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Posted: 12 years ago
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Guys I was feeling really bored so thought of writing a SS
This SS is a story based on one of the kannada movie which I saw and I was in tears seeing this movie so I got an idea from this
So I am starting this SS
I will finish try to finish it fast as I have to go back to schl where I don't get net but if not I will try to update whenever I get time
So will shortly update the introduction
Hope u all like it
changed it to FF
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanks for starting excited to see😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Will wait for your SS.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey even I am waiting for ur SS and ff to get updated please update it soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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waiting... hey u will pm me the links haan
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Posted: 12 years ago
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|| INTROADUCTION ||
Radhika Kapoor- Radhika is 23 years old. She is a daughter of Mohan Kapoor. She is used to be wealthy but never boast about it lives her life like a normal girl.

Dev Purohit ' Dev was 24 years old. He was daughter of Ranveer Purohit. His family was a well-known in the whole Vrindavan and Delhi. His family also was very rich. He was a very cool boy and a well-known successful businessman.

Vishaka kapoor- Vishaka was sister of radhika. She was 21 years old.

Rohan Purohit- Dev's brother Rohan was 23 years old. He was a well-known boy for his college .

Mohan Kapoor- a well-known business man. A very supportive father of Radhika and Vishaka

Devki Kapoor- A very good mother of Radhika and Vishaka. Very fond of both her daughters.

Ranjiv Purohit- Very supportive father of Rohan and Dev. A successful Business man.

Vaishali Purohit- Mother of Dev and Rohan. Very supportive.

Shanti Purohit- Dadimaa of dev. She luvs Dev and a lot but Dev is her life.

Edited by sush_avina - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sounds interesting.Waiting for SS to start.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: fatssrilanka

Sounds interesting.Waiting for SS to start.

i'll try to update it tomorrow but cant tell fully and thx for ur comment
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 1 ( Anger)

It was a quite a dark place. Only a small dim light was lit. The whole room was empty except for a table in between with 3 members sitting. Two boys and a girl. The man was interrogating

The man : Why did you do all this ?

Dev: Wht did I do? He asked in a pleading but stern tone

Vishaka: Dev calm down. She said placing her hand on dev's cuffed hands

Yes dev was arrested and was in prison.

The man: You should know wht u did. Why did you Fight with Gautham. You know you bet him up so badly. He has sustained a lot of injuries. Doctor said if he doesn't regain conscious then he may die. You will be arrested in charge of murder. He tried explaining

Dev: I don't care what happens to him I will be really happy if he dies

Vishaka: cool down dev" she turns to the inspector " hum kuch nahi karsakte hai kya abhi there is a reason why he did this.

The man: How are you related to him? Are you his wife or Girl friend? You make him understand that nothing can be done unless the court decides something he is already in a lot of trouble. He said calmly

Saying this the man leaves from there

Vishaka turns to dev

Vishaka : don't worry dev everything will be alright I assure that I am always there wid u

Dev: Vishaka please leave me alone for some time I want to saty for my self he said sadly

Vishaka understood this and left him alone for some time.

Dev was still lost in his thoughts about the past few moments before .

5 hours before

Dev is seen running behind a man. He catches him and punches him on the face , kicks him. But does not speak a word. He is only trashing the man very badly

The man: Cho…..d dooo……. Mujhe he said pleading folding his hands. But doesn't pay any heed to his words.

People gather around and start gossiping. The police soon reaches there but does not find dev. On the other side Dev is seen in his bike driving speedly. His gaze was hard and cold. His eyes were red with anger.

His peed increased he soon reached a police station.

The inspector was on the phone

Inspector: Ha mein aa raha ho thodi der rukho.

As soon as he kept his phone and turned he felt a hand on his face hit him hard. He fell badly on the ground. All the other constables tried to attack but were defeated. He hit the inspector really hard. The inspector was bleeding badly.

Dev left from there soon but soon the police started trailing him. He was driving really fast he dint notice a truck coming from the other side. As soon as he noticed he applied brakes but was in fail. He hit the truck and the car flipped but dev came out safely to notice police surrounding him from all corners.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Is Dev a criminal or is there something else? Loved the update,though it was a short one. Waiting for the next part.

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