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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey guys! how you all are? here is your cutie with a poem! it have been so long i have posted any poem! so here is your poem girl is back! but guys read at your own risk because its a sad one! i know its not my style but phir bhi enjoy! umm guys at the end there is some boring note! agar mood ho to read kar lena! here you go-


PAIN


I smile, I smile

I smile whole heartedly

but when there's no one around

I cry a lot secretly


to hide my pain

behind the smile is my task

to hide my sadness

I am wearing a smiley mask


life was never easy

but every time the pain is new

the life gives many reasons to cry

but to smile is very few!


i know it was ghatiya n bekaar! kya karoon guys mai kuch accha likhne ki haalat me hi nahi hoon! mera status to dekha hi hoga! ya break-up between me and aditya! you all know him right! you guys will be loving him because he gave 2 parts of taayam in one go! he posted 2 poems behind of my back and you guys won't believe he didn't even told me! i came to know when i was checking the list of my posts! don't worry guys abhi tak break-up hua nahi hai! aur mai hone bhi nahi doongi! we love each other very much n mai hum dono ko baandhkar rakhoongi! but still we are hanging! na break-up hua hai aur na hi misunderstandings clear hui hai!*sigh* i know you guys have no interest in my love story! ok i know you guys are waiting for the update of my works from so long! but guys mai abhi uss mental condition me nahi hoon ki mai updates likh sakoon but phir bhi i am trying to write! i am writing three updates simultaneously! one is triya ss, one is all your favourite taayam n one os! i will try to finish them soon but guys it will take some time! hope you guys will understand!😊

love Aditi❤️

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey adi...

bahut bhala kabita 😊
Its really lovely..these lines r so true..

life was never easy

but every time the pain is new

the life gives many reasons to cry

but to smile is very few!

hehe..i hope u remember me 😛
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Deep
Edited by deep_Tanha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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👏... beautiful poem adi dear ...👏

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: deep_Tanha

hey adi...

bahut bhala kabita 😊
Its really lovely..these lines r so true..

life was never easy

but every time the pain is new

the life gives many reasons to cry

but to smile is very few!

hehe..i hope u remember me 😛
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Deep

of course deep! how can i forget you! but aame ete dina pare katha hauchu! hehe its kinda weird to talk in odia on IF!😆btw thank you!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice poem !!! bohut accha hai...well done...n mujhe pata hai everything will b rite b/w u n aditya! may god bless u both n keep u both together!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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kisne pain dia tujhe
chodungi nahi usko main
😡
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: chand91

kisne pain dia tujhe

chodungi nahi usko main
😡

tere jij ne...:( tune status nahi dekha mera?😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
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dii mein sab samaj sakti hun dii aap ki kya halat ho rahi hogi par sayd isi kaa naam pyaar hai dii kabhie kabhie aisa hota hai dii belive nd iss poem aapka dard saaf jalak raha hai dii it was so true dii specially these lines nd dii dekh lena mujhe poora yaakeen hai ke sab theek ho jayegaa bahut jaldi ...i love u aditi mein aapke saath hamesha hun !

life was never easy

but every time the pain is new

the life gives many reasons to cry

but to smile is very few!




Edited by rakhiankita - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice poem we have no problem to hear ur love story.Becoz i understand that its real and true.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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firstly about poem
yaar udaylicious tussi cha gaye
coz yeh peom mujhe totally taani ki yaad dila rahi hai who always faced this situation
this poem was fabulous kisne bola ghatiya hai?
bata to zara i think usse ophthalmologist ki zarurat hai n agar usne clean chit de di to bhi psychatrist ki to zarurat hai hi
and hey don't worry about u n adi dear ,i am sure tum dono ka relation to upar waale ne banaya hai
dekh na tum dono ek dusre keliye apne pyaar ke saath saath adha(i mean adi)naam bhi share karte ho
so don't worry this thing would make you strong only ok
do scrap or pm whenever you need
kehte hai na no pain no gain
you would always remain happy
meri n lavin ki tarafse all the best for your relation😳
n hey mere dil ke lavin ko bhi teri poem bahut acchi lagi😉
i know thoda zyada ho gaya i hope ab tera mood isse thik ho gaya ho!😆
love you meri udaylicious !😃
ooye waisa waala nahi😡 adi mujhe maar daalega n u know na ki mai n lavin...☺️
Edited by nuckts - 12 years ago

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