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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: fireroad99

I WISH IN THE SHOW I COULD SEE UDAY BEGGING IT WOULD BE SO CUTE


same here but sure channel would not let me show so much physical imtimate scene hee
glad that you liked it
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesum update..👏
anni dear..

loved it..👍🏼

plz plz do cont soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
hope everythng gets Fine soon..
betwn Manveer...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: princessSonia

hope everythng gets Fine soon..

betwn Manveer...😊


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: princessSonia

hope everythng gets Fine soon..

betwn Manveer...😊


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Posted: 12 years ago
very nice awsome all chapters are awsome amazing mindblowing 1 is awsome 2 is amazing 3 is rockinh 4 is buhot acha 5 zabardast 6 maza agaya 7 kiya baat han 8 OMG fantestic 9 kiya baat ha wah wah 10 fabulouse maza agaya han yar update soon thanks for the pm n sorry for the late comment
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: pari_vania

very nice awsome all chapters are awsome amazing mindblowing 1 is awsome 2 is amazing 3 is rockinh 4 is buhot acha 5 zabardast 6 maza agaya 7 kiya baat han 8 OMG fantestic 9 kiya baat ha wah wah 10 fabulouse maza agaya han yar update soon thanks for the pm n sorry for the late comment


awn i am glad that you liked it
thank you so much
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Posted: 12 years ago

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Edited by annesha18 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Chappy 11

The sun rose high above the mango gorve which fringed the western extremity of the uday niwas palace as the timy sparrows settled themselves on the huge fountain at the gateway of the palace , and the tree leaves danced to the tune of the pleasant soft winds ,a bright flicker of light enetered the palace and glowed it , as the first ray hit the lazy prince and he opened his eyes ,his back pained like hell well it was very much obivious in the history of world no one ever slept comfortably on a sofa never as he searched the room just to find his newly wedded wife ,his princess comfortably sleeping on her bed as some rays of sun made her frown he did not want anything to disturb her sleep so he pulled the curtain covering the rays of sun and pulled the comforter over her body which had slipped in the night he looked at her face ,she was so anglelic ,she was sleeping like a baby as he oculd not control but caressed her face and smiled ,but as he noticed the change in her expression he moved away he grabbed his towel and went to the washroom a warm shower freshened his mind and he got into his track while the towel hung on his shoulder and made his way outside but unknown to him someone else was also storming inside the bathroom as his bare hard muscular chest dashed with her soft sender skin he looked down at her as she looked up into her eyes ,time had paused for them , as both were drown in each others eyes ,uday looked into her wide black eyes it had so much of pain and her eyes were badly sollen the worst this all was because of him as he broke the eye lock and made his way out of the bathroom as he was aware standing there meant nothing but crushing the poor innocent soul of manyata ,while there a puzzle ran in her mind ,she undressed herself and got down of the hot shower as her muscle surrender below the shower and her mind ran a puzzle ,it was filled with the thoughts of her husband , his sudden change in behavior what was his coming plan ? after what she said or did yesterday will he hurt her father all ran widly in her mind but what troubled her was his behavior he just ignored her atleast he could have asked about her wound , but why the hell on earth was she so bothered ? there were millions of unanswered question in her mind as after completing her shower she dried herself and got into a bathrobe , she headed in the bedroom while her eyes searched for him ,but he was no where to be seen ,just there was a packet kept on the bed ,she took it and unwrapped the cover just to see a beautiful yellow sari ,it was beautiful and the working on it was marvelous it was so tempting manyata so abdly wanted to be in that sari but problems are always running back of manyata , she had no idea who to wrap the thing around her so wearing that was out of her imagination with a sadden face she kept in the wardrobe and got into her casual tee and shorts indeed no one could ever imagine her with salwar or magalsutra , she had decided to neither apply sinddor or magalsutra as she neither loved uday nor respected him as her husband so there was no need to show off she was the manyata she had been and nothing in the world could ever change her ,poor uday he waited patiently down stairs to see his wifey in the beautiful sari he had choosen but to his great disappointment she came down with her casual tee and short although he could never help his naughty eyes admiring her tempting milky legs but his heart ached she had neither her magalsutra nor her sindoor it was clearlt signifying she did not accept him as her husband yet , but he was not going to give up ,here she came down and palced herself on the breakfast table except him to outburst for not wearing the dress he choose but she was shocked as he passed a smile and pulled the chair to let her sit and served her the food they quietly had there breakfast as uday decided to put an end to this silence as he cheerfully said

UDAY:there is a good news for you princess

MANYATA:what are you going to divorce me

She replied sharply after last night she no more feared him as he passed a smirk and said

UDAY:no princess that would be a bad news na your cousin brother is coming to visit us today

MANYATA:Yea I heard about him from dadisabh

UDAY:just wanted to inform you so that you do not think them to eb someone from human trafiking like you did when the first time you met me

MANYATA:I wish you was getting raped everynight by stranger is better than been raped by your OWN husband

She wanted him to out burst in anger ,she badly wanted him to pick a fight she had anger ,frustration in her mind and his calm nature irritated him she would go to any extend to spoil his food but he greatly disappointed her as eh smiled at her and said

UDAY:awn my sweet princess was I that hard on you

This was more than enough she could no longer ebar his cool attitude she got up her eyes all teary as she looked at him and scremed

