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Sudha

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Posted: 12 years ago

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waitinggg 🤢 update dedo.. pleej

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ahsaaspyarka

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Posted: 12 years ago

#472

aur kitna wait karogi dear...please update de do, pata hai kitni besarbi se wait kar rahi hun, after all geet maan se pyar ka izhar jo karegi...pleaseee

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Waiting...

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

#475

Originally posted by: 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

abhi main bhi tumse ladne waali hoon...mujhe pm nahin kiya last update ka.😔...iss update ka link mujhe Daily Updates Thread se mila...

wonderful update...Geet's feelings are cleared now that she also loves Maan...her Maan...
I have one request yaar...please if u can give summary of story until now...actually iss past-present ke chakkar mein main confuse ho gayi hoon...

😲aisa kya...sorry

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P0K0

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Posted: 12 years ago

#476

Originally posted by: daredevilisback
Hey I'm commenting here for the 1st time..

Geet feeling something something for maan.

Poor Maan having fever..

"I love My Maan."
Geet finally realized her feeling for maan..

precap☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️

Update soon next part

Aww...thanx a lot babes🤗

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P0K0

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Posted: 12 years ago

#477

Originally posted by: Thesaurus
wow finally u upd. after so long...
wow just loved it...
It was an awesome upd.
Finally geet's realisation of love...
superb part...
plz plz cont. soon...
Tfd pm too...

sorry for being late...studies

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P0K0

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Posted: 12 years ago

#478

Originally posted by: sweetsampa39
Tho I love Maan in all his ways,but in this update the sleeping Maan,he jst made me love him all the more.

And this time its not only me but even Geet realised her love for Maan.She jst cudnt leave the ill Maan,and she even missed her first day in college.

Lovely update.

u know me how "talented" i am🤣
thanxx babes for the comment🤗

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P0K0

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Posted: 12 years ago

#479

Present

Dr.Mehta Uncle rang the bell and Geet opened the door the next second...he was about to come in but seeing geet he halted.This is the girl he's Mad for!

He kept quiet and straightly went to maan's room...there he was sleeping.he looks tired.

Dr. Examined him a little and asked geet about his routine...she answered what she knew...and the maid informed him the Maan's not having dinner and lunch properly.

He sighed a little and prescribed some meds for 4 days and assured them saying it just happened cause he's being overworking.

He started leaving and geet followed him...He then suddenly said cheerfully,''Tum hi Woh larki ho jiske liye windows 90 ka super computer pagal psycho bann gaya?'' saying this he started laughing as if he's cracked the joke of the month.

She didn't know how to react so she concentrated on her palms.He then turned to her and said,'jiss k liye koi apna ghar chor sakta hain usska khane peena ka dhyan rakhna bhi zaroori nehi samajhti hain uss larki??'

geet dipped her head more down being awfully guilty...yes...she doesn't care for him...being a orphan she always wanted a family...how can that girl break a family??how can she pull him out of a happy life..?

'Don't worry,He has an awesome recovery skill...he'll be ok by morning...but still i'll advise him to take 2 days off from office.'

'convey my best of luck to champ and I hope u get what i'm indicating and expecting form u...Geet.'saying this he went away.

Her face became dull and gloomy.she came back and sat beside maan...caressing his cheek. If she has gone through many then he wasn't on a bed of roses either...he too lost his parents... took all the responsibilities of the family in young age, took care of everything...everyone.

The pain of loosing is greater than the pain of not having.Maan had lost his parents...so he might have gone through a lot than what she had in that topic...she never knew hers...so she doesn't know how it feels to have them...how it feels to loose them.

In Her whole life she wanted a family...a loving family...but she failed to recognized that family in Maan.She looked at him with Aww...he is her only family,Her...

...husband...

...Her love...

A drop of tear slipped down from her hazel and she wiped it promptly.

She looked at his elbow when the meds being injected.she caress there slowly.she sat there the whole time...and finally dozed off waiting for him to wake up.

In the afternoon,Maan's eyes opened slowly seeing himself on bed and geet sleeping beside him.

He smiled a little thinking she might be tired after college so didn't wake her up.he noticed his injection strip in his elbow and frowned...he got that much sick?

He tried to get up and with that jerk Geet jumped up.she came around the running to him and glared him not to be up.he looked at her not giving importance and again yried to get up and geet shouted being angry very much'Uthiye matt!'

he got flabbergasted by being scolded and automatically he lay down.She tucked him with a quilt and asked the reason of his getting up.

Maan answered being confused and kinda amused,'coffee.'

'aaj nei...aap...uum...j.j..juice lengi?'she asked thinking a little.

'o..k..?'maan answered being very confused now,

'aabhi aayi...aap...mmaatt uttho.'

she ran away and came back after a while with fresh juice.

'So how was your first day?'Maan sipped the juice and asked her casually...trying to start a convo.

