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Posted: 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago
Sorry...for being late...I'll update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Soory...!!!

Got up busy these days...
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Posted: 12 years ago
my exams are approaching so i won't be able to update frequent but i'll do update in a time..you have to bear with this...


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Posted: 12 years ago
After long time i am updating...

Here is my next part hope you like it
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Posted: 12 years ago

Love Never Looses

Part 52

It was a dine place'..where round tables were there for the people'and if anyone request any song or some sort of music for the couple that also played and even some lovey-dovy couples joined their legs together and moved a bit on the beats of the music'
The Sharma family entered the dine'it was set a cozy environment and very less family or rather should say couple were their'a waiter'drawn them to their desk'.they sat around the table..enjoying the aura..as when they entered a soft music was playing..in the request of someone'.

Nupur..admiring..:Wow'.It's really nice place..

Shriya:Yes'!!! Dadaa'

Mayank:Thank you'

Nupur:You know Mayank it feels so special jab koi apne chahne waalo k naam ek soft sa song dedicate karta hain'her eyes were admiring the couple wo had just requested a song for his beloved wife'

He recalled the time..when he had actually sang a song for her'.he thought tease her asked in a playfull full,"Kyu'Tumhe yaad nahi ki'raising his collor'.kisi ne tumhare liye to poora ka poora ek song gaya tha'."

She smiled remembering the time of their confession when he had sang a song for her'.that moment only she felt blessed to have Mayank in her life'she gave him a sweet smile..a smile coming straight form the heart''..

Just then only Shriya spoke and asked Nupur,"Mamma aapke liye kisne song gaya tha'"

Mayank,"Arey apni Mamma se kyu pooch rahi ho'mein batata hoon na'"

Where's Nupur's condition was such that she want to just ran from there she was feeling so shy and embarressing infront of her daughter she tried to excuse,"Excuse me..mein abhi aati hoon'",Just then Mayank held her wrist and said,"Arey aap kahan jaa'rahi hain..aapke bina mein apni beti ko kese bataunga ki tumhare liye gana mene gaya tha'." stressing on the word mene more...

Nupur's condition was as same as tomato..she was all red..and playfully hit Mayank's shoulder'she was feeling so embarressed..that she lowered her eyes down..tucking her hair strands behind her ear'it was indeed very difficult situation for her..difficult in facing her own daughter'.

Nupur:Mayank bas bhi karo'.

Mayank..whispering into her ear unnoticed by Shriya,"Apni beti k saamne itna sharmana band karo Nupur varna vo kya sochegi'"

She glared at him to which he said,"Acha ohkay..okay'ab hum tumhe aur tease nahi karenge'."She give him you-better-be look when abruptly Shriya spoke,"Mamma'.Dadda ne sachi mein aapke liye song gaya tha'."

She just nodded her head when another question was coming for them'such that they couldn't able to believe their ears..that their girl could even think about this also she asked,"Mamma'aapne Dadda k liye kya kiya fir'"

Both were dumbfounded'Shriya asked her with so much innocence in her eyes'that it was getting hightly impossible for them to give answer to her question where Nupur was complete red in the emabressment..Mayank was quiet enjoying the scene he folded his hands across his chest and said bugging her,"Haan Nupur batao'na Shriya'tumne mere kya kiya fir'."

Nupur's condition was getting worsen she wished to dig a hole buried herself inside it'.it was highly getting emabrressing scene for her an Mayank instead of helping her'.has joined his hands with Shriya'she want to hide herself from both of them'as Mayank was constantly giving her teasing looks..and where Shriya was giving her most cute face and seeking that her mother would say something'.

Gathering her courage she got up from the seat..leaving Mayank bewildered'he about to aske her about where she is going she interrupted in between and said to Shriya,"Shona'dekhte jao..mein aapke'Dadda k liye'kya karti hoon'" Glancing to Mayank she neared down'while his eyes her popping out'as there was just-watch-out-look'and smilingly whispered in his ear,"Just wait and watch Mr.Sharma'"
Saying she moved towards the stage..and whispered something..to the piano man and the guitarist'.he was just waiting what she is upto now..but somewhere feeling so much satisfaction and content in his heart..he looked towards the Shriya who has a waiting look on her face he said,"Shriya'dekhte hain Mamma kya karti hain'.." . She smiled to him and they both'glanced to the lady on whom their life is dependent'

"Ladies and Gentlemen..a very special aanouncement to you all..there is a lady..who wish to sing a beautifull song for her beloved'.so here it is'Mam'come on stage'"

She took the mike stand'between her palms and closed her eyes'recalling the moment when she saw Mayank'.after escaping from the cage of Dhruv'.it seems she had seen her life again..that day she actually took a breath'that day her heart thud a beat'a soft curve of her lips appear on her face..as she begin the songs'seems words were coming straight from her heart'..

