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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: meera.chaudhuri

jaldi update kar 😆 ab wait nahi hota 😆

little left will update in one hour
romance ke liye wait to karna hi hoga😆 bahut saara romance😉😆
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little left will update in one hour
romance ke liye wait to karna hi hoga😆 bahut saara romance😉😆

emotional atyachaar 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
Plz dear update soon...can't wait now
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Posted: 12 years ago
Uzma ek ghanta kabka ho gaya 😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
update is ready just checking once
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Hello m back sorry for being late tensed due to result yup this Saturday fingers crossed hahahaha if I passed with good marks than only vl b able to continue or else my mum will take my lappy and phone so consider it as a last update if something happens imfaooo

PYAAR TOH HONA HI THA

Viraat came back to room and didn't find maanvi he heard washroom door open he turned his face to other side since he know maanvi was still in those clothes ''maanvi isse mai tumhare clothes hai yehlo'' he handed her back which jeevika gave her still his back facing her maanvi was falling for him more harder and harder seeing his so sweet gestures .she took clothes from him and walked in washroom while viraat's went in balcony for making some call maanvi walked in room after having shower she walk towards the dressing table her hairs were still wet she was wearing a ligh pink anaarkali with silver but light work on it which was perfectly fitted on her curves with net sleeves and dori on back revealing her whole back she went and wear her mangulsutra which shows that she belongs to someone she put sindoor in her partition which was shining like sun rays saying that u r someones wife she wore her red bangles which shows she is a new bride she didn't put any make but still her face was glowing like moon light and with out using any blush her cheeks were all pink she was looking a new bride from head to toe it was something different which can't be describe she kept her hair on one side (same as in the show) she was ready now but still their was a time so she went to clear the room.

Meanwhile viraat entered the room and his eyes fall on the angel his wife he just kept admiring her he fold his hands and rested his back on the balcony's door and kept watching her while she was clearing the bed he was just lost in her he walked near her and she felt his presence ,she saw him coming from the corner of her eyes she was nervous and subconscious she was not able to think anything she kept looking him from the corner of her eyes and started massaging her hands he smirk and came near her he came near her she turn around to move but stop seeing him so close.

Both were facing eachother her hairs were flying due to his breathe and he felt warm breathe on her bare chest maanvi was totally numb their heart beat was running more than the normal speed viraat lean closer to say something in her ear but bang came voice from behind both moved apart and saw jeevika and shanaya were standing with their hands on their eyes shanaya ''nahi hum ne kuch nahi dekha'' and jeevika nodded in agreement maanvi's cheek was full red in embarresment she was looking here and there while viraat was rubbing his back on his neck and also embarresed as well jeevika spoke looking their condition ''waise agar aapka romance khatam hogaya ho toh maanvi tumko maa ne neeche bulaya hai'' and they moved out but shanaya turn around and said ''waise agli baar darwaaza ban karna na bhulna'' and both went giggling. Maanvi was about to go but viraat held her hand maanvi's eyes were widen she was shocked and nervous she closed her eyes viraat pulled her closer her back with jerk she collapsed in his arms while her back facing she closed her eyes ''Maanvi'' he said listing her name from his mouth was like melody for her,when ever he use to call her by her name her heart skips a beat ''this back view is for no one sirf……….'' he said while covering her back with her hair he didn't complete his sentence he freed her from his arms and she ran out of the room blushing like hell because somewhere deep down her heart she knew what he was about to say.

Viraat was still at his place surprise by his own actions he brushed all his thought and went towards washroom