'mein...i didn't go..'Geet answered slowly being mightly guilty.

'What??!'Maan asked being shocked!

'u were sick...I was v,,very worrried...for u..so'(but i'll go from tomorrow..i swear.)

'and i'll make sure u go tomorrow...I myself will drop u.'he said being tired and moreover didn't want to scold geet.he was feeling happy in mind that she cared for him.

He saying this again laid down after finishing the juice.and Geet got busy in serving him comfort.there formed a glow in her eyes...

He smiled and closed his eyes again.

****

She decanted the soup delicately and he raised a brow...suddenly so care? It surely wasn't that digestive to him. He tried to sit up and she immediately came by his side and helped him sit there.she learnt from the maids that he hated soup so she herself fed him.He was too confused with her sudden 180 degree turn.

He tried to reason her sudden deb-on-air mood.Her fettle movement here and there really was confusing but was a treat to Maan's tired eyes,he longed for that behavior of geet's.

He gulped down every spoon full and stared at her,but she continued to feed him with a worried face.

He made a face seeing 5 tablets on her palm and tried to form an excuse but her fiative glare made him instantly take those pills and gulp them down like a good kid.

His reaction was too adorable to resist.She gave a cute Aww-ish smile and pulled his cheek tightly. She was so pleased with his act,that she forgot that it was the man she feared.

''Aaauu...what was that for?''he rubbed his cheek and looked at her with helpless accused eyes.

She suddenly came down from her gaga land and look at him with livid face, realizing that her act was indeed inane.

She fumbled nervously, ''wo..wo..sorry..uu..weere looking ...cuuttee... soo...I..''

now it was his turn to drop his jaw,''Huh??!''

she shut her mouth with her palms and looked at her with a scared puppy eyes.

Oh damn!those doe shaped eyes were a dangerous threat to his brain's normal physiological function.her dense curly lashes complimented her b-eautiful hazel eyes,her worry stuckened curved brow,her eyes perfectly reflected the things that she thought.

He saw sorry,guilt,and a little bit of smile in them...she enjoyed pulling his cheek! Well,she likes it,so he has to let her do it.

He sighed!shaking his head at his own haal. He's hopelessly in love...!He smiled a little and pulled her cheek too. Geet quivered being scared but composed herself quickly.she too gave a shy smile and check his temperature with thethermometer.its much better now...he's just slightly warm.She gave a approving smile to the thermometer, and pushed the food trey out to the maid waiting outside.

She then had poured the same soup in another bowl and drank it in one go,then went to change.

Maan was getting strucks of her actions...she had his soup...she didn't have normal courses for him...she did that to accompany him...to make him feel good.

He was already feeling normal...well he was feeling normal from way back...but it was geet's glare that kept him in the bed.He didn't dare to disobey in this matter.well, he too wanted her full attention...so our naughty Maan played along...

She came back from the changing room wearing a pink shirt and blue shorts.

This Girl surely know how to lassitude him towards herself.those uncovered and smooth soft limbs were glowing to attract him.his mouth went dry though he drank just post supper.

Damn this girl!

Her enamored structure ...was worthy of his attention ..worthy to be dearly loved by him.

Those soft and smooth legs...will be a pleasure to feel them wraped around his waist while he...

He continued to feast on her turmerish skin with naked desire like a chained up beast...while the seemed-to-be-brainless pray continued to brush her hair and mentally deciding to slumber early so that she could get up early for her college...she bunked the 1st day...she sure don't wanna miss any classes ever...at least not in this month.

His trance broke suddenly feeling the huge nine hundred sqaure ft being contracted and the summer's cruel affect on his body...specially on his...

*Ahem ahem*

he caughed loudly to broom away his uncontrollably dirty thoughts from his brain... and specially...body!

Not that he didn't like too.oh No!..he looved to fantasize about geet and his moments...and trust me...it's way to dirty to imagine *wink* but he didn't want that physical hunger between them...not until she approves.

She turned around suddenly hearing him coughing and her brush slipped from her grip and slided to maan's direction...to the bed...she innocently bent down and picked up the brush and maan groaned like a beast had been whipped brutally.

He was getting erect seeing her in descent attire and here she's now showing him her curves!

He got frustrated and shouted,''Thats Enough Geet...Turn of those Bloody Lights and Come To Bed.''

off course cursing those lights were appropriate to his perspective! They catalized the initiation of his Raw desire...and now it'll be a whole night war between his desire and concisions.and geet's recent habit...nestling up into his embress during midnight,will set him on fire.

his body was aching to turn around and devore her whole.He made up his mind,at their 2nd night he was take his revenge on her for torturing him that bad.

And here this stupid girl's lip's started pouting and she lowered those lashes down.with a heavy heart she switched off the lights and slided open the Long cilling curtains letting the luner light enter and came to bed.

She thought she'll try to ask about his office,his fav color,his fav perfume... sumthing which makes a initiation of normal regular conversation.

