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Posted: 13 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: Mohit_monaya

jus came across this FF...

sounds really interesting =D

will catch up wid d updates soon...
and please do PM me =)



Thnku
Ll pm u surely
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Posted: 13 years ago
#92



Miss Ladli and Mr.Flirt


Nasheela nasheela tera naina
Cho raile humra chaina
Ab humre dil mein rehnaa
Aaa..

In Simla

A girl in her early twenties entered the airport carrying her luggage with making every single male specie turn her head towards her. She checked in, then the immigration , security check and finally she comforted herself in the vip waiting lounge , sipping her favourite choco lush with her ever so lusturous pulpy pink lips anticipating the time to board to come early

'The boarding of Flight no. AI 4678 has started for first class passengers. The passengers are kindly requested to board the plane '

'Finally!' she thought listening the announcement
With crushing her choco lush's cup and throwing it in the dustbin, she finally started moving towards the boarding area

After 5 hours ,
Delhi airport

'Taani' shouted someone

She turned and all the frown on her face got washed away turning into a sweet smile crept over seeing the people she loved the most infront of her

'Papa' 'Bhai' she shouted excited and ran towards them just to hug them tightly letting their breaths choke up

'I missed you guys sooo much' she said finally parting , flashing her all 32's
'We missed you too bacha' said Rahul pulling her cheeks, making her frown 'Bhai' she winced

'Where's mumma? Wo nahi aayi' taani asked realising the absense of her mom

'Wo ghar mein bahut sare kaam hai na beta,aaj raat engagement hai, toh wo nahi aa payi' said shashank

'Oh yes, dad aaj toh kisi ki engagement hai.. I totally forgot..'
Taani said smiling towards Rahul with her eyes shimmering naughtiness

'Taani , ab tu bhi shuru ho gayi . Atleast tu toh meri side le , kal se sab ne chida chida ke pareshaan kar dia hai ' Rahul said dramatically , noticing the glint of tease in taani's voice

'Sorry bhai, iss baar mein aapki side nahi hu' taani said raising her hands

Rahul pouted at this mummering to himself 'god save me'

Shashank and Taani laughed merily seeing rahul's situation and hi 5ed each other , walking towards the car

With poor Rahul carrying Taani's lugguage behind

Kundra Mansion,

Gates wide opened as the car entered the mansion..

Taani jumped out of the car as soon as possible and ran towards the main door only to be greeted by her mother standing on the door waiting for her

She hugged her as tigtly as possible
'Missed you so much mommy' said taani parting from the hug , kissing her mom's cheek

At Singhania Mansion

'Good morning Dad' wished sharon to vikram serving him breakfast as her daily routine

'Good morning beta' replied Vikram in an equally chirpy morning tone keeping his newspaper aside.

'Sharon, wo butter pass karna' swayam said
'Papa aapko kuch chahiye? ' sharon said completely ignoring her husband while swayam gave a helpless look to vikram

'Nai beta, muje kuch nai chahiye , wo swayam..'
But before vikram could complete sharon turned and started walking towards the kitchen again murmering that she forgot to bring the jam

Vikram raised his eyebrows asking what's the matter to which swayam shook his head clearly stating that all is not well

Coming and sitting beside swayam, Vikram asked
'ab kya hua? Firse naraz ho gayi'

'Arey dad , pta nhi en ladkiyon ki problem kya h, choti choti baaton pe naraz ho jati h. Meine bas mazak mei usse ye bol dia ki wo moti ho gayi hai aur madam bura man gayi'

'Arey bas itni si baat, kya bhai aap mere bhai hoke ek ladki ko nahi mana skte.. ' said Rey suddenly marking his entry , sitting beside vikram and swayam , scaring wits out of swayam and vikram

'Yaar kabhi toh normal enty mar lia kar Rey, dara dia' said swayam 'Hume toh laga sharon aa gyi' vikram completed.

'Toh uth gaye Mr. Perfection' said Sharon coming from the kitchen with jam in her hands, making Vikram Swayam and Rey move back to their places , silently eating the breakfast

'Yes bhabhi, ab aapke hath ke yummy paranthe kon miss kar sakta hai ' said rey winking at swayam just to reciee a glare from him while sharon just smiled at him.

She was well aware of Rey's flirtatious nature. He was a born Charmer.