Maanvi came downstairs and their she saw two grinning faces waiting for her it was jeevika and shanaya she know what was coming next so she avoided eyes contact from them she was about to pass from them when they caught her hand and stopped her maanvi looked up at them while both were giving her evil smirk ''kya ho raha tha uppar'' asked jeevika with raising her eyebrows,maanvi was looking everywhere but not at them and said ''kya ho raha tha…..ku…..kuch bhi toh nahi'' ''acha toh tum aur viraat kya khicdi banarahe thei'' asked jeevika pretenting to be innocent ''khicdi nahi bhabhi baby'' said shanaya listing shanaya's word maanvi went all red and both hi-5 eachother maanvi slap on her arm and said ''bahut bol rahi hai tu aaj kal'' before shanaya could say anything vanshika mom came and said ''utgayi tum maanvi beta aaj tumhare pehla din hai as bahu toh aaj tumhe sabse pehle viraat ke saath aarti karni hogi phir kuch mitha banaa hoga..banaaogi na tumhe koyi problem toh nahi hai na'' said vanshika like an mother vanshika mum always reminds maanvi of her mother maanvi's eyes where little moist now she was missing her mom like other girls she just nodded in no and said ''koyi problem nahi hai'' vanshika mum understood she was missing her mum she kissed her forehead and hugged her and said ''koyi baat nahi maanvi mai ho na tumhari ma na sahi but tumhaari ma jaisi hi ho'' while vanshika and jeevika were looking at new mew mil and dil duo in aww while jeevika join them saying ''mai bhi''and shanaya join them saying ''maine kya gunha kiya hua hai phir'' ''acha bahut hua maanvi beta jao aur viraat ko bolkar lao aarti ka time hogaya hai''vanshika mom said while keeping one hand on maanvi's face and went from their maanvi's face went red listing viraat's name she turn around to to go upstairs but found two grinning faces jeevika ''agar upar jakar niche aane ka maan nahi hua toh koyi baat nahi mai ma ko samjha dugi'' and both burst out laughing while maanvi went more red and ran upstairs

Maanvi entered the room and her eyes pop out seeing sight in front of her viraat was searching something inside cupboard just in towel she turn around while closing her eyes and said ''woh woh ma ne niche bulaya hai aarti ke liye'' she said while controlling her heavy breathe.viraat saw her condition and came near her from behind he hug her maanvi was more nervous and was numb she don't know what to do he turn her around while maanvi had her eyes still close when he turn her around she closed her palm in fist which landed on viraat's bare chest he kept his hand on her waist viraat lean forward and he blow his breathe on her face which made her front her to fly maanvi was blushing unknowingly while her eyes were still close ''viraat'' said ''maanvi maa bul rahi hai'' he moved away and she again ran from there.

Viraat came downstair they both did puja maanvi went in the kitchen to prepare something and jeevika and shanaya followed her while maanvi was buzy in her work jeevika said ''maanvi kal raat kaisi thi with smirk on her face"

Shanaya-haha maanvi

Jeevika slap her shoulder and said ''maanvi nahi maanvi bhabhi bol''

Maanvi-woh errm kuch nahi kuch na..nahi (and she started blushing)

Jeevika went near her look around and said ''matlab kal raat kuch nahi hua'' while shanaya join them by other side

Maanvi nodded in no and blushed more

Jeevika said ''acha'' with smirk and removed her duppatta from one side and asked ''toh yeh kiya hai'' she said with evil smirk and both shanaya and jeevika burst out laughing

Maanvi was more embarresed and said ''woh viraat……. Jeevika cut her ''said ha woh humme bhi pata hai yeh viraat ne kiya hai''

''Nahi aap log galat soch rahe ho…..woh yeh viraat'' said maanvi with little nervousness ''ha maanvi toh humme sach batao'' said jeevika ''okay woh baat jaanedo na batao humme but yeh toh batao viraat ne tumhe kiya gift diya'' jeevika continued with excitement ''gift kaisa gift '' maanvi asked all confused ''q viraat ne tumhe gift nahi diya'' jeevika asked with confused look maanvi just nodded in no and started working again where as jeevika was confused she came out of kitchen thinking ''har husband apni wife ko mu dikhaayi ka gift deta hai phir viraat ne maanvi ko q nahi diya…..lagta hai bhul gaya hoga mai kuch zayada hi soch rahi ho''

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Everyone where at breakfast table waiting for maanvi including viraat he heard her anklets which was now like a tune for him he was getting confused with this sudden changes he was feeling attracted towards her and he was attracted towards her her fragnance her touch her innocence her smile was angelic for him but he can't think about her she distracting him from his work his work is everything for him and he can't afford distraction but he can't ignore her too he was confused between his mind and heart his chain of were broken by voice of bangles he know who it was.