She settled herself in the bed and turned towards maan seeing he laid showing his back towards her.

She showed her tongue towards him and settled herself in a more comfy position.

And slept...

But Maan?

He stayed still looking ahead the window...and the natural scenary...but his full concentration was on the movement of the girl sleeping behind him.

Soon she was in deep sleep and he turned around slowly for the treat of his entire day.

Not a minute later...she moaned a little and pushed herself forward in sleep into his chest and he recieved her with a 'there-u-go' smile.he took her into his arms with so much love and adoration that his punishing lust was long gone... disappeared.

He lowered his head and caress her face to move those strands off.but what she did made him stiff and mute.he left shaken with it staring at her face...

Probably she was in D-e-e-p sleep...thats y she could done this...otherwise rubbing her face softly on his throat...encircling his neck by her arms and brushing in her right knee with his manhood... ...seductively! by 'this' Geet!?? NO Bloody Way!!!

His palm's smooth movements over her back haulted and his mind went bank. All his dirty thoughts were like being slapped by geet's one act...his naughty side surely didn't expected Geet to do this to him...he always thought and fantasized about doing 'things' to Her...not the other way around!

Being Haulted as well as speechless for some moments...his whole body spreaded with heat which reflected on his hold on geet.

He dipped his face on her nape...snuggling close to her ear and pulled her more firmly and closely...praying in mind that geet stops her acts now...but his body was aching for her response...

Geet don't know why...snuggled again in his body,and this time the brush on him made him shudder...he growled helplessly dipping his head more and squeezing her back.Geet's sleep breaks with the squeeze and she discovers themselves in this position.

She was shocked being in this position with maan!She hesitantly and scaredly created a distance between their face...Maan too lifted his face from her nape feeling her awake.But he didn't leave her from his cage...his emotions were already like burning coal and now seeing her awake...his body needs only HER approval to go wild and make her wild with desire...

She stared at his handsome face in this low lunar light...he looks unbelivably handsome...his eyes were flaming with desire and his face was reflecting helplessness and desperation...

Unknowingly Geet circled her left arm around his neck and cupped his left cheek with another palm.

Hell with everything...!

He grabbed the back of her head and pushed her face forward to his lips.grabbing her lips in his he kissed her breathless...nibbling into her lips...seeking permission desperately to open up and let him in.

Geets left a deep sigh when she felt her lips fell on his and the most awaiting moment of her dreams...

Being passionately Kissed by the love of her life...

She gave him the access and pulled him more close...Maan opened his eyes to stare at hers being amazed. Is this an another dream of his *effin* mind?or is it really happening...

Geet,not knowing how to kiss back,or tackle the intensity of his stare and such heated small distance...shied and lowered her lashes.

How can this girl be so brutally attractive and naive?!he grabbed the back of her head and pulled up to grope her mouth with his own scorching one and rolled over her on the bed...

**

Past

She held the pen in for signing the paper.

'Left hand plz'Maan said seriously looking at her right hand which was about to put the ball of the pen on the paper...

Geet slowly took the pen in her left hand being caught cheating. Her hand was shaking being afraid of his next act. But he did nothing...just stared at the paper.

She slowly started to sign but maan held her hand and placed a paper in front of her...she looked at the paper and recognized her school certificate instantly...where her 'real' signature was there.

She lowered her lashes now...she can't think of any other way to outsmart him now...she has to think something fast...to save her future and dev's life.

She glanced at his waist where the pistol was placed,not wasting a second her hand pounced on that gun but his immediate grip on her wrist and turning her around thumping her back with his thorax left her flabbergasted.

Only between two breaths she was in his arm's cage, felt sumthing odd on her neck...her vision spun and darkness droop on teary her eyes.

Her fainted body leaned on his left hand...he grabbed her waist. Balancing her whole weight on a single hand,he wiped her sweaty forehead and cheek with his right palm...with care...when slided his gaze to her eyes...wiping those tears he in a Jerk...Lifting her tender, motionless body in his arms he mummered,'...This was necessary...'

he turned towards Dev and gave a pitty smirk,

'Time to forget the past jaan...'

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Posted: 12 years ago

#480

🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳

Me First

🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳

'Tum hi Woh larki ho jiske liye windows 90 ka super computer pagal psycho bann gaya?''

🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

Geet caring for maan so much😊😊

Sweet geet😊😊

Now she undestand maan's is her everything👏👏

Loved the part of tug of war of cheeks🤣🤣🤣

Maan's wild desire😳😳😳😳😳

Naughty maan😳😳😳

Geet also kissed him back..even though she does not know how to kiss😆😆

Maan is surprised with geet's behaviour😃😃

Maan babu geet is in love with u😉😉😉😉

Loved each & every part of update...

Awesome part...

It was worth for our wait...

Will be eagerly waiting...

Plz update soon...

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