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little.angel56

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Posted: 12 years ago

#441

Heyy
I just read this beautiful story

Must tell you that you both did a spelndous job
The updates were so perfect and so soothing
Oh i loved how you shwed virika <3 still entangled in the relation
Jiju n bhabhi hahha

Manvi and virat, their story seems t b a little messed up

Please continue thiss
And pm me tooo

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kryanvirika05

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Posted: 12 years ago

#442

OMG OMG read all of it in one go!

its awesome!!

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago

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pls continue sooon nd do pm me :-)

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Niha

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Sorry everyone for not replying in, like, ages. Have been so busy over the last 6 months.So here's the chapter. (btw sorry for leaving the last chapter on such a dramatic bit)

Chapter 15

(Last time)He clentched his fists into balls again. Virat couldn't take it anymore and he punched Viraaj in the stomach. Viraaj dropped to the ground, with all the glasses smashing to the floor. He looked at Virat with surprise in his face.

"How dare you..." Virat's words were put out quietly so that only Viraaj could hear. The man below him looked up confused as Virat's anger grew and grew. Virat grabbed him from his shirt and punched on one of his cheeks, Viraaj took defence and punched him back.

There was a yell from a distance and a girl came to stop the two from fighting.

"Please Virat, please stop," The girl cried. Virat didn't look at her but continued hitting the guy.

"Let's take this outside," Viraaj said, clearly remembering the girl who was pleading to stop the fight.

Jeevika smiled as Khushi and Arnav walked around and did their vows. Everyone was smiling at the couple. She looked to her right expecting Maanvi to be there too, laughing at the couple, but she wasn't there. Jeevika searched amongst the crowd for her sister but she was no where to be seen.
**"Please guys, just please stop," she pleaded as the guys took it outside. She ran, following them, as tears started to slowly trail down her cheeks. She didn't want anyone to get hurt.
However, both of them continued to ignore her. Virat threw a couple of punches whilst Viraaj dodged them, soon following with some kicks.
"Is that all you've got?" Viraaj snickered. This built up more hatred in Virat and he grew more violent.
"JUST STOP!" Screamed Maanvi, her face wet from crying. "Just stop please!"

**
Meanwhile, all the wedding rituals were now completed. Everyone smiled and laughed as they made some jokes about the newly wed couple. The couple went around asking for the guest's blessings.
Jeevika looks around the crowd for her sister. Unfortunately, she couldn't spot Maanvi anywhere in the crowd. A person taps her on the shoulder. Hoping it was Maanvi, she turns around; only to see Viren.
"Jeevika, are you okay?" he askes her.
"No, I can't see Maanvi anywhere," she replies back. "She should be here, she wanted to go with Khushi."
"Jeevika, maybe she got so excited that she's already in the car?" Viren suggests.
"I hope so," She replies back.
**
"No, you stop it," Viraaj says. "Stop it with your drama queen act; it's stupid."
"Don't you dare call her stupid. If anyone here is stupid, it's you," Virat exclaims. Maanvi looks at him shocked. Why is he standing up for me, she thinks to herself as she wipes her tears away.
"You are such a *BEEP* jerk," Maanvi says with anger as she walks closer towards him. "First you cheat on me with my best friend, and now you've come all the war here to India just to ruin my life? I have never met such a rude, arrogant, selfish *BEEP* guy like you," she yells, slapping him across the face.
Viraaj instantly places his hand over his cheek which has just been slapped.
"OMG... you just didn't..." He staggers in shock as his hands reach for something on the ground.
"Maanvi, move out of the way!" Virat shouts as he pushes her behind him. Viraaj throws a large stone, which hits Virat on the head.
**
"Ma," Khushi said, with tears in her eyes, "hum ja rahi hai."
"Beethi, hum tumko bohuth miss karonge," she replied back.
"Mein be aur zaidaing tum ko miss karonging," NK added. Everyone laughed at him.
"NK, she's going to be staying at your house," Viren told him.
"Oh, but still yaar, mein toh miss karonging."
"Karonge," Jeevika corrected him.
Everyone watched the couple and the groom's family as they left. Jeevika tried to smile so that Khushi wouldn't cry.
Viren started to stare at Jeevika; admiring her beauty. Then Jeevika turned and he lowered his gaze.
"Are you okay?" She asked him.
"Yeah, I'm fine," he replied back, walking away from her. I wonder when the time will be right, he thought.
**
"No!" Maanvi exclaimed as Virat started bleeding. "What have you done?!"
"Guess you have no one to protect you now," Viraaj smirked. He walked away from the scene like nothing had even happened.
"Virat," she says, trying to shake him. "Please wake up, please be okay."
Blood started to slowly flow out of his forehead and it was staining their clothes. Maanvi's eyes started to well up again; tears falling down her cheeks at a rapid pace.
"It's all my fault, Virat," she talks to herself. "I should have never told you."
Virat's chest starts to heave slower; his breathing rate started to slow down. "Please Virat, please don't leave me," she whispers as she wipes away her tears.
"Virat needs me now. I can't sit here crying," Maanvi thinks to herself.
She tears a strip from her dupatta and starts to wipe the bloody mess. As the material soaks up with blood, she tears another. Her clothes didn't matter much to her; she had to save him.
Using the piece she had just ripped, she carefully bandages Virat's head.
"How am I going to get him to a hospital?" Maanvi ponders as she looks around the street. She gets up and starts wondering around the road.
"Ricksaw!" She yells at passing by drivers. After continuous yelling, Maanvi finally manages to get a ricksaw to a hospital.

Edited by -Niha- - 12 years ago

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Kanishka

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Posted: 12 years ago

#445

when is d next chapter comingg?

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Niha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#446

Originally posted by: kanishkakaran
when is d next chapter comingg?

In an hour or two, i have to type it up :)

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Aliyah

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Posted: 12 years ago

#447

OMG VIRAAATTT!!!!!!! Is he OK?? 😲 Viraaj, how dare he!? Ugh!? You know this is one of my best FF's ever. really love. This chapter was amazing and I can't wait to read the rest. 😊

I really want Virat and Manvi to end up together. Let's hope we see some VirManish scenes soon. 😉

THANKS FOR FINALLY UPDATING!👏 Great work! Love it ❤️

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Niha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#448

Originally posted by: Menzena
OMG VIRAAATTT!!!!!!! Is he OK?? 😲 Viraaj, how dare he!? Ugh!? You know this is one of my best FF's ever. really love. This chapter was amazing and I can't wait to read the rest. 😊

I really want Virat and Manvi to end up together. Let's hope we see some VirManish scenes soon. 😉
THANKS FOR FINALLY UPDATING!👏 Great work! Love it ❤️

Awwh omg, thank you for making my day :')

I'll try to update sooner, in like a weekish.

Haha real sorry for the late update😳

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preity_d

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Posted: 12 years ago

#449

omg ws waiting for sooo long
thank God at last
runs to read

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Aliyah

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Posted: 12 years ago

#450

Originally posted by: -Niha-

Awwh omg, thank you for making my day :')
I'll try to update sooner, in like a weekish.

Haha real sorry for the late update😳

I just read the other half and it was also as usual ... AMAZING!

You are an awesome writer. I hope Virat's OK . 😊 Aww ... you deserve all the compliments you can get. When your update's are so good, i don't think anyone will care about them being late don't worry. 😉

Thanks again 🤗

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