Maanvi was about to serve him when viraat asked her to stop she was nervous and hurt y he stopped her but he cleared her doubts ''woh actually yeh bahut oily hai and m on diet so I can't eat this'' said viraat maanvi was little hurt where as everyone were shock and felt bad for that new bride ''m sorry mujhe pata nahi tha'' said maanvi holding back her tears which was notice by all to ease the situation viren spoke ''toh kya hua bhai aaj khaale phir work out karlena'' ''sorry bhai..but I can't'' he said and started eating his diet breakfast

Maanvi was shocked seeing this side of viraat is he the same viraat who was understanding lastnight who was ready to sleep on couch she was hurt to she join them on breakfast table

On the other hand viraat was also shocked by his behaviour there was war between his mind and heart but now his mind won on his heart he know has hurt her so he made a mental note now he will try to balance everything but before that he need to apologize her

After breakfast everyone praised maanvi for shera she made she was happy everyone liked it but little hurt because her husband didn't taste forgot it he didn't even touch it she went to kitchen to help jeevika bhabhi and vanshika mum but they didn't let her work since she was new bride and send her back

Maanvi came back in room and saw viraat talking someone on phone she went and stood in balcony admiring the nature she was lost in her thoughts went she felt someone's presence beside her she knew who it was her husband both stood their in silence after sometime viraat broke the silence and said ''m m sorry maanvi woh erm actually mujhe m very health conscious I know mujhe tumhe pehle bata dena chahiye tha'' ''it okay viraat mai aage se dhayaan rakhugi'' she said again there was silence filled between them suddenly maanvi remember about kiss she mentally slapped herself how could she forgot to apologize so she started ''woh viraat urm mujhe tumse kuch kehna tha sorry sorry kehna tha'' ''sorry'' asked confused viraat ''ha actually woh urm acutlly maine shayad nind mai galti se tumhe kiss darya hoga jaise tumne kiye'' said maanvi finally without looking at him ''what I kissed u'' asked shocked viraat ''tumhe pata nahi tha'' asked shocked maanvi she further continued''par tum subha bol rahe thei sorry kaha tha'' ''ha but maine sorry woh tumhaare neck par ma..'' he didn't continued as both were embarresed

Maanvi was about to to go when viraat held her hand and pulled her closer while his lips on her ears maanvi closed her eyes he said ''waise shera bahut acha tha'' he kissed on her cheek and went from their while maanvi's eyes were still close

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Superb update!! 👏👏👏 Loved all Virman moments! ❤️ He was admiring her and then hugged her also 😳😳.. Manvi is already falling for him.. I felt lil sad when he refused to eat shera! :( But usko kaise pata woh achii bani thi?? Usne chupke se kha liya kya 😆.. Virat is totally confused.. He wants to focus in his work.. Dekhte hai kab tak focus kar pata hai 😉 😆.. Loved the way Jeevika ans Shanya were teasing Manvi.. Ending was very nice especially the 'kiss confusion' 😛😛.. Loved it Uzma ❤️❤️.. Thank you for the pm.. Take care 🤗
Edited by meera.chaudhuri - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome..~!!! Maanvi is sweetheart...loved each n every description given...Nice...Virat wants to control on his emotions...lekin kab tak..Waiting fir next..~!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg such a adorable updateive been waiting for the update for soo long nw n it was worth the wait health concious virat hahaha- nw thats nt very surprising is it !!!the last part where he kisses her cheeck hayeee sooo cute im sure u will get very good marks in ur exam results cuz luk hw many ppl's prayers r with u n we r all greedy for updates so dnt take tension im sure everything will be good good for u 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
The first thing that came to my mind when i finished reading was: why did you stop over there?? :P
I wanted to read more! The teasing session, the newly married couple, virat and maanvi's growing relatinship, virat's fight betwen his mind and heart and maanvi's blushing! Everything is just so cute uzmi!!!
Love the update! Best of luck for ur results! Ok now that reminds me of my results! :P
Will wait for your next update!! :D

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