True Love always remains

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hey Everyone😊

Inspired by Sareeta di's very creative work😃👏👏..that often leaves one speechless.... I too have managed to put together a few lines😳. Hope you all like it....

Some people love life, some people love themselves

Very rare is a love that is ready to give up life

Life can be unfair, people can be cruel

But Love remain pure and becomes truer

Love is blissfull never vengeful

Tears remain in eyes, but we hear no loud cries

A smile on the lips is all I ask

For my Love to give

Deciet kissed with hope, one day

Have strength to cope with my loss and your gain

Life may be no more but love,

True Love always remains

Just close your eyes and find me there

Silence you might hear, but reach out and hold my hand

Fear replaced by faith, courage mixed with fate

In another world, another life, with us

destiny will play another game

But soul remain the same

A fight that will be your gain and my gain

No more loss no more pain,

True Love always remains!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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OMG...dunt tell me dis is ur first time...so sweet...its vry vry vry vry vry nice,touching...dekha sareeta gurujee...aapkey shrano mei aakar saregama_fan poet ban gayi....sirf ek mai hi hoo jiska daaman khaali hai...i amjealous saregama_fan jee....ehehhehehe..
but really u r gr8(merey gurujee se zyaada nahi...aakhir unhii ki shaagird hai na 😆 )

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Chandni, first of all I bow down really humbled for even mentioning my name and saying that my writings inspired you! Its very humbling and surprising and my eyes are moist!! Oh bless my soul! You are being very very kind!

Now, the lines were very beautiful and very well written dear! Keep them coming! 😊

Sughra Cheli, tujh par bhi bhaggu ji ki kripa drishti hai... main tho unki cheli hoon, main kya tujhpar kripa sakti hoon, BHaggu ji sharan mein jaa bacche, moksh alag, kavithaaon ka gyaaan zarooor aa jayega!! 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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jasi aapki aagya gurujee...aapka hukum mera updeysh!! 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: sughra2

jasi aapki aagya gurujee...aapka hukum mera updeysh!! 😆

Sughra, cheli , yaar thank you sooooooooooooo much for your kind words!! You do know, you are being very nice and kind to me!!! 😊 Heartfelt thanks and gratitude to you, hand on my heart!😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: sareeta

Sughra, cheli , yaar thank you sooooooooooooo much for your kind words!! You do know, you are being very nice and kind to me!!! 😊 Heartfelt thanks and gratitude to you, hand on my heart!😊

Haaaaai.......aapney humey shukriya kahkar sachch mei humko apna aur deewaana banaa diya....laikin sach mei aap agr apney dil par haath na rakhti toh bhi mai aapki baato ko maan leytii😆...coz ur words r really shoooo shweet...aur yeh humaari achchaayi hi hoti hai joh humey doosro meia achchaayi dhoondwaata hai...aur aap kabhi yeh na samajhna hum yeh baatei dil se nahi kahtey...but aapki tarah yeh zikr karna bhooljaatey hai HAND ON HEART...heheheh😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Excellent yaar, meri padosan... wah wah!! wah wah!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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padosan kaise? aapke ghar daal lene aayi thi chandni? ya aap gaye the unke yahan?
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j/k.. we are all neighbours..one way or another
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Posted: 18 years ago
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its great..... i have no words..... excellent 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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...true love always remains 😊

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