Aaj Jaane Ki Zidh Na Karo-- part 8|page 52 - Page 25

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Posted: 12 years ago
updt na karne ki zidh chod do
Edited by Arjuhi_kk - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Mujhe toh laga tha ki tune abhi tak ye SS finish kardiya hoga 😳

I loved the last part... and now I'm waiting for the next which i hope we'll get soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
update is ready but but its a very short one...please koi gussa mat hona
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: moonkmh

update is ready but but its a very short one...please koi gussa mat hona

Tu update de de bas!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: veds_6791

Tu update de de bas!!!

exactly!!! Update to de!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: pari_15

exactly!!! Update to de!!

Mujhe lagta hai ki she disappeared 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Chapter - 6


Arohi ko jaise isi subah ka intezar tha..sare sikwe gille ko mitane ka waqt aa chuka tha..wo pal pas hi tha jaha wo befikr hoke firse Arjun ke bahon main panah le sakegi..arohi ke chehre par ek anokha sa chamak tha..wo jaldi se uth ke school se pehle hi ek baar raj se Milne Jana chahti thi..ya raj ke bahane Arjun se ek mulakat karna chahti thi. Use pata nehi tha ab sab sab kuch pehle jaisa kiya kaise jayega..arjun se sari baatein kaise kahegi wo..kya bolegi wo apne gharwalo se Lekin use pata tha ke Arjun agar sath hoga to wo kuch v kar legi..ab wo kisi v kimat pe Arjun ko kho nehin sakti. Arohi khusi khusi breakfast banane main lag gayi..swati jaise ek pal ke liye hairan ho gayi thi..arohi smile kar rahi thi wo v natural wali..swati ne kavi use itna khush dekha hi nehi tha...


"aajkal pao zameen par nehi parte mere"swati ne isaro isaro main arohi ko thoda tease kiya...arohi uski tarf dekhke Sharma gayi.. swati ne kavi use itna khush dekha hi nehi tha...swati ko arohi ke bare jitni baatein salil se pata chali usse swati ko andaza lag chuka tha ke arohi ki ye smile ab kavi mayus nehi hogi.

Arjun raatbhar hospital main raj ke pass hi tha..use pata tha ke salil ne arohi ko sab sach bata diya hai..ek sukun sa mehsus ho raha tha use..jaise ek bhari bojh dil se utar gaya ho..ab use koi darr nehi tha..bas use ek bar arohi se milna tha..arohi ko zindegi main pane ki ummeed to nehi thi lekin apne dil ki baat bolna tha use.

Shefali cabin ke darwaze pe khari hoke Arjun aur raj ko dekhti rahi..ye rishte v kitne azeeb hote hai..kavi khoon ke rishte v kho jate hai to kahi kuch rishte rooh se zud jate hai..jab use Arjun ne raj ke bare main bataya tha to shefali ko apne bhai pe aur pyar aur izzat bad gaya tha..apni khushi ke aage kisi aur ke bare main sirf uska bhai hi soch sakta hai..

"bhai"
"tu kab ayi" Arjun ne pucha
"bas avi..aap avi ghar jao..fresh hoke thoda so lena" shefali ne bola
Arjun apni behen ki maa jaisi baaton pe apni smile rok nehi paya.
"thik hai dadi amma.fresh hoke thoda office v Jana hai"
"office Jane se pehle thoda so lena."
Arjun Jane ke liye utha aur raj ke mathe pe hath firake bola
"get well soon champ"
Wo Jane hi wala tha ke shefali ne kaha "bhai kya ye sach hai ke bhabi yahan hai" shefali ne realise hi nehi kiya tha ke usne kya bol diya
Arjun ek pal ke liye shefali ki taraf piche mud ke dekha aur kaha
"ha"
"ab to sab thik ho jayega na bhai" shefali ne badi aas se uski pass jake pucha..iss sawal ka jawab to Arjun ke pass v nehi tha..wo v to pata lagana chahta tha sab thik hona mumkin v hai ya nehi..wo khud ko sambhalte hua bola
"pata nehi..uski engagement ho chuki hai shefu..teri bhabi nehi hai wo ab" ye kahke ek pal bina ruke wo chala gaya..aur bahar chupke se darwaje ke piche khadi arohi ko wo dekha hi nehi.
Arohi v bina kisise mile dusri taraf chali gayi kisiko call karne...