Faili thi siyaah raatein , aayaa toh subh leke'
Khamkha se zundagi mein jeene ki wajah leke'

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She opened her eyes..and glanced to him'he was looking with so much 'love and affection making her heart to pounder all her emotions and feelings in this song'.she continued'with her gaze on him'
]

Faili thi siyaah raatein , aayaa toh subh leke'
Khamkha se zundagi mein jeene ki wajah leke'

[
Remembering the time when her parent's refused to accept her..and dejected her on phone'.that time also..Mayank's eyes'pours full support and faith to her'and today also..there isn't any change in feelings'it still same rather had deepen with time'
]

Khoya tha samundaron mein tanha safina mera
Saahiloon pe ayaa hain tu jaane kis tarah leke'
Kuch to hain tujhse raabta'
Kuch to hain tujhse Raabta'
Kese hum jaane hume kya pata
kuch to hain tujhse raabta

[
Shriya'admiring the song..:Dadda Mamma aapke liye kitna acha song gaa rahi hain na'

Mayank'lost in her melodious voice..:Haan beta aapki Mamma sach mein bahut acha gaa rahi hain dil se'sach mein..I am feeling so blessed'.

Though she wasn't getting anyword what her father was saying..but still could able to manage to understand that he is loving it.
]

Ab kya hain kehna..
Humko hain rehna'
Jaatein bhula teri baahon mein panah leke'.

Faili thi siyaah raatein , aayaa toh subh leke'
Khamkha se zundagi mein jeene ki wajah leke'

[
Somewhere at the distant Manager had heard the convo of father-daughter duo'he approached to them and down near Mayank and said to him,"Sir 'why don't you join your wife..please'"

His words left Mayank in deep thought as still Nupur isn't his wife..they would be getting married he was going to protest when Shriya interrupted,"Dadda jao na aap bhi Mamma k pass'.dono saath saath'"

Now how on earth he could deny a soft plea of his daughter..adjusting his jacket..he went towards her'.and forwarded his hands infront of her..without thinking a single second she placed her hand on his..while he pulled her lightly to him..making her hands to each his shoulder..while he grabbed her wrist..sending chills down across her spine'' while they were swiftly moving rythmcly'with the music'.

]

Meherbaani jaate jaate mujh pe kar gaya..
Guzarta sa lamha ek daaman bhar gaya'
Tera Nazara mila'
Roshan sitaraa..mila'
Takdeer ka jaise koi..ishaara mila'

[
Deeply looking into his..eyes..both were moving unknown to the presence of audience'just in the flow of their love'.
]

Roothi hui khwaishon mein thodi si subh leke'
Aaya tu khaamoshiyon mein baaton ki chirah leke
Khoya tha samundaron mein tanha safina mera
Saahiloon pe ayaa hain tu jaane kis tarah leke'

[
Her eyes gets moist with a low motion when she was seperated from Mayank'he cupped her face'.negately nodding..not allwing her tear to fall from her eyes'she bend down..and placed her head on his shoulder'want to feel his presence..his aura..in her'..
]

Kuch to hain tujhse raabta'
Kuch to hain tujhse Raabta'
Kese hum jaane hume kya pata
kuch to hain tujhse raabta
Ab kya kehna humko hain rehna
Jannetein bhula ke teri baahin mein panah leke'.

[
She broke their hug'and with all her emotions..sang the last lines of the song..as if his whole life is dependent on him'.

]

Faili thi siyaah raatein , aayaa toh subh leke'
Khamkha se zundagi mein jeene ki wajah leke'

[
Her life is nothing without him'.he is her soul..her breath'her heartbeat..her everything..she is here..because of the strength ..the purity of his love'because of him she breath'because of him'she survived'she felt'it's for him she has taken birth in this world''
]

Everyone..clapped..when the manager took the mike and said.,"What a lovely couple..I must say you both seems to be meant for each awesome''give a huge round of applause to Mr.and Mrs. Sharma'

They smiled to the audience'and noticed Shriya clapping with more enthuthiasm'..they move towards their table'Shriya extcidely said,"Wow'.Mamma ye to bahut acha tha'"

Nupur..smiling..:Thanks dear'

Shriya:Ekk baat bolu'.

Mayank:Haan bolo'.

Shriya:Aap dono shach mein ek doosre ke saath bahut ache lagte ho'.bahut bahut ache...flashing her million dollar smile she said....

Both smiled lovingly to her and said in union,"THANK YOU.." and kissed on both sides of her cheek..while she just giggled...

Rest of the dinner went fantastic..with Mayank and Shriya on one team'teasing Nupur..while Nupur herself'fighting with dual..and sometimes'passing her fury glare'.but yet anther moment...she too joined them...laughing with them...


Hope you Like it


Edited by shafy_MN - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
i feel dis was d most beautiful update of urs...jst amazing...!!!!!!!!!!!!!
update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sonuluvsmayur

i feel dis was d most beautiful update of urs...jst amazing...!!!!!!!!!!!!!

update soon...



Thanks a lot...

thank you so much
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Posted: 12 years ago
awsummm dii...👏
its jst magical

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