~|| HEARTBEAT ||~ [OS/SS] [THANKS NOTE: PG 7] - Page 8

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Posted: 12 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: shreya_arjuhi

no I will😆😆 <<--- Haw!!!🤣🤣🤣
but its really nicely written😊 Thanks you 😳

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Posted: 12 years ago
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How come i never read this OS?? [:O] infact i saw this for the first time [xxD]

beautifully written OS veds..👏 n u left me speechless...seriously..
I felt so bad for arjun when aro left him with a letter..though i'd guessed she was having heart problem...but still..poor him..he'd have expected to see her face the very first thing when he came to Mumbai..bt instead was searching her everywhere possible..
Felt bad for arohi n her family...but felt more bad for arjuhi </3
but loved the way arjun promised her that his heartbeats will run till hers do ❤️ fav moment of mine...

Really loved how u showed their life after marriage..n later their death..no words for that seriously...very beautifully written...

N btw really liked Pawan n arjun's meeting in the airport...pawan is such a sweet guy..

End made me feel bad..such a sad ending to a beautiful love story..:(

fab job veds!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: pari_15

How come i never read this OS?? [:O] infact i saw this for the first time [xxD] <<-- I dont know

beautifully written OS veds..👏 n u left me speechless...seriously.. <<-- 😳 thank you!!!
I felt so bad for arjun when aro left him with a letter..though i'd guessed she was having heart problem...but still..poor him..he'd have expected to see her face the very first thing when he came to Mumbai..bt instead was searching her everywhere possible..
Felt bad for arohi n her family...but felt more bad for arjuhi </3
but loved the way arjun promised her that his heartbeats will run till hers do ❤️ fav moment of mine... <<--- 😊

Really loved how u showed their life after marriage..n later their death..no words for that seriously...very beautifully written... <<--- thank you again 😊

N btw really liked Pawan n arjun's meeting in the airport...pawan is such a sweet guy..

End made me feel bad..such a sad ending to a beautiful love story..:( <--- every story does not have a happy ending... but they dies together and are still together 😊

fab job veds!!


Thank you for such a beautiful comment Pari 🤗
And I'm glad you liked the story 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74

finally finished...😊

I loved it really just awesome.👍🏼
the love and dedication between then was adorable.
its very emotional😭
I like that they both are still together no matter where, yes its not a happy ending but not sad too, if one died and other has to live alone that would be sad and painful and then I definetly feels like cry but both died together so its ok... other would not have to live in pain.
and yes love never die nad love sotries never end bas kuchh naye mod le leti hain. ( dialogue from KMH2)😆
awesome one veds👏
Edited by shreya_arjuhi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: shreya_arjuhi

finally finished...😊

I loved it really just awesome.👍🏼
the love and dedication between then was adorable.
its very emotional😭
I like that they both are still together no matter where, yes its not a happy ending but not sad too, if one died and other has to live alone that would be sad and painful and then I definetly feels like cry but both died together so its ok... other would not have to live in pain.
and yes love never die nad love sotries never end bas kuchh naye mod le leti hain. ( dialogue from KMH2)😆
awesome one veds👏

Awww Thank you 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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my eyes became wet with tears on reading the last para...it felt like i was standing near them and watching their hearts stop beating together...it was so solful and hear breaking💔😭..even though it's just a story it felt like real...loved it so much👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: deelax18

my eyes became wet with tears on reading the last para...it felt like i was standing near them and watching their hearts stop beating together...it was so solful and hear breaking💔😭..even though it's just a story it felt like real...loved it so much👏

Thank you 🤗
I'm glad that you could actually feel that you were there... this really means a lot to me...
Thanks Again 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I read it just now... I am happy I read it when no one was around me... I wouldn't want anyone to notice that my eyes welled up reading this os...
This story has the most perfect ending any story could have... they are together irrespective of the situation...
Arjun's words were right, he was right... his heartbeat only beats for Arohi... his heartbeat is connected to hers n stopped beating the moment hers did...
I can't say anything more than this Veds... it was heart touching n emotional... or to say simply, you made me cry...

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