Arjun office se sidha hospital chala gaya..sham hone ko ayi thi..wo raj ke cabin ki aur pahucha aur darwaze pe hi uske kadam tham gaye..raj ke sath sath kisi ladki ke hasne ki aawaz andar se aa rahi thi..use pata tha ye aawaz shefali ki nehi thi ye wo hasi thi jiski gunj bas yaad ban chuki thi Arjun ke liye..wo parda hatake dekha to gahre neele sari main arohi aur raj tv pe cartoon dekh ke jee bharke has rahe the..arjun jaise us waqt ko rok lena chata tha..kitne Dino baad use uski hasti Hui arohi samne dikh raha tha..

"dad" raj ne Arjun ko dekhke khusi se bola..
Arohi v piche arjun ki taraf mudi.. Arjun dhimi kadam leke raj ke bed ke dusri taraf baith gaya..

"kaisa feel kar rahe ho raj" Arjun ne raj ke hatho ke apne hatho main rakhte hua pucha.
"awesome dad...hum ghar kab jayenge"raj ne pucha
" kal."
"phir hum picnic jayenge na"
"doctor ne complete bed rest ke liye bola hai,pehle thik ho jao..then we will go for picnic"

Arohi bina kuch kahe baap bete ke taraf dekhti rahi..dil ke ek kone se ek bar Arjun ki bahon main sametne ki chah jag uthi thi..arjun bilkul nehi badla tha..wohi tez aakhein..dimple wali smile aur aakhonke thik upar wo gehra til..pehle se aur v jyada acha lag raha tha wo..

"arohi mam ko v sath leke chalenge na dad" raj ke aawaz ne arohi ko apni duniya se kheech liya.
Arjun uski taraf dekh raha tha..
"no raj,main kaise ja sakti hu raj" arohi ne jhijhkte hua kaha
"aap dad ki dost ho na" raj ne jawab diya.

Aur Arjun arohi ek ajeeb si khamisi main doob chule the. Raj ne shefali ko arohi ke gale lagkar rote hua dekh liya tha aur jab arohi cabin main nehi thi to shefali bua ne use ek bahot bada secret kaha tha...

arohi ne topic ko aage na badakar raj ko kaha," tum avi so jao beta..main kal phir aaungi"
Wo Jane ke liye khari ho gayi..
"good night raj"


Wo darwaje tak pahuchi to shefali v aa chuki thi..usne Arohi ko ek hath se rokte hua arjun ko kaha "bhai raat bahot ho chuki hai..itni raat arohi akele kaise jayegi..aap please arohi ko drop kar do..main tab tak raj ke pas rukti hu"
Arjun bina kuch kahe khara hua aur arohi ki aakhon main aakhein daalke kaha "chalein"
Arjun ki ye pehli word thi jo itne Dino main arohi ke liye nikle the..arohi aise kho chuki thi jaise koi jaadu kar gaya ho aur uske muh se sirf nikla "ha"

shefali ne arjun ke kaano main dheere se kaha "is bar koi baat adhuri mat chodna...wo jitna v zid kare use jane mat Dena"
Arjun ko pehli baar apni behen ki bade ho jane ka ehsas hua..aur wo bina kuch kahe arohi ke sath exit door tak jane laga.


So Guys, Here it is, i know VERY SHORT, But hey, it came upto three pages in word! But the conversation between Arjuhi would come up soon next week! I had to Update this so that ANJI can post her work here, for us :D :D Jai ho readers! Please shower ur comments and likes, my fellow forum'ians :D

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awww Madhu...
It was short but sweet...
Start mein mujhe laga that they will not get to meet but then they met...
Raj is just too cute!!!
Awww Shefali is sooo sweet!!!

Loved the update... Abb next update ke liye zyada wait mat karana!!!
Edited by veds_6791 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Omg! I loved it! It was so good to see a happy arohi in d start:) shefali is sweetheart...oh god! Wen arjuhi were sitting with raj i could feel d awkwardness n excitment...arohi noticing abt his every feature..*hayeee* i loved his 'chalien?'...i cant wait fr the next updt...next week bola hai to next week me hi dena...n hindi main read karne ka maza hi kuch aur hai <3 it :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
😭😭😭😭😭😭😭No one loves me😭

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