MANYATA:oh please uday ,stop it STOP ACTING SO GOOD OK WE BOTH KNOW THIS IS NOT REAL YOU PLEASE YOU ARE BAHAVING OS GOOD SO POLITE DID 'NT EVEN SLAP ME SINCE YESTERDAY PLEASE BE BACK TO YOURSELF BECAUSE BECAUSE IF I GET ADDICTED TO THIS UDAY IT WILL BE HEART BREKAING FOR ME WHEN YOU GET BACK TO YOUR REAL SELF PLEASE BE THE GUY YOU HAD BEEN THAT WOULD RELIEVE ME FROM COMING PAIN

Saying this she rushed up to her room leaving him all dumbstruck her sudden outburst made him realize how badly he had hurted her soul for which eh would never forgive himself

Jane kyun, har lamha hai tham gaya
Jaane kyun, khoon zara jam gaya
Jaane kyun, aankhen namm si hui
Jaane kyun, manzilein kho gayi aur so gayi

Tujh bin tanha hai yeh raatein
Bin alfaazon ke yeh baatein
Bin baarish ki hain barsatein
Ab main jaanu kyun

Tujh bin jaane kyun
Tujh bin tanha hai yeh raatein
Bin alfaazon ke yeh baatein
Bin baarish ki barsatein
Ab main jaanu kyun
Tujh bin jaane kyun

Jaane kyun, har lamha hai tham gaya
Jaane kyun, khoon zara jam gaya
Jaane kyun, aankhen namm si hui

[ Tujh bin tanha hai yeh raatein
bin alfaazon ke yeh baatein
Bin baarish ki barsaatein
ab main jaanu kyun
Tujh bin jaane kyun ] (x2 times)

Bas khushi ki talaash mein main toh yunhi chalta raha
Jaane na dheere dheere yun chalte chalte yeh main kahan aa gaya
Dekhenge mera rasta gham bhi kahin yeh socha na tha
Maine inn raaston se mazaak me raasta poocha na tha

[ Tujh bin tanha hai yeh raatein
bin alfaazon ke yeh baatein
Bin baarish ki barsatein
ab main jaanu kyun
Tujh bin jaane kyun ]

There he sat as his legs were rooted to the ground , but his heart ached realizing that for this outburst his princess was hungry ,she had nopt eaten anything since last night and her health was also not in a good condition so he took her plate and went to there bedroom there he saw her quietly standing by the window , looking blanky with no expression on her face , as he came to her and without another tore some food as she stuffed it inside her mouth she eat without complaining as he continued to feed her after the breakfast was over he took her to the bed and tugged her inside the bed as he was about to leave he felt a soft hand in his wrist he turned to see it was she as with an helpless and guilt in her face she softly asked

MANYATA:now uday please have your breakfast I know you are straaving since yesterday

It was just a simple sentence but seeing her concern for him enlighted his mood he was so happy that she cared for him he went downstairs and sat there completing his breakfast it would take time indeed but he knew one day manyata would fall in love with him after compelting his breakfast he heard a knock at his door he opened and after that a tiny figure jumped on him sceaming it was none other than kunal

KUNAL;maamusa I am back

UDAY:hey champ take it slow or we will crumble down on the floor

As kunal was taken by vijay and he shared a warm friendly hug with his sister as he said

UDAY:chotti I missed you so much

UNNATI:I missed you to dada sorry I could not come to your marriage thank to some specific person

Saying this she gave a dead glare to vijay who was carring unal in his arms and was playing uday saw his face turned pale at other point of life uday would have laughed at his helpless ness but now he was preety aware as he often got this glares from manyata and he knew how dangerous those were as vijay stammered

VIJAY:um ii am sorry I thought that your marriage is a week away

UNNATI:woa vijay you thought

UDAY:it is ok chotti let it be don't torture the poos soul lets go

They headed inside the palce as kunal jumped into uday arms ,they both were closely attached to each other they sat on the sofa as suddenly kunal 's eyes travelled upwards and mummered

KUNAL:princess

done with this chappy

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no res box 😡

promo

manveer date

shoot out at the ceremony

Edited by annesha18 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Reserved !

Wait !
This is no Res Box 😆
I am updating my comment in a few minutes !

Unreserved !

Wow !
I am first 🥳
I so wanted to be at least on this FF !

Coming to the update,
Great chapter !
Nicely written 👏
Loved it !
This is one of my favorite stories !
And i am falling in love with it again !

Uday loves her a lot !
And is very caring !

Manyata is confused with his behavior 😆
I don't know if anyone does but i found it a bit funny !

You displayed their emotions very well especially Uday's !
Their conversation was ...
I can't get the right word ! 😆
But it was a bit funny !
Manyata's outburst was kinda expected 😆

Finally Unnati and Vijay are here !
Maybe you have mentioned and i don't remember but ...
Do they both know the whole story ?

I am excited with the promo !
Especially for their date and how she agrees !
Also how she gets along with Unnati and Vijay !

The shooting thing is scary
Is there going to be some tragedy or someone getting hurt ?
That makes me sad now itself !

Continue soon ...
Thanks for the PM !



Edited by catty2000 - 12 years ago

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