FF: fight for love new frm pg23 PT14/ 24

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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey guys, decided to do a FF, it starts from 2days epi 19th ( shivs love for ipshi)

CREDIT GOES TO RAHENA

Shiv has just confessed to us about his love, ip the SHIT

The scene then moves onto ANUPAM behind a tree hearing everything.

Anupam, heartbroken walks away. and is thinking

' what have i just seen.... shiv and ipshi????' he loves her??? that cant b true........ no!!! my eyes and ears wont deceive me, its true! how can that be? shiv never told me about this, and all this time i've been bragging about my love 4 ipshi? im a fool, y didnt i see this coming? i thought i knew shiv inside out?'

he breaks down

' BUT WAT ABT GAURI?' wat will she do? the poor girl has enough in her life!!! talking about LIFE, she hasnt got much of that left, shes giving it up for shiv???? the guy in some ways betraying her? thats not fair on gauri!!!! Gauri is a pious, noble person who deserves the best in life, and theres shiv, living a lie from the start......... wat shall i do?

if i tell the family, then everything will shatter? if i tell gauri then she wont b able to bear it? but she deserves to know the truth....... watever happens now is up2 me.................................

hey guys tell me wat u think? shall i continue?

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Posted: 19 years ago
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oh plz continue i want to read more 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey dats great! n no d credit dnt go to me....it goes to u!! pls continue.....trust me guys this will be a awsome FF!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: rahena

hey dats great! n no d credit dnt go to me....it goes to u!! pls continue.....trust me guys this will be a awsome FF!

yah rahena i am sure its going to be a great fanfic😊

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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey roopy.......gosh....how u been? hey ash...hurry...want another post.. 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Fantastic beginning!! i soo want to read more!!

i am certain this ff is gonna rock!!~

please do continue!!

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Posted: 19 years ago
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recap: Anupam is in a dilemma

Anupam pulls up at the kapoor household, surprised 2 see gauri sitting impatiently on the doorstep waiting 4 shiv.

gauri walks upto anupam
G: hey anupam, wat u doing here?
A: Ermmm, i wanted 2 ask if shiv was bak?
gauris face said everything
A: look gauri, dont do this 2 urself, u have been starving all day, please break ur fast. shivs probably going to come home very very late.
G: but im going 2 wait 4 him, its karva chaud, im fasting 4 my husband, whom i dearly love.
Anupams face creases up with anger and decides that he cant take it any longer.
A: listen gauri, lets go for a drive, for sum good decent fresh air.
gauri looks puzzled
A: hey dnt u trust me gauri?
G: its not that........
A: Come on, im sure shiv will call u once he arrives, i'll call him for u.
G: ok, but on 1 condition...
A: wats that?
G: u wont take me to a restaurant or cafe?
They both laugh
A: ok i promise
GAURI jumps into the car and they drive off.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey dats so good.....only one thing!! why is it so short? it was like a 1 minute read!! hurry next part b4 i feel sleepy...n make it long pls
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Amazing!! brilliant.. i love the way gauri says to Anupam.. "u wont take me
to a restaurant or cafe!"

please do continue soon!!

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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey pls cont 👏 👏 👏 ... i was kinda thinking that maybe this is what would actually happen in the show. if not in reality at least in a ff.

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