SS- ONE NIGHT WITH THE ENEMY last chap pt-2 + epil - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
#31

That was very well written n its hard to believe this is your first 😊 Intriguing start n I already have many questions 😃 Its evident that there is an unspoken bond between Abhiya. She wanted him when she was in school and I am sure the feelings would have been mutual from Abhay's side as well. But something went horribly wrong n Chaand died bcoz of Pia. I am waiting to know what could have possibly happened. Abhay seems to pity her more than he hates her. I am sure its not easy for him to forgive the girl who snatched away his dad who was his only family But y did Pia's family abandon her? Or did she walk away in guilt? 😕 Please continue and PM me 😳

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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
great concept!!...i felt bad for piya!!...she is guilty for chaand's death...what happened...i hope things will be less complicated for her as she needs that job so much for her future..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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update was superb ... loved the way story put in tracks well i am very much curious to know about the abhiya past ... try to update soon and do pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thank u so much fr all ur comments and likes. They mean a lot. Sorry for not replying individually, being a groupie i have limited posts:D
I had posted the same story on mb forum some time back, but went fr an abrupt ending due to lack of response. But i won't be posting the same here, except the starting 5 chaps, as they are same but I have something else planned, beyond chap 5. So please bear with the first 5 chapters, cause they are boring and badly written, as i was not in a mood to write them, but after that i promise that you won't regret taking up this story. Silent readers, please do comment. Its just encouraging
:) I'll be sending out pms only to those in my buddy list, so plz snd me request if you want pms:) I have more stories written up, so if this one goes well, i'll start posting the others too:)
This is the 2nd update hope u all will enjoy reading it.


. . . . . . . . . . . . . Chap-2

Oh so Miss Piya was responsible for Abhay dad's death.
Tanushree Dutta thought with a wicked smile on her face. She was standing outside Abhay's room, just to know the history of Piya and Abhay. Her Abhay. She was scared earlier that Piya might take away him from her. Her golden ticket, the millionaire, with whom she had a relationship of benefits during night. But no that could never happen cause here he was the one who hated Piya for the loss
of his life...

Don't worry Piya, i won't let you both come close ever. I doubt Abhay would have any feeling for you. And even if he will, i'll crush them all. He' s mine only mine.

...

Shocked by that sudden turnaround of events, Piya turned and quickly moved back near the table, where Abhay was standing facing her. She moved too quickly for her ill-fitting shoes. She stepped out of one shoe, having forgotten to clench her toes in it for staying power. 'What is it?'

'What is wrong with your shoes?'Abhay demanded impatiently as she lurched to an uneven halt to put her foot back in them.

'They don't fit.'

'Why not?'

Piya's face became red due to embarrassment.'Everything i'm wearing is second hand.' she admitted weakly.

Distase filled Abhay at the mere idea of wearing someone else's clothing.

Abhay withdrew a chequebook from the drawer and after filling it extended it to her. 'Buy yourself some new clothes and shoes' he told her dryly.

Piya was agahst at the gesture.'i can't take your money. And there is no need to feel sorry for me.' she said with anger in her voice.

'you're planning to refuse your salary?'

'No, but that's different,' she argued.'It's not personal.'

'This isn't personal either. You might try to sue us if you have an accident and you're not much use to anyone round here when you can't even walk properly.' Abhay said without hesitation. He knew her too well. She would never take favours, so this was the only way to make her agree. ' And I don't like my employs dressed shabbly like you. Plus you'll be doing a lot of walking.' he added plainly.

'What are you talking about?' Piya felt bad the way he talked about her clothes.

He handed her a sheet of paper and a credit card. She was close enough to pick up the sent of his colonge and note the built of his musculature below his shirt, as he leaned forward compensating the height different bwt them. At over 6 feet tall he towered over her over her five feet five inches. All to readily, however, she remembered the warm, solid feel of his muscular chest below her palms. When he came closer, she still wanted to touch him. She felt guilt at the thought about the way she had once behaved in his presence.

'Since i've recently taken over this company, I'm throwing a party for my staff and associates. Tanushree Dutta will give you all the details and you will follow them." Abhay said.

Piya saw him flich at Tanushree's name.

'The party will be at my residence. And I'm sure you would have no problem in locating it. Ok?" Abhay asked. He looked at her and suddenly seeing her beautiful eyes and the way she bit her lower lip in confusion...it reminded him about the old time. He wanted to bed her so badly it almost hurt to think that he could never have her. It had been so long since a woman affected him to this viscerel level. The last time he'd been with her...

'You want me to go shopping?" she queried disbelievingly. 'But i'm not a girly girl.'

'Nevertheless if you want to retain employment here you will do as you're told." Abhay countered dryly.

Piya flushed, nibbling at the soft underside of her lower lip. She looked at him with suprise. Not understanding why he wanted her in his house again.

" Don't do that with your mouth...and don't look at me like that.' Abhay chastised.' Don't play the temptress with me. Been there, done that.'

'Let's get this straight now, Abhay.' she bit out furiously. 'I'm no longer that silly infatuated girl you once called a tease. I' a whole lot wiser than i used to be. What happened that night wasn't entirely my fault. You came to me, you kissed me because you wanted to, not because i somehow made you do it.' Piya shot back with anger.' Lets behave like adults. Why do you want me to organise the party?'

Piya asked. This was something that was bothering her.

' Because thats what you use to do always. Remember. My dad used to love the arrangements done by you. He loved your fresh style of organising the parties. And i expect the same from you.' He answered her. ' And yes, you have grown up. Indeed.' Abhay remarked silkly, admiring her body, having said the last word.

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do let me knw hw was it. N sry fr the errors.:)

IT WILL BE GREAT IF AFTER READING YOU COULD HIT THE LIKE BUTTON AND COMMENT.

Edited by jack-12 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
I already dislike Tanushree. Eavesdropping, that's low!
And AbhIya... You wrote the tension b/w them very well. :)
would love to read more soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
Things are warming up then...
attraction and dislike together... Is like steamy...
and tanushree... God howw cheap... Yuck...
Nice part..
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
This was Amazing!!!!!!! Abhiya's characteristic mad pull towards each other wid hesitation along wid anger, very very well written👏. T i just hate her😡. So there s a past of Abhiya. waiting 4 d party. update asap.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
i hate tanushree, how can anyone stoop so low.
So now piya wld be wrking fr abhay, great. So they will get a chance to spend tym tog:D
Thanks fr pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
wahooo lovely update...Abhiya slept with together...when?want to know about that passonate night😛😉continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
amazing update
m really curious to know about their past
i am hating tanushree

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