'Waise bhabhi kisi ne aapko kabhi kaha hai ki aapki aankhien bohot sundar hai' said rey smiling at sharon

'Kya baat hai aaj badi buttering ho rahi hai' said sharon still blushing at his comment.

'Arey nai, seriously bhabhi . Agar aap muje swayam bhaiya se pehle mili hoti na toh pakka meine aapse hi shaadi krni thi' Rey said pouting justifying himself

'Arey yar tuje koi aur ni mili' said swayam with possesivenes taking over

'Kya kru bhai , bhabhi hai hi itni charming' said Rey enjoying this daily dose of conversation

'Aww ' was just the word that came out of Sharon's mouth
While Swayam's head shot up listening to Rey.

He stood up and kept his on Sharon's shoulder clearly stating that she is only his and said 'sochio bhi mat' just to recieve a puppy dog face from Rey and an angry glare from sharon who jerked off his hand and went towards her room

Vikram pushed Swayam 'Ab khada khada kya dekh raha hai , jaa aur usse mana' Swayam immediately ran behind Sharon

While vikram and Rey hi 5ed each other enjoying this daily dose of conversation

'Sharon baby, meri baat toh suno'
'Swayam muje tumhari koi baat ni sun ni' said sharon moving towards her wardrobe

'Agar mei ye kahon ki tum duniya ki sabse beautiful ladki ho tab bhi nahi' said swayam hugging sharon from behind

'Nahi' replied sharon freeing herself from the grip of her husband. Swayam hit his forehead with his palm but started going behind Sharon again as soon as he saw her trying sarees infront of the mirror

' Sharon, you know na mei mazak kar raha tha. Sorry'
Swayam said holding his ears cutely

Sharon saw him in the mirror through the corners of her eyes in the mirror and nearly melted. Now who can resist her extra sugary sweet husband

'Sachi ? ' she asked still unsure whether to forgive him or not
'Muchi ' swayam said pouting..

'Acha toh fir batau , mein Red pehnu ya blue ' said sharon smiling showing him her dresses

'Mera baby jo bhi pehenega, sabse best lagega' said swayam hugging sharon
'Love you swayam' sharon said hugging him back
'I love you too sharon' murmered swayam near her ear
And they continued with what they are best at - loving each other

Meanwhile In Kundra Mansion,
After a long emotional meeting with her mother - Taani was now busy in doing preparations for the most awaited event of the day. She was supervising everything and Soon it was the time the guest started arriving...



Chapter 2 ends here :)
Hope you guys liked it
Sorry for the late update ( kaan pakad ke )

Thank you 😉
Edited by papakapride - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#93
Great update dea read it b4 ur pm update soon 😊 luv ur writting style
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Posted: 13 years ago
#94
Taani entry was amazing. Aww she miss her dad and bro sooo.much
Aww Sharon angry at Swayam lol, and Rey the flirt hmm lol... He is too good at it
Wonderful update... I love it plz continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#95
Nice update thnks fr the pm..!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#96
superb update dear!
loved Rey and SwaRon scenes
now waiting for TR meeting 😃
continue soon nd thanx for the pm 😊


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Posted: 13 years ago
#97
cs

nice character sketch...

aww arjun from PR...(ridhwik...😳)

2 sisters...2 brothers...lets see...

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chap 1

wow nice intro of rahul n rey..

biking riding...aww...i love bike racing..😆

both th dad's r so cool...allowing the

enjoyment of thr son's

btwn who s coming...rahul...i hope its taani..

👍🏼 nice work aparna,,,

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chapter 2

taani is so attitude...

but all her attitude gone..wen she saw her bhai

n dad...

then emotional meeting f taani wth her mom..

sharon-swayam intro..with couple fight nt bad..

rey flirting sharon to make swayam J... ha ha 😆

sharon -swayam patch..up..wow

now waiting for taarey meet...


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Posted: 13 years ago
#98
u penned taani's entry so beautifully .. i loved the start..
n then swaron n rey part was also so good .. sharon's sachi n swayma's muchi .. wala replies .. i was telling awww.. sho cute !!.. loved it dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
#99
Awesome update!!! Awww rey is such a flirt, n taani entry was soo cute, n the Swaron scene was also awesome
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update
can't wait till Taani and Rey meet
please update soon and pm me

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