geet hzte dog and maan love dog dono ek dusre se alag hai precape intersting waiting 4 next

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