YOU ARE MY HEARTBEAT(2) *thread2*ch.34 page.141 - Page 76

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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow karina di,
Receiving ur pms brightens my day uppp...
The update was
Cool
Fantastic
Awesome
Mindblowwing
Romantic
Cute
Lovely
Caring
Wow wht can i say more bcoz m out of words... The update was amaZing... I loved the prt where virika disscused abt how are they gonna arrange the house... And truely if i was jeevika i would never move away frm the house... And there is so many memories...and also m happy finally they reach new york but sadly theres no snow.. I hope zaaine could see the snow... Just cant wait for the next update and thnk uuu for sending me a PM all the best for ur exams
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Posted: 12 years ago
Finally got a chance to read it and in peace lol
Damn Zaine is so cute bless him
Was so sweet how viren was making jeevika eat
And then when jeevika was bored he was gonna dance for
OMG they both were already planning stuff for the New baby
Especially viren he's so excited
Awww Zaine was gonna cry poor him didn't get any snow
The ending was just amazing my Zaine is really cute
So basically I loved your update as usual
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Posted: 12 years ago
awww
zaiine is just soo cute <3
i want him :P LOL
but i love virika here <3
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Done with exams and back with updates!!! Guys please give me good feedback otherwise it seriously makes me not want to continue!!! I'm going to have a little bit more lighter schedule and would love to give more updates, but now it depends on all you guys! So I want lots of comments and likes 😃 Enjoy!!!!

chapter 31

v - "Zaaine no sleeping please. Come on let's go eat downstairs"
z - "No daa sleep please"
v - "Zaaine, Jeevika hasn't eaten either. Do you want her to stay hungry" he said laughing knowing Zaaine would never say no now...
j - "oh my god Viren"
z - "Daa five minutes please"
j - "Okay five minutes. Close your eyes"

j - "I'll go freshen up" she said walking to the bathroom.
Meanwhile Viren was looking out through the windows and the beautiful view of the city. He turned around to see Zaaine fast asleep with his mouth half-open. He went and lay down on the bed next to him hugging him while he slept.
j - "Wow he's so darn tired"
Viren got up from Zaaine's side and got up and went towards Jeevika.
v - "I know plus jet lag. I could use some coffee right now"
j - "Same here"
v - "I don't think so. No more coffee for you. You need to decrease your caffeine intake"
j - "Viren, its fine"
v - "no you had so much coffee when you were pregnant with Zaaine. There's no way I'm going to let you drink coffee now. Plus you don't have more medical exams to pass"
j - "But I'm sleepy too" she said hugging Viren
v - "Then go to sleep after we eat. I'm starving now and this kid wants to sleep"

Viren walked over to Zaaine and tapped his little shoulder.
v - "Zaaine come on lets go eat and then you can go to sleep"
Zaaine got up from the bed with his eyes closed. He didn't want to go anywhere but he still obeyed his parents.
j - "Viren pick him up. He's too exhausted"
Viren did as Jeevika said and the three of them went downstairs with Zaaine half asleep on Viren.
j - "Shall we eat down the street on the food carts?"
v - "Yup let's go fast and come back. Zaaine is really really tired"
Viren and Jeevika walked together down on the streets of New York with Viren still carrying Zaaine. They came upon a small cart which smelled good to both Jeevika and Viren. They ordered their favorite Mexican food standing right next to the cart watching them make the food fresh.
v - "Zaaine can I put you down so you can eat"
z - "Please no daa" he said hugging him tighter.
j - "Okay here take a bite Zaaine"
z - "No food mommy"
v - "You haven't eaten in so long. If you get sick Zaaine then you can't see snow right?"
z - "Okay fine" he said turning his head around and taking a bite from Jeevika who was feeding both Zaaine and Viren now.
z - "Mommy you eat?"
j - "I'm eating too Zaaine" she said taking a bite to make him relieved.
v - "Isn't it yummy Zaaine. Should we get more?"
z - "Daa no feel good"
j - "What happened Zaaine?"
z - "Don't know mommy"
j - "You're really tired. After you take a nap you will feel better"
z - "Okay mommy" he said resting his head on Viren's shoulder closing his eyes.
j - "I'm full now' you?"
v - "I'm done too. You want to get something sweet to eat?"
j - "Not really. Zaaine do you want dessert or something" she said hoping he'd get a little excited
z - "No mommy. No feel good" he said holding his throat.
v - "Is your throat hurting?"
Zaaine nodded no and started crying softly.
j - "Do you feel like throwing up?"
Zaaine didn't know what was wrong.
j - "Let's walk back fast. He maybe feeling nauseous Viren"
v - "Let's go. Zaaine how about you walk a little it will make you feel better"
Zaaine nodded okay and Viren put him down. He held his parents' hand and walked back to the hotel. He observed the different people on the street. He saw so many different things which he hadn't back at home. Zaaine was curious to see the new places but he was barely being able to keep his eyes open.
v - "Zaaine you want to walk around or are you sleepy?"
z - "Want to walk daa"
v - "Jeevs you want to walk or are you tired"
j - "I'm fine actually. Let's walk around for a bit, I think he's starting to enjoy it now"
v - "Zaaine do you want to go to the hugest toy store"

Suddenly Zaaine's eyes grew wider listening to his dad. He was super duper excited now to go to this new store. Viren and Jeevika looked at each other and smiled seeing his excitement. The three of them walked around and finally Zaaine saw this huge Toys'R'Us store in front of his eyes. He ran inside so excited to see everything.

z - "Daa sooo many toys"
v - "I know. Go look around"

Zaaine was in paradise and frankly Virika were seeing him this happy. Probably the happiest he had ever been. The two of them walked behind Zaaine holding hands just looking at him pick up different toys and then put them back down after analyzing them. He was the son of lawyer Viren Vadhera after all 😆. They spent almost an hour here now going through every floor and every department. Zaaine hadn't picked up anything though.

v - "Zaaine don't you want to get any toy"
z - "No daa"
v - "Why not? You don't like them?"
z - "Me like all"
v - "Then why don't you get some?"
z - "Daa you choose for me"
v - "You pick out the ones you like the most. How about we go see the Cars section again"
z - "Okay daa"

Viren and Jeevika giggled at Zaaine and then walked to find something of his liking. Viren and Zaaine were looking at a few toys when Jeevika saw some cute teddy bears nearby. She walked over and picked out this one. It looked like the same one she and Viren had bought when they had come to New York last for their wedding. That time Jeevika had picked it up for Zaaine, and now again she was going to get one' a pink one in specific. Viren and Zaaine both walked to Jeevika who was looking at the teddy bears.

z - "Daa, mommy want teddy bear"
v - "This looks like the one'"
j - "That we had got for Zaaine" she said completing his sentence.
v - "This is quite cute. Last time we got it for one monkey and now we will buy it for someone else. Pick up that one" he said pointing to the pink fluffy one.
Jeevika picked it up smiling and looking at Zaaine a little confused.
z - "Daa who this pink bear for?"
v - "Uhmmm''"

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Edited by Kays94 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMFG SO FINALLY I AM FIRSTTT YAYAYAYAYAYA🥳
It's the time to disco
Me first me first me first😛
Okay enough
The update too good👏
My Zaineee ❤️
No one can take him away from me😡
Love of my life😆
He is so cute😳
Poor baby he was so tired😔
Loved the way he got all excited on the toy store thing😃
Zainee loves his mommy so much😊
Coming to Virika ❤️
The hug 😳😉
Jeevs feeding Viren and Zainee Aww😊😳
And the ending was beautiful👏⭐️
Continueee sooonnn😆

Edited by Virika11 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Finally someone is first to res 😆 I'm happy for you haju 😉 I hope you aren't jumping and dancing 🤣
And lets be formal welcome back karina 🤣

coming to update:

My zaaine ❤️ can do anything for momma 😆
viren blackmailed him 😲 viren very bad, don't blackmail my baby 😔

z - "Mommy you eat?"
j - "I'm eating too Zaaine

I love the way Zaaine asks or love Jeevika

my zaaine needs a proper rest, he's not feeling well awww 😭

Dear Zaaine 😆 that pink toy is for your momma ❤️ a love from viren to jeevika so sushhh you should understand this 😉

Edited by Dhoxi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Aww ...
Such a cute update after so long
Aww zainne is damn cute...
Hope he will b fine n njoi his trip
Really he is lawyers son...
His questions...
Really waiting for virens ans...
Hope to see virika romance in nextupdate
Update asap...
Update wfl soon too
Edited by mehakLUVSvirika - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
I think, I should learn how to be a bit formal so:
Welcome Squiggles!!
Every write in the forum welcomes the cutest writer back 🤣

Keany, Don't mind but more than you I was waiting for my Zaaine ❤️

He's MINE & only MINE, so DARE somebody even tries to touch him!! I'll haunt you till death!! 😡

So coming back to the update, I loved the way Zaaine loves his mom or cares for his parents by heart ❤️

OMG 😲 Viren was blackmailing my poor baby
Warn Viren not to do that again!! 😡

My Baby is sooo cute ❤️
The way he said
Z: Mommy you eat?
Awww
N he's such a good boy, I LOVE HIM THE MOST
Zaaine shushh that pink fluffy teady is for your little sissy 😳
❤️ Continue Soon ❤️
Edited by Charucrazy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awwwieee this one was one of my fav update karina 😳

simplyyy lovelyyy and damn cuteee update 😳😃

poor baby zaaine he really needs rest but i loved how he got excited after hearing the name of Toy store 😃
he was checking every toy but didnt choose any 😆

awww viren pointed towards a pink teddy bear...😳
zaaine is damn adorable how cutely he asked about the pink teddy 😛
waiting for viren's reply 😉

u back with a bang dear 😃
thanx for the pm 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lovely update

Loved the update

Yay they've finally reached

Poor Zaaine he was tired

The toys r us scene was cute

Jeevika wanting to pick a teddy out for the new one

Then Viren picked the teddy up

Aww they're going to have to survive Zaaine's questions again

Aww,but the way he asked was sooo cute

Thanks for the pm please continue soon
Edited by Love_Family - 12 years ago

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